trial song writing

maylin09 • 1 week ago

ok so ive been working on a few songs and i would like others opinion's. i am not a singer and this is my first time writing songs if anyone would like to sing them or do the instruments for it i would be more than happy. but i personally dont own instruments and im not a singer so with that being said if you would like to try then let me know and ill give you my discord or we could dm here either way is fine. also if you want to sing them you CAN post them but please give credits.

(#1) broken speed limit
verse 1;
i'm racing away on this broken highway. a reckless ride on my motorcycle of dismay. break neck speed, this adrenaline feeds. but deep inside, the pain's what i dont ever need

chorus;
crashing through the dark, feeling life's sharp lament. i'm pushing past the limits, living in this torment. with a broken speed limit, i'm flying far to high. finding solace in the chaos as the world goes by

verse 2;
every rev of the engine, echoes my frustration. fueling the fire of my desolation. whispering winds confess my deepest fears. but the speed disguises the hurt, it disappears

chorus;
crashing through the dark, feeling life's sharp lament. i'm pushing past the limits, living in this torment. with a broken speed limit, i'm flying far to high. finding solace in the chaos as the world goes by

bridge;
the road stretches endless, as my mind drifts away. with every passing moment, im losing just a bit more each day. the asphalt reflects the shadows of my mind in this race, to the finish is something i'll never find

verse 3;
beyond the roaring engine, there,s a silence deep within. a weight upon my soul that no ride can rescind. im just a broken speed limit, running from my pain. yearning for salvation, but its all in vain

chorus;
crashing through the dark, feeling life's sharp lament. i'm pushing past the limits, living in this torment. with a broken speed limit, i'm flying far to high. finding solace in the chaos as the world goes by

outro;
i race against that slips thru my fingers. but no matter how fast i go, my sorrow yet lingers. the broken speed limit will never be enough. for in the end, im left with depression's rough

(#2) depression's grip

Verse 1:
Feeling lost, in my own mind
Tears falling, can't leave them behind
Depression's grip, feels so tight
In the darkness, can't find the light

Chorus:
Trust issues, they consume me
Lack of love, can't set me free
Broken heart, shattered and bruised
In this world, I feel so used

Verse 2:
Every smile, just a disguise
Pretending to be happy, but inside I cry
Pushing people away, can't let them in
Scared of getting hurt, once again

Chorus:
Trust issues, they consume me
Lack of love, can't set me free
Broken heart, shattered and bruised
In this world, I feel so used

Bridge:
Wish I could break these chains
Escape from all this pain
But I'm stuck in this cycle
Of depression and denial

Chorus:
Trust issues, they consume me
Lack of love, can't set me free
Broken heart, shattered and bruised
In this world, I feel so used

Outro:
But I won't give up, I'll keep fighting
One day I'll find love, and ill start thriving
Depression may try to bring me down
But I'll rise above, and wear my crown.

(#3) Lethal Desires

(Verse 1)

The sun sets, darkness falls, in the depths where vengeance calls,

A burning fire, deep within, a storm of anger, about to begin,

It's a tale of sorrow, a tale of pain, a desire for justice, the insane.


(Chorus)

Lethal desires in the flickering night,

Fueling the flames, burning bright,

Revenge's melody, its haunting sound,

Lethal desires, we're on the battleground.


(Verse 2)

With eyes of steel, a heart so cold, whispers of vengeance, yet untold,

Every injustice, every scar, fuel the fury that lies afar,

The thirst for justice, cries for release, no resting till the wrongs decrease.


(Chorus)

Lethal desires in the flickering night,

Fueling the flames, burning bright,

Revenge's melody, its haunting sound,

Lethal desires, we're on the battleground.


(Bridge)

In shadows we'll rise, like a silent storm,

Carving our path, to reform,

With every step, we'll claim what's due,

Till vengeance is ours, till justice rings true.


(Chorus)

Lethal desires in the flickering night,

Fueling the flames, burning bright,

Revenge's melody, its haunting sound,

Lethal desires, we're on the battleground.


(Outro)

With every stroke, with every blow,

We'll make them see, we'll make them know,

That justice prevails, revenge subsides,

Lethal desires will forever reside.

(#4) Invisible Scars

(Verse 1)

Lately, I've been feeling so torn apart,

These invisible scars, they're tearing at my heart,

Every night, I'm haunted by the love we had,

But now it's shattered, shattered like broken glass.

(Pre-Chorus)

I try to keep it together, but I'm falling apart,

My emotions overflow, like a raging storm in my heart,

I'm drowning in these memories, they won't let me be,

These invisible scars, they're consuming me.

(Chorus)

Invisible scars, can't you see the pain?

They're etched deep within, driving me insane,

Every smile that I fake is another tear,

These invisible scars, I can't make them disappear.

(Verse 2)

I built my walls high, to hide all the pain,

But these invisible scars, they still remain,

I try to move on, but I'm stuck in the past,

Thoughts of you, they keep creeping back so fast.

(Pre-Chorus)

I put on a brave face, but it's just a disguise,

Inside, these invisible scars are paralyzing my life,

I'm lost in this darkness, searching for an escape,

But these invisible scars, they won't let me break.

(Chorus)

Invisible scars, can't you see the pain?

They're etched deep within, driving me insane,

Every smile that I fake is another tear,

These invisible scars, I can't make them disappear.

(Bridge)

I'm tired of fighting with these demons in my mind,

I need someone to save me, a love that's all mine,

But every time I open up, I'm left broken and scarred,

These invisible scars, they've left me deeply marred.

(Chorus)

Invisible scars, can't you see the pain?

They're etched deep within, driving me insane,

Every smile that I fake is another tear,

These invisible scars, I can't make them disappear.

(Outro)

But I won't let these scars define who I am,

I'll rise above the darkness, I won't give a [yeep],

I'll heal these wounds, though they're invisible to you,

Invisible scars, I'll break free, I'll make it through