Jashwin~

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 6:57 PM

Jashwin

Nicknamed Nayu,
Charming and smart,
He's a pain in the butt, but I still love him.
Only three and knows most of his ABCs,
A people-pleaser and most of the time annoying,
He's the youngest in his class but tallest by far,
Jashwin's my little brother, who loves going to bazaars.
Almost four, starting to snore.
Currently home with the cold,
Looks worse than some mold,
(That poor thing!)
Jashwin loves cars,
More than NASA loves Mars,
The magic number of model vehicles is 21,
Which may grow in the long run.
He's like the sun that shines on Earth,
Always shining, always bright, most of the time happy.
Though he has temper tantrums,
Perhaps like people after drinking rum,
You wouldn?t believe me when I said he has the loudest scream in the world.
Jashwin loves Caillou, and Arthur too,
I watch PBS Kids with him, boo?
24/7 he's hungry as a bear,
He's got the shiniest hair,
Black and like pure silk.
He loves biking outside,
Though he always comes home with a new scar to whine about.
He can't sit still for a second,
Or even do one thing for long, I reckon.
Jash (his friends call him),
Is occasionally more annoying than slush,
Screaming when he doesn?t get what he wants.
He always smacks me for no absolute reason,
But that?s okay because there?s only a few more seasons,
Until I go off to college, barely seeing him.
Jashwin loves big spaces,
And is quite fond of my braces,
I love him more than I can tell,
But I can say:
Life with him is quite swell.

Comments? 😉

lola622f • 9 October 2011 at 6:58 PM

your good at poems 😊

rosey77 • 9 October 2011 at 7:00 PM

Love it! Reminds me of my brother when he was little.

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:00 PM

@lola622f
@rosey77

I thought I failed,
It's hw actually. ;D

@cafe
@hai
@pipkitten
@yogurt

lola622f • 9 October 2011 at 7:01 PM

@whitefall actually it's good. I can't even write a decent poem

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:02 PM

Gah,
I made a billion mistakes *fixes*

@lola622f

I dunno i I'll get a good grade on it,
I'm in honors english. xD

rosey77 • 9 October 2011 at 7:02 PM

That ping didn't reach me D:

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:03 PM

@rosey77

Really? o_O

lola622f • 9 October 2011 at 7:03 PM

@whitefall o.O I'm bad at engilsh(and worse in french)

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:03 PM

@lola622f

I am too..
But my old teacher apparently liked me. 😸

pipkitten • 9 October 2011 at 7:04 PM

@Whitefall: Nice poem! ^^ It'd take me ages to write one that long... XD

lola622f • 9 October 2011 at 7:04 PM

@whitefall lucky. My french teacher hates me because I talked ONCE in class.

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:05 PM

@pipkitten

Lol, has to be atleast 30 lines.
I work well under pressure...

(It's due tomorrow)

xD

yogurt • 9 October 2011 at 7:07 PM

I want a brother now... XD lol..*sigh* It's awesome btw. 😸
@whitefall

candy_girl_1298 • 9 October 2011 at 7:10 PM

@whitefall😊 i bet your brother is extremely cute 😊

pipkitten • 9 October 2011 at 7:11 PM

@Whitefall: Due tomorrow? Holy hoppin' hamburgers! 😋
Lol, I don't work well under pressure. I usually procrastinate until the last possible second on things, and then force myself to write/draw something quick, which somehow still manages to net me an A+ for some odd reason. *cough*mylastartproject*cough* XD

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:12 PM

@yogurt

Lol, I should add he likes to hit my butt every second of the day and screams 24/7 if he doesn't get what he wants. xD

@pipkitten

I'm the #1 procastinator
I guess I procastinate because I get A+ anyway. xD

Added this:


Jash (his friends call him),
Is occasionally more annoying than slush,
Screaming when he doesn?t get what he wants.
He always smacks me for no absolute reason,
But that?s okay because there?s only a few more seasons,
Until I go off to college, barely seeing him.

yogurt • 9 October 2011 at 7:15 PM

@whitefall
Lol XD Wow that's a weird 3 year old ;D

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:16 PM

@yogurt

Almost four! xD

yogurt • 9 October 2011 at 7:17 PM

@whitefall
When's his birthday? 😸

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:20 PM

@yogurt

nov 15th. ;D

I should add that in my poem! 😱 😱 😱 xD

yogurt • 9 October 2011 at 7:22 PM

@whitefall
O_O....... Almost..... his birthday..... 😃 I need to find a gift XP (to give you for his birthday XD lol)

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:23 PM

@yogurt

xD

Ooh~
I put up the edited version

I think I'll look through it for five more minutes and then print and decorate it with cars. xD

cafe • 9 October 2011 at 7:23 PM

Cute x33

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:24 PM

@cafe

;D

Do you have siblings? ❤️

yogurt • 9 October 2011 at 7:25 PM

@whitefall
Are you going to draw the cars? OwO

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:26 PM

@yogurt

Maybe o-o
Or print and glue. 8D

yogurt • 9 October 2011 at 7:27 PM

@whitefall
I usually use clip art. 😸 because I can't draw lol

whitefall • 9 October 2011 at 7:28 PM

@yogurt

I might like trace it on

We have a black and white printer o3o

yogurt • 9 October 2011 at 7:30 PM

@whitefall
print it and color over it with marker? O-o