Please rate this? <333

Deleted • 4 November 2011 at 7:45 PM

I thought of a song. This is how it goes.

Chorus is first:

How could you leave me here, all alone. Thought you took me in for your own. How could you leave me here in the rain, all my hopes and dreams slippin the drain. How could you leave me here sopping wet? I wish we never met... wish we never met.. wish we never met.


Well thats all I have so fall really. XD Rate it from 1-5?

1- What was that?
2- Ehhh still needs alot a work.
3- So we got a good start.
4- Wow!
5- Man come on finish it I NEED MORE!!!!

Deleted • 4 November 2011 at 7:47 PM

3

maineen • 4 November 2011 at 7:47 PM

4 I always think things can improve in one way or another😊

Deleted • 4 November 2011 at 7:48 PM

@Chloekins Thanks!
@Maineen XD I AGREE! I was gunna give it a 3. XDDDDDD

crooton1 • 4 November 2011 at 7:49 PM

@Bluegirl80

More like a poem? 😋

3

maineen • 4 November 2011 at 7:49 PM

Hehe XD

Deleted • 4 November 2011 at 7:49 PM

@Crooton1 XD I like songs that rhyme. XD And I need to think up the rest. XD

whitefall • 4 November 2011 at 7:53 PM

Three~
Good, but it seems to repeat. ^^
"How could you"... x3
Try something else!

I like the tone, it's like... dignified. 😃

Deleted • 4 November 2011 at 7:56 PM

@Whitefall Its suppost to be like that. The song is call "How could you"

rosey77 • 4 November 2011 at 7:58 PM

4 Maybe change "slippin"? It kind of took from the sad atmosphere 😋

Deleted • 4 November 2011 at 8:00 PM

@Rosey77 Add what instead? Falling?

rosey77 • 4 November 2011 at 8:00 PM

Just add a G? xD Slipping?

whimsical • 5 November 2011 at 5:30 PM

3...?