Unipeg Archive Entry

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jello • 20 March 2017 at 9:06 PM

In the Unipeg Archive Entry, the last paragraph reads:


"Unipeg blood has a very mysterious property as well. When consumed, it grants its drinker whole health and eternal life but at a terrible cost. Drinkers lose their humanity and drive themselves mad with their new-found addiction. The effects of Unipeg blood wear off quickly, so its an endless pursuit to kill the purest spirits. Deranged people, thirsting for limitless power, have hunted Unipeg for centuries. None of the "eternally living" are known or have been identified by the government in Ark City."


You should change "its" to it's.


Sorry to waste your time if you feel such.

-jelli


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mastergemma • 20 March 2017 at 9:11 PM

@jellifysh
Nice catch again!

This has been fixed.

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