Dear Jordan (Dawnie)

Deleted • 18 February 2012 at 3:04 PM

This is where you write poems about Jordan

@Dawnie
@plushie
@Qwaszx
@Bunnyshadow
@Stellie

Golden hair as pretty as Heaven
Life wasn't the best given for Jordan
Friends loved the smile she showed
Although when time passed it didn't glow
Tears began to form
Everyone was becoming torn
Dawnie was an amazing friend
Until the end
Depression got ahead
We began to dread
Life goes on
But for now she is in our hearts
Many friends are sad to say bye
Until then we'll see here fly.

It's not that good though ☹️

bunnyshadow • 18 February 2012 at 3:10 PM

@dawnie
~~~
Jordan you were pretty
Everything I wanted to be.
You had to leave
But i couldnt blame you.
A persons life
Is an slight morning breeze.
It can end soon
Or it can stay long.
But you choose
The short path.
And now I cry
Because your all gone.
~~~
But i still love you, my dear.

qwaszx • 18 February 2012 at 3:11 PM

It all started with a Mo
Then I watched out friendship grow
PMing and posting whenever we were on
And before I knew it you were gone
I shed a few tears
When you dissapered
I hope you're happy wherever you are

Sorry it's so bad. >.>

dreamer • 18 February 2012 at 3:11 PM

I'm writing a song for her. It's going to have a beautiful, heavenly feeling.

leafpelt • 18 February 2012 at 3:14 PM

If only time could reverse,
there might have been less hurt.
If only hope wasn't lost,
nothing would be.

But as all things,
life must go on.
Whether pain
or sorrow,
new life will blossom through.

Don't let obstacles
block your future.
No pain is forgotten though
its etched in forever.

This is my song/poem. I'm sorry, but I'm just horrible in writing poems.

Deleted • 18 February 2012 at 3:17 PM

Jordan
Though I did not know you
I have felt your pain
All of life's sorrows fell as acid rain
A tear drips from my eye
To say a last good bye
My heart goes out to you
Rest in Peace

cafe • 18 February 2012 at 3:30 PM

[My poems never rhyme, sorry]


Jordan, This world wasn't meant for her
An angel on earth, now back with God
Smiling down upon us, gleaming like the sun
Left behind on earth, her lover and her sons
Wait for them, she will, until the day has come
When they meet her at the rainbow bridge
Together once again
Jordan, sweet and pure as the virgin Mary
Beautiful as can be
Jordan
With the heart of a wolf
She couldn't take the pain
Of what others had burdened her
Finally set free
No more pain
Only happiness and love
Jordan
I love you
Jordan
I miss you
Jordan
Until we meet again

Deleted • 18 February 2012 at 3:39 PM

@Cafe ...Would you mind if I put that on Jordan's (The Tine) profile?

cafe • 18 February 2012 at 3:40 PM

@Dawnie

Of course not
Anything I make that's about Jordan, you get first dibs.

Deleted • 18 February 2012 at 3:45 PM

@Cafe Aww, it's got too many characters.

cafe • 18 February 2012 at 3:46 PM

Hold on, I'll do something for you

dreamer • 18 February 2012 at 3:57 PM

This is jut the beginning of the song I'm writing for her.

No one knows your life,
What you've been through,
But all of us know
What it had to lead to,
It's hard to survive
When you don't feel alive.
But we do the best we can.
It's hard to fit in
When you never win.
But the choices we make mean the world.

Sometimes you just can't be strong.
Sometimes we don't live too long.
Sometimes our world turns around.
Sometimes we fall to the ground.
But fellow friends, dry your tears,
But we all know in ten years,
You're still alive in my heart,
Even if we're apart.
I'll be your friend after death, and now beyond.
I'm devestated, but I can't cry,
Why did you have to die?
So soon,
I guess not everyone can be happy...
In the end.

Deleted • 18 February 2012 at 6:03 PM

@dreamer
that is the most beautiflu song I have ever heard I can relate

Deleted • 18 February 2012 at 6:05 PM

@Dreamer That is amazing. I know she'd love it.

dreamer • 18 February 2012 at 6:06 PM

@Dawnie Thanks. (: I'll post the rest.

We've all heard shocking news,
'bout the fate that you choose.
Not a word, I refuse
To believe, in your shoes
That my world is over.
No, I just can't be sure
Why'd this have to happen to you?

Sometimes you just can't be strong.
Sometimes we don't live too long.
Sometimes our world turns around,
Sometimes we fall to the ground.
But fellow friends, dry your tears,
But we all know in ten years,
You're still alive in my heart,
Even if we're apart.
I'll be your friend after death, and now beyond.
I'm devestated, but I can't cry,
Why did you have to die
So soon?
I guess not everyone can be happy...
In the end.

We lost a life today.
I wish that you chose to stay.
You were always an angel to me,
You were what I had wanted to be.
While I dry my wet eyes
While I'm staring outside
Into the night sky tonight.
Your beautiful star will shine.
Brighter than the rest in the night.
Yeah, that star will fill my soul with delight...

Sometimes you just can't be strong.
Sometimes we don't live too long.
Sometimes our world turns around,
Sometimes we fall to the ground.
But fellow friends, dry your tears,
But we all know in ten years,
You're still alive in my heart,
Even if we're apart.
I'll be your friend after death, and now beyond.
And devestated, but I can't cry,
Why did you have to die so soon?
I guess not everyone can be happy...
In the end.

scarlettsong • 18 February 2012 at 7:23 PM

I'm writing a poem for her.