I wrote a song - 'Paradise'

cqpkytty • 19 February 2012 at 12:06 PM

Here are the lyrics:

I bow my head
I close my eyes
I withdraw
From the world

I raise my inner head
Open my inner eyes
I spread my inner wings
And I soar

Up, up, up to the blue, blue, sky
Up, up, up feel the wind on my feathers
Up, up, up where the sun shines bright
Up, up, up I'm in paradise

I innerly dive down
I see the waves below
My feathers turn to scales
And I swim

Down, down, down in the blue, blue sea
Down, down, down with the other little fishies
Down, down, down in this cool wet place
Down, down, down I'm in paradise

My shape and place now change
I race across the plains
A spotted yellow cat
And I run

Run, run, run 'cross the hot savannah
Run, run, run feel the wind rushing past
Run, run, run exhilaration
Run, run, run I'm in paradise

I raise my head
Open my eyes
Back to my average humdrum life
Nothing that excites
But when I get the chance
When I am alone
I bow my head and close my eyes
And then I go

Up, up, up to the blue, blue, sky
Down, down, down with the other little fishies
Run, run, run exhilaration
In my head, I'm in paradise

In my head, I'm in paradise


What do you guys think? Please comment! 😸

whitefall • 19 February 2012 at 12:47 PM

I like it~ (:

scarlettsong • 19 February 2012 at 12:50 PM

Nice 😊

syndrome • 19 February 2012 at 12:50 PM

That is a cool song, I wouldn't mind it being on the radio O.O

cqpkytty • 19 February 2012 at 12:51 PM

@whitefall
Thanks!

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syndrome • 19 February 2012 at 12:55 PM

@cqpkytty I hope you're proud of yourself, the up,up,up down,down,down and run,run,run parts are stuck in my head 😋

cqpkytty • 19 February 2012 at 12:56 PM

@scarlettsong
@cheetah
Thanks!

@pirateseaz
And lol, you don't even know the tune xD

lola622f • 19 February 2012 at 12:57 PM

I love it!

univea • 19 February 2012 at 1:02 PM

😸 yeah, i love it 😸

cqpkytty • 19 February 2012 at 1:04 PM

@lola622f
@univea
Thanks!

leafpelt • 19 February 2012 at 1:06 PM

@cpqkitty
Love it.

cqpkytty • 19 February 2012 at 1:09 PM

@leafpelt
Thanks!
(also, it's cqpkytty, not cpqkitty xP)

leafpelt • 19 February 2012 at 1:11 PM

Srry! Keep mixing them up!
@cqpkytty

cqpkytty • 19 February 2012 at 1:12 PM

@leafpelt
It's OK 😊