.*.*Land of the Fallen*.*.

takaedakumi • 20 March 2012 at 4:34 PM

The evil lord, Raszinye (pronounced raz in eye) has taken over the world of Cescont (ses cont), the world where you and many others live, it is a strange and futuristic world, It was once a beautiful world full of happiness, the sky, a bright blend of sparkling purple, orange and yellow, the plants an enchanting pink, and the seas, a beauteous gold... But ever since Raszinye took over, the sky is dark, and he has been fast changing the world, bending it to his will, the entire military is on his side, and weapons have been outlawed, making self defense impossible, and the murder rate sky high. He means to create a new world, using Cescont to do so, he hides this truth behind his lies of changing Cescont into a better place, many people believe this. Slowly, he is gathering enough power from the skies to obliterate Cescont, and create his new world... The Land, of the Fallen.

However, Ayla, the former Queen of Cescont, relieved of her position by the hand of Raszinye, has been gathering people, to help her fight back and revive Cescont, these people have been supplied with weapons and equipment. The only problem is... Raszinye is hidden somewhere, and yet can still broadcast his lies live. You must help Queen Ayla, and save the Planet Cescont...

Can you do it?


Will post the join form and rules soon from my side account. ^^

Tags:
#roleplay
#LandoftheFallen

-misterman- • 20 March 2012 at 5:00 PM

Rules:

-No godmodding
-No swearing
-Follow Egg Cave rules
-Try not to have one liners
-Pay attention to the story please, I don't want to have to to fill a million people in on what's going on all the time

Note: This is a story, and you are part of it, please understand that I am the master of this story, and while it my be hard, I must control several characters in order to keep the story going correctly.

If you really want a second character, and no more than two will I allow, you may ask my permission with a form for the character you wish to add, and get my approval.

Last thing, please spare us and USE GOOD GRAMMAR, that is all, thank you. ^^

Form:

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Looks:
Weapon:
Weapon Element: (Dark, Light, Earth, Water, Wind, Electric, Nature, or Fire)
Description:



My main character (others will not have forms):

Name: Shiate (She ah tay)
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Looks: Sort of messy white hair, bright blue eyes, dark green t-shirt, dark gray pants, black hooded cloak, black half-gloves, black utility belt
Weapon: Silver bow and black quiver equipped with silver arrows, crafted by Ayla herself
Weapon Element: Nature
Description: Has been a loyal servant and friend to the queen, he is what they call a "Night Ranger", one who keeps watch over the dangerous forests of Cescont by night, and escorts groups of people, large or small, across these forests.

takaedakumi • 20 March 2012 at 5:33 PM

Aaand people can join now. x3

-misterman- • 20 March 2012 at 6:25 PM

I seriously thought at least one person would join by now. O.o

Wow, I guess my story is really bad, huh? :/

takaedakumi • 20 March 2012 at 6:49 PM

Okay, so, I'd like to see if this is ACTUALLY a crappy idea, or if no one is seeing it, If you think my story is junk, do tell, I want to know.

I fail. *dies*

ieatburgers • 20 March 2012 at 7:00 PM

@takatheeducatedkid *is on her phone* sorry I took so long P:

Name: Alice
Gender: Female
Age: 26
Looks: long wavy blonde hair with cold grey eyes. Wears a yellow dress that reaches to her knees and a long dark green hood cloak over it. On her feet are a pair of black boots and she wears black fingerless gloves.
Weapons: A spear
Weapon element: dark
Description: One of the Warriors of the queen, she was known for being the cold and heartless one, murdering without mercy. Ever loyal to the queen, she is fiercely protective of her friends and would do anything for them. Under her cold shell lies a girl who has a loving heart. History is unknown.

cotton • 20 March 2012 at 7:08 PM

I might join later! 😃

Edit// Okay, I'll join now. xD

Pinging:
@skylark
@hayz
@swimforlife
@cqpkytty
@whispers
Join!


Name: Ella
Gender: F (duh)
Age: 14
Looks: Short and thin with short, wavy white-blonde hair. Usually wears a black tee shirt, jeans, and boots. Big light blue eyes.
Weapon: Dagger
Weapon Element: Electricity
Description: IDK! What do I describe?

takaedakumi • 20 March 2012 at 8:32 PM

@ieatburgers YAYZ!

@cotton Well you're always welcome. ^^



If we get at least two more members, we can start!

Random pings:

@whispers
@hayz
@rawrcookies08
@cqpkytty

cotton • 20 March 2012 at 8:34 PM

@takatheeducatedkid Lol, just edited my post and joined and pinged. You pinged me, btw. This IS rawrcookies08's new account. XDD

I also pinged 2 people that you did.. Haha xD

takaedakumi • 20 March 2012 at 8:37 PM

@cotton Whaaa? Lol, I had no idea. However, edited pings don't actually send a notification I don't think. :/

Oh, and to save our sanities, I'm not writing a book on this roleplay. 8P

cotton • 20 March 2012 at 8:38 PM

@takatheeducatedkid Lool XD

Sorry for going crazy on the last topic. I just thought it would be soooo awkward if it was in a bookstore and my mom saw it.. xD

takaedakumi • 20 March 2012 at 8:44 PM

@cotton Lol, I understand completely, however, I don't believe you have that much to worry about. I told my parents I was writing a book on it, and I don't know why, but I felt the outcome would make me feel dumb. But once I told them, they said it was a good idea, and encouraged me to write it. I haven't been very fast in writing it though... 😋

Plus, I've added new characters to make it better, and I've also tweaked some of the characters' personalities and some of the scenes. Oh, and if you'd like, I can tell you how it was going to end, via pm.

hay7199 • 20 March 2012 at 9:38 PM

Name: Jason
Gender:M
Age:14
Looks: Black hair black eyes 5"4
Weapon: Machedie
Weapon Element: (Dark, Light, Earth, Wind, Electric, Nature, or Fire)Dark
Description:???

whispers • 20 March 2012 at 9:45 PM

@takatheeducatedkid
Oh! I wanna hear the Elem story ^-^

Name: Lin
Gender: F
Age: 17
Looks: Tall thin girl, with long wavy brown hair usually tied into a braid, she has pale skin and dark green eyes
Weapon: Sword
Weapon Element: Fire
Description: As the person to bring the bread home for the family, she is very mature for her age. Her parents have been executed for their crimes. Lin hasn't received school since 7th grade, when she dropped out. Her little brother Griffin had recently died due to that evil king.
As having an unfortunate past, Lin is very hard. She is not afraid to snap at you and she isn't afraid of a lot of things. She will do anything to save to world. To her,that even means one thing; to die for it.

cotton • 20 March 2012 at 9:53 PM

@takatheeducatedkid Ok, cool 😸 It's not like I'm scared of my parents seeing it, it's just that if the story was exactly the same it would be kind of weird xD I can pretty much guess the outcome but sure PM it to me 😊 Are you changing the titles, too? Not that I don't like the title, but I think I saw a book that was called "The (something I don't remember) Elementals". 😱

takaedakumi • 21 March 2012 at 12:59 AM

@cotton Meh, we'll see. I'll send you and @whispers a pm with the end of The Elementals (and I'm pretty sure you wont have seen it coming exactly).

So many cool charries... 8D Anyways, so, I think we can start!


Shiate and Ayla where in the city of Diandos (Dye an dose), sitting at a small and cheap cafe, a few others where with them (whoever wants to be there), talking about what to do next, and where to look for new recruits to the team.

bunnyshadow • 21 March 2012 at 1:09 AM

@takatheeducatedkid can i be evil? Or be a spy? 😱 i have good grammer and spelling so i think i can pull this off x)

Name: Sylvia
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Looks: black chest length hair, purple bangs cover left eye, violet/purple eyes, wears black and boots.
Weapons: A spear/Daggers
Weapon element: darkness or shadows
Description:

sarahzafirah • 21 March 2012 at 1:54 AM

Name: White Fang (also known as Fang)
Gender: Female
Age: 10
Looks: Half fox, white ears tipped with black, satchel, dark brown shoulder length hair, long sleeve top, blue jeans.
Weapon: Gun, spear and dagger.
Weapon Element: Light
Description: White Fang is very good in her element. However, she doesn't like to use it to torture people. She uses them to fight and stuff.
White Fang is also known to be called Fang, because of her dagger made of a lion's tooth.

cotton • 21 March 2012 at 7:44 AM

@takatheeducatedkid I'm pretty some of these happen:
-"Jo" dies or almost dies and survives miraculously
-The father turns nice and they DON'T have to kill him
-Kris and Drake or Derek or I-can't-remember-his-name are in love or something

takaedakumi • 21 March 2012 at 10:53 AM

@cotton Well, the last one is kind of right, but his name is Drake. xD Anyways, I'm sending the pm in a but, didn't have time last night. But you forgot one character they ran into that could be a problem I will probably just send you the pm in "scene" style, as if I where roleplaying, it's easier.

@sarahzafirah Ooh, nice, I should have thought of half animal people. 😉

@bunnyshadow If you reeeally want to, It would be nice if everyone was on the good side, but I guess it's okay... But try not to like, make the king look stupid or anything, because he most certainly is not, which, by the way, means he's not going to choose stupid people to be spies and whatnot, so don't make your character dumb either, not that I think you would. 😋


Oh, and just a heads up to everybody, I forgot to add water to the list of elements, doing so now, if anyone would like to change their element, it's okay to do so before you jump into roleplay too far.

whispers • 21 March 2012 at 7:59 PM

@takatheeducatedkid
Lil' confused 'bout where we start 😋

Lin walked in the empty shack again.
It was still home to her. Though she had no family left.
"I've got to stop coming here," Lin whispered to herself.
She grabbed her last piece of bread from the house. It was old and crusty. But when there isn't enough food, this stuff is the best.
~
Lin walked along the streets of Diandos. She was heading to the cafe. The workers there gave her the stuff that was burnt or dropped. She didn't care. She loved it.
She walked right in and hid her sword in it's sheath. The workers gave her a loaf of dropped bread.
Yum. She sat down at an empty table and took out the pictures of her family. All were smiling.
All of them were alive. She looked up from the depressing photo and saw two girls just standing there. One kept and eye on Lin, the other stared out the front glass of the cafe.
--
Is that a good start? xD

hay7199 • 21 March 2012 at 8:02 PM

@Takatheeducatedkid Am i in?

takaedakumi • 21 March 2012 at 8:10 PM

@whispers Perfect. 8D

@hay7199 Yeah, post away! xP


Shiate was standing by Ayla's side, she was drinking a cheap tea. Both had their hoods up, they where outlaws in many cities, so they cautiousness was needed. Ayla spied Lin eating old bread. She ordered a cupcake and took it to her. Shiate followed. "Here, these make everyone happy. She said, putting it on the table in front of Lin. Ayla removed he hood to reveal long beautiful red hair and sparkling yellow-gold eyes.

Deleted • 21 March 2012 at 8:12 PM

@takatheeducatedkid
need more guys or girls? I'll make whatever we have less of...

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Looks:
Weapon:
Weapon Element: Water
Description:

What types of weapons can we use?

takaedakumi • 21 March 2012 at 8:14 PM

@swimforlife Probably guys, I think. Weapons? Hmm, anything really, just not some weapon of death or anything. Creativity is allowed, this is a futuristic world after all. ^^

hay7199 • 21 March 2012 at 8:14 PM

Jason walked down a cobblestone path,he held bread between his hands,he came to a small cottage and walked in,his younger brother,Jack,ran to him "Did you get the bread?!"Jack asked exitedly.Jason smiled and handed him the loaf of bread and he smiled,"All for me?"He asked "All for you"Jason said back...


After his mother and father died he took over the family,it was made up of two sisters (Who had already moved out) And a younger brother

whispers • 21 March 2012 at 8:15 PM

@takatheeducatedkid
Lin looked up at her.
"Thanks."
She started to eat it, but looked back up at her.
"Ayla."
Her eyes widened. "Aren't you wanted in many places?"

takaedakumi • 21 March 2012 at 8:19 PM

@whispers "Don't worry, I'm pretty sure no agents are around, besides, Shiate will get me out of trouble." She laughed.

Shiate rolled his eyes.

Deleted • 21 March 2012 at 8:23 PM

@takatheeducatedkid

Name: Vex
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Looks: Athletic build, light brown hair, grey eyes
Weapon: ? to be discovered
Weapon Element: Water
Description: Vex-ish , has thin webbing between fingers and toes

hay7199 • 21 March 2012 at 8:28 PM

Jason walked into the town,and into the store,"Can i have a loaf of bread?"He asked the woman replyed "You were just here moments ago?Were you not?"She said handing him another loaf of bread and he replyed "Yes,ma'am i was"And he handed her a few coins