Nydeiwen ~ A Story By @BunnyShadow

bunnyshadow • 30 March 2012 at 5:50 PM

Grab a comfortable chair, a plate of cookies and something to drink, because your mind will be blown away by this sad story... And don't forget a box of tissues! </3
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Prolouge:
Deep in the forests of the Kingdom Of Nydeiwen, a large female dragon lay dying in a cave. She once looked beautiful, with a long angled head and sharp teeth lining her mouth. Spikes trailed down her neck and down her body, except for the middle of her back where a large saddle sat for her rider. She was a golden yellow color, with glittering scales, and her wings were 16 feet long and feathered yellow and occasionally gold. Her limbs were elegant and she had bright yellow eyes. Kyofu placed his hand on her head, and she looked up at him with her now dull eyes. {Good bye Gorua.} He said to the dragon, through the mind-speak all dragon riders possessed. If you were lucky enough to hatch a dragon, you would be able to communicate with him/her through your mind. Gorua put her long neck down on her front limbs, and closed her eyes, and her breathing ceased. The dragon had believed that she had died from an attack from behind at the end of a bottle, for there was a sword still stuck through her right calf, but in truth, Kyofu was the one who had stabbed her when she turned to face the last of the enemy army. Kyofu laughed maliciously, his black bangs sweeping across his face, covering his dark blue eyes. He yelled at the dead body of the dragon,"Your finally dead, you filthy beast!"

nightmare • 30 March 2012 at 5:53 PM

Kyofu turned towards his servant and ordered him to put horseshoes on his large black war horse, before escaping. While the servant put the horseshoes on the horse, Kyofu strided towards what was left of Gorua, and picked up four large smooth stones from her side. Dragon Eggs. The first was a smooth and white with golden veins and small yellow speckles made a stripe down the middle. The second was entirely black with a silver glow surrounding the outer layer of the egg, a brighter whiter glow seemed to be coming from the middle, and it radiated warmth. The third egg was a dark purple shade and seemed to gradient black at the bottom. The final egg was silver with black raindrop like shape towards the very bottom of the egg. Before putting the eggs in his horse's saddlebag, he wrapped them in black scarves to keep them hidden from any guards or dragons with riders patrolling the sky for any intruders. Kyofu mounted his horse and with a sharp kick at the sides of the horse, he rode out of the cave into the forest and overgrown trail beyond.
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End Of Prolouge.

meixiaotian • 30 March 2012 at 6:02 PM

OMIGAWDTHATISANEVIPERSON!!!
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ dragons.
Subscribed.
And I'm a pretty heartless person, I survive sad stuff.
But I spazz around stuff with dragons.
You found my weakness. ☹️
I like it though! *claps*

bunnyshadow • 30 March 2012 at 6:19 PM

Chapter 1: Iro
Nisu placed her delicate fingers over the smooth pink stone, the only dragon egg that was known to exist in the Kingdom of Nydeiwen. It was a light shade of pink, with soft red colors shading the bottom. Suddenly, a small tremble came from within the egg, and immediately after a few small peeps came from inside, and a small crack appeared on the outside shell of the smooth stone-like egg. A few of the archers stopped to watch and a small sharp snout poked its way out of the egg, revealing small emerald like eyes, that shone with intelligence, despite the fact that this was a newborn dragon hatchling. The dragon crawled out of the broken egg, and stood on Nisu's open hands. It was a lighter shade of pink, outlined in darker red and already had its set of wings, unlike the female dragons that grew theirs later on. The crowd that started to gather around started clapping, hesitantly at first, but then applauded loudly. "All hail Nisu, the newest of the dragon riders!", a man bellowed and many of the people kneeled down, bowing their heads. Nisu smiled, her darker pink dress matching the scales of the dragon hatchling. It spoke in Nisu's mind saying,{ I, am Iro.}

nightmare • 30 March 2012 at 6:21 PM

The girl looked at Iro's emerald green eyes with wonder. It seemed that everyone else also heard the voice, and they applauded even louder, many peeople bowing at the small dragon, that would soon be larger than a house, and more powerful than an army of a hundred. The crowd began to disperse, with people whispering amongst themselves. Immediately after Iro hopped from Nisu's open palm, a large green dragon flew out of the sky, landing in front of Nisu, and a man hopped off the dragon, landing in one fluid motion. "Nisu, is it?", the man said in a deep voice. "You have been very fortunate to be able to have Iro hatch for you, for you are the one other dragon rider that I know of.", he said, and continued. "This is my dragon Gurin, and I am Ryu.", Ryu said, first gesturing to the green dragon then at himself. As Nisu absorbed this information, she led him to the courtyard of the castle, where she spotted her brother chatting with his friend. All of the sudden, an huge roar penetrated the quiet stillness of the courtyard, and an body of an soldier fell from the sky, before landing with a loud thump on the ground. A black arrow fletched with dark purple feathers stuck from the mangled corpse with a note.

bunnyshadow • 30 March 2012 at 6:23 PM

Ryu reached for the arrow, pulling it out with the sickening sound of flesh and guts mixing together. Fresh blood clung to the silver tip of the arrow, and he plucked the note off, and opened it to see these words written with still drying blood. "Surrender Nydeiwen, or choose to die fighting the Outlaws. This is no threat, it's a warning.?, Ryu read aloud. People have begun to notice the body and have started whispering to each other. Gurin sniffed the body and nudged it, while Iro hid behind Nisu. "The outlaws?", people whispered. Nisu turned towards Ryu. "Who are the Outlaws?" Ryu responded with a shake of his hair, and answered in a grievous voice.?The Outlaws are the rebels. Few have heard of them and those that have, live in fear their entire lives. They have done more horrible things than anyone can imagine. Slowly, they have gained power and recruited more despicable people in their ranks, and it seems they?ve finally decided on attacking Nydeiwen. Impregnable, it can?t be possible that they?ve already had enough to be able to take over Nydeiwen, I?ve only heard of them a few months pasts." Nisu could already sense that this was not good, and she stared in melancholy. "We must plan our next movement.", Nisu said forlornly.
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End Of Chapter One.

meixiaotian • 30 March 2012 at 6:23 PM

@bunnyshadow YES.

bunnyshadow • 30 March 2012 at 6:24 PM

@Mexiaotian kk

nightmare • 30 March 2012 at 6:45 PM

@mexiaotian updated 😸

bunnyshadow • 30 March 2012 at 6:52 PM

@karamel
@phoenixfox
@hedwig68
@pipkitten
@GLaDOS

hedwig68 • 30 March 2012 at 6:53 PM

@bunnyshadow read it is very interesting but also very sad when he kills the dragon

lola622f • 30 March 2012 at 7:02 PM

@bunnyshaodw I love it!!

karamel • 31 March 2012 at 3:25 AM

@bunnyshadow It's great. So sad </3

But there are just a few (only about a couple) grammatical and/or punctuation errors x.x" Sorry, I'm nerdy like that xD