Creature writing contest.

armageddondoll • 5 July 2011 at 12:34 PM

@spenser_dog_123

My entry 😊
This is a story about AutumnShine. My Leyma.

It was chilly, as it usually is in those quiet Autumn months. The leaves rustled as the gentle November breeze danced with them. With every gust, their vibrant colors were plucked from the tree, and fell to me feet. I walked along the beaten path, surrounded by trees kissed by the coming of winter months.Suddenly, I no longer felt alone. Someone was with me, watching me.

The air filled with the scent of cinnamon and apples. The leaves swirled in a warm gust of wind, making a song all their own. And from behind the largest tree...came AutumnShine. So shy. So lonely...So much like myself. I knelt down and held out my hand, longing to hold my newfound friend. He was hesitant at first, cautious of me I think. But soon he was right before me, gazing at me with bright and kindred eyes.

It was on that day that I found my best friend. My dear AutmnShine. He's been my faithful friend ever since. Some days you can see us playing in piles of leaves. And some days you will only know we are there....Once you smell the cinnamon and apples.

- By @armageddondoll

Deleted • 5 July 2011 at 12:46 PM

@spenser_dog_123
I have a poem about BattleCry but because he's an Elge and they stand for our country i mixed that in too....

~*BattleCry*~
Please help me grow
Teach me to fly
If all goes right,
I'll never die
Feed me once a day at least
But help me only to live in peace

Though my name is BattleCry
Though I should once learn to fly
No fear to die, But I will not fight
Thats not the way i'll use my flight

I know to love but not to hate
But please, God bless our every state...

scorch_cloud222 • 5 July 2011 at 12:58 PM

Here's the link to my entry.

http://hinote-kun.deviantart.com/art/Hatch-216786325

- from the memoirs of Saeros, the mo

Deleted • 5 July 2011 at 1:10 PM

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scorch_cloud222 • 5 July 2011 at 1:11 PM

@chloekins;;

Thanks. ^^ I edited to make it simpler.

froggytails • 5 July 2011 at 1:18 PM

This is of my Colotay a made-up story

I walked along the streets, my light brown ears flat against my head. My brown tail was down low, being dragged on the sidewalk. One of my wing's were broken and sticking out in an awkward way, the other one was down dragging against the sidewalk as well. My front left leg striked with a thousand pains if I put pressure on it so I limped.
My shining green eyes looked up at the full moon that was up tonight. As I did I put my left paw down, making me collapse onto the dirty floor. Dirt flew in little circles as I fell. I sneezed and rubbed my brown nose. I looked at my body to see my light brown paws and light brown tail. Everything else on my body was brown.
I have a nice owner, well had one anyway. He had brown hair with yellow eyes. Always wearing jeans and blue and red shirts. He cared for me, trained me, hatched me and let me grow to my last stage. He had given me the name Sprinkles, but then, on this full moon he just came to where I was laying on his Green and blue bed and started punching, again and again.
I shudder just to think about it. We were supposed to enjoy the full moon together! He had tried to kill me. But I can fend for myself now, I don't need him! Although, why do I feel this pain in my chest? I loved him, he used to be so nice to me... I can't still love him though! I looked at my chest to see the light brown quarter moon on my chest shine in the full moon's light. "I'll be fine on my own."

chatial • 5 July 2011 at 1:26 PM

Rao.

Cold, So cold. If only the sun would come back out from that endless horizon. Lying, on the floor. If only that thing would come back and pry my almost lifeless body off the frozen ground. Nothing hurts. Adrenaline rushing through my body and everything is cold and numb. Numb, so very numb. I wish I knew where I am.

Voices, I remember hearing them. It was so dark but warm then. T rapped inside a small place, I finally broke free. Voices, then I heard none. Alone in the light. It felt so amazing, so beautiful. But lonely. Where was I? Not far from here. Not far from where I lay now. Noises, I heard them. Following them with my sight. my touch and listening. My smell and taste. I didnt even see what hit me.

Disappointed in myself, I am. Maybe something is wrong with me. very wrong. I am lonely and it is all because of me. Lying here I realize that. Lying here soaked in my obsessive bleeding blood. Being drained may be the only answer. on this cold floor. I would rather die than be all alone. What a cold, numb world.

spenser_dog_123 • 5 July 2011 at 5:00 PM

*Claps to everyone* This is a hard choice...remember today is your last day to enter, picking winners tomorrow.

redfire77 • 5 July 2011 at 5:15 PM

isn't pwuffy having one too?

silver_winged • 5 July 2011 at 5:36 PM

Um, never mind, sorry about that. Entry was too long for one post and Eggcave forums don't let you post two times in a row? Good luck picking!

blaze4ever12 • 5 July 2011 at 5:42 PM

I'll join. ouo
Creature's name: Taqquiq

S t o r y ; ;
First of all, it was snowing. Not just a small flurry or sprinkle of the flakes, but a full-out raging blizzard. The wind appeared to be wailing into the sky, the currents of the breeze swirling up and around the lowered clouds. Only a flash of brown fur and a plaid scarf could be seen, and the bloodied flank of the young Brownil, one just recently abandoned by his parents. Like always, the cub got into fights, got into brawls, with the other residents, though he kept on fighting.

It was for his life, these fights. Other bears, like Beweg, weren't the type to fight, though the types he had been faced up with were strong. Terribly strong. One time, after Taqquiq had caught and killed a young Unhemn to fill his utterly empty stomach, another, one twice the size of him, took it away, a few clawmarks in his side afterwards. He just couldn't help it, he was going to die out there in the cold. And no one would miss him.

That was just the way of life that he had to take. There was nothing he could do to stop it.

rosey77 • 5 July 2011 at 5:54 PM

Name: Chocolatesnow
Travel: Purple Night Sky
Species: Brownil

It was a freezing night, the coldest of the winter. One little Brownil stood in the snow, outside of her cave where she lived. She was looking for any sign of food, because it had been a horribly cold hibernation and she had not packed enough food to survive. Her parents were inside. The Brownil looked for hours for anything as tiny as a Shamrue to eat. She could find nothing. Finally, with a depressed heart and an empty tummy, she returned home to her cave.
The Brownil was absolutly astonished and heartbroken by what she found there. Her parents were dying from hunger. The Brownil cried and cried, wondering what to do. Her mother told her to get back to sleep and hope for the best.

That was only part of it, please somebody post so I can post the rest of it

scorch_cloud222 • 5 July 2011 at 5:59 PM

@rosey77

rosey77 • 5 July 2011 at 6:00 PM

*CONTINUED*


When the Brownil woke up, she found herself in... a box? Her parents were nowhere to be seen! She frantically hit the box with her paws, but the box did not budge. Suddenly, she heard a human voice. "Calm down, calm down..." it said. Was she being took by a human? The human girl opened the box and took the Brownil out. "I think I'll name you Chocolatesnow, because it was snowing out, and you are the rich color of chocolate." Chocolatesnow suddenly realized her parents were in some more boxes. When the girl realized Chocolatesnow missed her parents, she said, "Don't worry! You can visit them in my friend's cove all the time. We will feed them so they get better." Chocolatesnow smiled. This girl really was kind. "By the way, my name is Rosey and I am your new owner." she said. Chocolatesnow grinned and playfully jumped onto Rosey's lap.

Okay, how was the story? It took a long time...

ladybugheart • 5 July 2011 at 6:15 PM

Winner the Gideh. 😊

Winner outstretched her wings, feathered and white with a dull silver glow reflecting off them. "There it is!" She floated effortlessly over a barren boulder and retrieved a gleaming golden key. It was what her owner had requested, though its purpose and the reasons why she needed it were unspoken of. Key grasped tightly in her beak, Winner lifted her magnificent wings and glided deeper into the cave. A few rays of sun shone in between several large rocks. She squeezed her head through the hole and inched out.

The sun's last golden rays of light disappeared behind a grassy hill by the time Winner was freed from the cave, and finally darkness had surrounded her. Numerous stars glimmered over the forest, like millions of glowing lanterns. Winner's dark, green eyes were led toward the crescent moon, a sliver of light in the darkness. She soared over the lush forest and landed, perched on the rough branch of an ancient elm tree, hesitant to go back. Winner was alone, afraid. Her thoughts of home were only memories that could never return. She climbed into a hole in the tree, imagining a warm nest and mouth-watering food. Winner buried her face in the feathers of her soft, comforting wings and drifted off into a deep sleep followed by dreams about her pleasant past. The shining key dropped from her beak, falling into the depths of the forest floor with a clink.

chatial • 5 July 2011 at 8:06 PM

Bump (:

bunnyshadow • 5 July 2011 at 10:42 PM

lalalalallala im bored XD

froggytails • 5 July 2011 at 10:45 PM

I wonder who's going to win..

lizardfeather • 5 July 2011 at 10:56 PM

I'm entering!!! This is about Oxheart, my Goldox. 😊 Story-poem-hybrid time!

The moon was full,
And the stars were high.
I walked through the storm
With a feeling of anticipation.
It was silent, in the way
That it wasn't. Wind threw all known
Noise to the charged atmosphere.
And then all if a sudden:

A twinkle of the stars
And a flicker in the wind
As the darkness deepened.
I turned, and
There in the shadows,
Stood an egg.

It was a beautiful silver,
Eternally flowing wisps of smoke
Danced around the shell.
It was so beatiful,
Yet when I touched it,
A feeling of dread overcame me.
I reached out again, towards its hypnotic
Smoke. But again felt repelled.

Perhaps it was greed,
Or perhaps Fate,
That compelled me to seize
P The beautiful silver egg,
And steal it.

rosey77 • 6 July 2011 at 12:16 PM

Who's the winner?!?!?

Deleted • 6 July 2011 at 12:20 PM

He's not on. =(

chatial • 6 July 2011 at 1:49 PM

Bump

rosey77 • 6 July 2011 at 1:52 PM

@spenser_dog_123

Deleted • 6 July 2011 at 2:33 PM

This is my last day on before i leave for a week so if he's not on today imma be sad. =(

chatial • 6 July 2011 at 2:43 PM

Be patient... He'll come on eventually. (:

qwaszx • 6 July 2011 at 2:52 PM

@spenser_dog_123 Can I join? I'll go wright one up! Prepare to be amazed 😉

EDIT: Okay here. It's about Rarest my Mo.

Rarest glided swiftly and silently over the hills as the sun set. She resisted the urge to sing her sweet song as that would give away that she was here. She fluttered to settle on a branch and huddled into a ball to make herself as small as possible.
As night came she watched counting how many Hallowwolfs came out. She saw a few Yeeps but she didn't worry about them. She jumped as she heard the first Hallowwolf howl to the full moon. Then in a few seconds the whole area was filled with noise.
A flew in the air hoping not to be seen. But she was. A few of them broke off and gave chase but she out flew them. She rushed to the Mo who was in charge and panted to him. 45.

lizardfeather • 6 July 2011 at 3:34 PM

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Deleted • 6 July 2011 at 3:45 PM

LOl, his notifications list is gonna be long @spenser_dog_123

rosey77 • 6 July 2011 at 3:48 PM

@darklovely3100 That's for sure! Haha.

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blaze4ever12 • 6 July 2011 at 4:01 PM

Well..~ *sighs* I gotta leave later so I hope he gets on soon~ ❤️ But if not then oh well~ ^^;