A Subtle Wolf Pack

cynder5 • 10 August 2012 at 1:53 PM

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"Sure you may join me." Heep said and sneered at DarkWillow.

daciana1 • 10 August 2012 at 3:48 PM

Name: Ravenna
Gender: female
Description: a malcadh outclanner who despises the pack.
Rank: outclanner/loner
Fur and Eye color: her fur is a pure black. Her right eye is foresty green, and her left is lavender.
Personality: spiteful, uncaring, cold, and brave.

If I may have two characters:

Name: Skaarslan
Gender: male
Description: a young and healthy wolf, sister to Ravenna
Rank: Beta male
Fur and Eye color: his pelt is silver, and looks as if it has stars sprinkled in it. His eyes are a brilliant green.
Personality: brave, sensible, outgoing, and kind.

iceyfira • 10 August 2012 at 8:07 PM

"Hickory..." Shadow said... "Stop, your hurting me!"

cynder5 • 10 August 2012 at 11:16 PM

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Tusami walked into the forest and saw HickoryStar and Shadow sitting in teh forest and ran over to help them. "HickoryStar what are you doing here it is not safe and i am sorry please come back to the pack. Please we need you and wI need you." Tusami claimed.

iceyfira • 11 August 2012 at 12:04 AM

HickoryStar heard Tusami, but refused to acknowledge her. She was to busy trying to figure out how to get the Human off of Shadow.
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Deleted • 11 August 2012 at 12:14 PM

Darkwillow nodded. "I heard of another outclanner named Ravenna in The Outcast." She told Heep. "Maybe she will join too?"
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daciana1 • 12 August 2012 at 12:49 AM

Ravenna slunk aroundthe forest. She saw a squirrel and pounced. She managed to kill it and wolfed it down. She had'nt eaten anything in days. She growled. She was still hungry. That ungrateful little squirrel didn't even fill her empty belly. She slunk into a small den thatnwas habitated by a fox and her pups. Ravenna slashed out at the fox, feeling crimson blood splash her black pelt. She bared her teeth and growled at the mother fox. The fox whimpered and grabbed as many pups as she could. Ravenna looked at the one pup left she picked it up ginger ly and deposited it unceremoniously outside of the den. She then padded back into the hole and curled up.

iceyfira • 12 August 2012 at 9:09 AM

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Daciana, you are awesome at writing! 😸


HickoryStar felt Tusami poke her side, and HickoryStar slowly turned around to face her. "Leave... me... ALONE!" She snarled. "You should be GLAD we left. Less mouths for you to feed!" She turned her tail on Tusami, and found the strength shove the human off of Shadow, nudge him over and onto her back, and marched away. Before she left, though, she called out to Tusami, "I dont know HOW you became leader. You are a selfish, weak, and ignorant leader. Have you not seen what has happened to your pack? Its only a giant horde of liars, thieves, and murderers!" With that, she walked away, with Shadow on her back.

daciana1 • 12 August 2012 at 1:24 PM

Oh, thank you! I'm hoping to become a writer and/or an actress when I'm older. I love writing!

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Skaarslan paced outside of his den. He was lost in thought and didn't notice when a strange wolf came to stand beside him. He heard heavy breathing and whipped his head around to face the stranger. Skaarslan nearly jumped back with fright. The stranger had splayed paws and looked at him with an insane smile. When he smiled, Skaarslan saw foam emitting from his mouth. Skaarslan took one step back with his left back paw. He stayed perfectly still.

cynder5 • 12 August 2012 at 11:12 PM

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Heep spoke in a voice that sent shivers up the others wolves spines" i suppose she could join"

Tusami saw HickoryStar leave and walked up and picked the pup up and carried her against her own will and slid shadow up onto her back. She took them to her den and set them outside of it. "This is not about the pack Hickory. I dont want you to get hurt out there you will tay here and you will like it." Tusami barked out and went into her cave.

The sark left and found Skaarslan in a predicment with the cursed wolf and quickly shoved him out of the way as the wolf lunged. She fell to the floor bitten by the wolf.
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Name: Twilight
Gender: Female
Rank: Pup
Description: She is firey and hot-headed nothing like her mother but alot like her father
Fur and Eye color: White fur with orange eyes
Other: She is Tusami's daughter who is not born yet and is not Liam's daughter

Name: Faolan
Gender: Male
Rank: Gnaw Wolf
Description: He was raised by bears
Fur and Eye Color: Silver fur that looks like stars are swirled into it and green eyes
Other: He was Tusami's mate when she was a Gnaw Wolf until she bacame the Alpha female

Deleted • 13 August 2012 at 7:49 PM

@cynder5 Faolan yay! I lvoe the Wolves of the beyond ❤️

Darkwillow nodded. "Come on let's find her in the Outermost." She hissed.

@daciana1 you are a good writer 😱

iceyfira • 13 August 2012 at 10:13 PM

HickoryStar finally had to stop for a break. She looked around, and saw a small cave for them to rest in. Shadow still had not moved the entire time.

cynder5 • 14 August 2012 at 11:19 PM

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Tusami walked in the forest after HickoryStar and picked her-up and slid shadow up onto her back.

The sak layed there not moving and slowly stood up and went tio her den.

Heep went to the outermost and found Revenna.

Faolan walked out to the frost forest not knowing of what would happen in there but needed toknow.

Deleted • 15 August 2012 at 7:18 PM

@cynder5 btw i think diaciana1 is suppost top play Ravenna? XD

Darkwillow followed along with Heep to find Ravenna.

iceyfira • 15 August 2012 at 8:42 PM

... Didnt HickoryStar pick up Shadow? And I KNOW Tusami did not help HickoryStar...
So confused right now. XD
To continue...

HickoryStar sighed and stayed up till The Great Moon-Wolf was high in the dark night sky. She watched Shadows breathing until her own slowed, and she fell fast asleep.

cynder5 • 15 August 2012 at 11:40 PM

@iceyfira tusami did help HickoryStar
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Tusami carried HickoryStar to a near by cave that was well sheltered from the snow that was soon to pelt the land.

Faolan journeyed deeper into the frost forest and noticed he was being followed.

Heep said " Well I think she is here in the cave. You go in first and check it out."

iceyfira • 16 August 2012 at 1:20 PM

@cynder5 I dont remember that... HickoryStar insulted Tusami and left with Shadow on her back. ~Facepalm~ FINE. But HickoryStar ignored her the entire time.

When HickoryStar woke up, she turned to glare at Tusami. "STOP FOLLOWING ME TUSAMI, YOUR JUST MAKING THINGS WORSE!" She snarled at Tusami. "Just LEAVE US ALONE!"

Deleted • 16 August 2012 at 6:53 PM

Darkwillow hissed. "Now is it all about you?" She snarled at the wolf. "YOU BIG FAT LAZY DUMB OLD WOLF!" But she ignored Heep and walked in.

cynder5 • 16 August 2012 at 10:50 PM

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"FINE I DON'T WANT TO HELP YOU!" Tusami snarled at HickoryStar "IF YOU WANT TO DIE IN THIS COLD WINTER YOU CAN. bUT I AM NOT LETTING SHADOW DIE HERE!" At that remark Tusami picked shadow up and carried him away from HickoryStar and the impending winter.

Heep walked in the cave after DarkWillow and ignored her comments. He neve said a word.

iceyfira • 16 August 2012 at 11:05 PM

HickoryStar stared in disbelief at Tusami. "Tusami..." She whined, "Shadows gone."

Deleted • 17 August 2012 at 7:26 PM

Darkwillow moved closer to Heep and apoligized, "Sorry for acting like that outside..." And the second reason was that the cave was dark and wet and spiders were crawling around.

iceyfira • 17 August 2012 at 7:29 PM

"Tusami...?" Said HickoryStar. "Tusami, are you alright?"

cynder5 • 17 August 2012 at 7:44 PM

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"Oh yeah I am ok." Tusami said "and Shadow is not gone. We have go to take him to the Sark she will know what to do."

Heep "saw the look in Darkwillow's eyes and forgave her.

The sark sat in her cave after being narrowly missed by a wolf with the foaming mouth disease.

iceyfira • 17 August 2012 at 8:01 PM

"... Tusami, hes gone. Hes not breathing, and his fur is cold. Tusami, he really is gone."

himaja • 18 August 2012 at 5:29 PM

Shillo crept behind a pile of stones and watched the clan closely. She wandered if they would let her join them. She weighed her options, if she didn't join a clan, she and her soon to be born pups would die but if she did join the clan there would be a chance to survive but she didn't know them well and there seemed to be so much rivalry. She suddenly heard a howl. She whisked off to see who it was. Maybe another clan?

iceyfira • 18 August 2012 at 5:35 PM

HickoryStar sighed and tried to read Tusami's face. "Tusami, just... please, just leave. I want to honor my friends short life in peace. He would not want you at his burial. If you must, I can show you the site I had buried him at after so you can pay your respects, if you still have any for us...." She stopped talking and looked at Tusami sadly.

cynder5 • 18 August 2012 at 7:30 PM

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"Ok HickoryStar I will let you honor Shadow and I will come to pay my respects." Tusami sighed sad that such a young pup had passed on. "But on one condition if you come back to the pack." Tusami said with a look of worry on her face. "I don't want this to happen to you."

Deleted • 18 August 2012 at 9:12 PM

@cynder5 Darkwillow then saw a shadow in the cave in a shape of a wolf. "Is that her Heep?" She asked her outclanner friend.

cynder5 • 19 August 2012 at 5:50 PM

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"Yes I do believe it is her" Heep said. He then looked over DarkWillow clearly not seeing any deformity on her. 'Wierd' he thought "She has no clear deformity on her. If she is perfect in everyway. Then why does she join ME as an outclanner?" He quietly muttered to himself. Well at least she HAS a tail"

himaja • 19 August 2012 at 6:44 PM

Shillo looked at the wolf with curiosity. She seemed to be ...praying? No.

Shillo stepped closer. It appeared the young one was paying her respects at a burial site. She gathered up the courage to say "Who are you?"

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