My book!

randomkitty17 • 16 July 2011 at 9:16 PM

Het guys, I'm going to write a book! Its an adventure/fantasy/sic-fi/etc (maybe others) book about a force of half-man half-demon beasts called the Umbra Res, and the walled city who tries to protect themselves.

...that was a terrible job of explaining it....

Oh well~ here's the intro and hopefully you'll understand it!



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There was once a time when the Umbra Res didn't attack us.

The wall hadn't been built.

We were a peaceful civilization.

But we didn't expect a war.



That was our fatal mistake.



After that, we changed and adapted.

We constructed a seemingly impenetrable wall that sealed us off from the world.

We recruited and trained an army that would become our only hope.

We educated our children never to leave the safety of the city, lest they join the forces of the enemies.

And we swore never to fall to the dreaded Umbra Res.



Hopefully that oath won't be broken.

But all we can do is hope.



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taffy789 • 16 July 2011 at 9:17 PM

😃

randomkitty17 • 16 July 2011 at 9:20 PM

@taffy789 Whaddaya think? 😉

taffy789 • 16 July 2011 at 9:22 PM

I would keep reading.

randomkitty17 • 16 July 2011 at 9:24 PM

@taffy789 yay! Thanks 😊

carnatate • 16 July 2011 at 9:26 PM

XD

randomkitty17 • 16 July 2011 at 9:32 PM

@carnatate ...?

decks123456 • 16 July 2011 at 11:14 PM

😃

randomkitty17 • 17 July 2011 at 3:46 PM

@decks123456 Thanks!

Main character's name will be Amia

bumblebee13_7 • 17 July 2011 at 11:46 PM

@randomkitty17: Your story sounds amazing! I would love to keep reading.

I vote for Amia as a name 😊

randomkitty17 • 18 July 2011 at 7:22 AM

@bumblebee13_7 thanks! And it's been decided, her name is Amia 😉