Revenge of the wicked (discussion board)

onyx • 31 August 2012 at 11:42 PM

@bunnyshadow

Ummm,would you mind if i played around with your form a bit.Its good it just needs to be fixed up a bit 😊

bunnyshadow • 31 August 2012 at 11:43 PM

@onyx Siren PM me when your done.

onyx • 31 August 2012 at 11:47 PM

@bunnyshadow

Sorry dude but whats a siren PM ?

bunnyshadow • 31 August 2012 at 11:48 PM

@onyx auto correct. O.o ignore the siren

onyx • 31 August 2012 at 11:49 PM

@bunnyshadow

Ok XD

@bunnyshadow

Just tell me would you prefer him to be snake themed or cat themed?

bunnyshadow • 31 August 2012 at 11:57 PM

@onyx o.o none. XD

I prefer his looks the way it is. 😋

onyx • 1 September 2012 at 12:01 AM

@bunnyshadow

I wasn't thinking of changing his appearance im asking just so i can bring things together

bunnyshadow • 1 September 2012 at 12:11 AM

@onyx o.o I really don't know. C:

jupiter_hollow • 1 September 2012 at 12:21 AM

@bunnyshadow Okay, what we're both trying to say is:

1. He's too powerful. He's got eight powers, not counting flying and fighting. So that makes ten. Eliminate at least half of them. Cat shifting isn't really needed if you ask me, flying is okay, mind reading, mind control... eh, you decide. Immortality, every demon possesses that ability. Solidify objects and unsolidify himself, not so needed, but you decide.

2. Having a snake eye and shifting into a cat? Sorry dude, he sounds like a Mary Sue. NOT a Gary Stu, but a Mary Sue.

@onyx

onyx • 1 September 2012 at 12:29 AM

@jupiter_hollow

Ok, now that you told me what you think im trying to say, let me speak for real.

@bunnyshadow

Sorry dude but he isn't what i want demons to be like. He is very much just a human with wings and strange eyes. he has to look much different and he is too powerful.

bunnyshadow • 1 September 2012 at 12:31 AM

@onyx I know you two were trying to say that. xD I'm going to edit it after watching some Anime. I just didn't get what you were saying about you doing something with the form? xD

*thinking*

onyx • 1 September 2012 at 12:33 AM

@bunnyshadow

I was first thinking of just changing your form a bit but now i think it needs more than a few little adjustments.

jupiter_hollow • 1 September 2012 at 12:46 AM

@onyx I don't think she'll answer soon >.> Eh, whatever, do you write poems? 😃

onyx • 1 September 2012 at 12:49 AM

@jupiter_hollow

Sometimes.....besides RPs i mostly write in Serbian so i don't get many people reading my stories or poems 😋

bunnyshadow • 1 September 2012 at 12:53 AM

@onyx Done xD
@jupiter_hollow
Dunno if it still needs adjustments. will post the rest when this half is accepted. xD
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Form:

Name: [Unknown]
Alias: Fang Diable Deces/Fang Deces Diable
Race: Demon
Gender: Male
Age: [Unknown]
Though, he only looks about 17 to 18 years old.
Family: Fang is a demon, and has none that is known.
Appearance: He has black hair, but at certain angles in certain lightings, the tips of his hair has a deep crimson tinge. His hair reaches right beneath his ears, and he has long bangs that hang in strands and cover his left eye. Four of his teeth are pointed. Two on the top and two on the bottom. His right eye is a complete blood red, and at around midnight, it is slitted and reptilian/cat-like. His left is the exact same blood red as the right, but on the pupil, he has a five sided star imprinted. (A demon's symbol). His skin is pale and his right hand has a silver shackle on it, as well as silver chains that wrap around his wrist and hang off about an inch or two. Large, feathered black wings are set in his back, and the bottom layer of feathers has a bloody-looking crimson tint. From his wrist to his hands, and his calf to toes end in dinosaur like claws.
Personality: He is calm, cool and calculating. Extremely violent when provoked, he won't hesitate to grab the one that has angered him and crush every bone in the other's body.

jupiter_hollow • 1 September 2012 at 12:53 AM

@onyx You live in Serbia? WE'RE SO CLOSE! 😃

onyx • 1 September 2012 at 12:55 AM

@bunnyshadow

That's much better,this part is accepted

@jupiter_hollow

I know 😊 I kind of like finding other people form the Balkans on the net XD

jupiter_hollow • 1 September 2012 at 12:56 AM

@bunnyshadow Reptilian/cat .... //dies D; I give up! Accepted!

onyx • 1 September 2012 at 12:58 AM

@jupiter_hollow

Dude,i think she is referring to the shape. Cats and reptilians have similar eyes.

bunnyshadow • 1 September 2012 at 12:59 AM

@jupiter_hollow How do I say it? xD Both snakes and cats have slitted eyes. 😋

@onyx ASDFGHJKL.
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Weapons: His main weapon is a scythe. The handle is made out of black titanium. The blade is made of a metal that is unknown to the human world. It is a clear silver color and It glows with a menacing light in complete darkness. Almost all the time, the blade is covered in fresh blood. Every once in a while, before Fang goes in for more than a few kills, he cleans the blade. The second weapon of his that he wields when not using his scythe is an spear with 3 small knife blades. One on the tip, and two to the left and right about an centimeter below. Multiple knives are hidden in Fang's sleeves and inside of his clothing.
Power/Ability: He is a master of manipulation and mind control, as well as a expert at lieing. Fang is fairly strong when well rested, but his most powerful weapons are his words and voice. The last of his powers is the ability to phase through objects.
Other: He has a few secret weaknesses, and only once has one of them been discovered. It has been whispered around, and Fang would not hesitate to kill anyone who spoke of it. This resulted in only one or two people that have ever figured it out and haven't been discovered and killed. Fang sleeps a lot, and loves cats and kittens.

jupiter_hollow • 1 September 2012 at 1:02 AM

@onyx Nah, I was actually expecting her to have kept her cat shifting and added reptile shifting. XD

@bunnyshadow Oki ^^

onyx • 1 September 2012 at 1:05 AM

@bunnyshadow

Sounds good but he will still have to be one of the big villains

bunnyshadow • 1 September 2012 at 1:22 AM

@Onyx Big Villains? o_o

onyx • 1 September 2012 at 1:23 AM

@bunnyshadow

I mean like one of the most powerful villains that cant be defeated easily

bunnyshadow • 1 September 2012 at 1:25 AM

@onyx Sure. c:













Agh. I want to break something. Stupid family.

onyx • 1 September 2012 at 1:30 AM

@bunnyshadow

*hides fragile objects* Whats wrong?

bunnyshadow • 1 September 2012 at 1:31 AM

@onyx *smashes objects against wall*

Eh.

onyx • 2 September 2012 at 7:45 PM

@bunnyshadow

Where should we start.I was thinking maybe Fang and Marrow still being in hell since they weren't yet summoned into the human world?

bunnyshadow • 2 September 2012 at 8:45 PM

@onyx Sure ^-^ Marrow reminds me of slenderman xD

onyx • 2 September 2012 at 8:47 PM

@bunnyshadow

Dude everyone on DA is drawing slenderman and i have no idea who he is 😋