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goku • 8 September 2012 at 2:51 PM
~Chapter 1:~The Dawn of NightLuke drew his sword from his pouch. Burning with anger, he ferociously struck at the oversized dragon. The dragon hissed in pain as he toppled to the icy pit beneath him. Luke sighed a breath of relief as he placed his sword back into his pouch. The dragon they had been trying to defeat for 5 years had finally fallen at his feet. They needed the dragon's scales to produce a chemical known as Biotoxic D. Biotoxic D was a very important chemical to the village that Luke lived in. It provided them with electricity, life, and much more. The only thing Luke would have to do now was to climb down, and gut the dragon. Luke used his sword to slowly lower himself down into the icy pit that the dragon had fallen down in to. The pit led down a straight 9 miles, but Luke wasn't about to let that stop him from completing his overall objective. When he finally reached the bottom, he saw the dragon. The dragon was obviously dead. Not moving an inch, Luke determined that it would be safe to approach it. But at that moment, across from the dragon shined a very bright light. Luke was a bit shocked that something that bright could be lying down at the bottom of a 9 mile icy pit. But, Luke was not one to doubt that things that seemed impossible. Completely forgetting about his mission, Luke ran over to the light. When he picked it up, he couldn't believe his eyes when he saw what it was. This was the day?..that Luke...made history.
Deleted • 8 September 2012 at 3:24 PM
@goku very interesting. TELL ME MORE NOW!!
goku • 8 September 2012 at 3:24 PM
@izzfred thanks😊
Deleted • 8 September 2012 at 3:26 PM
@goku I SAID TELL ME MORE NOW!!!
goku • 8 September 2012 at 3:27 PM
@izzfred you should read @daffyduck3500 Eggcave job topics. I must get payed for more xD
Deleted • 8 September 2012 at 3:35 PM
@goku i did because i have a job to. I write short novels. Can you look at my first? i can't copy and paste links. It's called: My Short Novel: The Wild West. Please enjoy and i will pay you now through trade..unless you can tell me how to gift people because i don't know how.
syndrome • 8 September 2012 at 3:36 PM
@goku How much for more? O.O
goku • 8 September 2012 at 3:37 PM
@izzfred Sure ^-^ I've already read it. Yup that quick.Probably because I'm just pro like that~You want to read more of my story? Ok sure! Payments of EC, CC, or creatures? ^-^
syndrome • 8 September 2012 at 3:38 PM
@goku I can do a payment of EC, depending on the price 😉
Deleted • 8 September 2012 at 3:39 PM
i'll trade you a Nipha and 100 EC because i only have 3,056 EC at the moment. can you give me a list of your UFT creatures? and can you ping me on my short novel?@goku
goku • 8 September 2012 at 3:40 PM
@izzfred Ok😊I'll ping you😊And All of my creatures are UFT for the right offer 😊Except for my Vampyr and one of my nyms 😊
syndrome • 8 September 2012 at 3:41 PM
@goku HELLO! I'm trying to pay you here xD
goku • 8 September 2012 at 3:42 PM
@pirateseaz Sorry! Didn't see your post until just now😊What would you pay 😱
syndrome • 8 September 2012 at 3:42 PM
@goku How much EC for you to finish up this chapter?
goku • 8 September 2012 at 3:43 PM
@pirateseaz 1000? 😊
syndrome • 8 September 2012 at 3:44 PM
@goku Okay, send the lot 😉
Deleted • 8 September 2012 at 3:44 PM
@goku a nipha and 100 EC for your Obarn named Oreo?
goku • 8 September 2012 at 3:45 PM
@izzfred No thanks😊@pirateseaz constructing 😊
Deleted • 8 September 2012 at 3:47 PM
@goku well at least i get to hear more since pirateseaz is paying!!@pirateseaz i have a job writing short novels. Do you want to check out my first? I can't copy and paste links so if you want to check it out it's called: My Short Novel: The Wild West. Please Enjoy.
bunnyshadow • 8 September 2012 at 3:50 PM
You get paid to write here? BY who? I would have a few billion EC if I got paid... Hmm...\😱 GASP. IDEA.
Deleted • 8 September 2012 at 3:51 PM
@bunnyshadow check my job out? I write short novels. I can't copy and paste links so if you want to check it out it's called: My Short Novel: The Wild West. Please Enjoy
bunnyshadow • 8 September 2012 at 3:52 PM
@izzfred I'll check later after I'm done watching anime. xD
Deleted • 8 September 2012 at 3:52 PM
@bunnyshadow ok
goku • 9 September 2012 at 2:48 PM
@bunnyshadow Did you read mah story? Was it ok .=.
bunnyshadow • 9 September 2012 at 7:16 PM
@goku I'd rate it 7.5 on a scale of 1 to 10. c:
newlife • 9 September 2012 at 11:15 PM
@GokuLike, but change pouch with sheath, and you should say how Luke went down, like pushing his sword against the wall? (:If you want some help, I'm a Light Novel writer.
goku • 9 September 2012 at 11:17 PM
@newlife Yeah I'll change it😊 This was just my rough draft;)
newlife • 9 September 2012 at 11:18 PM
@GokuI find that posting your Rough on a site does help. People catch your mistakes or give you better words to replace. Then your final is spotless.
goku • 9 September 2012 at 11:21 PM
@newlife Yeah😊 I usually don't attempt to correct ALL mistakes at once, unless it's like a book report for school ;}
newlife • 9 September 2012 at 11:23 PM
@GokuHear hear. Book reports don't count as stories.