EPIC FANTASY creature suggestion: Wispnia

syndrome • 16 November 2012 at 8:26 PM

http://pirateseaz.deviantart.com/art/Wispnia-338112118?ga_submit=10:1353115040

Egg Description: Colorful flames dance about this mischievous looking egg. Some colors are quit pleasant to touch, while others will instantly set your hand alight. The egg has a cheesy grind with red hot teeth, and it puts an eerie voice in your head, begging to be fed.

Hatched Description: Have you ever heard the saying "Don't play with fire," or maybe "Don't feed the flames." Both of these are very wise pieces of information dealing with Wispnia's although they are almost always fed anyway. They have a certain psychic trance that makes you want to feed them when you look into their eyes. The more you feed it, the hotter it's flames become, it always carries a small magical rock on it's person that grows with danger as it advances. It's last stage is very dangerous and it is not advised to own one.

@despair
@stellie
@colette
@evolutary
@keenfoot

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@pirateseaz
I've just seen this on dA, mate. It looks really unique! I think you did a good job. (:

syndrome • 16 November 2012 at 8:27 PM

@keenfoot Thank you very much. I really hope it is made. I worked long and hard on other sketches before I finally decided what to draw in pen.

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@pirateseaz
Cool and unique idea there (:

rainbowkitty • 16 November 2012 at 8:28 PM

@pirateseaz
It's great! ^.^
Unique, wonderfully drawn and all 😊

syndrome • 16 November 2012 at 8:28 PM

@connor Thank you ❤️

evolutary • 16 November 2012 at 8:44 PM

@Pirateseaz It's a really creative idea! The first stage is really cute. :]

syndrome • 16 November 2012 at 8:47 PM

@evolutary Makes you want to feed it doesn't it 😈

@rainbowkitty Thank you

@fuzzykins412
@immortalraven
@elorei

immortalraven • 16 November 2012 at 8:54 PM

@pirateseaz
cool 😉
Can you check mine out and comment? 😃 Please.

Edits:
And lol I've been getting pinged a lot lately. XD

http://eggcave.com/forums/topic/32860

syndrome • 16 November 2012 at 8:54 PM

@immortalraven

link?

piucca • 1 December 2012 at 11:28 AM

@pirateseaz
I like the direction you are going with this creature.
Personally I would keep the colors closer together.

All in the orange family or all in the green family, but to have the little guy go from orange, to orange, blue and green, to blue just seems too random, too disconnected.

In your description you should put a note for the
artist to make the edges or parts of it transparent.
That way you can give it that much more coolness 😋

I love it's expression XD
The first evolution is super cute, I personally would freeze it there because of how adorable.

syndrome • 3 December 2012 at 4:23 PM

@piucca
The colors are meant to represent the flames getting hotter in each stage. Plus, someone might enjoy one color over the other, causing them to want to freeze it and make more money in the site.

I love your idea about the edges being transparent 😊

Thank you about the expression. I worked really hard on the first stage, slacked off a bit on the second stage (as you can tell xD) and then tried to make the last stage look as epic as possible. And yeah, that was my goal for the first stage 😊

@meteorid
@orderedchaos

I'm curious to know what some mods think.

@whispers

You've had a few ideas made, what do you think?

whispers • 3 December 2012 at 5:28 PM

@pirateseaz
I like where you're going with this. It's pretty cool.
But, as piucca said, the colors should be closer together. The random colors for the different stages just seems disorganized/sloppy.

But their expressions give them a personality, in which I like.

Hope I helped! ^^

syndrome • 3 December 2012 at 5:41 PM

@whispers

As I explained to @piucca The colors are meant to represent the flames getting hotter in each stage.

whispers • 3 December 2012 at 7:27 PM

@pirateseaz
I know, I read that.
But you go from full on orange, to half blue/orange clashing against one another, then to full on blue. I think the colors in the second stage should be more blended, and blue be at the bottom (like in a real flame).

amendoboka • 3 December 2012 at 7:30 PM

@pirateseaz
lol, i'ts very nice.

syndrome • 3 December 2012 at 7:31 PM

@whispers Okay, whatevs. Thanks for the advice 😊

@amendoboka TY

catqeen1234 • 5 December 2012 at 10:17 PM

@pirateseaz

I like it!

mistyfire99 • 27 December 2012 at 2:08 PM

@pirateseaz
I like it too!