Outside the Swarm (Literate MLP RP)

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ems • 3 June 2013 at 7:24 PM

@whitefire I have another question; what if a Changling became part of a pair? Would the effects be similar to a group or to a single Changling? And how many Changlings would you define as 'a group'?
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Shadow sensed a bit of worry from this new stallion. Odd... There wasn't much else. "What's your name, mister?" She asked, lowering her tone a bit. She tried to keep her eyes wide with excitement. That's what fillies do, right? Oh dear, without Chrysalis, Shadow was feeling quite lost on how to act. But she didn't want to be mindless again. Suddenly she was caught in her own inner battle, though on the outside nearly nothing changed - her bright smile diminishing a bit as her thoughts shifted to a more serious matter.

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whitefire • 3 June 2013 at 7:41 PM

@Ems
If there is more than one Changeling, it is a group. The affects would be a mix of each, and actually, I think that may be the best way to go, because they will have one other alone to focus their emotions on, thus sharpenning them... I dunno.

"Er--" The Changeling's eyes widened with surprise as he considered the question. A Latin word that he remembered from a foreign race of ponies popped into his head, the word for "Shadow." Swiftly it slipped out of his mouth.
"Umbraticum."

The Changeling cocked her head as she observed this exchange, deciding that it would be good to decide a name for herself. She took in her body and noticed the black and blue as she thought.
A small stream of water trickled through the gutter in front of her, and she caught a flash of ice blue as she bent to sniff it. Startled, she stumbled backwards, only to realize it was only the reflection of her eyes. They looked to be the colour of the stars to her.
Silently she pieced these things together. Midnight black and blue, as well as starry-blue eyes...
'Midnight Star,' she thought. 'I'm Midnight Star.'

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ems • 3 June 2013 at 8:14 PM

@whitefire I was planning for a pair anyways. 😋 Shadow isn't really the solo type, and I think pairs would work really well to. Thanks. ^^
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"That's a cool name! I'm Shadow." Shadow fluttered her wings a bit, the response yanking her away from her predicament again.

Sorry for the shortness. 😋

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whitefire • 4 June 2013 at 11:05 AM

@Ems
It's fine!

The Changeling, or Umbraticum, as he was now called, felt a stab of an unknown emotion. What was it...?
'Relief.' The name of the unknown feeling came to him as though it had been there all along.
He opened his mouth to speak, though no words came to him, as he assuredly wasn't used to dealing with this sort of exchange, this being the first time he had used a form of his own creation.

http://www.sumo.fm/#image/id=2217789 <= This be Umbraticum as a pony. And you can find my account through that link, I presume?

Midnight Star observed this exchange from her rooftop post, taking care to memorize each thing that passed between the two ponies. She would need this knowledge in the future, she just knew it.

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@Kreh You'd better join. XD

http://www.sumo.fm/#image/id=2217789 <=Pony Umbraticum!

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ems • 4 June 2013 at 7:29 PM

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"... Mister?" Shadow looked confused at the unicorn's relief. Was he a.... A Changling? Shadow's eyes widened a bit, and she felt another tug. Excitement possibly? Her short tail swung slightly. "Hey, Umbractim," She said, mutiliating he name on purpose. "Did you get lost too?" She was hoping the other pony would know what she meant, and if he didn't... Well, Shadow could definitely pass for an odd little filly.

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whitefire • 4 June 2013 at 10:55 PM

Umbraticum's eyes narrowed almost imperceptively as his brow furrowed. Did she mean what he thought she meant? "Yes. I don't know what happened. I was in Canterlot, and then suddenly my surroundings had changed to the Everfree."
He put emphasis on the word "changed," though he spoke in a would-be casual voice, hoping that if she was a Changeling, she would understand.

Midnight Star's ears pricked at the current exchange; it would appear that each was trying to convey something...
Were they Changelings, too?

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featherstar_stormclan • 4 June 2013 at 11:20 PM

@whitefire a quick summary please?

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whitefire • 5 June 2013 at 9:32 AM

@Featherstar_StormClan Thank you for spelling "summary" properly. Remember that argument in the Host and the Guest RP? XD

Okay, so Umbraticum, Midnight Star, and Shadow morphed into their own pony forms and went into PonyVille, where Shadow met a little filly. Then she bumped into Umbraticum (rather, Umbraticum bumped into her) and each suspects the other is a Changeling, and they're trying to convey this in a way that each knows what the other is. Meanwhile Midnight Star, who named herself a couple of posts ago, is sitting on a rooftop and watching the exchange between Shadow and Umbraticum. Sand also shifted, but she SHOULDN'T HAVE A NAME YET! ( @Hay7199 *Hint-hint*) You, I believe, are still in the forest. Not sure though. XD

@Ems That sound about right?

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ems • 5 June 2013 at 9:52 AM

@whitefire Ee-yup. XD I remember that argument.
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"You too huh? I was starting to think I was the only one." Shadow replied, bouncing a bit to keep up her disguise. He'd put emphasis on "changed".... Could that mean? Shadow was starting to like where this was going. They couldn't talk here though, too many ponies.

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whitefire • 5 June 2013 at 10:06 AM

"No. There might be more..." Umbraticum trailed off, hoping she'd know what he meant by "more." If not, well, he certainly did appear eccentric.

Midnight Star leapt gracefully off of the building she had perched on.
"So you guys are lost too?" she inquired lightly, though she couldn't quite repress the growing excitement that was spreading throughout her body.

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Short post is short.
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ems • 5 June 2013 at 10:09 AM

@whitefire I've seen shorter. 😋
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Shadow could barely hold her excitement in. "Ooo... Hey, we should talk... Erm... Somewhere else." She said rather quietly. She hoped they were Changlings... Because, well if they weren't, she could be revealing herself to ponies. Which could certainly mean jailing, and jailing meant death.

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whitefire • 5 June 2013 at 10:18 AM

@Ems
Yeah, and we've both made shorter, too. XD And by the way, Changelings start out with excitement, since it's just adrenalyne.

"Sure," replied Umbraticum and Midnight Star in unison. They exchanged a bemused glance at this before directing their gaze back to the black pegasus.
Umbraticum, being a former captain of the Swarm, began to look around as his brain shifted into high gear. They would need someplace ponies didn't like to go, someplace far away. He glanced towards the hill he had passed on his way to town, but on the hill sat a cute, obviously used shack. Behind that shack, however, sat the forest he had come from. He knew from the way every so often ponies would glance at the forest in fear that they would avoid it at almost all costs, and made a split second decision.
"Let's go back into that forest."

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They are now going back to the forest to talk. 😋
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Did you die? *Poke*

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ems • 5 June 2013 at 10:33 AM

@whitefire Fear and surprise are sort of like adrenaline too, right? XD Cuz I started with surprise, then fear.
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"Sounds good to me." Shadow said, and bounced off that way. She hated looking so adorably innocent, but hey, her life was on the line. She was still hungry though... She'd have to fix that very soon. Maybe she'd find a little animal in the forest.

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whitefire • 5 June 2013 at 10:40 AM

@Ems
Yep! Otherwise I wouldn't be able to feel 'em.
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@Hay7199
*POOOOOKE*

Midnight Star laughed quietly at the disguised Changeling's feigned innocence, though there was really nothing funny about the fact that her life was on the line.

A purple mare trotted by, stopping as she noticed a Cutie-Markless trio heading in the direction of the Everfree forest. There was certainly nothing odd about the young filly who lacked a Cutie-Mark, but all older ponies had them... Except for the two who were walking with the tiny filly.
"Excuse me," called the purple unicorn casually. "Where are you going?"

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ems • 5 June 2013 at 10:48 AM

@whitefire Here's Shadow as a mare... XD I suck at drawing fillies, but I suppose it might help with what her mane and tail look like. http://s1365.photobucket.com/user/ems191/media/image_zps7b52720a.jpg.html
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Shadow looked over at the purple mare, stifling a gulp as that terrible emotion crawled back in. Fear? "Oh! We're going for a death-defying adventure in the Everfree Forest!" She said, bouncing up. "It's gonna be so awesome!" She fluttered her wings, attempting to look full of anticipation.

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whitefire • 5 June 2013 at 11:00 AM

The purple mare quirked her eyebrow, unimpressed with the gray stallion's reaction. He looked as if this were news to him, and the midnight-coloured mare appeared as though she hadn't heard a word that had been spoken, though she had halted at the same time as the others.
"You know it's pretty dangerous in there, right?" inquired the purple mare.

"Oh, our daughter's just making things up again," Umbraticum explained, inventing wildly a story for what was going on.
The purple mare seemed unconvinced. "Nevertheless, you shouldn't go in there. Perhaps I should accompany you?" inquired the purple mare, fluttering previously hidden wings without appearing to realize what she was doing. It had an intimidating affect nonetheless, causing Umbraticum to gasp. She was an Alicorn?! A princess?!

@Ems
Oh, come on, you're not THAT bad! You don't suck at drawing fillies, you just need a bit of practice! If you want, I can help you via PM a bit.
BTW, if you haven't figured it out, the purple mare is Twilight. And this whole thing takes place post-Twilicorn, and the Changelings who were disconnected have been out of it for a while, thus their extreme hunger.

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ems • 5 June 2013 at 11:09 AM

@whitefire 😋 Sure, I just have trouble with the legs. She's actually a mare in that pic. XD Ooh, Twilicorn! I actually like it... Kind of. It was too rushed. ><
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A princess? Oh crap, if she found out what Shadow was... Well... Oh dear. Shadow looked behind her at the older Changlings for guidance. Maybe her look was a bit too pleading, though this mare seemed full good emotions. Perfect for feeding. /NO! She's a princess dummy, she could report to Celestia! Then you're good as dead! Maybe... Maybe you should stop hiding... What good is it if you're going to get caught anyhow?/ Shadow was suddenly feeling more afraid than she ever had. Chrysalis would've known what to do here... Why wasn't she helping them? Should Shadow bow to the princess to keep appearances? Wasn't anypony here a little intrigued that a princess was living here rather than in Canterlot?

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whitefire • 5 June 2013 at 11:21 AM

'There are only three Alicorns!' thought Umbraticum panickedly. 'Cadence, the one Chrysalis impersonated, Celestia, the Sun goddess, and Luna, the Moon Goddess! Where'd THIS one come from?!'
Suddenly, with a sinking feeling in the pit of his stomach, Umbraticum realized what this Alicorn was. It was Twilight Sparkle, the Element of Magic. Not just a princess, but an Element of Harmony? This could get bad fast. The others seemed to have noticed too. The black one had stopped staring at the sky, though she seemed calm. Shadow was looking back at the two of them with an almost pleading look in her eyes, as seemingly lost as they were.
Then Umbraticum realized what had to be done, even if it meant they had to find somewhere else to meet.
"I'm sorry, we're new here. I think we might just go home now, but thank you for the offer," Umbraticum said decisively, with a convincingly stern look at Shadow, as if he truly was a father reprimanding his daughter.
Then, calmly, he turned and led the other Changelings off, hoping that the Alicorn wouldn't follow.

@Ems
I think the legs are fine, it's just the face you need a bit of work on.

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ems • 5 June 2013 at 11:29 AM

@whitefire Really? .3. That ones kind of old... XD I've improved a bit since then. Pm me.
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Shadow tried to look a bit bummed as she trotted after Umbractim, but really she nearly heaved a sigh of relief. Thank goodness Shadow met him, or she would've likely been dealing with the Alicorn alone... And she would've definitely been caught. Her feathery wings folded once more, and she snuck a quick glance back at the Alicorn as if interested like any other filly.

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whitefire • 5 June 2013 at 11:38 AM

Twilight's brow furrowed in thought. Were they, as they said, truly new here? Or was there something else going on here?
'Well, if they're new,' she thought with a chuckle, 'then they're gonna be in for a nice surprise.'

Sure enough, a certain pink filly was bouncing in the direction of the odd trio, a wide grin spread across her face, which appeared excited to the brink of insanity. Umbraticum did not notice the newcomer until she was right in his face.
"Hi! I'm Pinkie Pie! Are you new here? Of course you're new, you must be new because I've never seen you before! And I would remember if I'd seen you before because I always remember EVERYPONY I've met and if i don't remember you then you must be new and that means--" the pink filly let out a gasp of delight--"I NEED TO HAVE A WELCOME TO PONYVILLE PARTY!!! Oh my gosh I need to bake the cakes and cupcakes and make the punch and set the tables and make the banners and invitations and invite everypony and OH MY GOSH I HAVE SO MUCH TO DO! Gotta go!"
And in a puff of dust, she was gone.
"What was that all about?" muttered a confused Umbraticum.

@Ems Okay, will do!

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ems • 5 June 2013 at 11:47 AM

@whitefire
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"No idea." Shadow laughed nervously. "But... I think there's going to be a party..." She tried not to gulp as she said this. "Let's just keep going." Oh dear, if they had to go to a party... What if everypony found out? They had to leave town before the party... Of maybe they'd go to keep appearances. That'd be the best option. Maybe... Probably risky though.

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whitefire • 5 June 2013 at 11:59 AM

"Well." Umbraticum echoed Shadow's laugh. "I suppose we'll have to go, then."
Go to a party?! What was he saying? If they went, and they were recognized, what would they do? They could be jailed, executed, exiled... Oh, the possibilities were endless... And terrible.
"...Twilight Sparkle become an Alicorn?" came a seemingly bemused voice as the trio passed a pair o fillies.
"Oh, just a couple of weeks ago. It's no surprise, really, seeing as the great deeds she's done for Equestria. Did you know that she was the first one to accept Zecora as a pony, before she was put under the impression that the zebra was cooking Apple Bloom?"
The fillies laughed at that before continuing. "She was always so willing to trust other ponies, even when nopony else did. She was also always the first to realize something was wrong, especially with one of her friends."
Umbraticum gulped at these words. But she was also the most understanding... An idea began to form in his mind at the thought, an idea that was akin to playing with fire. It could work, though...

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ems • 5 June 2013 at 12:10 PM

@whitefire meep.
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Shadow beamed. They could go? The older Changlings thought it was okay!? Shadow nearly skipped with... Joy? /Woah there, Shadow./ Shadow caught herself, and shook the feeling away. /No./

/Understanding...?/ Shadow wondered for a little. Well... Maybe. No. No! She couldn't... Not even somepony who understood could understand her. She was a Changling. Evil.

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whitefire • 5 June 2013 at 12:25 PM

@Ems
Almost done with the tutorial.

"Well..." Umbraticum muttered, facing the girls. "Perhaps we should find this Alicorn and..." He trailed off, hoping they would understand.

Midnight Star eeped. "No, I don't want to... Not just yet." With that she snapped open her wings and took off, hoping to avoid detection as she flew towards the forest.

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featherstar_stormclan • 5 June 2013 at 7:21 PM

@ems @whitefire back. I remember that arguement vaguely. And thanks.

THe changling sat up his ears twitching. He looked around before noticing sometihng in the forest.

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ems • 5 June 2013 at 7:46 PM

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Shadow's eyes widened. "But... Umbractim! She's an Alicorn! A princess.... She... She could report us to Celestia..." The last bit came out softly, and the Changling's wings fluttered nervously. "And if we aren't starved enough already, jail would kill us... Are you sure about it? You know what Chrysalis said about revealing ourselves..." The Queen had always told them to avoid revealing themselves at all costs.

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featherstar_stormclan • 5 June 2013 at 7:55 PM

@ems
The Changling walked over to where voices were coming from. He looked around a tree to see two changlings. He walked out and looked at both of them.

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whitefire • 5 June 2013 at 9:14 PM

"But if anypony will understand, it's her. And if she tells Celestia that we revealed ourselves and promised not to harm anypony, all the better for us, because we'll be able to settle in and be accepted for who and what we are. And perhaps Chrysalis was wrong. Maybe she likes killing and harming other ponies. Maybe she didn't want us to abandon her. But whether or not she is wrong, we are not part of the Swarm anymore. We have been cast out and we've been out here for days, weeks, maybe even /months/ without food, not having a clue what was going on, and now we need food. And I don't give a--" Umbraticum broke off as he noticed the third Changeling, who had appeared seemingly out of nowhere beside him.
"Umm."

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@Ems
Comedic ending, how's that? And is Hotel California still going since I revived it?

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ems • 5 June 2013 at 11:33 PM

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"Eep!" Shadow jumped back at the sudden with of the other Changling, pushing Umbracticum's reasoning back for a bit. ".... Um...." Her wings shifted on her sides, ruffling her downy feathers. Umbracticum was right... But... Does that mean that Chyrsalis was... Using them? She'd always told them that she loved them dearly, and they were all her children. Was Shadow's mindless existence a lie? Her ears laid back softly as she looked expectantly at the newcomer.

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whitefire • 6 June 2013 at 12:07 AM

Umbraticum shifted his weight awkwardly, not knowing how to react to the appearance of the new Changeling.

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Well, I'm going to bed now, goodnight!

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