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Deleted • 6 December 2014 at 10:07 AM
@poe Yeah It's all good. Accepted.
cutebirdy79 • 6 December 2014 at 10:26 AM
@dramatic My second character.Name: Alyx HadenAge: 16Gender: FemaleFaction: Born Candor, Chose AmityAppearance: She has short, layered auburn hair and stormy blue eyes, that hide a lot of secrets. She has has pale skin and light brown freckles all over her arms, face, legs and back. Her outfit consists of red shorts, yellow tank top with a cropped red sweater and yellow sandals. Personality: Even though she lied her way through Candor, she hated having to lie, she just didn't want people to know her secrets unless she felt comfortable telling them. She has a caring heart, that no one seems to see because of her tough outer exterior that for some can be hard to break though.Characters birthday: July 4thCrush/spouse: None currentlyOther: Divergent. She is Divergent and has taken her aptitude test.
jazzyleia • 6 December 2014 at 11:50 AM
@dramaticName: Jasmine "Jazzy" SummersAge: 17 years oldGender: femaleFaction: DauntlessAppearance: Blonde hair, blue eyes, taller than most girls her age, has some built on herself. One small tattoo on her upper right arm which is a rose with thorns on the stem.Personality: Really nice once you get to know her, Otherwise she will more than likely look at you like a threat. Characters birthday: November 3rd, 1997Crush/spouse: none at the momentOther: Divergent. She has no siblings and her parents are long gone. She was raised by a family friend after her parents died. Eventually, she trained herself long and hard to become something great, someone who could protect themselves and others that she loved.
Deleted • 6 December 2014 at 4:27 PM
@cutebirdy79 @jazzyleia both accepted.
nynjahpandagurl • 6 December 2014 at 7:24 PM
@poe Yeah, sure! I'd like that. I was kind of hoping to have my two characters meet in the factionless town too. (e.g. Tia visiting her father and Felix helping him.)P.S. I'm curious, what does "TL;DR:" mean in your description?And @dramatic , I noticed mine haven't been accepted yet at all. Is there anything I can do? o.o
poe • 6 December 2014 at 9:09 PM
@nynjahpandagurlTL;DR is "Too long; didn't read" Lol my description was like a novel.I think I'll send Jules to visit with some factionless on his way elsewhere, so feel free to have Felix say hi as if they're old friends or something.
allisa944 • 7 December 2014 at 9:59 PM
@dramaticName: Kyra "Kitty" EdwardsAge: 15Gender: FemaleFaction: Born Abnegation Appearance: Raven hair, and gray-blue eyes. Small for her ageand skinny. Kitty, against the wish of her parents, got her ears pierced, twice!, but she covers them up with her hair. Wears gray day in and day out. Personality: Kitty is a rebel. She doesn't like abnegation very much. Kitty is very adventurous and gets herself into a lot of trouble. Unfortunately, her peers don't seem to understand her so she's kind of a loner except for one very close friend named Kleo.Characters birthday: August 27th Crush/spouse: Kitty has a crush on a guy whose name she doesn't know.Other: Kitty has 2 sisters. One in Erudite and the other in Dauntless. Kitty's mother was born Candor, much to everyone's surprise. She still has to take the aptitude test.
Deleted • 7 December 2014 at 11:15 PM
@dramaticName: Trixie "Trix" Blanca Age: 22Gender: FemaleFaction: Born Dauntless chose to stay in DauntlessAppearance: Trixie is 6' 2" with a muscular build. Trix has auburn hair that she dyes to turn black. She also has a splash of freckles across her nose that she is taunted for every day. She wears black jeans, a shirt with a hole in the left sleeve and black cowboy boots.Personality: Trix acts like a big bully but she actually has a very soft heart. Trix is very loyal and has a few close friends. Character's birthday: April 12thCrush/spouse: Trix has one crush...okay, more like a lot. but her dream guy is someone named Jos, who's also from Dauntless. Other: divergent. At the age of 15, Trix's parents passed away in a battle. Since then, Trix doesn't trust many people and those who want her trust have to earn it. Trix also has dyslexia and ADHD.
nynjahpandagurl • 7 December 2014 at 11:59 PM
@dramatic I edited my characters.. can you simply tell me what's wrong, if there is still something? I'm anxious to start. Thank you! c:
Deleted • 8 December 2014 at 6:15 PM
@nynjahpandagurl It's in the rules, it says: "If you have read the rules, put divergent in other." Accepted now though. I'm just kind of a cop when it comes to rules.@allisa944 Please read the rules and edit your form.@boca Accepted.
cutebirdy79 • 8 December 2014 at 6:59 PM
@dramatic What about Alyx and Dillon? They haven't had their choosing ceremonies.
allisa944 • 8 December 2014 at 7:33 PM
@dramaticexactly what is wrong with my form...?
Deleted • 8 December 2014 at 8:33 PM
@cutebirdy79 Nobody has had their choosing ceremonies yet. XD@allisa944 You need to read the rules. Then you will figure it out.
cutebirdy79 • 8 December 2014 at 8:35 PM
@dramatic Oh. Sorry. XP EDIT:But their names weren't in the order of how the people would go up in the Choosing Cermony.
Deleted • 8 December 2014 at 8:39 PM
@cutebirdy79 Oh, Sorry! I had them written down and forgot to type them!Here's the order: Alyx, Jubilee, Ted, Alison, Jasmine, Dillion. I may have forgotten some people, but Alyx goes first, adn Dillion last.
allisa944 • 8 December 2014 at 9:02 PM
@dramatic was it the:Put in the other section whether your character has taken the aptitude test and whether they are divergent or not.I read the rules but I guess I skipped the part about the putting if they took the test in the other section part... >.<
Deleted • 9 December 2014 at 11:25 AM
@allisa944 Yes. I'm just kind of a cop about these things because different roleplays have different rules and I just want to make sure that no one breaks them so they don't have to get kicked out. XD Accepted!
jupiter_hollow • 9 December 2014 at 8:30 PM
Name: Dima Voenikov KotkinAge:18Gender: MaleFaction: DauntlessAppearance: He's a colossus in all aspects of his appearance and personality, the former of which strikes an observer first and foremost. His solid 170lbs of muscle is distributed on a frame of 6'2, thus rendering him beautifully chiselled and still monstrously strong. His figure is accentuated by a proper posture, if not a little cocky, and a medium light complexion. Courtesy of his eastern european heritage, his face is made up of predominantly sharp features, except a curved jawline and full lips which tone down the striking quality of his appearance. He has a headful of short black curls and eyes of an unpleasant blue color, too pale to be anything but piercing. He's partial to smirks or grins rather than smiles, though they do figurate in his arsenal of expression, even if they're never sincere. He's capable of producing the most unsettling expressions despite being drop dead gorgeous.Clothing- All black, regardless of what clothing he's in. Black jeans or pants and a cloth jacket over either a black shirt of nothing at all. Combat boots, as well as fingerless leather gloves.Personality: He's a person of very few words, even fewer of which are kind. Not the best of conversational partners as he never beats around the bush and spares no unpleasantries to people he wishes to offend. He manages to offend unintentionally as well; never measures his words and even though he's aware of the moral standards of the community, he simply chooses to ignore them. Doesn't actively show anger or any emotions capable of setting him out of his rails. He's a cool and collected individual with enough intellect to easily pick out and push people's buttons; if he so wished to. Playful and jokative on his best days, though his humour is rarely within the lines of decency. His sarcasm has a biting manner to it, he's a naturally dominant though not overbearing male. It's all born of hatred. His over-confidence turned him into the faction failure as soon as he began his training and has since then sustained him on his way towards the top of the food chain. He's managed to retain most of his traits while being humiliated along the way, but has turned out times more bitter and with intensified negative qualities and intelligence. His initial overbearing nature helped him accumulate knowledge through experience and error, which shaped him into a cutthroat more than success ever could. He's considered a person of questionable morals, though he's done almost nothing to warrant those suspicions. Almost. He is well acquainted with the benefits of being a closeted manipulator. His kindness is spiced with veiled undertones or sultry smiles. He indulges both genders.Characters birthday: December 1stCrush/spouse: None currently.Other: Is Divergent. Has taken the test.Name: Tomas Evan VaslerAge: 17Gender: MaleFaction: Candor born Abnegation transfer.Appearance: He is of average height and less than average weight, growing into an undeveloped young man. His shoulders are awkwardly broad and his fingers are nimble and long, but clumsy. His figure isn't necessarily unattractive and would look slender rather than skinny if he didn't hold himself so stifly and stopped hunching over. He has a long face and drawn features, an unsuitably strong jawline that doesn't fit his softly curved nose and thin lips. His eyes are dark, round and expressive, conveying the emotions he usually doesn't manage to properly show. Shortly cropped light brown hair that suits him neither in style, nor color as he doesn't know better to maintain his own appearance. Wouldn't be considered conventionally handsome. Has an innocence to him that is off-putting for a 17 year old.Clothing - the typical baggy grey clothing in the most conventional hue.Personality: He has a predisposition to bouts of emotional and mental instability. Mostly shy and jittery, and awkward as a result of his impaired social skills. Fares well in crowds where he isn't noticed (even though standing wordlessly there gets him flustered as well), but his ultimate cryptonite is serious conversations. They eventually render him either tongue-tied or a nervous wreck. He's outwardly kind and caring, even though it takes him a lot of guts to approach others on his own accord or stand up for them. Gets attached to people in a minimal amount of time and becomes less shy in their company, though he's still somewhat reserved even to his closest. He's sensitive and gets easily upset, which flaw is his greatest embarassment. When handled with anything but utmost care, he becomes worried about the opinions of his conversational partner and purposefully avoids them. He hasn't a scrap of confidence and rather depreciates himself - there isn't much to praise in him anyway. His moods all either last a long time or are short-lived. He's prone to bursts of quiet hysterics and subdued anger, whilst happiness is his default. Periods of depression and nervousness are rarely long, but he is difficultly pulled out of them. He's easily influenced by the moods of others and is therefore a good empath but he doesn't have the personal means (such as bravery and determination) to help others.Characters birthday: June 3rdCrush/spouse: none atmOther: He isn't Divergent. Has taken aptitude test.Name: Marcel CionAge: 24Gender: MaleFaction: Former Erudite-born Abnegation transfer. Factionless by choice.Appearance: Marcel is elegantly sculpted, acceptably tall at 5'11 with the well filled-out, lean figure of a dancer and a gliding quality to his movements that enhances that comparison. He has aristocratically sharp features even down to his overly full lips, well defined in their constant tight scowl. He's a man of very little facial expressions and, as follows, a seemingly limited range of emotions, though his face simply never bears the evidence of his inner thoughts. He has learned to school his features to blankness. No less handsome even in his cold stoicism. Dark brown skin with tapering cheekbones and slanting catlike chocolate eyes that are anything but warm. His hair is maintained in a neat black buzzcut as it's easier to keep clean. His clothes are another story. As he was allowed to keep very few of his Abnegation clothes so as not to shame the faction, he has a maximum of three changes of clothing, which incidentally suit him quite fine. He often wears simple black baggy pants and either a sleeveless light grey shirt or nothing at all.Personality: He's an externally cold individual, neither talkative, nor generally social, but also visibly justice-driven. His demeanour certainly isn't welcoming or kind towards the faction members, especially Abnegation, though he does try his best to act properly even with people he dislikes. His manners suggest he was raised strictly, with courtesy and intelligence deeply ingrained in him. As well as vanity. However, he doesn't have the means or desire to maintain that trait of his that was left from his education in Erudite. He's also prideful to a fault thanks to life in his inborn faction, though the years spent in Abnegation has toned that flaw down considerably. At the very least he has come to terms with undertaking the grossly underpaid heavy labour professions and even helping others with their work. He's walking the fine line between Erudite's arrogance and Abnegation's selfless nature - he's anything but kind towards the faction members whilst he cares deeply for his own - the factionless. He operates intelligently and thoughtfully, thus establishing himself as the moral acolyte of the factionless. He's incorruptible, therefore suitable to be part of the group that instills some level of control in the community. He does his job well enough to be respected and looked up to. Infallible even in the midst of poverty.Characters birthday: February 17thCrush/spouse: none atmOther: He is Divergent.#vcharacter
Deleted • 10 December 2014 at 9:40 AM
@jupiter_hollow accepted! Congratulations! You are the last person to sing up for this RP as sign ups are now closed! XD
jupiter_hollow • 10 December 2014 at 9:59 AM
@dramatic awwww. But can I have another character?And also important question, can we make a third character if we make them factionless or max two characters no matter the post?
Deleted • 10 December 2014 at 10:03 AM
jupiter_hollow Ok you can finish making your characters. XD Yes, if they're factionless than you can make three, since we have no factionless.
jupiter_hollow • 14 December 2014 at 12:34 PM
Guys help me pick a faction for Tomi here =PName: Tomas Evan VaslerAge: 17Gender: MaleFaction: Candor born Abnegation transfer.Appearance: He is of average height and less than average weight, growing into an undeveloped young man. His shoulders are awkwardly broad and his fingers are nimble and long, but clumsy. His figure isn't necessarily unattractive and would look slender rather than skinny if he didn't hold himself so stifly and stopped hunching over. He has a long face and drawn features, an unsuitably strong jawline that doesn't fit his softly curved nose and thin lips. His eyes are dark, round and expressive, conveying the emotions he usually doesn't manage to properly show. Shortly cropped light brown hair that suits him neither in style, nor color as he doesn't know better to maintain his own appearance. Wouldn't be considered conventionally handsome. Has an innocence to him that is off-putting for a 17 year old.Clothing - the typical baggy grey clothing in the most conventional hue.Personality: He has a predisposition to bouts of emotional and mental instability. Mostly shy and jittery, and awkward as a result of his impaired social skills. Fares well in crowds where he isn't noticed (even though standing wordlessly there gets him flustered as well), but his ultimate cryptonite is serious conversations. They eventually render him either tongue-tied or a nervous wreck. He's outwardly kind and caring, even though it takes him a lot of guts to approach others on his own accord or stand up for them. Gets attached to people in a minimal amount of time and becomes less shy in their company, though he's still somewhat reserved even to his closest. He's sensitive and gets easily upset, which flaw is his greatest embarassment. When handled with anything but utmost care, he becomes worried about the opinions of his conversational partner and purposefully avoids them. He hasn't a scrap of confidence and rather depreciates himself - there isn't much to praise in him anyway. His moods all either last a long time or are short-lived. He's prone to bursts of quiet hysterics and subdued anger, whilst happiness is his default. Periods of depression and nervousness are rarely long, but he is difficultly pulled out of them. He's easily influenced by the moods of others and is therefore a good empath but he doesn't have the personal means (such as bravery and determination) to help others.Characters birthday: June 3rdCrush/spouse: none atmOther: He isn't Divergent. Has taken aptitude test.Name: Marcel CionAge: 24Gender: MaleFaction: Former Erudite-born Abnegation transfer. Factionless by choice.Appearance: Marcel is elegantly sculpted, acceptably tall at 5'11 with the well filled-out, lean figure of a dancer and a gliding quality to his movements that enhances that comparison. He has aristocratically sharp features even down to his overly full lips, well defined in their constant tight scowl. He's a man of very little facial expressions and, as follows, a seemingly limited range of emotions, though his face simply never bears the evidence of his inner thoughts. He has learned to school his features to blankness. No less handsome even in his cold stoicism. Dark brown skin with tapering cheekbones and slanting catlike chocolate eyes that are anything but warm. His hair is maintained in a neat black buzzcut as it's easier to keep clean. His clothes are another story. As he was allowed to keep very few of his Abnegation clothes so as not to shame the faction, he has a maximum of three changes of clothing, which incidentally suit him quite fine. He often wears simple black baggy pants and either a sleeveless light grey shirt or nothing at all.Personality: He's an externally cold individual, neither talkative, nor generally social, but also visibly justice-driven. His demeanour certainly isn't welcoming or kind towards the faction members, especially Abnegation, though he does try his best to act properly even with people he dislikes. His manners suggest he was raised strictly, with courtesy and intelligence deeply ingrained in him. As well as vanity. However, he doesn't have the means or desire to maintain that trait of his that was left from his education in Erudite. He's also prideful to a fault thanks to life in his inborn faction, though the years spent in Abnegation has toned that flaw down considerably. At the very least he has come to terms with undertaking the grossly underpaid heavy labour professions and even helping others with their work. He's walking the fine line between Erudite's arrogance and Abnegation's selfless nature - he's anything but kind towards the faction members whilst he cares deeply for his own - the factionless. He operates intelligently and thoughtfully, thus establishing himself as the moral acolyte of the factionless. He's incorruptible, therefore suitable to be part of the group that instills some level of control in the community. He does his job well enough to be respected and looked up to. Infallible even in the midst of poverty.Characters birthday: February 17thCrush/spouse: none atmOther: He is Divergent.
poe • 14 December 2014 at 5:41 PM
@jupiter_hollowI guess if he likes math or science or is generally studious with something, he'd be pretty suited to Erudite. You know, it just occurred to me I actually have no idea what they do in Candor aside from tell the truth. If you don't think he should be Erudite, you could put him there? You know your character best, of course, so you'd know if he wasn't truthful enough for Candor or was studious like an Erudite. I figure one of those since you said he wasn't so capable at helping people and isn't brave and he doesn't seem like he'd be peaceful enough for Amity, based on your description.EDIT I also really like Marcel. I can't wait to see him in the rp.
jupiter_hollow • 14 December 2014 at 9:48 PM
@poe I think I accidentally made him the opposite of a Divergent. Like, uncapable of fitting in any faction xD because he's not that studious either and telling the truth about himself would embarass him. He's horrid alltogether but I think he'd transfer to Amity or Abnegation just for the sake of being in a calm or friendly environment.
poe • 14 December 2014 at 11:09 PM
@jupiter_hollowOh dear. XD So he's.... Convergent? 😋It would be super funny if he regularly told the truth about himself by accident and got flustered over it often. Amity would probably be a cheerful atmosphere for him.
jupiter_hollow • 14 December 2014 at 11:14 PM
@poe No xD More like socially worthless (in such a world at least).Also yes Marcel is precious. I wish there were more factionless for him to interact with.
poe • 14 December 2014 at 11:32 PM
@jupiter_hollowHonestly, I messed up and should have made Jackson a factionless child. That would have been more correct with who he is. *facepalm* I assumed we weren't making factionless characters at the time. Actually... I wonder if I can change that still...I also feel bad for your poor opposite-of-divergent character. He needs caring friends to make him feel less worthless.
jupiter_hollow • 15 December 2014 at 12:14 AM
@poeThere's nothing better than roleplaying out that change of his ; 3A meeting with Marcel would certainly be memorable I can guarantee you.No he needs someone to kick his behind along the road of self discovery xD
Deleted • 15 December 2014 at 9:28 AM
@jupiter_hollowfor Thomas, because everyone wears grey in Abnegation, they don't really notice each other. Also, a lot of people there are sensitive and shy. XP
jupiter_hollow • 15 December 2014 at 11:50 AM
@dramatic Srill he wouldn't be very helpful with people thiugh and I don't think he would do such a thing to himself such as choose a faction he would be useless in. I think I'll go with Amity even though I know Candor, Abnegation and Erudite need members xDI would make a character for each one if you'd let me, I find this awfully fun c: