Creature suggestion - narclaw! (art included)

Deleted • 31 July 2015 at 11:10 AM

One of my favourite drawings ❤️ ~ description: This cat-like creature is the fear of the 7 seas! A skilled pirate, the rochest of them all! But it loves risk-taking, and loves playing piano. Beat it in chess, and ot will respect you forever. Lose: it will rob you and say: no hard feelings! ~ http://thedreamywolf.deviantart.com/art/eggcave-creature-suggestion-narclaw-550204462 the new version: http://thedreamywolf.deviantart.com/art/eggcave-creature-suggestion-the-new-narclaw-551165294

dragonnn • 31 July 2015 at 1:02 PM

@murdermansion

I like it. It'd be cool if the second/hatched stage had a plastic toy sword, and the final stage had a brilliant, real sabre/sword.

This would be like a summer counterpart to the Kringus in a way.

Looking forward to a description somewhere, this is a great creature.

despair • 31 July 2015 at 1:04 PM

@murdermansion

I especially like the egg. o:

firelost • 2 August 2015 at 11:44 AM

@murdermasion
SOOO cute! Who doesn't want a narwhal-pirate-cat?
Maybe the 2nd stage should have a wood sword. Kinda like @dragonnn said.

sugarsprig • 3 August 2015 at 5:23 AM

@murdermansion
I want it!!!😋

firelost • 4 August 2015 at 7:32 AM

@murdermansion
I just realised that it kinda looks like the trisk egg. ☹️
But not really , only the whiskers are the same. 😊

nine • 4 August 2015 at 10:30 AM

@murdermansion
It MUST exist!!!!!
😋

Deleted • 4 August 2015 at 11:17 AM

@dragonnn @firelost the sword is edited, look on my first comment, and @dragonnn i added description 😃

dragonnn • 4 August 2015 at 2:39 PM

@firelost @murdermansion

I agree, the black band on its egg form makes it look a bit like the Trisk. But the sword is a nice addition, though it's being held by the band, right? Maybe add some pouches and trinkets, etc. to the black band to show that it's a belt and not just part of the egg's design.

The sword change on the last stage looks great.

Love the description. It's very short, but it puts a lot of amusing scenes in my head. Short descriptions aren't bad, but a little more info would be nice, like who supplies the eggs with their weapon? Their parents? But it works well. Maybe more egg info is what's really needed.

Deleted • 4 August 2015 at 2:46 PM

@dragonnn ill keep that in mind, thanks.

firelost • 4 August 2015 at 3:13 PM

Thanks @dragonnn ! 😊
I think that helped @murdermansion .