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thebrokenvibe • 31 July 2016 at 2:05 PM
{Intro}MapleClan resides in a large forest, the camp being located in a natural clearing with sturdy walls weaved between the few bushes growing around it. The leader’s den is located inside a hollowed tree, with a ledge on the top for meetings. The warriors den, closest to the entrance is woven out of bracken and vines, it is very large and water proofed. The apprentices den, located a little ways off from the warriors den, is secured inside a tree trunk much like the leader's den, but with a woven roof. The nursery is between the apprentice’s den and the rear edge of camp, it is woven much like the warriors den. The medicine cat’s den is woven between two bushes, with one serving as a herb storage and one for patients to rest. The elders den is between the leader’s den and the medicine den woven like the warriors.MapleClan has resided in this forest for countless seasons, with rituals held at the Moon Aspen in a clearing just out of the edge of the territory. Small streams cross the territory allowing for the Clan to reach water. Small bands of rogues, and loners lurk outside the borders, and the forest has been known to house badgers and foxes as well as the occasional raccoon.{Clan}Leader - Miststar|MaleDeputy - Flamestorm|FemaleMedicine Cat - Suncloud|FemaleMedicine Cat Apprentice - Drippaw|MaleWarriors - OpenWolfwind|FemaleSilentfall|MaleCoralfur|MaleDawnfox|FemaleBadgerpelt|MaleCrowbreeze|FemaleApprentices - OpenRavenpaw|FemaleFrostpaw|FemaleQueens - OpenKits - OpenBerrykit|FemaleMousekit|FemaleElders - OpenRogues - OpenLoners - OpenDusk|FemaleShadow|Female{Rules}-One high position per person-No mates or crushes with your own cats-Keep genders even-Your forms are how I judge your literacy, so keep things professional-No unusually colored cats(keep cat colors normal), eyes are an exception-No powers-No sues or god-modding-If a fight is started, it is possible your cat can die but there must be a fight first and approval-Give all a fighting chance-Side characters can be used by all, but only as NPC’s through your own posting, no direct controlling Side Characters-Side characters cannot be given high positions-Have fun and include everyone, don’t go on for more than 10 posts without another person interacting with another user’s character actively-No unnecessary drama and yelling-Be literate, try to post 3+ sentences per character used in each post, and avoid unnecessary caps locks and punctuation-No detailed violence, birth or romance. Just keep everything forum appropriate-If you have read and understood the rules put your character's favorite prey in other{Forms}{Normal Form}Name:Age:Gender:Rank:Looks:Kin:Past:Personality:Crush/Mate:Other:{Side Character}Name:Age:Gender:Rank:Looks:Personality:{My Forms}Name: MiststarAge: 40 MoonsGender: TomRank: LeaderLooks: A silvery-gray tom with honey colored eyes. He has a few scars on his cheeks.Kin: Wolfwind, Silentfall(younger siblings), Ravenpaw(Niece)Past: Miststar was born to the Clan by Dawnpool, a proud and nicely respected warrior in the Clan. He was born an only kit, but he still found fun in interacting with the apprentices and warriors when they stopped by.He trained hard and a few moons after he became a warrior his mother bore two more kits. Shortly after she and his father passed away from an illness that swept through the Clan.Personality: Bold and noble. He is understanding and respectful, although he can be a bit opinionated at times.Crush/Mate: NoneOther: MouseName: SilentfallAge: 26 MoonsGender: TomRank: WarriorLooks: A black, brown and gray tom with pale blue eyes. He has very long legs.Kin: Miststar(Older sibling), Wolfwind(Littermate), Ravenpaw(Daughter)Past: Silentfall was born to a mother who had already born a kit, and who was arguably a little too old to be having kits again. She raised her two final kits well though, taking care to ensure they had things set up for them. Just after they became apprentices, Dawnpool passed away from illness alongside Silentfall’s father.Training to live up to his parents past, Silentfall and Wolfwind decided kin mattered nearly as much as Clan did. And when Silentfall and Wolfwind became warriors they were proud. Not too long after, Silentfall had kits-or rather kit-with a she-cat who had shared their apprenticeship and warrior ceremony. After falling ill and giving birth early she passed away not too long after their kit was born.Personality: He is quiet, but determined to be the best warrior he can be. He is prideful in his friends and family, and is generally very kind.Crush/Mate: Mintfoot(Deceased)Other: FinchName: WolfwindAge: 26 MoonsGender: She-catRank: WarriorLooks: A rather large and scruffy looking she-cat she has ashen gray fur with a silver underbelly, tail and muzzle. Her eyes are a pale orange color.Kin: Silentfall(Littermate), Miststar(Older sibling), Ravenpaw(Niece)Past: Wolfwind was born to a mother who had bore kits before, and was arguably a little old to be having anymore. She was raised well though, and she trained well, even after she lost her parents to sickness.She and her brother made a pact to always keep each other safe, and that is a promise Wolfwind has kept.Personality: She is caring and kind, very bold and protective of friends and family. She tries her best to keep the Clan safe.Crush/Mate: NoneOther: ShrewName: Ravenpaw(Ravenpool)Age: 10 MoonsGender: She-catRank: ApprenticeLooks: A very small, barely large enough to pass as a newly made apprentice, silky black she-cat with dark blue violet eyes.Kin: Silentfall(Father), Breezesong(Mother, Deceased), Wolfwind and Miststar(Aunt and Uncle respectively).Past: Ravenpaw was born early to an ill mother. Breezesong passed not too long after Ravenpaw was born, leaving Ravenpaw to grow up as good as on her own. She was raised well though, and her Aunt and Father were supportive of her as she grew up.And remain so even in her apprenticeship.Personality: Quiet and soft spoken. She is caring and gentle, and very sweet when she does speak. She can be a bit skittish all the time.Crush/Mate: NoneOther: Water VoleName: CoralfurAge: 17 MoonsGender: TomRank: WarriorLooks: A cream and ginger tom with dark amber eyes.Kin: UnknownPast: Coralfur stumbled upon MapleClan at eight moons, three moons since he was sent out to journey around by his parents. He was allowed into MapleClan for he posed no threat, and he was better suited to working with others than without.Personality: Hard worker, he is bold and caring. If not a little bit quiet and snippy about his past. But if not on where he used to be, he can tilt to very talkative and even tends to ramble a lot.Crush/Mate: NoneOther: SparrowName: DuskAge: 20 MoonsGender: She-catRank: LonerLooks: A pale gray she-cat with a mix of black stripes and spots. She has no tail and has dark green-blue eyes.Kin: UnknownPast: Dusk grew up in the forest, living with a mother who was always kicked out of her home by others. Growing annoyed with this Dusk left her mothe at twelve moons, and promptly got stuck in a bear trap, losing her tail before she could escape.She managed to take care of her wound, and takes pride in having survived on her own with such an injury for so long.Personality: Snippy, a bit harsh, and can come off as rude st first. She is generally sarcastic and sassy, with just the slightest hint of underlying rudeness to it.Crush/Mate: NoneOther: Frog
lailaluckyseal87 • 31 July 2016 at 2:10 PM
Save deputy for me? Making it now!!Name: FlameStormAge: 20Gender: She-catRank: DeputyLooks: Pale fur, brown stripes, light orange paws, deep blue eyes, a scar running down one eye. https://postimg.org/image/61qd93xwn/Kin: UnknownPast: She grew up in MapleClan, her mother being the old deputy. She got her scar from a fight with a bear, luckily she won. Personality: Brave, Kind, She is very helpful towards the clan and kits, She is a hard worker and outgoing. She is very faithful and you can trust her.Crush/Mate: N/AOther: Rabbit~~~Name: ShadowAge: 10 moonsGender: She-catRank: Loner Looks: Pale, white fur, a grey spot around one eye, grey tips on her ears, Grey front paws, and emerald green eyes.https://postimg.org/image/b64gvilch/Kin: UnknownPast: Her mother was killed by a bear when she was half a moon old, Then she was raised by a loner in the woods until she was 8 moons old and became to much trouble, the loner Left her and she has been living in the wild and knows quite a bit for her age. Personality: Brave. She knows she has to be brave in order to stay alive, she is a hunter and ready to fight anything that comes her way. She is smart, and watches MapleClan, waiting for the right time to ask to be recruited. She is still skittish about anything that moves, and is very gentle.Crush/Mate: N/AOther: Frog@thebrokenvibe
thebrokenvibe • 31 July 2016 at 2:37 PM
@lailaluckyseal87 Only leader's names end in -star, so your first cat would need a different name. And can you explain how Shadekit's name is similar to Clan names? It just seems kind of weird.
lailaluckyseal87 • 31 July 2016 at 2:40 PM
@thebrokenvibe Changed it, sorry! Forgot.And for ShadeKit, I can make it ShadowKit.
thebrokenvibe • 31 July 2016 at 2:46 PM
@lailaluckyseal87 -paw is the name for apprentices not warriors. And it wasnt that Shadekit can't have Shade in her name, I'm just wondering why her name is structured like a Clan name. And then, something I noticed about Shadekit is that she's 3 months but her mom was killed before she would be able to properly take of herself. I'm kind of curious as to how she survived when cats half a moon old rarely even have their eyes open, let alone normal skills.
lailaluckyseal87 • 31 July 2016 at 2:49 PM
@thebrokenvibe Editing.
Deleted • 31 July 2016 at 3:02 PM
Name: Drippaw (Dripeye)Age: 6 moonsGender: TomRank: Medicine Cat Apprentince?Looks: Long shaggy fur, smokey blue fur, light blue eyes, and stripes on his back that are a dark gray.Kin: UnknownPast: He grew up in MapleClan originally, he doesn't remember his mother, or father too well since they was exiled for an unknown reason from the leader before. Drippaw didn't remember much at that time and another queen had nursed him for the time being.Personality: Calm, gentle, quiet until the right time to speak his thoughts, a little mystical,and merciful.Crush/Mate: N/AOther: Mice@thebrokenvibe
thebrokenvibe • 31 July 2016 at 3:20 PM
@niale Accepted. I'll add him in now.
lailaluckyseal87 • 31 July 2016 at 3:37 PM
@thebrokenvibe Edited!
thebrokenvibe • 31 July 2016 at 4:27 PM
@lailaluckyseal87 Flamepaw is not a warrior name. The ending -paw is for apprentices. There are no other Clans, I just noticed that with tour first forms past so please fix that.And I said it before, half a moon is too young for a kitten to live on it's own. Shadow would have died without a parent if she was that young when her mom died. Unless she had someone else raise her that needs to be fixed.
lailaluckyseal87 • 31 July 2016 at 4:53 PM
@thebrokenvibe Fixed
thebrokenvibe • 31 July 2016 at 5:16 PM
@lailaluckyseal87 OK. So the problem with Shadow is not her age, it is her past. As I said before, half a moon is not old enough for her to have survived on her own. I need a reason on how she survived. And with Flamestorm, there is no other Clan, so her past wouldn't work out.
lailaluckyseal87 • 31 July 2016 at 6:53 PM
@thebrokenvibe now I get it 😋 sorry! I edited it.
pitch1226 • 31 July 2016 at 7:28 PM
Name: Frostpaw (Frostsong)Age: 6 moonsGender: femaleRank: apprentice Looks: She has medium length fur the is a light grey with streaks of white. Her eyes are a pale periwinkle. Kin: Badgepelt (father)Past: Frostpaw has lived in the clan for her whole life. Her father lives in the clan and her mother was taken by Two-legs. Other than that, her life as a clan cat is pretty normal.Personality: She is very adventurous and loves to explore. Her energy knows no bounds. Frostpaw is very friendly and social, she loves meeting new cats. She can get a little distracted, but does try her best.Crush/Mate: N/AOther:shrew@thebrokenvibe
purgatory • 31 July 2016 at 7:50 PM
Name: SuncloudAge: 25 moonsGender: FemaleRank: medicine catLooks: orangish brown fur with blue eyes. Kin:nonePast: Suncloud lived a pretty harsh life. Her mother was a rouge and her father was a loner. She was the only kit born and was abandoned due to a harsh storm that took the life of her father and mother. She then was found later found by MapleClan warriors when she was 2 nights old, about 2 minutes after the storm happened. She was hidden behind a bush where it provided shelter for herThat's where she came to be a medicine catPersonality: Suncloud has an excellent memory. Whether it's when the leader lost a life or all the herbs, she remembers everything that happened in her life, even memories that she dosnt like. She's smart, brave, and uses strategy and defense instead of offense in battle. Her trickery skill became useful tooCrush/mate : N/AOther: rabbitMy entry @thebrokenvibe
pufferheart • 31 July 2016 at 9:13 PM
Name: BerrykitAge: 4 moonsGender: FemaleRank: KitLooks😃ark brown fur with green eyesKin: UnknownPast: 1 moon after she was born, Berrykit's mother abandoned her in the forest. After 1 day of wandering around, she was really hungry, thirsty, and sleepy. Then MapleClan warriors found Berrykit and took her back to there camp where she stayed. Personality: Berrykit is quiet and shy. She knows not to get in the way of other cats. Berrykit is always happy when with a playmate.Crush/Mate: NoneOther: Mouse
thebrokenvibe • 31 July 2016 at 10:19 PM
@pufferheart @pitch1226 Accepted.@ammolite There is only one Clan anywhere near MapleClan, and that's MapleClan.
lailaluckyseal87 • 1 August 2016 at 1:07 AM
@thebrokenvibe I fixed it 😋 Hopefully it's good now?
leafdapple769 • 1 August 2016 at 1:10 AM
Name: DawnfoxAge: 24 moonsGender: She-catRank: WarriorLooks: Silky cream pelt. Flame-colored eyes.Kin: N/APast: She was abandoned by her mother at the Clan border. The Clan took her in, and she worked hard to become a loyal and trustworthy warrior.Personality: Cool, calm, and collected. She is not very emotionl, and therefore does not take affection well..Crush/Mate: N/AOther: Sparrow@thebrokenvibe (Did I miss anything?)
thebrokenvibe • 1 August 2016 at 1:14 AM
@leafdapple769 @lailaluckyseal87 Both accepted.I'll make the RP thread sometime tomorrow.
reality • 1 August 2016 at 1:57 AM
@thebrokenvibeName: NightwindAge: 25 moonsGender: MaleRank: WarriorLooks: Black fur and grey eyes. Kin: Cloudfoot, Skykit, FlowerkitPast: He lived in the clan all his life. His father died on a hunting trip and her mother died in search to find his father. He became silent after that, rarely talking. He never cared for his brother much but there was still a small connection between him.Personality: Cool and collected. He is mostly silent and looks as if he doesn't have much emotions on the outside.Crush/Mate: N/AOther: RabbitName: SkykitAge: 5 moonsGender: MaleRank: KitLooks: Grey coat and green eyes.Kin: Nightwind, Cloudfoot, FlowerkitPast: He lived in the clan his whole life. His mother died while giving birth to him and his father died shortly heartbroken. He was adopted by Cloudfoot and for once he had a family.Personality: Brave, adventurous, and like a leader. He is prideful but knows when to keep his head down.Crush/Mate: N/AOther: Sparrow
pitch1226 • 1 August 2016 at 2:08 PM
Decided to make another one since there isn't very much males.Name: BadgerpeltAge: 29 moonsGender: maleRank: warriorLooks: He has a dark grey pelt with a tan chest and belly. His face has white stripes that run down his back. Badgerpelt's ears are white and his tail is black. His eyes are a dark brown.Kin: His daughter is FrostpawPast: Badgerpelt grew up in the clan and worked hard to become a warrior. A little bit after he became one, he had a kit with his mate. However, his mate was taken by two-legs and he was filled with grief. Now, Badgerpelt is as serious as ever about his role as warrior.Personality: Like his daughter, he is very kind, but much more relaxed. However kind he may be, Badgerpelt hates two-legs and has a slight dislike for kittypets. He takes his role seriously and does his best to help the clan. He is very protective over Frostpaw. Crush/Mate: Taken by two-legsOther: robin@thebrokenvibe
reality • 1 August 2016 at 6:00 PM
@thebrokenvibe Could I not change the old fourms? It's okay if you request me to change it though. 😊Another Male and Female. I honestly want to make another female but seeing as that most are female, I decided to make most of my role male. 😸Name: FlowerkitAge: 3 moonsGender: FemaleRank: KitLooks: Light grey streaked with white. Her eyes are multicolored, changing each time the sun hits them.Kin: Cloudfoot, Nightwind, and SkykitPast: She lived a pretty normal life exept her mom died from one harsh storm because she was weak from being sick and giving birth to her. Her dad grieved for a while before moving on.Personality: She is alway positive, happy, playful and sweet. She likes being helpful and kind. She is usually never mad or sad. Most calls her a ray of sunshine.Crush/Mate: N/AOther: MouseName: CloudfootAge: 28 moonsGender: MaleRank: WarriorLooks: Completely white with blue eyes.Kin: Flowerkit{Daughter},Nightwind{Brother}, Skykit{Adopted Son}Past: He was a hard worker. He wanted to be a medicine cat at first when he was young, then he started to want to become a warrior when he grew older. He was happy when he got his very first daughter, Flowerkit. He grieved when Flowerkit's mother or his mate died. He was still kind to Silentkit, like a son.Personality: Unlike his daughter, he is more cold and shy. He like to be in the shadows like his brother Nightwind.Crush/Mate: DawnFlower{Deceased}Other: RobinName: DreamAge: 5 moonsGender: FemaleRank: LonerLooks: A sleek gray tabby, blue purple eyes.Kin: UnknownPast: Her mother was taken away one day, Dream presumed she was taken away by the two legged creatures when she was 3 moons old. She was attacked by a hawk soon after, then a few other predators. She managed to kill some for food. She came to the clan border half starved. She takes pride living by herself for one year when she was really young but she doesn't show it.Personality: Calm, quite, shy, cool headed. She is smarter than she looks, and wise from living by herself. She is a quick learner, learning from her own mistakes.Crush/Mate: NoneOther: Hawk
thebrokenvibe • 2 August 2016 at 12:46 AM
@panda9983 I'd prefer there weren't two cats with similar names. Can you change Silentkits? And as I have said before -star is a name reserved for leaders only.@pitch1226 accepted.
reality • 2 August 2016 at 1:39 AM
@thebrokenvibeSo I have to change Moonstar's name? Will change Silentkits name. 😸
thebrokenvibe • 2 August 2016 at 9:19 PM
@panda9983 yes you have to change her name
hotylog3 • 3 August 2016 at 12:00 AM
Name: AquaMistAge: 23MoonsGender:FemaleRank:WarriorLooks:Is a silver and white tabby. Blue hued optics.Kin: Non as far as plotted yetPast: AquaMist has a basic forest felines past. Having grown up being genital and soft, she was apprenticed and before long seeing her knack for hunting given a warriors title. Still the warriors life doesn't seem to blend as well as expected. Hopefully something will come along. Crush/Mate: to be plotted)Other: MouseName: FallenLeafs (if I'm not allowed)RippleSoulAge: Roughly 120 MoonsGender:MaleRank:ElderLooks:Is a tattered old hoot. His ginger and black patched fur is dull. His once brown eyes are now distorted with a milky haze. Is blind in right eye, as well as practically deaf.Kin: May be plotted)Past: Having been rouge many moons before the clan was even discovered by the world around he first had fought the idea of a clan. Of course after having been captured and learning of there ways he grew to love it. At this point his former name 'Leaf' was taken and he was awarded the title of 'FallingLeaf's' after having gain the trust of the clan felines. He from since had trained many apprentices, fought many battles. Now can be found taking naps or telling story's of old to the youn'yin's. Personality: He's a hoot. Very chatter even if he didn't hear the asked question. He can be rather grumpy of course, however I dare say he makes a rather great conversationalist. So amusing and... old.Crush/Mate: long since dead)Other: Thrush@thebrokenvibe
reality • 3 August 2016 at 12:18 AM
@thebrokenvibeChanged. 😸
carnival • 3 August 2016 at 1:02 AM
Name: CrowbreezeAge: 28 moonsGender: She-catRank: WarriorLooks: A sleek raven black cat with heterochromia, having a golden eye on her right and a blue eye on her left. A small portion on the outer side of her right ear is missing.Kin: Mousekit (Daughter)Past: She had been born into the clan, and had shown much potential as a warrior since some of her earliest days as a swift hunter. Her mate had been killed by a Monster while attempting to cross the Thunderpath near the border. Other than that, Crowbreeze had lived a very typical life as a clan cat.Personality: Very easy-going, but proud of her past accomplishments as a warrior so she might seem a bit condescending at first. She loves a good joke and is very open, unless her deceased mate comes up. Crush/Mate: UnknownOther: RabbitsName: MousekitAge: 5 moonsGender: She-catRank: KitLooks: A silvery-gray cat with a white muzzle, chest, and paws and dusty green eyes. She is very tiny for her age and is commonly looked-down upon for it.Kin: Crowbreeze (Mother)Past: Because of her small size, Mousekit is sometimes bullied by her fellow kits. Due to this, she tries to live up to her mother's name by practicing sparring with the others.Personality: Very determined to become a warrior. She tries to be calm and chill like her mom, but is actually very capricious and temperamental. Crush/Mate: N/AOther: Mice@thebrokenvibe
thebrokenvibe • 4 August 2016 at 11:06 PM
@panda9983 Queen is a rank reserved for she-cats who are pregnant or are nursing kits. And it is important to include the information you added in your second forms to your other forms. I am very confused since Nightwing says he has no kin but your other character says they're siblings.@hotylog3 Please check your spelling, your forms are missing something, and as stated in the ping about you, Queen is a rank reserved for she-cats who are pregnant or nursing kits.@carnival Accepted.