{October} The Fwisep (Basedon the Will o' the Wisp folktales) - better pictures will be added soon

sorrow • 9 August 2017 at 4:28 PM

So i've been on EC for 2 years and i never even tried to make creature suggestions, but today we are changing that!

Will o' the Wisps folklore: A man named Will is given a second chance at life to get into Heaven by Saint Peter. But, he ends up living such a horrible life that he is doomed to walk the Earth forever, carrying nothing but a small ember for warmth. Will then uses the ember to lure people to their doom, in a swamp. (But we're not using that last part)

I apologize deeply for the bad quality pictures! They were taken on a cheap tablet, so they're not the best.

Whole page with all drawings: http://i.imgur.com/PS5aCqM.jpg (The left side are the final drawings, the right side are the first drafts)
Egg: http://i.imgur.com/RqvbtAI.jpg
First stage: http://i.imgur.com/E9s6jOM.jpg
Last Stage: http://i.imgur.com/yRHSWIW.jpg

Again, sorry for the grainy, gross, fuzzy pictures!

Egg Description:
This egg is radiating a lot of heat, and it keeps moving super quickly, as if it were teleporting. Every time it moves, a little flicker of light sparks and a trail of smoke leading to where it went, leading you far away from where you started.

Creature Description:
As a Fwisep grows, they sprout an abdomen and hands,along with growing a longer flame off the tip of their head.
Fwiseps are extremely dangerous. Only the bravest of collectors try to catch them. They are very fast and can only be caught with Fwisep-proof tools. If you try to catch them with anything else, it will burn. If you're looking to get one, make sure you have a fire-proof area for them. They love to lurk in corners and being alone in the dark, watching everything around them.

Habitat: Wetlands
Weight: 0.01 kg
Height: 0.01 m
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Literally any advice is greatly appreciated. Any suggestions to edit them, too. I'll try to find something better to take the pictures with :0
Thank you so much! 😊
~16

stagfire • 9 August 2017 at 4:56 PM

@marner

Love it! It's super adorable and the description is intriguing. Some of the stages are hard to decipher so maybe do your first drafts on a different page.

Nevertheless, I like it ❤️

sorrow • 9 August 2017 at 5:06 PM

@stagfire
Thank you! I can re-draw them on a new page, I'll start that now 😊

stagfire • 9 August 2017 at 5:08 PM

@marner

You're very welcome 😊