I need essay help >3>

cafe • 22 September 2011 at 10:53 PM

Never mind, I've done it XD

bunnyshadow • 22 September 2011 at 11:11 PM

@cafe good essay, your essay should be about what will haplen if a person is the chosen one or when a person crosses either bridge

cafe • 22 September 2011 at 11:13 PM

@bunnyshadow

I actually finished it before you posted it xD

Here was what I got;

If someone decides to cross the bridge, they get their own paradise according to their life. (Topic sentence)As I said earlier, they won?t be punished if they gave good intent. Everything is basically according to the rule of three. If they have good intentions throughout their life, they will be returned three fold; and they get a paradise. (Supporting sentence) If they have bad intentions throughout their life, they?ll be returned three fold. If they did something so terrible, as taking someone else?s life or harming someone, they will be given basically a hell. If they receive a paradise as their reward from life - they?ll be given everything they?ve ever wanted; they will have eternal happiness. It will stretch on forever, except for one wall. At this wall, they can step through it and go where ever they wish to go. Visit whoever they wish to meet. (Closing sentence)


Ignore the sentence things

bunnyshadow • 22 September 2011 at 11:23 PM

@cafe "Visit whoever they wish to meet." doesnt sound like a good ending sentence, hiw about adding "Leaving whenever they wish to leave and doing whatever they wish to do."

cafe • 22 September 2011 at 11:27 PM

@bunnyshadow

I like it, I was just posting because I didn't know what to write about for the third sentence 😸

I find it show but sweet ;D

bunnyshadow • 23 September 2011 at 12:51 AM

@cafe k