The Mysterious Murder of Audrey VanDoorn

juliettbrown • 7 October 2011 at 5:01 PM

@smiles SSure!

rileytibbles • 7 October 2011 at 5:02 PM

Okay, well lets start looking where we first saw him. over there in the bushes
i walked over
*GASPS*
Guys look! Theres a trail of blood!

lola622f • 7 October 2011 at 5:05 PM

" I think that we both should go", I said a bit annoyed. I have the best eyesight when I looked at shadows. They are estainsel for a vamp. Seeing a trail of blood, I rushed over it to examine it. It was human blood....

spenser_dog_123 • 7 October 2011 at 5:06 PM

Jamie Bends down and look at it. "This is NOT human blood!" She said, "but I can't tell what it's from. can anybody tell what creature this came from?

lola622f • 7 October 2011 at 5:09 PM

" That's human blood.", I said. I was a newborn and I knew what human blood smells like. I looked around. "That part is a creature's blood", I said pointing at the blood. Half of it was human blood and half was a creature's.

spenser_dog_123 • 7 October 2011 at 5:12 PM

"Hmm..." Jamie said. Then all of a sudden, a black figure swooped down from the trees. Oof! Jamie was on the ground. There was no blood but it looked like someone had jumped down from a tree and landed on her. Jamie pulled herself up. There were scratches on her face.

lola622f • 7 October 2011 at 5:14 PM

I looked at the person. I can see him perfectly in the shadows. He was tall, and perfect looking.

smilies • 7 October 2011 at 5:21 PM

FORM:

Name: Cynthia Roads
Age: (6 - 18 ) 15
Gender: Female
Looks: Bushy dark chocolately brown hair that falls in untamable ringlets to just below her shoulders, emerald green eyes, possibly anorexic skinny, not at all athletic. Her clothes change erractically every day but on average consist of mini-skirts, short shorts, low cut dresses and tight tank tops.
Personality: You know I hate these. You'll see...
Abilities: ( Like drawing or writing not Powers ) She's good at art and loves using styles like sketching, dying and Indian ink, schlack and sometimes woodcutting. She might be a good writer if she spoke any other language other than Txt.
Creature: ( Werewolf, vampire, human. etc. ) Werewolf....
Reason Why Suspect: She was Audrey's BFF, but when she went on holiday... She happened to be going to the same place as a boy Audrey liked a lot... And they had an argument over txt, and were no longer friends (but no one knows this).
Extra: None.

Is that okay? @juliettbrown

juliettbrown • 8 October 2011 at 8:11 AM

@smiles It's great!


"What WAS that? " I asked staaring at Jamie on the ground.

lola622f • 8 October 2011 at 8:44 AM

Nobody noticed him except for me, I think.

rileytibbles • 8 October 2011 at 10:18 AM

''I think I saw him too.....
I think he had a knife

He was trying to kill jamie......
Do you guys think it was him who killed audrey?''
I said in a low voice

lola622f • 8 October 2011 at 11:02 AM

"No he's too inocent", I said. He looked very handsome...

rileytibbles • 8 October 2011 at 2:23 PM

Maybe, he was put ther as a diversion so we couldn't pick out the real culprit

lola622f • 8 October 2011 at 2:26 PM

I came out of my trance and checked the time. It was 8: 44. "Umm.... I think we have to go to school now", I hinted.

rileytibbles • 8 October 2011 at 2:44 PM

Yeah-- uh, we need to go. the bell rings at 9

lola622f • 8 October 2011 at 2:46 PM

I went to school, late.

juliettbrown • 9 October 2011 at 3:23 PM

I ran to school and I had the meanest teacher in school for first period.... And i was late. GREAT!

lola622f • 9 October 2011 at 4:54 PM

Going to music, everyone stared at me.

rileytibbles • 9 October 2011 at 5:24 PM

After I entered the classroom, the teacher called me up to her desk. She asked where I was, but before I could explain, she gave me a hall pass to the principal's office and just said that i would have ''a chat with him''

uh oh........

lola622f • 9 October 2011 at 6:22 PM

As the day passed, everything seemed to resent me.

rileytibbles • 10 October 2011 at 12:13 PM

walking to the office, i started to sweat. I knew exactly what would happen. They were going to accuse me

lola622f • 10 October 2011 at 12:15 PM

At recess I walked down the hall. Seeing @rileytibbles, I asked "Where are you going?"

rileytibbles • 10 October 2011 at 12:18 PM

''I got sent to the principals office........again''
i replied

lola622f • 10 October 2011 at 12:19 PM

" Why", I asked.

spenser_dog_123 • 10 October 2011 at 1:57 PM

Jamie walks up to Kirsten. "Hello," she sighed with a half-frown.

lala622f • 10 October 2011 at 1:58 PM

"What's wrong?", I asked.

@spenser_dog_123

spenser_dog_123 • 10 October 2011 at 2:02 PM

@lala622f "Well nothing is wrong, but I cant help worrying about that boy that had attempted to kill me", Jamie said, "he might try again, or even worse, he might attempt to kill someone else. But that night, we were all in a group. And he tried to kill ME. Why ME?" She hung her head and then looked back up at Kirsten.

lala622f • 10 October 2011 at 2:04 PM

@spenser_dog_123

"I don't know", I said, thinking about the person.

spenser_dog_123 • 10 October 2011 at 2:05 PM

Jamie thought for a minute. "Follow me," she said mysteriously as she dashed towards the exit of the school.

rileytibbles • 10 October 2011 at 4:16 PM

Meanwhile in the principal's office....
'' why were you late Hazel?''
said the principal in a suspicious tone
''My friends and I got caught up in a.... game
i replied
''Really. Uh huh, so what game were you playing?''
He said
'' I dont know the name''
i said slyly
''Very well, you may return to your classroom''

on my way back to class, i spotted Kirsten and Jamie. ''Hey where are you going? Wait up!!''
i shouted