Angel Makers

Deleted • 24 May 2011 at 5:30 PM

This topic is based on the Maximum Ride books. We are the angels made at the school by scientists. A scientist named Jeb saved us but he died 2 years ago. I am Max the oldest one, our sister Angel has been traped by the erasers (wolf-men) we are being chased by them to GOOD LUCK!!
RULES
. have fun but be fair
. dont controll others
. please dont be rude!!
. one character only
. please no killing some one else or your self

SET UP
Name: Max(imum)
Age: 14
Discription: Short brown hair with pink and purple streaks after my make over. 5'9 with an IQ of 300, white blank eyes, specks of (Real) gold streaks across my tan nose like freckles. Im kinda nuts....

Deleted • 27 May 2011 at 3:12 PM

Name: Gentle Ice
Age: 14
Description: Light orange hair,5'3,Smart,funny[likes to joke around].She doesn't get mad easily[unless you insult her] and when she does you'd better run....😈

Deleted • 27 May 2011 at 4:00 PM

"Hey Ice... can i call you that?" He asked (Ill change Max into a boy not a girl) "We have to get out of this place..(were still in the shcool) I'm kinda scared here.. I saw them do experiments on the erasers and it killed them... i heard they would try it on us..." Max said his voice trailing off

Deleted • 27 May 2011 at 4:11 PM

"You can call me Ice..." she replied."Now listen carefully," Ice said whispering," If they catch us- we're dead. I know a hidden way out of here, but it involves going through the hallway for 3 minutes.If they see us we will have to keep running NO MATTER what. Now if you're ready, we'll go..."Ice stood up and stared through the isolated classroom door window...

Deleted • 27 May 2011 at 4:24 PM

*Gets Up And Takes Ice's Hand* "Lets Go.... Ill Look Around The Corner" *Turns around the corner* There are two gaurds.. we can take em out *Lets Wings Out* Ready?

isis • 27 May 2011 at 4:41 PM

Name: Eupraxia
Age: 14
Gender: female 😋
Description: very long blond hair, purple eyes, and very tall. She never does anything that is not kind in any way, but sometimes that can get her in trouble 😱
She is always trying to keep her conscience perfect 😉 (if that's the way to say it 😋)

Deleted • 27 May 2011 at 4:45 PM

"Ice we have to go get Eupraxia before we leave!!

Deleted • 27 May 2011 at 8:03 PM

@blue where? X3 does dragging someone count as controlling? xD
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"Of course!" she scoffed."I'm not dimwitted!" Now go!" Lulu suddenly, but quietly exclaimed, pushing Max down a mysterious and tight hallway...

Deleted • 27 May 2011 at 9:54 PM

@icicle_9510 XD not Lulu, its Ice!! And dragging is okay!
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"STOP," he yelled yanking his arm away. "do we even know where her cell is? UHM NO!! Let me find it." *Max's eyes glow white* Okay!! Down this hall around the right corner, across the field to the next building, down the first corridor, in the room with a padlock with code: G8hge8vJHbndhehZFdhejsaggsed(hjshenenhs)+34323. I know long password. Then we go down a hall for a mile, then go in the left door, then the thrid door on the right then we will see many cages. Eupraxia is in cage 319 the code to the lock is 73423653 then we go out the back door and we will think who else we have to get. Angel has already back at the house safe, we moved to a different location where the erasers wont find us. Got it. Live It. Know it. Remember it! Come on we have all night, if we find any gaurds just knock em out and run RUN I SAY RUN! Jump up and fly away!!"
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*Does All Those Things* "Okay! Eupraxia We are here to get you out"*Opens Cage*"NOW! *Wings Spread And Pulls The Others Outside!*

isis • 28 May 2011 at 7:41 AM

Eupraxia, Max and Ice just wanted to search for others but suddenly they heard something. "HALT"! "Oh no, it's a guard! And he has a net to capture us! What do we have to do?"

Deleted • 28 May 2011 at 7:47 AM

"Dont worry i got this." Max replied while he dropped kicked the gaurd in his chin. "That should do it!" he chuckled to himself gently." We have to come for the others later, we have no time to lose, lets get back to the new hide out. Ready to fly Eupraxia? Ill help spread your new wings. *Opens Eupraxia's wings for about 10 feet gently* "There. Ice you ready? Im going to help Eupraxia because she just got her wings, * Takes Eupraxia's hand and jumps into the air spreading black slick wings out and flapping like a mad man.*"JUST REMEMBER TO FLAP!" he yelled over the sound of the wind, and within two hours they were home.

redstar-fireclan • 28 May 2011 at 11:06 AM

Name: Lily
Age: 14
Discription: Short blonde hair with pink streaks after my make over. 5'4 with an IQ of 300, hazeleyes, Im kinda nuts.... and i love cats..so i'm kinda the Queen of Cats.

Deleted • 28 May 2011 at 2:19 PM

@blue lol xD i dont know who i am half the time X3Back to the story though;)
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"I hate you," muttered Ice angrily through clenched teeth.She for some odd reason, absolutely HATED flying.She suddenly looked up in alarm."TORNADO!" she screeched.And before they even had a chance to react, Ice felt herself being thrown through the air "I'm done for!" she thought scared.And with that, Gentle Ice blacked out....

Deleted • 29 May 2011 at 8:15 AM

"ICE" he yelled as he let go of Eupraxia's hand and dive bombed down to reach Ice. Max flew up high with Ice in his arms grabbing Eupraxia's hand again. Max blinks and they aresoon far away from the tornato. *Lands* "COME ON ICE" he yelled while he did CRP. Max soon saw Ice move and her eyes open gently. "Oh good,"purred Max "Your okay" he said gently kissing her cheek.

Deleted • 29 May 2011 at 10:59 AM

@bluegirl80 *blushes^^"*

Ice stirred awake.She looked around,saw Max and blushed."thanks." she muttered,then remembered something important."WHERE'S EUPHRAXIA!?!?!?!?!"Ice screamed in alarm..."then she became angry,"How could you let go of her!?!?she JUST got her wings!"

Deleted • 29 May 2011 at 10:26 PM

@icicle_9510 XD
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"DO YOU NOT SEE HER NEXT TO YOU!?!?!?!?!?!?" he yelled at her. "I wonder how your eye sight is.... I think I should take you to an eye doctor. Plus I only let go for like a second so dont you go yelling at me!" he said mimmicking Ice's voice in that way that anoyed the heck out of her. "Come on Ice. Come on Eupraxia. Were going to find a doctor after we get some money." he grumbled under his breath. Soon he had the money off the debit card his mother and father had given him before he was taken. "Ill take out $500"and he did. "Come on" hemuttered as he pushed them both through the doors. "Hello? Do you have an appt?" she said in a hight naisily voice. "Um No ma'am. Were from out of town and my sister here couldnt see my other sister and she yelled at me saying how could you lose her? When she was right next to her." he answered blankly. "Oh," she answered. "ill see if theres a doctor open." I answered in a kind voice "Thank you."
They were pushed through the doors where I saw a man... in a white coat. "Can you take your coat off?" I said trying to get used to him "Umm sure!" he said taking his coat off. "Now! Who and whats wrong? "I pointed to Ice and said "She is having some sight issues..."

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 12:38 PM

"Sight issues my butt,"grumbled Ice.She was in a super mad mood.And she could tell something was fishy with their dr. He was always smiling crookedly at them,and to the nurse, who grinned as evenly crooked back.Plus, they had...weird...Harry...hands! She jumped back and recited a special spell only she knew,"Grickle,grackle,SHACKLE!" Ice shouted pointing her hand at the dr. And nurse, and up sprouted a pair of chains on both of their hands.Without waiting for a smart-aleck reply from Max, Ice gRabbed his and Euphraxia's hand and bolted out the door.The eraser's were on the hunt for them.

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 2:07 PM

"WAIT!" he yelled after seeing the doctor following them. "Its just a test, I can see.. see.. see JEB!?!?!?!?" he yelled running at Jeb with intence speed.
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"Hi Max." Jeb said silently. "Why? WHY DID YOU LEAVE US?" he yelled through tears.
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*Max runs up to Ice* "How could he?" he mummbled crying into Ice's shoulder. He missed Jeb so much, he thought he was dead. But he had betrayed them.
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*Max's eyes began to turn red and his body grew larger then any of them had seen, larger then a full grown eraser!* He lunged himself from Ice to Jeb. In seconds Jeb was bleeding horribly. As Max came back to himself he shouted "COME ON WE HAVE TO GO!"

isis • 30 May 2011 at 3:08 PM

Eupraxia was very sad because of all this. "P-p-please don't fight because of me! Everything is okay! MAX! OMG WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!" Eupraxia gently washed the blood away from Jeb's face and she tried to fly away with Max and Ice, but she still couldn't use her wings very well.

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 3:13 PM

"He Betrayed Us Remember?" he called grabbing Eupraxia. " He Was Like A Father, Then He Just Left. We Have To Go, He's Not On Our Side Anymore." he said as he hugged Eupraxia seeing tears well up in her eyes

isis • 30 May 2011 at 3:17 PM

"But we can't just leave him there!" Eupraxia cried, but decided to forget about it when Max huggled her.

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 3:22 PM

In an hour they were at there new mansion house. "We have a pool, hot tub, indoor movie theater, bowling ally,like 10 bedrooms, 12 bathrooms, and a kitchen, a basment, a living room, dining room, etc."

isis • 30 May 2011 at 3:49 PM

"AWESOME! I'm going to dive into the pool, but I'm using my wings instead of the diving board, so I can train!" 😉

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 3:54 PM

"Good Eupraxia!"

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 5:33 PM

Ice watched sadly as everyone dove into the pool.How could Max attack Jeb like that? After all, Max didn't even get JEB'S side of the story.What if he'd been taken by the erasers?Ice was heart borken.She missed Jeb, and everyone else seemed to treat him like a piece of dirt now."I can't believe you hurt Jeb!" Ice suddenly shouted at Max, and she took off running from that cursed mansion....

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 5:40 PM

"Ice!" he yelled running past Ice and stopping her. " I miss him too. I could read his mind. He.. He... He said we were the most stupid creations he ever made!" he cryed with tears streaming down his face. "He used to care about us, but he doesnt now. I care about you, i care about us ALL!" he yelled as Angel entered. "Hi Angel" he said gently.
"I heard you yelling at Ice" she answered. "Why?Oh Max! Your Arm! What Happened?"she said franticlly
"My Arm? What about my arm?" he said looking down seeing his arm bleeding and twisted back. "Jeb must have gotten a few punches down" he whispered to Ice so Angel wount know she had seen Jeb.

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 5:46 PM

"He would never think or say that!" screeched Ice fiercly.Despite her name, she wasn't feeling gentle AT ALL right at the moment."I told you it was the erasers!" she shouted even louder.Ice's rage was building, and an angry angel had so much power it was explosive.Then when Ice was so angry, she did explode-inside her mind.She fell to the ground, face bright red.Then, a net exploded out of no-where.Two evil looking people stepped out of the bushes and snatched up Ice."Gotcha." said a grinning eraser.It was all a plan to get me angry! though Ice dismayed.

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 5:50 PM

"Ice! NO! YOU WILL NOT TAKE HER! I LOVE HER!" he burst out. He ran at the first eraser an hurled his claws out. He scartched at his eyes and saw one of his eyes pop out! "Oh Umm. Okay?" he laughed! The second one just let go of Ice and ran for the hills. Max ran up into one of rooms in the house and sat trying to calm down. He couldnt belive he said he loved Ice, that was a secret to him!

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 5:55 PM

Ice stared in shock at the Max who was fleeing.He said he loved her.But Ice didn't exactly feel that way, and she tried very hard NOT to feel for him that way."It's just too much..." she whispered, and flew away.She would find Jeb, and NO ONE,not even Max, would stop her.Ice flew higher and higher, until a cloud cover swalloed her up, and she entered a kingdom not of this world....

Deleted • 30 May 2011 at 6:06 PM

"Ice? Ice?? ICE?" he yelled seeing a note on the ground. He read it and immediatly grabbed a tracker. "Okay. Where is she. I hope she doesnt know i put a tracker in her." he stuffed the knife in his pocket."There" she followed the signal and came into that same kingdom. "Woah" he said seeing Ice. "Ice, i understand. I Dont know what came over me. I still love Jeb as much as you do. It was just, i havent seen him in so long. I thought i was hilusinating." Max said as she pulled the note out. "Lets find him. Together. I am so sorry it was the adrenaline." he said putting his hand out waiting for Ice to shake his hand or to run.