~*~*~Welcome to Hogwarts~*~*~ {A literate RP}

luv • 11 February 2012 at 5:28 PM

DO NOT POST. A breaker will come from @Haku for the rest. I REPEAT: DO NOT POST.
'Welcome to Hogwarts!' The letter says. You read over it yet again, still not entirely believing your eyes. Yet there it is, in that flawless script, with the list of school books needed. Magic books? A magic WAND? It was all going too fast. Perhaps that was another magical thing...

Welcome to Hogwarts! As a Literate role play, in your application, you have to submit some writing samples. Don't be offended if these are denied, but we are using lots of fast, yet long and descriptive posts. Being good at writing short and not always very well described posts is not useful in this role play. Here are the other rules:
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Breaker from @Haku, DO NOT POST.

haku • 11 February 2012 at 5:29 PM

~*~*~BREAKER @luv ~*~*~

luv • 11 February 2012 at 5:31 PM

1) No god mods! Nobody likes a complete know-all character, it's no fun.
2) No magic before Hogwarts! To make it fair, pure blood or not, everyone grew up in an orphanage, so they know nothing about magic.
3) No biased views! The "Sorting hat" and "Blood meter" will determine blood status and houses, (AKA my side @Haku 😊 ) and store owners will also be done as such -by me, that is- (After your seven years at Hogwarts, you can apply for a job as a store owner, or a Ministry of Magistrate, then you will play that role, and @Haku will no longer be that part).
4) No begging. If you don't get in, that's okay! Just fix your application, and I'll get you in as soon as possible.
5) You can submit your applications any time, but a "year" at Hogwarts is a month of real time, so they will only be accepted at the end of one month.
6) DO NOT START ROLE PLAYING. I will start the RP, understand? Not you! We have a week long sign up, then I will ping the users who made the academy.
7) Have fun, and make sure your looks includes a picture. 😊

The application will be post #5. I will do the breaker post from @Haku, so nobody post here until that has been completed.

haku • 11 February 2012 at 5:32 PM

~*~*~BREAKER @luv ~*~*~

luv • 11 February 2012 at 5:41 PM

LET THE APPLICATIONS POUR IN. XD

Name:
Birthday (You are 11 years old):
Sister/Brother (Played by another user, you can only be one charrie.. so far 😊 ):
Looks (Insert link here):
Personality:
Anything else?:
Writing sample (100 words or more):

Name: Alleia Johnson
Birthday: February 14th
Sister/Brother: None
Looks (Insert link here): http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/718/alleiajohnson.png/
Personality: Elusive, nice, very intelligent
Anything else?: Her mom was a healer, and a Ravenclaw. Her dad, a Gryffindor, and he works in the Department of Mysteries. But she doesn't know that yet, her parents think she is dead, when really she is at an orphanage.
Writing sample: I made it, lol.

Pings:
@Cynt5100
@GLaDOS
@Pipkitten
@Bunnyshadow
@Orange

bunnyshadow • 11 February 2012 at 5:50 PM

Name: Sylvia Johnson
Birthday: same as @luv
Sister/Brother: @luv Alleia
Looks (Insert link here): Black chest length hair that urls atthe bottom, long purple bangs cover left eye, purple eyes.
Personality: Mean, shallow, popular? Nice only to friends.
Anything else?: Same as @luv.
Writing sample: Poo dat. XD

hay7199 • 11 February 2012 at 5:51 PM

Name:Luna Johnson
Birthday:June 1st
Sister/Brother:Can Alleia be her sister @Luv
Looks:Red hair Green eyes,purple top,and a blue jean scirt
Personality:She is soft spoken and nothing like Alleia
Anything:Her Father was a Gryppindor and her and her mother is a Ravenclaw,she dosent know that and they dont know she is alive
Writing Sample:What ??@Luv

luv • 11 February 2012 at 5:54 PM

@Hay7199
Sure! Like, a younger sister? She could be 10, but still come to Hogwarts, even though she's not learning, just so she isn't away from her sister. 😊
Writing sample:
100 words (or more) of your writing, to prove you are eligible to participate in a literate role play, with at least 50 words per post.
OR
Just give me a piece of your writing. XD

@Bunnyshadow
^^^ Now now, just give me some text from another RP. XD

hay7199 • 11 February 2012 at 5:55 PM

But i want to go to hogwarts! *Wants to be a Hufflepuff*

bunnyshadow • 11 February 2012 at 5:56 PM

@luv could you look at my profile? I think thats enough 😋

luv • 11 February 2012 at 5:59 PM

@Hay7199
@Bunnyshadow
Hay-
I'll change mah birthday to June 1st. We'll be twins.
Bunny-
True, and I've RPed with you before.

Deleted • 11 February 2012 at 5:59 PM

@luv can i have a subject for the writing sample? my spelling might not be perfect, but i will try my hardest, and i can post longer posts now. 😸
Name: Sound (last name unknown)
Birthday (You are 11 years old): Janurary. she doesnt know the day, only the month.
Sister/Brother (Played by another user, you can only be one charrie.. so far ): none for now.
Looks (Insert link here):http://www.google.com/imgres?q=green+hair+and+mis+matched+eyes+anime+girl&hl=en&sa=X&rls=com.microsoft:en-us&biw=1280&bih=851&tbm=isch&tbnid=sutMIDwgXradXM:&imgrefurl=http://www.teenrpg.com/user/1800-felinewarrior/&docid=oBLGKUHo9tzQDM&imgurl=http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd157/outofthebluerandomluv/Anime%2520Girls/sachienormal_green_eyes.jpg&w=400&h=400&ei=X_I2T6yDPIGniAKPoMHSCg&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=966&vpy=100&dur=100&hovh=225&hovw=225&tx=88&ty=156&sig=101359222470066800939&page=1&tbnh=157&tbnw=157&start=0&ndsp=25&ved=1t:429,r:17,s:0
long link. XD
Personality: she is normaly a bit crazy and blood thirsty, but shes also very brave and defends her friends with her life.
Anything else?: her eyes are mismatched, one is red and the other is black.
Writing sample (100 words or more):

bunnyshadow • 11 February 2012 at 6:02 PM

@luv 😸 Can i be a sister too xD TRIPLETS

luv • 11 February 2012 at 6:05 PM

@Bunnyshadow
You have black hair. XD
@Bettafish
Writing sample?

hay7199 • 11 February 2012 at 6:06 PM

OK!
This is my writing

Beneath a Shadowed moon, in a cloud streaked sky.The black wolf snarls to the wind,to the sky, and never backs down.The fight will last forever, and if something happens;he will fight to his last breath,and the blood and terror will pull at your vary soul.The thought of the death,of the sky drenched in blood,nothing can stop him,and he will never rise and just as the white wolf pounces. There is black and a huge roar lets out with nothing to hold it back.Nothing to silence it. The vary thought sends shivers up your spine and this is;
THE BLOODY WOLF

luv • 11 February 2012 at 6:10 PM

@Hay7199
I apologize, however, for now, your writing sample has been REJECTED.
It is VERY GOOD, but there are lots of spelling mistakes, and run-on sentences. This makes it harder for the other players to read. Until this is fixed, I'm so so so sorry, but you cannot continue.
:"( ☹️ :"(

Deleted • 11 February 2012 at 6:13 PM

@luv erm....give me a secound, okay? i thought you wanted a whole new one, i have a few long ones that should be okay. is this okay? its rather old, and its not perfect. D:
"Maybe I couldnt help because i lost my powers fighting the red hand before, maybe i was working all this time to just get a SLIVER of my power back. maybe ive already died. maybe i dont have anything left because i fought him before. Not that you would bother to listen or care about anyone who you havent even bothered to get to know before you suddenly decide they didnt fight because there a coward." Sound says to her with a cold voice. "There's no one worse in the world than someone whom makes assumptions without bothering to know anything about the person." Sound says, and turns her back on the girl.

luv • 11 February 2012 at 6:15 PM

@Bettafish
Your spelling is decent, however 'i' alone or as 'i've' or 'i'm' should always be a CAPITAL letter. 😊 If you and @Hay7199 can edit yours (maybe write them in Microsoft word first? That will catch run-ons and punctuation and grammar mistakes) then I will let you both in.

Deleted • 11 February 2012 at 6:17 PM

@luv I can do that. 😸 thats a really old post, from the first rp I joined, so I thought I would be auto rejected. XD

bunnyshadow • 11 February 2012 at 6:18 PM

@luv SHES SPECIAL OK? -goes off to edit post anywayz 8D

luv • 11 February 2012 at 6:20 PM

@Bettafish
😊 Just show me some editing, and you too @Hay7199, and you're in to Hogwarts!
@Bunnyshadow
XD
Okay, well for now we are twins, until @Hay7199 can correct their spelling. 😉

bunnyshadow • 11 February 2012 at 6:21 PM

@luv YUS. ping me when we start

Deleted • 11 February 2012 at 6:23 PM

@luv this better?
"Maybe I couldn't help because I lost my powers fighting the red hand before, maybe I was working all this time to just get a SLIVER of my power back. Maybe I've already died. Maybe I don't have anything left because I fought him before. Not that you would bother to listen or care about anyone who you haven't even bothered to get to know before you suddenly decide they didn't fight because there a coward." Sound says to her with a cold voice. "There's no one worse in the world than someone whom makes assumptions without bothering to know anything about the person." Sound says, and turns her back on the girl.

luv • 11 February 2012 at 6:24 PM

@Bunnyshadow
Well I guess we can start immediately, and others can join up on the way. I'll go first.

I twirl my long red braid around my finger, watching my twin out of the corner of my eye. We are best friends, actually the only friends we have. I never do anything without her, and I don't have any other friends. For some reason today seems kind of weird, and I shake off the feeling, until I realize something.
"Sylvia!" I yell, shaking her awake.
"It's our 11th birthday today!"

@Bettafish
Loads better. 😊 Except (and this happens to me a lot) you're 's got turned into ?s

lola622f • 11 February 2012 at 6:28 PM

May I join? I'll be literate. 😊

Name: Jasper
Birthday: December 21
Sister/Brother: None
Looks : http://saimaisama.files.wordpress.com/2008/08/ikuto10.png
Personality: Sometimes mean. Usually quiet.
Anything else?: Nope
Writing sample: The room darkened quickly. It became pitch black. Darkness swirled around him. Jasper cannot see anything. As if he was in space for eternity. He didn't know what had happened. It was unusual. Jasper didn't do anything. The pure black darkness dissolved into a scene. There were kids playing, laughing and having fun. 'Where am I?' he thought, looking around. Jasper relized that he appeared in the park.

bunnyshadow • 11 February 2012 at 6:28 PM

@luv fine by me 😸 can you make this the 14th b-day? Its ok if you dont wantto tho :L
~~~
Sylvia grunted. "What do you want with me?", she said in a sleepy voice. Then she bolted out of bed. "It's our birthday today!", she yelled.

hay7199 • 11 February 2012 at 6:29 PM

Luna spins around "Happy birthday to us!"

bunnyshadow • 11 February 2012 at 6:29 PM

@luv fine by me 😸 can you make this the 14th b-day? Its ok if you dont wantto tho :L
~~~
Sylvia grunted. "What do you want with me?", she said in a sleepy voice. Then she bolted out of bed. "It's our birthday today!", she yelled.

(edit)
Nevermind everyones 11

@lola622f could you post on the islands RP? Ty:$0

Deleted • 11 February 2012 at 6:29 PM

@luv *head desk* I'll fix that, okay?! XD May I join?! *Is a hogwarts freak*

luv • 11 February 2012 at 6:33 PM

@Hay7199
Yeah, just one little spelling error. "Beneth = Beneath"... So, you're in! But maybe we shouldn't be triplets.. just we meet you at Hogwarts.

@Bunnyshadow
What year do kids start at Hogwarts, brainless? XD (JK, you have a nice brain) Remember all posts are 50 words.

I grinned at her. "Of course! Were double 1! The big... eleven." She said with a small laugh. She looked around the room, the cracked walls, the concrete floor, the hospital style beds. Abnormally tidy. Abnormally... boring.
"And for our birthday, let's jazz this place up a little!" I said.