~*Cave In Hearts Contest*~

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celeste • 24 February 2012 at 4:35 AM

@catherineprettty
If I wrote one to you, would it make you partial or impartial? XD

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space • 24 February 2012 at 4:38 AM

@celeste
Impartial 😊

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celeste • 24 February 2012 at 5:12 AM

@catherineprettty
Great~ This poem is subject to change, though ^^

A star

One fateful night,
A star fell from the sky.
I went out, and saw
Its plight. Now, we
talked for a bit, o'er
a cup of tea or two,
and the first spark was lit.
That spark, friends, we call,
Friendship. And the star
in question, is none
other than...

Cathy~

Love ya~ 😸

Something I threw together while I was brain-dead isn't the best, is it? XD

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space • 24 February 2012 at 5:51 AM

@celeste
Awww â¤ī¸33 That was so sweet and cute!! 😸
Thanks, Sunrays! 😃
Good luck 😉

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space • 25 February 2012 at 1:22 AM

HELP ME PING MORE PEOPLE TO JOIN, PLEASE!! â¤ī¸3

@inhabitant
@silver_winged
@chloekins
@sstwins
@sakura2596

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 1:25 AM

@catherineprettty

XD thanks for the ping but I am not in the perfect mood in making a poem â˜šī¸ I want to join but..

*Wow~! reading all of that makes me feel weird XD

>Just sad XD Goodluck to everyone ^^

PIngs

@haunted
@glazzie
@star_daragon4810
@plushie

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space • 25 February 2012 at 1:27 AM

@inhabitant Thanks, sunshine â¤ī¸33 😸
You should join =]

@boxofcrayons
@alphapercival

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 1:28 AM

@catherineprettty

I'll try sunbeam ^^

@pipkitten
@joy
@elluwah

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plushie • 25 February 2012 at 1:30 AM

Poem :x I suck at them. Sozzy

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boxofcrayons • 25 February 2012 at 1:32 AM

@catherineprettty
I already did 😋

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space • 25 February 2012 at 1:33 AM

@inhabitant
YAY!!!

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chrismas123 • 25 February 2012 at 1:34 AM

Ill be joining 😃
My poem:
I found a Soulmate in guys
What a perfect surprise
You always help me get these
I could get used to this.


As you kill the rest
And you still think I'm the best
You always build me a bridge
I could get used to this.


And I still find it hard to believe
when you said you'd never leave me

Happy late V-day! 😃
Weird poem huh XD

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space • 25 February 2012 at 1:36 AM

@chrismas123
WONDERFUL ENTRY!! 😸
Although poem entries should only have 4-6 lines,
take your time =]

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 1:39 AM

@plushie XD Its okay ^^

@catherineprettty
@byfelisa

Since both of you asked -.- 6 lines only right? ^-^ I made 12 XD (stubborn) 4 stanzas

On Valentines day, A random online user
Sent a pm to you and to others
The user never knew that only one would respond
And that is when their friendship begun

They started talking, and became close
Will they be best friends? Who knows?
I do~!
Because the two users are me and you ^^

Happy Valentines was the pm
The perfect valentines for them
Was not about gifts or presents
But about sharing love with friends

*First of all, I love making poems when I'm in the mood so sorry if its an epic fail ^^

*Second I can only make either haikus, tankas or free verse and I prefer free verse so sorry I can't make a 4-6 liner ^^

*Third this is for all my friends ^^

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space • 25 February 2012 at 1:43 AM

@inhabitant
That's so beautiful, Sunshine â¤ī¸3
But can you follow the 4-6line rule please? 😊
Take your time, the deadline is still tomorrow.
And possibly, just for one specific user 😃

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:01 AM

@catherineprettty

but they have 8 lines -.- NO FAIR XD

Haha ^^ someone has 11 lines ^^ and another has 10 XD

Sunbeam -.-

To a secret user ^^ (so no one will know) I don't want to pick one of my friends ^^

Sitting alone in a corner
What to do... I wonder?
Then I posted on a wall of a user
Who replied and became my bestfriend, Words do have power
With a simple hi and hello on valentine
This user is now a special friend of mine

*Now this is much more -.- wah~!

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space • 25 February 2012 at 2:02 AM

@inhabitant

*claps*
Much much better, Sunshine!! ^__^ â¤ī¸3

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:04 AM

@catehrineprettty
Nope I think its still lacking love sunbeams ^^ but thank you though ^^

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star_daragon4810 • 25 February 2012 at 2:07 AM

@inhabitant
XD Thanks again lol for the ping!! :K Unfortunetly, im horrid at poems of any kind. :K lol! :K

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:08 AM

@star_daragon4810

Its okay ^^ Mine is epically wrong ^^

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space • 25 February 2012 at 2:09 AM

@inhabitant
LOL lacking love?

@star_daragon4810
Why won't you try making one?
Everyone can make poems 😃
Only 4-6 lines =]

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:10 AM

@catherineprettty

Yes it does -.- WAh~! I'll make another one ^^

@star_daragon4810 and @plushie

Yeah try making one ^^

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space • 25 February 2012 at 2:11 AM

Hehe @inhabitant is my echo =]

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star_daragon4810 • 25 February 2012 at 2:13 AM

@catherinepretty
@inhabitant

Causee...i...made one for valentines, but...it was weird. lol! :K

im alright at haikus...but thats it. lol! :K

okay okay...XD Ill do my best...XD Give me a sec. :K

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:14 AM

@catehrineprettty

so Sunbeam then Sunshine? then sunrays XD @celeste

*I have to stop unless I post a poem because this will lead to spamming ^^

Hi there dear valentine
When will your heart be mine?

*still qualifies XD

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space • 25 February 2012 at 2:15 AM

@star_daragon4810 â¤ī¸3

@inhabitant
I love it!!! 😸

Hi there dear valentine
When will your heart be mine?

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star_daragon4810 • 25 February 2012 at 2:17 AM

You are the best.
Nothing can make me love you less
We spend our time, together
and our friendship will last forever.
I hope you know
that you are THE best
and that in my eyes,
you will never be a pest.

o.o its so weird. LOL. XD I cant really think of anything atm...not after today....:K

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celeste • 25 February 2012 at 2:17 AM

@inhabitant
I write depressing poems much better 😸

Like:

My tongue probes my flesh
The metalicness fills my mouth
A searing pain overtakes me.
Tissue pressed to my mouth
Comes out dressed in blood.
I repeat.
I repeat.
I repeat.
The blood I can taste.
I repeat.
I repeat.
I repeat.
And go to sleep forever
Still tasting the blood.

(Lol... something like that happened to me today XD)

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:19 AM

@catherineprettty

^^ Thanks ^^

Oh, my beloved valentine
Open your heart as I give you mine
I don't ask for yours in return
But please don't let my love burn

Oh, Sweet Valentine
When O When will your heart be mine?

*can that be my entry? I enter all 3 of my poems XD

@star_daragon4810

Goodluck ^^

@celeste

XD the first 2 are not depressing but I can make long depressing poems that can make you feel my pain ^^

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space • 25 February 2012 at 2:20 AM

@star_daragon4810 Very nice 😃 😊 Good job!

@celeste WOAH!! ((pure awesomeness))

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