~*Cave In Hearts Contest*~

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celeste • 25 February 2012 at 2:21 AM

@catherineprettty
Can I enter that depressing poem instead? 8D

Or..

To my Valentine:
I hope you know
Somewhere, out
There, somebody
loves you. I love you.
Regards, Friend

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space • 25 February 2012 at 2:22 AM

@celeste Sure thing! 😃

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plushie • 25 February 2012 at 2:23 AM

@Inhabitant alright...

Friends here
I can not do this
I say hey miss
Why is it hard
It's like playing with a card
I don't know what to say
I'll just say hey
Heeyyyy!

LOLWUT. This is boring xD

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star_daragon4810 • 25 February 2012 at 2:24 AM

@catherinepretty
XD Thanks lol..XD There are alot of fantastic ones here too...😋

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:24 AM

@star_daragon4810 LOVE IT ^^

@Celeste EMO Sunrays? LOL

@catherineprettty

Dear Valentine
I want you to be forever mine
But you have your own heart and choice
And you have your own will and voice
Just say it Valentine
That you will never be mine

*number 4 XD I still don't like it ^^

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star_daragon4810 • 25 February 2012 at 2:25 AM

@inhabitant

aww thanks...😋 yours are really awesome...😋

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celeste • 25 February 2012 at 2:26 AM

@catherineprettty
Actually, I want to enter a combination of depressing and lovey-dovey poems XD

Depressing:

Tick, tock, there goes the clock.
I let my imagination run wild.
Fits of ecstasy, the syringe poking my skin,
And afterwards, searing depression.
I long for more, a dancing lust,
Passionate fire, set aflame in my heart.
With hesitation, I pick the the syringe.
Again, it pokes through my skin.
It repeats. Ecstasy. Depression. Lust.
Repeat. Soon there's no more, and
In my depression, I pick up a knife
And...
And...
Reality.
Tick, tock, there goes the clock.

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space • 25 February 2012 at 2:26 AM

@plushie That was sooo cute 😃

@inhabitant >.< Which is your final one? XD

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plushie • 25 February 2012 at 2:27 AM

@Catherineprettty HEY! 😊

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:29 AM

@plushie NO ITS NOT ^^ iTs somewhat deep if put in the eyes of a poet/poem writer ^^

@star_daragon4810

Thanks ^^

@catehrineprettty

The Final Blow The Final Wave
My heart can no longer be saved
It fell in the deepest traps of your heart, this so called love
Why oh why, heavens above
I just want to say goodbye
To sweet and innocent valentine ❤️

I think its better XD you decide ^^ I have 5 so far ^^

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celeste • 25 February 2012 at 2:29 AM

@catherineprettty @inhabitant @plushie

My imagination is dangerous e_o

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plushie • 25 February 2012 at 2:29 AM

@Inhabitant lol xD

@Celeste what?

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:30 AM

@celeste XD mine too ^^

@catherineprettty

LOL you decide ^^ 1, 2, 3, 4 or 5 XD stop me before I make another one ^^

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celeste • 25 February 2012 at 2:30 AM

@plushie
See the depressing poem I love. (If you don't get it, it's about drugs XD)

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space • 25 February 2012 at 2:30 AM

@inhabitant
I choose that one!!! 😃
I love it =]

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:31 AM

@catherineprettty

really? ^^ thats good ^^

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plushie • 25 February 2012 at 2:32 AM

@Celeste I don't know why but I picture you in the future as a druggy and a briber xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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celeste • 25 February 2012 at 2:33 AM

@catherineprettty

A lovey-dovey one:

Every day, I watched you from afar,
And now, we're never gonna be together-
Ever.
Even though I saw you (well, sometimes)
I still don't think that's enough.
But, on this fateful Valentine,
I just wanna say:
I love you.

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space • 25 February 2012 at 2:34 AM

@inhabitant

=] Yehp!

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:37 AM

@celeste

WOAH~! for me? yes I'll be your valentine ^^ LOL ^^

@catehrineprettty

Well goodluck to me then ^^ thanks ^^

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celeste • 25 February 2012 at 2:39 AM

@inhabitant
That poem is part of my VERY personal life XD

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space • 25 February 2012 at 2:40 AM

@celeste , @inhabitant
Hahhahahah!!

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celeste • 25 February 2012 at 2:43 AM

@catherineprettty
Which one's better? 1 (for you) 2 (secret Valentine) 3 (personal life XD) better? XD

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inhabitant • 25 February 2012 at 2:44 AM

@celeste

Oh, ^^

Mine is because I'm Brokenhearted thanks to Brokendreams and my poems lack Affections and Feelings

So how do I make a perfect poem about Infatuation

This is Rain saying I Love YOU ^^

*LOL I'm not spamming I just want to show my statement through my creatures ^^

@plushie ^^

@catehrineprettty

Now I feel like I want to win XD

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space • 25 February 2012 at 3:22 AM

@celeste
I can't choose >.<
They're all so nice!!! XD

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chrismas123 • 25 February 2012 at 3:25 AM

I took 6 lines outta my poem:
I found a Soulmate in guys
What a perfect surprise

As you kill the rest,And you still think I'm the best



And I still find it hard to believe
when you said you'd never leave me

I could get used to this!

😃 My Poem!




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space • 25 February 2012 at 3:27 AM

@chrismas123 Okay 😃

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chrismas123 • 25 February 2012 at 3:29 AM

I edited it anyways so no need it anymore 😊 Thx anyways!

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marie_lily • 25 February 2012 at 8:38 AM

@byfelisa
@catherineprettty

This Valentine is dedicated to a special friend,
Who always has a hand to lend.
Our lasting friendship will always stay true,
No matter where we go or do.
Thank you for being my very best friend,
And all those joyful times we spend.

@2elle2 - Thank you so much, you are the very best friend anyone could ever have. ❤️

___________________________Orignial____________________________

This Valentine is dedicated to a special friend,
Who always has a hand to lend,
To help me pick up an item I dropped,
Or a shoulder to cry on when I can't stop.

Although we fight almost everyday,
A big blowout for every which way,
Our lasting friendship will always stay true,
No matter where we go or do.

Whenever you are feeling low,
You are still always there to show,
How much it means to have me there,
Near or far and everywhere.

My appreciation for you is ever so strong,
Although sometimes it feels so wrong.
We laugh, we cry, we spend time together,
In all different kinds of stormy wheather.

Thank you for being my very best friend,
and all those joyful times we spend.
For all those fights we always repair,
There are even more for when we care.

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space • 25 February 2012 at 8:40 AM

@marie_lily
So marvelous!! ❤️
Thanks for including the original one 😊
Good luck!

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