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balletninja • 4 July 2011 at 4:04 PM
You are all too kind, thank you! I am so happy with the poems, as well π
Deleted • 4 July 2011 at 4:07 PM
@balletninja for some weird reason, your description of your dog reminded me of MINE.π Except my dog is black and not exactly sick... much.ποΏ½ π
lavida20 • 4 July 2011 at 4:50 PM
Is there a limit to how many poems we may submit?
armageddondoll • 4 July 2011 at 4:55 PM
@lavida20 One poem about one of your creatures. I'd prefer if it were no more than one poem per person.
Deleted • 4 July 2011 at 5:17 PM
So many beautiful poemsβ€οΈ TT^TT
nenielsen • 4 July 2011 at 5:24 PM
Here's mine, but it's totally gonna suck:This poem, this poem, is really gonna suck,Cappi, Cappi, my ocean of luck.She's green, she's gold,She's wise, she's old.A Whoon? Yes.How did you guess?Do you think she's too different?Do you think she's too odd?Well then, you, you haven't seen It.Upon my head it will sit. A hat, a hat!You got it right.It's a hen, ready to alight.That's my random poem about my Whoon Cappi and my knit chicken hat. How did that happen?!
Deleted • 4 July 2011 at 5:33 PM
@armageddondollShining sharp talons hungry with spite,A black-winged creature sweeps through the night.With shining black feathers,Eyes gleaming with maliceThis monster's absolutely callous.The image of trickery,hatred,and evilWatch out for this terror,This pesky young weevil.When she looked in the mirror,They say..It shattered under her horrible gaze.For this nightmare is none but the greatly feared terron,The mighty queen Blackshadows,And if you don't heed to this warning,Your family won't have time for mourning.You'll be gone,and so will they.To her majesty,you're only prey.
bunnyshadow • 4 July 2011 at 5:34 PM
Elge's up high in the beautiful night skyMo's up there too flying up highFlowers blooming in the floicol full meadowsWhere these creatures come from you won't know.Flowerfurs and rosse's near and farI think the summer is where they areFlover's giveing luck to all who passEffa's grazeing in one large mass.In the cove of a girl singing something to a egg"All these creatures are in my heartBut my favortie one of them allIs my very first egg the nipha appallsScrufflez is better then any pure bred mareNo other creature I'll ever compare."This is a horrible poem >.< oh well, I tried my best. And that's what counts π
armageddondoll • 4 July 2011 at 5:39 PM
Beautiful poems everyone! The contest is going better than I could have expected! It will certainly be hard choosing π
bunnyshadow • 4 July 2011 at 5:40 PM
@armageddondollthanks fed ur featured
armageddondoll • 4 July 2011 at 5:55 PM
*******OK EVERYONE! UPDATE TIME:**********@nogardragon@balletninja@petpet55@icicle_9510@merlin7576@thepells4@choocalate@randomkitty17@lil_milky_way@cutebluekittykat@nenielsen@bunnyshadow~There will be creatures as prizes thats true,Please don't trade my gifts to you.Their names may be changed, You can change travels thats fine. But please don't forget,These babies were mine!You're poems are great!And your love is shown.Which is why I want these 'prizes'To have some good homes!Please follow these rules, They aren't very hard. Be glad that you came,Because I'm glad you took part.~(YOUR POEMS ARE FANTASTIC EVERYONE π KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, AND BE PATIENT )
Deleted • 4 July 2011 at 5:58 PM
@armageddondoll Can I join???
armageddondoll • 4 July 2011 at 5:58 PM
@bluegirl80Of course! The more the merrier π
Deleted • 4 July 2011 at 6:07 PM
@armageddondollYAY! The creaure Im doing is not currently in my cove, it got a new travel, so... its still mine.~~~~~~~~~~~Left in the rain. Told I was only trash. I was worthless, Then she left. Nothing could mend my heart You ripped it into peices to small. The steps of the adpotion center, So cold. Im whisked away inside, Where its nice and warm. Given love and care. Shes great, she loves me but, She reminds me how I was left. She rips my heart into smaller peices lost forever. I see my small Rhine asleep in my lap. Shivering, Shes having nightmares again. I hold her in my arms, I sing her a song. She wakes up slowly, And hugs me tight. "I will never leave you, Your MINE." I tell my little sweet Rhine.
petpet55 • 4 July 2011 at 6:18 PM
@armageddondollAww your poem is so sweet πWow I don't envy you, there are so much awesome poems it will be so hard to choose π
balletninja • 4 July 2011 at 6:20 PM
@arnageddondoll π Excited!
armageddondoll • 4 July 2011 at 6:25 PM
@petpet55Yeah, its DEFINITELY going to be hard >_< Buuuuuuut, There might be a surprise ! π
petpet55 • 4 July 2011 at 6:28 PM
@armageddondollAw that's awesome π
balletninja • 4 July 2011 at 6:29 PM
SURPRISE, all of these are amazing β€οΈ
Deleted • 4 July 2011 at 6:29 PM
@armageddondoll okay here it is:I had no shoulder to cry on,Nobody to care about me,I felt so alone, My friends back-stabbed me,Left me like a dog without a bone.I felt betrayed, I couldn't trust anyone.But I wasn't alone,I had my KoolKat,my one and own.I had a true friend, no longer alone,They may be a pixel,But it was love at first sight,My darling KoolKat, so charming in the light.One look turned my frown upside down,my anger and pain became like a shower of happy rain.His sleek, orange body,His vibrant green eyes,Couldn't make me cry.Others would think I was crazy,But my brain ain't hazy!That olimpt made me smile, and as tears rolled down my faceI looked at KoolKat's face, shining with grace.My lips can't help but smile,It feels like he could take me miles from my sorrow,I love you KoolKat Today and Tomorrow, forever and always!
Aw! No one commented on mine. LOL! xD!!!!! People always do that in real life! xD
armageddondoll • 4 July 2011 at 6:32 PM
@bluegirl80 Very nice. I like the ending alot. I didn't expect a Rhine π
lil_milky_way • 4 July 2011 at 6:32 PM
Ooooooooooo surprisesπ lol but I don't want to be the person to ask what the surprise is xD
Deleted • 4 July 2011 at 6:33 PM
@armageddondoll xD π
armageddondoll • 4 July 2011 at 6:35 PM
@icicle_9510Very heartfelt π
Deleted • 4 July 2011 at 6:36 PM
I have a sad one I would do, but Im not in a sad mood.
Deleted • 4 July 2011 at 6:38 PM
@bluegirl80 i've focused all my saddest thoughts on a story i just wrte T^T
Deleted • 4 July 2011 at 6:39 PM
@icicle_9510 I wanna post it... but...
armageddondoll • 4 July 2011 at 6:39 PM
@lil_milky_wayLol, the surprise is going to be a surprise until the very end π
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