The Epic Story of Warriors!!

sakura2596 • 20 May 2012 at 11:44 PM

I wrote a Warriors story for a writing assignment a school. Its with my cats,and my clan. I got 4 on all (we use standered based grading) and successful on behavior 😊 It has Silverkit/paw/pelt in it. And be warned,it is 22 1/2 pages long. Ill type the opening,tell me if you wanna continue. 😊

Ps,there are two clans,Willowclan and Shineclan. In this case,Shineclan is the main.


Inspired and based of the series,Warriors,by Erin Hunter.



Four strong and heath kits are born in Shineclan and their names are Silverkit,Cherrykit,Mousekit,and Wingkit. Like all kits,they wish to be leader of their clan,but this is the story of one of those kits,and how her dream comes true...

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Tell me to continue or post 😊


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hay7199 • 20 May 2012 at 11:46 PM

*BOOOOOOOOP* POSTIE LINE BREAKER THINGY!

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 12:15 AM

@hay7199 can you help me Ping?


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chapus • 21 May 2012 at 12:25 AM

Hi. 😃

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 12:32 AM

@chapus2009 thanks,hi.


It was a bright and sunny morning and the birdsong sand gracefully. Silverkit woke her littermates up to play mossball. Today was a special day for the four of them. Today was the day they were to be made apprentices and given a mentor.

^^ more on next post! 😊

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 12:33 AM

@sakura2596 Hehe, welcome. 😊

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 12:41 AM

@chapus2009 next post! Do you like the story so far?


"Mousekit wake up! Cherrykit! Wingkit! You too!" Silverkit hopped around,trying to wake them up.
"Can't we go back to sleep?"Mousekit mumbled.
"We fell asleep late last night. I'm tired."Cherrykit said.
"Me too." Wingkit turned to his side.
"Okay then, I guess you guys don't want to be apprentices." Silverkit joked.
"Of corse we do!"The other three jumped out of their nests.
"Oh look,you guys are up now." Silverkit laughed.
"You tricked us!" Cherykit said playfully.
"Yep. Now lets play mossball!"Silverkit bounded over to pick it up.
The three began to play with the moss.

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 12:44 AM

@sakura2596 Yup! I enjoy reading it. I can wait for the rest! 😃

Hey, have you read my story? You know, Jane and Yugana?

Random fact: My hair is soft. 😸

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 12:52 AM

@chapus2009
Yep! I'm waiting for the rest 😋

Random fact: My eyes are blue. xD

Paragraph 2:

"Can we play too?'Arrowkit asked and padded over,along with Ivykit and Flamekit.
Silverkit thought for a bit,they were much younger by two moons."Sure!"She finally said.
Flamekit pawed at the moss,throwing it to Mousekit. Mousekit hit it with his tail,towards Arrowkit. Arrowkit leaped up to catch it,falling back down,missing the catch.

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 12:53 AM

@sakura2596 I wrote page 4 and I'm writing page 5, but slowly, since I have lots of school work these days... ;-;

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 1:03 AM

@chapus2009 Im excited I wanna read it 😋

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 1:08 AM

@sakura2596 Here is page 4 if you have not read it: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/04/jane-and-yugana-page-4_17.html

Better get back to your story! 😉

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 10:54 AM

@chapus2009 kk

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The mossball rolled out into the clearing.
"I'll get it!"Silverkit volunteered.
"Quiet!"Flowerpelt toldthem,"Flamekit,Arrowkit,Ivykit,it's time to eat."
"We gotta go now,I was hungry anyways."Ivykit and the others bounded over to their mother.
Silverkit continued to slink out of the nursery to fetch the mossball.

^^ End of Paragraph 2

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 10:55 AM

@sakura2596 Try putting spaces after someone talks, it makes it easier to read.

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 11:01 AM

@chapus2009 k,i have a force of habit not to i guess,but I will.


Paragraph 3:


Silverkit searched for the mossball. The sun gleamed in her eyes,making it harder for her to see. She twitched her ears,hearing meows in the distant part of the camp. She slid closer,trying to make out the words.
"Shinestar," Silverkit heard Yellowtail,the medicine cat speak.

^^ not the end of 3

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 11:03 AM

@sakura2596 Oh, I see.

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 11:12 AM

@chapus2009

"Yes Yellowtail? Have you gotten a sign from Starclan?" He asked.
'I have,but I do not know what it means," She said,"They told w=me that darkness will come and the clans will be lost in their own minds."
"I see. Anything else?" He mewed.
"Nothing."
"Very well. Until we know what this means,we will keep it aside." he told her.
""Okay Shinestar." She said,and began to walk out of out of his den.
Silverkit quickly grabbed the moss with her teeth and sped back into the nursery before Yellowtail spotted her.

^ End of paragraph 3

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 11:14 AM

@sakura2596 Keep writing! Cause you got a fan! WOOT WOOT! XD

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 11:28 AM

@chapus2009 XD


Paragraph 4

Silverkit walked back into the nursery with the mossball in her jaws.
"You got it!" Wingkit cheered.
"Yep! Should we continue?" Silverkit asked.
"Nah,Shinestar is about to announce a meeting. We're going to become apprentices soon!" Mousekit told the three.
"Kits!" Their mother called.
"Yes mother?" Silverkit asked. Silvermist,their mother,stared blankly at them. Her blue eyes looking at them. It must have been hard for her,since she was blind.
"Do you guys need to be groomed? I don't want you four to look like you haven't slept for moons when you become apprentices."
"Sure!" Their hurried over to their mother.

^ end of 4

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 11:32 AM

@sakura2596 *does Me Gusta face*

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 11:40 AM

@chapus2009 XD wait,whats that mean? :S


Paragraph 5

"All cats old enough to cats their own prey gather beneath the highrock for a clan meeting!" Shinestar stood proudly above his clan.
"We're going to become 'paws!" Cherrykit ran out into the clearing whish was already filled with different pelts.
"Silverkit and her littermates,as well as Flamekit,Ivykit,and Arrowkit came out with their mothers.

^ Not end

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 11:46 AM

@sakura2596 It's a meme. XD Just search 'Me Gusta' in Google. Me Gusta means 'I like' in spanish.

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 11:59 AM

@chapus2009 oh XD



"Congrats." Silverkit,Cherrykit,Wingkit,and Mousekit turned around to see their father,Redclaw.
"Thanks Redclaw!" They said,hopping around their father.

^ not end

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 1:26 PM

@sakura2596

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 1:39 PM

@chapus2009

Shinestar continued the meeting," Shineclan is strong and has great cats. Today we welcome many cats to our clan. I have many things to say today starting with Heatherpaw! Honeypaw! Please step up,as well as Snowfoot and Goldenshade."
"Snowfoot,Golenshade. Do you think Heatherpaw and Honeypaw have learned the warrior code to its full content?"
"Yes." They said.
"Honeypaw! Heatherpaw! Do you promise to uphold the right of the warrior code even with the cost of your life?"
"I do." They told him.
"Then by the powers of Starclan I give you your warrior names. Heatherpaw,from now on you will be known as Heathershade. Honeypaw,from now on you shall be know as Honeyheart. Starclan honors you both. You two are now full warriors of Shineclan."
Honeyheart! Heathershade!" The clan chanted.
"Now we have new apprentices to name. They have aged six moons and their ceremony is due. Silverkit,Cherrykit,Mousekit,Wingkit."
The four kits stepped forward.

^^end of 5

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 1:44 PM

@sakura2596 Love it so far! Keep up the good work! ❤️

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 1:57 PM

@chapus2009 tanks. ill continue soon. My fingers hurt from typing. XD

chapus • 21 May 2012 at 2:04 PM

@sakura2596 Ok, LOL. XD

Deleted • 21 May 2012 at 2:06 PM

@sakura2596 E.P.I.C! You MUST MUST MUST MUST keep writing. (While after your break) 😋

sakura2596 • 21 May 2012 at 2:07 PM

@albinodragon i will,dont worry XD