Another Poem! XD

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 7:39 PM

Here it is! (Made by me 😋)

I am walking,
On a path.
A sweet melody plays,
Yet I cannot hear it.

I keep walking,
And the melody still plays.
Around me is nothing,
Just darkness and lost souls.

Yet they can't hurt me,
Because I am already dead,
They don't see me.
But I still can't hear the melody.

The melody is not music,
Nor is it singing.
That melody is mine.
It's the beat of my life.
Yet I have lost it.
That is why I can't hear it.

When I could hear it,
I would laugh,
Thinking I would never die..

Likes: 7
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sanibel_18 • 20 July 2012 at 7:40 PM

❤️

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 7:43 PM

@sanibel_18 I'm glad you ❤️ it. XD

sanibel_18 • 20 July 2012 at 7:45 PM

@chapus2009 can i maybe put it on one of my creature's profile?😸

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 7:45 PM

@sanibel_18 Of course! Just put credit, ok? 😸 But you might not have enough space. D:

sanibel_18 • 20 July 2012 at 7:46 PM

@chapus2009 okay.😸

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 7:47 PM

@sanibel_18 Help me ping? 😊

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faybaybay • 20 July 2012 at 7:52 PM

Brutiful :'D

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 7:56 PM

@faybaybay Haha, thanks. 😊
@sanibel_18 Thanks! 😃

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nana • 20 July 2012 at 7:57 PM

@chapus2009

like it 😊

sanibel_18 • 20 July 2012 at 7:58 PM

your welcome!

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chapus • 20 July 2012 at 7:59 PM

@nana I'm glad you like it! 😊

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@chapus2009

guess what!😃 i'm sanibel! xD

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 8:04 PM

@blossom Oops. XD LOL.

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chibidarkness • 20 July 2012 at 8:05 PM

Not disturbing me. Why do you even HAVE a dislike count? This is just...amazing. 😱
I love poems, I love poets, and you are one!

Deleted • 20 July 2012 at 8:07 PM

LOL xD

decks123456 • 20 July 2012 at 8:08 PM

I love it! 😃

@chapus2009

whitefire • 20 July 2012 at 8:09 PM

@chapus2009 Nice!

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 8:10 PM

@decks123456 Thanks! 😃
@chibidarkness I dunno. XD And thanks for the compliment! ❤️
@whitefire Thanks! 😊

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pinkred • 20 July 2012 at 8:12 PM

I like it.
@chapus2009 Can you make a other poem please?

5eggs79 • 20 July 2012 at 8:12 PM

I like it! 😊

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 8:12 PM

@pinkred I have a few. 😸 Thanks for the like! 😃

katelyn • 20 July 2012 at 8:13 PM

@chapus2009
Wow! I could never be that creative! I'm lovin' it!
Can I put it on my creatures profile if you don't mind?

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 8:14 PM

@katelyn *MacDonalds theme song* LOL. XD Sure! Just give credit ok? 😸

chibidarkness • 20 July 2012 at 8:14 PM

@chapus2009

Well I think you have so much potential, my advice would be to try and maybe try different subjects and themes with richer vocabulary? ^^
Go on! I'd love to see more of your poems, you have a way with word, that's true!

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 8:15 PM

@chibidarkness Sure. I shall try. But knowing three languages its not helpfull. XD Too much for the brain! Haha. And thanks again for the compliments! 😊

katelyn • 20 July 2012 at 8:16 PM

@chapus2009
Sure! Can you adopt some of my commons? I just got one of the new ones at the cave, but then I forgot I already have 300!

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 8:16 PM

@katelyn You have any Puffups? 😃

katelyn • 20 July 2012 at 8:17 PM

@chapus2009
I can give you all of them except the hatched one.😊