You guessed it... POEM! XD

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 8:39 PM

Since a friend asked me... here it is! Another poem for you guys! 😊

A simple lie,
Does not just die,
It scars your soul,
And drags you into an endless hole.

People lied to me,
But you can't see,
The pain that it caused me,
For you have never known this pain.

I try to act like I'm not hurt,
And hope I will not alert,
I hope my eyes will not get watery,
Around you or the others around me.

Yet at night,
It just seems like a fight,
A fight against my emotions,
Who are as big as an ocean.

And every day,
I wish there was hope,
Yet it seems so far away,
So I have to do is to keep holding on the rope.

@chibidarkness
@pinkred
@sanibel_18
@katelyn

This poem was made by me. Do not use/publish this poem without my permission, thank you!

katelyn • 20 July 2012 at 8:40 PM

@chapus2009
Cool!😃

sanibel_18 • 20 July 2012 at 8:40 PM

@chapus2009 amazing!❤️

syndrome • 20 July 2012 at 8:41 PM

@chapus2009

*wipes tears away and claps*

pinkred • 20 July 2012 at 8:42 PM

@chapus2009
I LUV it! It has feelings that make a poem... nice

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 8:42 PM

@katelyn Thanks! 😃
@pirateseaz Haha, thanks a lot! ❤️
@sanibel_18 Yes, I know. XD Thanks for the like! 😊
@pinkred Thanks! 😊


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chibidarkness • 20 July 2012 at 8:48 PM

This is pretty cool! O:
But again, my advice would be to change themes, something lighter, not that dark, you have the ability to write something wonderful on nature, for example. ^^

chapus • 20 July 2012 at 9:17 PM

@chibidarkness Actually, I wrote a short poem of the four seasons. 😸

Link: http://eggcave.com/forums/topic/23974