Story

chapus • 1 August 2012 at 11:31 PM

I wrote this in a PM with @pebblestar-nightclan. O3O I edited it a bit.

The blisfull tree is not carrier of leaves or flowers. Sadly, nothing grow on it's once plentiful branches. The broken, dark tree must quietly watch as the seasons and the cold nights alone passed by. But, the lonely tree will no longer be alone. For a girl wearing a black leather jacket comes. The tree saw this little girl grow up. The once cheerful little girl wearing a pink skirt is also gone with the young times of the tree. The child is crying her worries and anger out. The tree wish he could do the same. But alast, he is just a tree. He watched as the girl climbed up his fragile branches. He listened to the cracks that broke the silence of the empty field. The girl then looked ahead, "You know Gral... sometimes we seem lonely... but all we have to do is find the true us... and we are no longer lonely." The girl even gave him a name! Gral listened to her words and remembered them by heart. So, everyday the girl came, telling Gral her worries.

I shall put the second part in the post. Darn 1500 words limit. >:[

pinkred • 2 August 2012 at 2:01 PM

@chapus2009
I like it! Such a story bettween a tree and girl.

determination • 3 August 2012 at 1:06 AM

@chapus2009
This story sound somewhat familiar to a one I've heard before.. That I simply can't recall. bravo! I'll be looking forward to the second part!

omgtofubebe • 3 August 2012 at 1:10 AM

@chapus2009

Interesting story.

chapus • 3 August 2012 at 1:10 AM

@pinkred Thanks for posting and liking! 😃
@determination Thanks! 😃

The child kept coming, sometimes at night and even at day. Even if it rained, she would come. And little by little, the tree found happiness. His leaves grew back and flowers blossomed once again on the lonely tree's branches. Birds came and the girl would still come back and talk to Gral. But then, the girl was no longer coming. Gral then slowly started fading again for the second time... Would the little girl come back? He was so confused, angry and sad... He just wished he could cry like humans could. So he used his leaves as his cold, lonely tears. He slowly saw each of them fall down and float away in the gust of winds.... And the girl still never came back... So once again, Gral waited all alone in the field, by himself, for someone else to bring him back happiness into his heart....

And one day, another girl came.

Moral of the story. You cannot grow without happiness.


END OF STORY. Sorry for it's shortness. ☹️

hedwig68 • 3 August 2012 at 1:11 AM

This is great! 😃 It reminds me of one of my favorite books when I was a little kid. I think it was called "The Giving Tree" but I like this one better. 😉

determination • 3 August 2012 at 1:11 AM

@chapus2009
Short but sweet. Great story. *Sniffles* 😋

chapus • 3 August 2012 at 1:12 AM

@omgtofubebe 😸
@hedwig68 Thanks! 😃 Never heard of that story thought. 😋
@determination Thanks. ^-^

determination • 3 August 2012 at 1:14 AM

@hedwig68
Oh.. the giving tree.. I remembered I liked that book too. But this one is by far better! 😋

chapus • 3 August 2012 at 4:23 PM

@determination Awww, thanks. 😃

hatterhat • 3 August 2012 at 10:00 PM

It's a very nice read with a pleasant meaning to it. Overall, the description wasn't bad and the plot was very interesting. I enjoyed reading this. 😊

chapus • 12 August 2012 at 6:51 PM

@hatterhat Thank you! 😃 I'm glad you liked it. 😊