Permanent Darkness

seaangel • 18 December 2012 at 7:46 PM

@bunnyshadow

We all ready started.

fuzzykins412 • 18 December 2012 at 7:54 PM

@seaangel

C:
Zach: Well, Hellloooo Ally! *offers a small grin* XDD

@jupiter_hollow
Good night!


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Zach stood outside his place that he called 'home' , and got up, his hands stuck in his jeans, part of his hair covering up his left eye, giving him an 'emo' look. Deciding that today would be a good day to work out, he began his day with 50 quick pushups. Looking up, he spotted a gorgeous girl talking to a man, maybe around 30 years old. Approaching her, he extended a muscular hand, offering a bright smile. " The name's Zach. " he introduced, nodding to both of them.


{ I'm assuming they haven't met each other yet? }

Deleted • 18 December 2012 at 8:19 PM

@seaangel very interesting.... Form!:

Name: Hannah Evangeline Hawkins.
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearace: Waist length black hair. Her hair always seems to shine no matter what. She has icy blue eyes and stands at a height of around 7 feet. She isn't fat but isn't overly skinny either. She wears a pink headband, light blue glasses, a pink tanp top under a green aero sweater, skinny jeans with a jewled heart on one of the back pockets and purple flip flops.
Personality: She hates being the one others looks up to to voice their opinions and stand up for them. She can get very emotional and other times she is like a time bomb ticking away. She is not afraid to talk back and is very stubborn at times.Power: She can basically lift, push or carry anything you ask her to. Cars, Boulders and often she can use it to what she thinks is her advantage.
Side: Light
History: She lived on a farm with her parents, her horse, her dog and the other animals. She was homeschooled and had a fairly quiet life. Kids always teased her about her hair always glowing and some even said she was cursed. Since then she hasn't been afraid to fire back which sometimes isn't good for her. Since the Lunars sent the world into permanent darkness her life has been quite hectic but she loves it.
Other: Permanent Darkness

bunnyshadow • 18 December 2012 at 9:25 PM

@seaangel Eh whatever. I guess I wont join then.

jupiter_hollow • 19 December 2012 at 5:54 AM

@seaangel @fuzzykins412 Back. 😋 Well, wouldn't you know, even a weirdo like me needs her daily dose of actual sleep. xD Sadly, I'm not nocturnal .-. Yet.
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Nodding his head, Oustere quickly shuffled past Ally, eager to go and warn the rest of the Lighters. A faint pair of footsteps nearby, however, alarmed him. He himself had no light at his disposal, but the dim gleam of the moon (sun) was enough to illuminate the stranger - it was Zack, or Mr Drew as Oustere was used to calling him.

Automatically, a smile settled on his face as the boy extended a hand to Ally.
"Good mornin' Mist'r Drew." he greeted as usual, lowering his head in a slight bow. His merry smile was now directed at Ally. "I see you two haven't met each other yet." he chuckled childishly, placing a massive hand on Zack's shoulder. "I'll leave you to it then. But don't you forget 'bout the borders!" he warned, in a warm tone that suggested anything but seriousess.

seaangel • 19 December 2012 at 7:38 AM

@izzfred
Your character's appearance sounds very Mary Sue-ish. To clarify when you say ' hair as black as a crow flying through a pitch black night. ' it's already paints a nice picture of the hair, but then you say, 'It seems to shine no matter what.' That means that her hair is perfect no matter what. 'She isn't large, but isn't overly skinny', even though I use that almost exact sentence in my own forum, the character is also petite, usually that's a very pretty person.
What I'm saying is, I cannot accept your character do to Mary Sue-ism.
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@fuzzykins412
@jupiter_hollow

I'll post on my side...maybe.

jupiter_hollow • 19 December 2012 at 12:41 PM

@seaangel Let's clarify... You canot accept her character (don't forget she's not that experienced in RPs) due to Mary-Suism, even though your characters also used to be Mary Sues? And truth be told, partially still are. A Mary Sue is someone who both looks and ACTS perfect... Sure, her does, but so does yours. Look at Ally's form - not one bad thing about her appearance or personality. I'm not comfortable in saying this since you're my friend, but Izzfred is too. You accuse her without seeing your own mistakes, when you could dismiss this mistake and help her build her character up by guiding her through the roleplay. That's what people did to YOU while you were still learning, am I right?

bunnyshadow • 19 December 2012 at 1:33 PM

~Form~
Name: Lake Virelia
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Appearance: Lake has hair so dark it looks blue. It reaches just below his ears. He would have bangs covering both his eyes, if he didn't spike them up. His eyes are dark blue, with hints of other shades of blue. His skin isn't pale, but isn't fairly tanned, either.
Personality: He is an evil person. If he would only stop tormenting others, and just try to feel at least a tiny speak of happiness, perhaps, those cold eyes that showed no feeling, would soften until they would express warmth and comfort.
Power: His amazing looks. Jk. XD The real one is below.
Power: The power of ice. Anything and everything that has to do with ice, or sometimes even the cold, is under his command. He can freeze liquids, and can even summon a snowstorm, though it would recquire time and massive amounts of energy. He usually only does that in life threatening situations, to escape.
Side: Lunar, if only for poeer
History: He has been hurt and abandoned to much. Let us just say there is no turning back.
Other: He secretly likes rabbits. Permanent Darkness.

jupiter_hollow • 19 December 2012 at 2:05 PM

@bunnyshadow Thought you weren't joining ;D Eep, Lake DOES sound hot. >w<

takaedakumi • 19 December 2012 at 4:20 PM

@seaangel This sounds kind of like a mix between that new Revolution show and My Little Pony with a twist. o.O

seaangel • 19 December 2012 at 5:23 PM

@bunnyshadow
Accepted, also I love all your characters for two reasons. One, they are almost always evil, and two, the evils usually like something small and fluffy. XD
@jupiter_hollow
Okay, you have my hands tied. Izz can join, but can she just tweak her form a little? Though, I can point out a few things out in your statement that aid me.
@takatheeducatedkid
Revolution? I've never heard of that show.
@fuzzykins412
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Ally blushed and shook his hand slightly, "I'm Ally, do you think you could help me out with the boarders? I mean, you do have powers right?" The girl walked to the gate that surronded the village, opening it slightly and looking back, smiling.

jupiter_hollow • 19 December 2012 at 5:26 PM

@seaangel Because it irks you, right? Nevermind, I'm getting a bit too harsh here. It's your roleplay so you can do whatever you want. I just gave you advice. I can help @Izzfred.

bunnyshadow • 19 December 2012 at 5:35 PM

@seaangel @jupiter_hollow I'll type an intro soon xD
Lake: *leans in close to Aizel* Hey there... 😉
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jupiter_hollow • 19 December 2012 at 5:36 PM

@bunnyshadow

Aizel: Aha, careful there Lunar kid. *glare*

bunnyshadow • 19 December 2012 at 5:42 PM

@jupiter_hollow
Lake: *backs her into a wall* Careful of what? *temperature lowers a few dozen degrees*

fuzzykins412 • 19 December 2012 at 5:48 PM

@seaangel


Zach nodded. " Hello, Oustere. " he greeted, grinning at the man. Turning to Ally, his grin grew bigger. " Well, hey there, Ally. I take it that you've met Outstere? " he replied, eye brows raised. " And of course, I would love to help you with the borders. " Grinning, he placed a muscular arm around Ally, and continued walking forward.

jupiter_hollow • 19 December 2012 at 5:49 PM

@bunnyshadow

Aizel: *growls* Or I'll go psycho fire and burn your guts.

seaangel • 19 December 2012 at 5:52 PM

@bunnyshadow Okay, that's fine...wait, I thought you weren't going to join.
@jupiter_hollow
No it doesn't irk me, but @izzfred can join as long as you help her along the way.

fuzzykins412 • 19 December 2012 at 5:52 PM

@jupiter_hollow

Zach: Oh my, having trouble now, are we?

bunnyshadow • 19 December 2012 at 5:52 PM

@jupiter_hollow
Lake: *chuckles* Is that so? *kisses her*
Me: O.O

How should I start?
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fuzzykins412 • 19 December 2012 at 5:53 PM

I don't think Aizel is going to have a very good reaction. o-o

bunnyshadow • 19 December 2012 at 5:57 PM

@seaangel I forgot to put permanent darkness in the other section xD

jupiter_hollow • 19 December 2012 at 5:58 PM

@seaangel DEAL! 😃

@bunnyshadow O-O @fuzzykins412 You guessed right... ^^"

Aizel: *snarls* *bites him*

fuzzykins412 • 19 December 2012 at 6:01 PM

Name: Amber
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance: Amber is not a perfect model, nor is she very ugly. Her hair is a soft, amber color,falling down to her waist, and leading to the name her parents gave her. With her large, almond shaped emerald green eyes, she can be very convincing, pleading people for aid, or whatever she needs. She does not have a perfect hourglass shape, but she does have a few curves, and a slight hourglass shape.
Personality: Amber is cautious of strangers, due to her past. She is not angered easily, though when angered, is a lethal weapon, and takes a long time to calm down. As she is able to hold grudges for a long time, you'll most likely stay on her 'death' list for quite a long time, before she goes easy on you, and forgives you. She does have a sense of humor,but rarely uses it, and almost never shows the kind side of her.
Power: Amber is a fighter, trained in battle, so she is extremely good when it comes to fighting, although she doesn't win every battle she gets into.
Side: Lunar
History: Amber is very secretive of her history, and it takes a lot to pry it out of her.
Other: Permanent Darkness

@seaagnel

Deleted • 19 December 2012 at 6:12 PM

@jupiter_hollow I forgot to put something in her history. Her hair always shining for some reason is the thing that's bad about her appearance. Kids always teased her and some avoided her saying she was "cursed". Being over-protective of herfriends sometimes puts her in a bad spot and that's the flaw in her personality.

I'm not trying to fire back or anything but it's a bit insulting. I know what a mary sue is and I don't Mary sue or God-mod.

jupiter_hollow • 19 December 2012 at 6:17 PM

@izzfred I'm not the one you should be talking to, if anything. I'm on your side, not the other way around, alright? And I'm not saying you god-mod. However, about the Mary Sue business... I'll explain in PM.

Deleted • 19 December 2012 at 6:19 PM

@jupiter_hollow ok. *calms down*

takaedakumi • 19 December 2012 at 7:46 PM

@seaangel

Name: Lucio

Age: 17

Gender: Male
Appearance: Very tall and a bit thin, Lucio has short black hair and blue eyes. He has rectangular black-rimmed glasses which rest perfectly on his nose. Lucio wears dockers and button up shirts, usually blue ones. He checks his expensive silver watch often from his right arm.

Personality: Calm and collected, always tries to work things out inside his head before making a move.

Power: Ability to lift things with Psychic energy and potentially use them as weapons.

Side: Undisclosed

History: Lucio doesn't remember much about his past, all he really remembers is that at age six, he was found wandering a town by himself with no idea who he was. He has lived as an adopted child since and only recently left home.

Other: Lucio usually has his face buried in a good book, and doesn't normally talk much about himself. We are all in... Permanent Darkness!

I hope it's okay for me to not reveal my side until later? Don't worry, I already have a side in mind. I also hope it isn't too late to join...?

bunnyshadow • 20 December 2012 at 1:13 AM

@seaangel
@jupiter_hollow Lake: *winces* Well. That wasnt fairly nice.
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He is silent. He is dangerous. He could be anywhere. He could be behind anyone. He could be besides any of the children of the light generation. The victim would turn just in time to see his eyes glint with malice, and the flash of a blade, before they would fall to the floor seeing nothing but Death.

And so, that is how he ended up by the borders of the village full of suspected children of the light generation. He was only told to kill anyone that was alone, or asleep. Lake looked out from behind a large tree, his blue eyes quickly examining his surroundings. Dressed completely in black, he was almost invisible. More weapons than necessary were strapped to different parts of his body.

Faster than what would be believed possible, he climbed up the tree, ran along a branch, and jumped onto one of the closest roofs, before collapsing so he was belly down on the roof, just in case his eyes betrayed him and that someone had seen him.

seaangel • 22 December 2012 at 6:13 PM

@bunnyshadow
@takatheeducatedkid Accepted.
@jupiter_hollow
@fuzzykins412 Accepted...I think. XD
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Ally suddenly came to stop and turned around. There was a slight fear in her eyes as she slid out of Zach's grasp. She slowly looked towards one of the roofs and frowned. There was something out of place, a small outline of a body.

"There's an assassin, you might want to back up. I'm a little, explosive." Ally said walking forward and talked to the owner of the small hut in a hushed whisper. The women nodded and gather five small children and walked out of the small hut.