Orphanage (re-do) P R I V I T E

spiritwolf3 • 26 December 2012 at 5:28 PM

Brendon looked up without speaking again before he glanced down at the kitchen floor once again. His big blue eyes glistened in the early morning light. He didn't even want to look at the the food let alone eat it. It looked as if it had been laying in the sunlight for a week! Brendon stepped back and crossed his arms gently.
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jupiter_hollow • 26 December 2012 at 5:30 PM

@ninjagirl *thunks you on the back of the head* .-. @spiritwolf3 @seaangel
Is everybody okay with my post? 😋 Spirit?
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Finally, the feeling of weightlessness ended when the swaying Honda pulled to a stop steadily, making a gliding turn and letting the engine die down with a whine. She was currently stretched over the back seat, nearly melting in her place. Lazily slinging her arms over to the door, she tugged the lock open and slipped out, dragging the packed rucksack along with her and securing it onto her shoulder.

First thing she realized - the hag lived in the middle of nowhere! Aizel stood in front of a house, rather large and wide, but otherwise unbearably dull. The simple white facade... And the worn down machogany door... Still, she though, it couldn't be worse than the obnoxious smile happy family she now strived to get away from.

As she walked ahead, kicking dust in the air to entertain herself, Aizel dully stared forward, tipping to the left so her stature was lightly twisted.

Hmm... Wonder if there were any cigarettes allowed in there? Ah, how about alchohol! She grinned. The old hag running all this nonsense would probably easily be fooled around.

At one point, she felt the irking presence of the foster parents behind her but refrained from any snappy comments. Shortly after, Aizel the raven head noticed a slight sound of another engine and tires plummeting down along the steep path they had come from.

With a roaring rush, a mazda barreled nearby, speeding up towards the house. Aizel swore, the madman driving had been ready to crash head first into the building, but with a sharp screech, the breaks halted the vehicle in place.

"Hu?" she only managed to mutter out before a large pile of gooey skin mass trickled from the driver's seat.

"Mrs. Bessy!" her foster parents hurried ahead, leaving her to frown. Wait, so that was a human!
"Ugh." she gagged.

ninjagirl • 26 December 2012 at 5:33 PM

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As she padded down the stairs, she noticed the two adolescents in the kitchen. Oh no. She didn't want to socialise. Awkwardly, she stepped into the kitchen, grabbed some food and headed back out. She walked into a corner, sat down and began to eat. Honestly, she didn't care about what food she ate anymore. Food was food and that was that.

spiritwolf3 • 26 December 2012 at 5:36 PM

It's fine ;3 @jupiter_hollow
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jupiter_hollow • 26 December 2012 at 5:38 PM

@spiritwolf3 @ninjagirl @seaangel who's controlling the hag? 😱

spiritwolf3 • 26 December 2012 at 5:39 PM

Idunno o.o
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ninjagirl • 26 December 2012 at 5:43 PM

@jupiter_hollow I think either @spiritwolf3 or you should ^-7 <-- keeping that mistake to show that I'm a fail face. XD
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jupiter_hollow • 26 December 2012 at 6:24 PM

@spiritwolf3 @ninjagirl Ah, well, you guys okay with me controlling her just for a tiny bit? If I'm not good then let someone else take her? ^^
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ninjagirl • 26 December 2012 at 6:26 PM

@jupiter_hollow I think it's cool XD wbu @spiritwolf3?
Oh I have to sleep soon :c

seaangel • 26 December 2012 at 9:29 PM

@jupiter_hollow fine by me.
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Ally nearly jumped out of her skin when the screech enter the house. The girl, however, scurried to the window to find a girl, about her age, outside the house. There was also two cars, one of memory and the other not.

"A newbie." The young girl muttered as she kept watching, feet ready to turn and go back to the table when needed. Her eyes widened as she saw a couple talking to the pile of goo that was slowly coming out of the car.

spiritwolf3 • 27 December 2012 at 7:05 AM

Sure fine with me c;
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jupiter_hollow • 27 December 2012 at 7:27 AM

@spiritwolf3 Yay @ninjagirl @seaangel
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For the first time having seen the gooey ugly woman, Aizel had no desire anymore to enter the house. However, her foster parents and the slimy piece of meat moved to walk towards the house and she was forced to follow, oh so reluctantly. Keeping her distance, she eavesdropped on the conversation.

"Oh, I assure you your daughter will receive the best of tutelage anyone can give her. The children here are all well-behaved and have their tempers in the past." the slimy goo talked... A raspy, screech-like voice emited from what seemed to be her face.

Her foster parents were practically beaming.
"Thank you so much for agreeing to accept her Mrs. Bessy. We will be sure to check up from time to time!"
At one point, they were right in front of the doorstep, all four of them and the hag began fiddling with the locked door. At the back of her head, Aizel wondered why she locked the kids in.

Just as the lock clicked open, she moved her gaze from the old hag to sweep along the house. With the corner of her eyes she noticed inquizitive eyes staring at her from the window on her right. Two pairs of blue eyes - one a startlingly bright hue and the others, mirroring the color of the sea. She cocked her head, staring back in amusement.

ninjagirl • 27 December 2012 at 7:32 AM

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Katia kept in the corner, her legs crossed as she gulped down the last of her meal. A new recruit.. She cocked her head and tried to get a better view from where she was sitting.

spiritwolf3 • 27 December 2012 at 7:33 AM

Brendon jumped in shock when the door clicked. He dropped the cigarette putting it out very rapidly and the dirty smell still lingered in the air. Brendon stepped back and tilted his head. Brendon knew the witch had brought the newbie in but he wondered what he or she would be like. Clicking his tongue he pondered around the kitchen and tried to not look at the newcomer..

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jupiter_hollow • 27 December 2012 at 7:54 AM

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Sadly, Aizel couldn't get a good enough glimpse at the strangers, so she attempted to linger for a bit, extending her neck to get a slight gander, but ended up being pulled along.
Now inside, he couldn't help but notice the raggedy wallpaper and the scratched, overused furniture. Well, truth be told is was much better than her previous permanent living place. It was the smell that quickly caught her attention - cigarette smoke! She would be allowed to smoke then, that was definitelly a plus.
Passing by the kitchen's slightly ajar door, she managed to spot a few of it's residents - the first thing she saw was the kitchen table, occupied by a smallish girl with obsidian hair. What she nearly gaped at were the eyes - a deep hue of sapphire... Or was it pink, now that she'd shifted, her eyes were a different hue and color. Hm, rainbow eyes was rather strange, curled up near her meal. Then there were the other two - a boy and girl, about the same age as each other and her. Both with blue eyes - ah, the stalkers! One had midnight black hair, hanging in small curls over his bright eyes. His clothes, hair, whole complexion was pretty gloomy but she quickly dismissed that. She couldn't help but notice the tattoo, however. The pictures gathered on his arm were too further away for her to distinguish but she managed to recognise a red snake like creature somewhere in there.
Turning, she inspected the last resident. Light brown hair and navy eyes, that stared back with what seemed like curiosity. Taking a moment, Aizel locked eyes fully with the girl, attempting to decode her expression.

--- Here it goes! >w< Hag's point of view ;]

ninjagirl • 27 December 2012 at 8:07 AM

@jupiter_hollow fat blob speaks cus yolo XD
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Katia was about to arise, brushing crumbs off her legs when she noticed the witch come in with the new recruit. She tilted her head, staring at the newcomer. She was a girl, short but still taller than her. Her eyes were a striking ink black and her hair was the same, in a shoulder length bob. Her tanned skin showed on her face. Was the expression curious? Bored? Katia couldn't tell. She gave up, her eyes shifting to the old witch. Fat hag, being so sickly sweet to those idiotic adults as they walked along beside her. They looked nothing like the girl.. Probably foster parents. Her eyes drew back to the hag, locking on to the poisonous green colour. She pursed her lips, that ugly face made her sick. She would've stuck her tongue out if it wasnt for the fact that the last person who defied her was now lying in their bed with bruises all over them. An example, she had said. A victim, Katia concluded.

spiritwolf3 • 27 December 2012 at 8:11 AM

Brendon bit his lip when the hag glared at him. He scratched his neck looking at the new person. He had his arms crossed across his chest as he blinked his eyes. Brendon knew that person probably won't last long but looks can be deceiving. He tapped the table and yawned loudly. He felt like following them but at the same time didn't want to move. There were the sounds of distant sound of birds chirping but even those peaceful noises didn't calm him down..

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I might go because i'm going to my friends soon..

seaangel • 27 December 2012 at 8:24 AM

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Ally looked at the floor, then back at the window, avoiding the gaze of the new comer. It was dusty outside, like always. This horrid place was in such a remote location, it surprised Ally that the couples that do come here to adopt, actually find it.

"Good luck, your going to need it." Ally said clearly. She was telling the newbie the same thing someone first told her when she arrived at the orphanage.

jupiter_hollow • 27 December 2012 at 8:30 AM

@spiritwolf3 Oki 😋 @ninjagirl Hag got the yolo yolo x'D @seaangel
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Forcing her gaze away, Aizel continued up ahead, after her foster parents. They both seemed over the moon happy, she couldn't help but notice and give a scowl.
"Thank you so very much Mrs. Bessy!" her foster mother chirped out, now standing near the exit with her husband.
Good ridance! Aizel nearly refrained from waving back in a mock-happy manner. Nah, would be too troublesome. Instead, she had her eyes locked on Goo, wondering what she'd do now that the idiots were gone. Give her a happy welcome.
On the contrary, when her parents walked out, the minute they closed the door, Bessy hauled herself towards the kitchen, fat feet surprisingly as fast as can be...
Aizel raised an eyebrow as she slammed the door open.
"Come 'ere..." the hag roared, storming towards the raven headed boy and taking a fistful of black locks to tug on. "You better learn not to disobey me and not to break m' rules!" she hissed in his face, making sure to grip his hair in a morbid gesture. "You humiliated me in front of my customers. You know you deserve a beating dont'cha?" she questioned rhethorically. "You're lucky we have a new guest... Wouldn't want to be humiliating you in front of our guest, no, no?"

seaangel • 27 December 2012 at 9:20 AM

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Ally stared in horror as the monster grabbed Brendon. She bit her tongue so she wouldn't yell out. It pained her to watch and she quickly went for the stairs, going up them before the hag could talk to her. The girl went on her bed grabbing a worn stuffed dog. The dog had clearly been sewed in many places.

Ally traced the dents in his plastic nose, then ran her fingers over the glassy eyes. Truth be told the dog was unknown to everyone. Ally carefully placed back in it's hiding spot, before anyone could see the toy.

spiritwolf3 • 27 December 2012 at 12:24 PM

Brendon cried out in pain but he didn't answer. He had his eyes closed tightly 'S-Sorry miss..' He mumbled biting his lip and cold sweat ran down his cheeks. He knew back then to shout back at the witch, he had learned that a long time ago.

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ninjagirl • 27 December 2012 at 1:22 PM

@jupiter_hollow you know how much swag the hag got YOLO XD
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Enough. She hated watching this. Katia was finished her meal. She may as well go back to her bedroom. She paused to give Brendon a small salute behind the witch's back. She even managed to nod at the newbie. How social was she today? She mentally patted herself on the back for being so friendly, then hurried back up the stairs into her room.
She flopped onto her bed, glad that food time was over for now. She once again grabbed her book.

bluebelle • 27 December 2012 at 1:25 PM

Minty turned at a gruff voice beside her"Go on little miss"An ugly man in suit glared at her"Open the door"
A cold smile flicked across her lips as she said"I'm a lady aren't I?" The man scratched his head"You are quite sassy ain't you?"He smiled cruelly"Then Ms.Bessy will beat it outa you" He opened the door cigarette smoke filled her nose,then he grabbed her wrist hard enough to make her yelp and pulled her in. She saw a strong woman holding a boy by the hair,she gulped."Kill me now." she muttered"Right this minute".








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jupiter_hollow • 27 December 2012 at 1:30 PM

@bluebelle Huh? o-o
@spiritwolf3 Err? XD did I miss something again?

bluebelle • 27 December 2012 at 1:32 PM

@ jupiter_hollowSorry made it seem like the man works for orphanage,he works for Minty's dad.

ninjagirl • 27 December 2012 at 1:34 PM

@jupiter_hollow yeah I was just thinking the same thing 0.0

jupiter_hollow • 27 December 2012 at 1:35 PM

@bluebelle Where's Minty's form? o-o We all have no idea what she looks like ^^" And posting your intro straight away made me a bit confused xD

bluebelle • 27 December 2012 at 1:36 PM

@jupiter_hollow I sen the sign up forum in mail i'll post It here if you want.

jupiter_hollow • 27 December 2012 at 1:37 PM

@bluebelle That's what you're supposed to do otherwise we have no idea who your characte is ^^"

spiritwolf3 • 27 December 2012 at 1:38 PM

@bluebelle
When I accept forms on chat, you're supposed to post them h afterwards