Orphanage (re-do) P R I V I T E

spiritwolf3 • 27 December 2012 at 4:56 PM

Brendon nodded 'Yeah, I came when I was three and I have no memory whatsoever..' he said agreeing with Ally. He watched the girl leave and let out another puff of grey smoke from his cigarette.

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Short posts .-.
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seaangel • 27 December 2012 at 4:59 PM

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"We need to escape." The girl said out of blue. It was a silly idea, but if they had a plan it maybe could work. She was going to get out of the orphanage, she had too. Ally couldn't take the abuse anymore.

jupiter_hollow • 27 December 2012 at 5:00 PM

@spiritwolf3 @ninjagirl @seaangel Uh, angel >> It may be a bit too soon for them to escape .-.

Shortly returning with the packed rucksack and a small packet, Aizel glanced in the kitchen again, seemingly asking for permission to go upstairs. After a moment she shook her head.
Gosh, this place was sucking out her love for anarchy...
"Goin' up now." she announced, dully heading to the stairs, where Katia resided. "Rainbow eyes." she smiled lightly at the girl. "Hi, I see you're working as a border from hell to heaven. Can I pass?" here eyes were locked to Katia's, now for the first time lacking their dumbfounded emptyness.

ninjagirl • 27 December 2012 at 5:02 PM

@jupiter_hollow golden skunk 😉
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Katia leaned back on the step, rolling her eyes. An idiotic idea. She should leave before she had moronic thoughts drilled into her brain. She would stay for a minute or two, see if the others were any smarter.
She stared up as Aizel began to speak. 'Oh, of course.. Sorry.' she flailed, blushing a bit about being found. Rainbow eyes? Hmm, that was new.

Oh BE BACK IN 15 MINS XD

spiritwolf3 • 27 December 2012 at 6:26 PM

Brendon grumbled annoyed before turning towards the window and crossed his arms once again. He continued to puff the smoke and blinked his eyes. He didn't know what to do now.

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seaangel • 27 December 2012 at 8:08 PM

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@jupiter_hollow Ally's a bit... ambitious to get out.
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Ally looked at the floor continuing with the thought, but then quickly dismissed it. Her crazy thoughts used to get her in trouble. She watched Brendon puffed out a white cloud. The orphanage was supposed to be free of the harmful smoke.

rojoqueen • 27 December 2012 at 10:13 PM

Form:
Name:
Mercedes(nickname mer)
Age:
14
Looks;
Dark red hair that is short and spiked at the ends,but has a long braid covered in blue ribbon down the middle of her hair which reaches her mid back,blue green eyes that make her seem like a trouble maker,white as snow but her cheeks are always faintly red 5"5
Personalty:
She is outgoing, strong personality,but shy around people who she isn't acquainted with,she doesn't like to listen and sometimes has selected hearing,she is chosen out of most people to be the trouble maker.
Why you're here:
Her parents killed themselves leaving her nothing but a white sash and the clothes on her back.
History:
She grew up poor,her family was always stressed about money and where their next meal was coming from,She was forgotten by her parents a lot and most of time left alone to fend for herself.Her parents never really cared much for her and tried to ditch her a couple of times in alleys and cars.

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(sorry I posted it later,was really busy today and almost forgot.)

ninjagirl • 28 December 2012 at 5:53 AM

@spiritwolf3 Yo bro ^^ Did I miss something again? I thought the Roleplay was closed? XD
@jupiter_hollow ASKIN QUESTIONS CUS YOLO XD

jupiter_hollow • 28 December 2012 at 7:32 AM

@rojoqueen Well, at least you posted your form XD
@ninjagirl I think it's just a late posted form >>
@spiritwolf3 Am I right? 😱

ninjagirl • 28 December 2012 at 7:34 AM

@jupiter_hollow ah yes >w< makes sense XD

seaangel • 28 December 2012 at 7:39 AM

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Ya'll who's the new peep, I thought the role play was closed? Did I miss something?

ninjagirl • 28 December 2012 at 7:40 AM

@seaangel I was thinking so too but @jupiter_hollow thinks that the person was just late to post their form. XD

jupiter_hollow • 28 December 2012 at 7:52 AM

@seaangel @ninjagirl Well, it does make sense xD And she stated under the form that she was late 😋

spiritwolf3 • 28 December 2012 at 8:33 AM

@jupiter_hollow she gave me the form before I closed it 😋
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ninjagirl • 28 December 2012 at 8:34 AM

@spiritwolf3 so @jupiter_hollow WAS RIGHT! 😃

jupiter_hollow • 28 December 2012 at 8:37 AM

@spiritwolf3 @ninjagirl I AM 2 HOURS AHEAD OF YOU! 😈 I LIVE IN DA FUTURE! XD I see EVERYTHIIING!

ninjagirl • 28 December 2012 at 8:38 AM

@jupiter_hollow WELL I STALK YOU ALL THE TIME e.e

jupiter_hollow • 28 December 2012 at 8:39 AM

@ninjagirl In the bathroom! XD HOMFG!

rojoqueen • 28 December 2012 at 11:18 AM

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Sorry about it being late....I was really busy yesterday,I'm surprised I had time yesterday to post my form.

bluebelle • 28 December 2012 at 11:42 AM

@rojoqueen
It's fine,I made the same mistake.

Minty,looked around soaking in her new surroundings.
She'd seen some of the people here,A boy being held by his hair by some sort of goblin-looking creature.The boy had weird tattoos on his arm,he looked like he smoked a lot.This place was like the big American melting pot from "School House Rock"."Gosh this place is awful drab"Minty thought aloud,she wondered if there were mice living here. Minty wandered into the kitchen."Maybe there's something to eat?"She said mainly to herself,opening the fridge."WHAT IN THE NAME OF SANS-HILL IS THAT SMELL!"She closed the fridge and sank to the floor,"Something must be rotting in there!"she said quietly to herself,hoping that Ms.Bessy wasn't as evil as she was made out to be.

rojoqueen • 28 December 2012 at 11:52 AM

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Mercedes
Walked in with her social worker,she breathed in the smell of the orphanage and crinkled her nose in disgust.It smelled like the roof had leaks and was molding the floor,she stared at the floor as her social worker nudged her in gently"you'll be fine here,mer"the social worker said calmly,she stepped in looking around hearing people yelling and talking all at once,looking at a rickety chair and sat breaking it making a large noise.

bluebelle • 28 December 2012 at 12:01 PM

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Minty looked up, A girl about 13-14 was at the door,a social worker was standing with talking in a hushed tone.
The girl sat in a chair and broke it to pieces,"I wonder how heavy she is"said Minty mainly to herself"The girl must have come from a rich family like me." She was pretty,mischievous eyes,pale skin spiked red hair.She was disgusted when she entered the room,"She must be used to a very nice house."A grin flashed across Minty's face as she looked at the girl."Maybe she might want to play dolls"Minty said quietly so she could make herself laugh.

rojoqueen • 28 December 2012 at 12:08 PM

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Mercedes
sat up"actually this is the nicest house ive ever been to"she stammered a little embarrassed she brushed the dust of her pants and looked at minty"im Mercedes"she said sticking her hand out to minty,she watched minty's dark brown eyes.she looked over at the stairs and shuddered seeing the mold on the stairs afraid they might break on her as the chair had.Her social worker left her there alone in the orphanage with the other children she thought terrified.

bluebelle • 28 December 2012 at 12:14 PM

@ninjagirl are you dead?
@jupiter_hollow are you dead?
@spiritwolf3 are you dead?
@seaangel are you dead?
@rojoqueen
"Wow,you look like a rich kid"Minty was surprised she could say that much,"My name's Minty,you can call me Mints or Altoids"Minty was surprised at the girl she looked so outgoing,but she seemed shy,inside her shelter."I hope you don't smoke,a boy Brandon I think, smokes it makes it smell horrible in here."

rojoqueen • 28 December 2012 at 12:22 PM

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@bluebelle
Yes bluebelle everyone's dead due of the Zombie Apocalypse.

Mercedes
laughed a bit when minty joked about her name,"I dont smoke my parents may have but im not sure they were all whacked out anyways"she said calmly"they killed themselves because the couldn't cope with all the stress they had."she looked down remembering her parents being carted away in a wheelbarrow then being buried in unmarked graves. she watched the people smoking wondering why they smoked it had always been a mystery to her why people smoked and why the were so open about it and weren't ashamed like her parents had been about it.

bluebelle • 28 December 2012 at 12:28 PM

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@rojoqueen I knew it!

"Whacked out parents eh?"She thought about the rumors about her dad killing her mom,before she could stop her self she said"My dad killed my mom"She stuttered"u--hh-I th-h-h" She covered her mouth and raced up the stairs in tears,cutting her hand on the poorly done railing."Mom"she managed before fainting with a gigantic CLUNK.

jupiter_hollow • 28 December 2012 at 12:29 PM

@bluebelle We haven't posted only in five hours... .-. How are we dead? @rojoqueen Uhm guys... ^^" Sorry to interrupt but it would be better if you used spaces between the scentences. >>
@spiritwolf3 @ninjagirl @seaangel

Look guys... Not trying to criticize or anything, just giving advice. Erm... In reality how would a person who's mother was killed (or who's parents died in a car crash or who's parents didn't care about her) act? How would such girls act? In my opinion, they wouldn't have a 'strong personality' or be a 'troublemaker'... They would be shy, closed up, anti-social, unwilling to co-operate or socialize, like Katia is, like Brendon is... And yes, Bluebelle, Rojoqueen, Sea, I'm looking at you guys >> It's just... unlogical >< Sorry for that one, I just couldn't help but notice the detail. Just advising you for future cases.

--- Continuing now >>

Aizel chuckled good-heartedly at Katia's reaction, waggling up the stairs towards the second floor, where she guessed the sleeping places were located. Seemed slightly better than downstairs, at least here the wallpapers weren't peeling off of the rotten walls. She came out into a hall, filled with rows of doors (the bedrooms, she guessed), illuminated only by a clouded window on it's very end. There was still the light coming from downstairs, but it was still dimly lit.
A bit confused, she walked around the hallway's lenght for a while, before stopping in front one of the doors.
"Let's see what's behind here."

spiritwolf3 • 28 December 2012 at 12:37 PM

Brendon muttered before slipping out of the kitchen and wiping some mud off his face. He finished the cigarette, dropping it under the stair case and looking at Aizel confused before looking up the stairs. 'W-What are you doing..' he mumbled nervously.

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rojoqueen • 28 December 2012 at 12:37 PM

@ninjagirl @jupiter_hollow
will put spaces didn't realize that I should, eh sorry I understand your point of view Mercedes hated her parents and didn't really care that they died, but she is a little sad about it.
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@bluebelle
Yes there's been some trouble at the zombie survival camp, there's been a shortage on Twinkies barely enough to go around.

Mercedes

Watched her as she hit the floor she cringed. "thats going to hurt when she wakes up" she said.
walking towards the stairs she looked at the stairs and gulped she was terrified of them.
she lifted herself trying make herself go up the stairs, It was no use.
she walked back to the broken chair and sat on the floor next to it .
embarrassed that she was afraid to walk up the stairs.
(like this spacing?)

bluebelle • 28 December 2012 at 12:41 PM

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@jupiter_hollow of course sorry 'bout that.Minty is a weird personality,she has the weirdest of mood swings,obviously she is a shut in,not shy no,she made herself forget her mum, and live on.
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"Wow" Minty said to herself "Apparently,one can hear the bugs mice and other weird creatures living in the floors and walls" She paused "when,they are laying down upon it" Minty heaved herself up and walked up the stairs,to her bed and dug through her bag hoping she had packed enough food to last a while. Nope,nothing. "Gosh why do I need to live off whatever that nasty thing is in the fridge?"