Creature suggestion the Allimynth

Deleted • 28 January 2013 at 11:50 AM

So just to acquaint you with the details of this fun little creature: It's an alien but doesn't have to be of the mysterious asteroid,
It could be a common or LE or CC I don't don't mind either way 😋
And I figured it would hatch with clicks instead of feeds or views.

& the name came from ALoe sLIMe photosYNTHesis
hence the Allimynth!

So yeah, now that you know a bit about it please tell me what you think 😃 I'm open to all opinions here.

Link:

sandwolfninja.deviantart.com/art/Allimynth-351094093?ga_submit_new=10:1359390918

Egg description:
This meteorite encased egg is warm to the touch and is filled with a strange gel like substance that gives off a faint blue light. It is said that the developing creature performs photosynthesis through the large crack in the shell and can only hatch after several months spent in direct sunlight.

Creature description:
It's made of a strange goo not unlike the gel found in the Aloe Vera plant, so it's often seen riding on beach goers shoulders to prevent sunburn. It is completely blind however its skin is so sensitive to electric pulses that it can feel all human heart beats within a half mile radius. Because of this strange ultra sensitive sense of touch they bond with only one human for their entire life and over time become so in tune with their humans minute electric pulses that they eventually can pick out their heart beat from a crowd and know exactly what mood they're in.

#creaturesuggestion

Random Live pulse pings:
@bubblez
@rushingwater
@dis0rientated
@meteoroid
@dawnfur

Sorry if you don't like being pinged!!

banana • 30 January 2013 at 3:05 PM

@whitescales omg, its so cool! i love it!!

Deleted • 30 January 2013 at 9:55 PM

@banana Thank you!! Any suggestions on how to improve it? Like can you tell that it's supposed to be a semitransparent gel creature?
Thank you for being the first to comment too! It's been up for 3 days now 7 you're the first to say anything XD

banana • 31 January 2013 at 1:01 AM

@whitescales whaha, ping some people in the live pulse later 😋

I wouldnt want to see it semi-transprant 😋

jix • 31 January 2013 at 1:14 AM

@whitescales

I LOVE IT!

Deleted • 31 January 2013 at 9:21 AM

@banana I did that the first day lol XD but I'll do it again!

Maybe I'll keep it as being kinda shiny looking then, like it is in the picture.

@jix Thank you! 😃

banana • 31 January 2013 at 9:39 AM

@whitescales it think that if you make it semi-tranparant like, it .. well it is cool and all, but when you put a travel behind it it may.... "not create a cool total picture" if you understand what im trying to say 😋

Deleted • 31 January 2013 at 10:18 AM

@banana Oh yeah, that makes sense. Maybe it could be solid enough to look good with a travel on, my only concern is that the dark purple sphere inside its head not be mistaken for a facial marking, it's supposed to be inside it is all lol.

But I definitely see your point, it would look weird if it was semitransparent all over.

ice2505 • 31 January 2013 at 10:56 PM

@whitescales i LOVE it!!! Its...so squishy looking xD

Deleted • 1 February 2013 at 11:32 AM

@ice2505 Thanks 😊 It is a very hug-able creature 😊

lucky_cricket • 1 February 2013 at 11:35 AM

@whitescales It's so... cool. I like it, because it's not like a normal animal, it looks like it could have come from the asteroid.

Deleted • 1 February 2013 at 11:38 AM

@lucky_cricket Thanks 😊 I doubt that they would add any more creatures to the asteroid, but that would be awesome!

lucky_cricket • 1 February 2013 at 11:39 AM

@whitescales Yeah, they probably wouldn't . I'm just trying to think of what month this would be.

metaphor • 1 February 2013 at 11:47 AM

Love the egg! Very creative.😊

Deleted • 1 February 2013 at 11:49 AM

@lucky_cricket Oh, I never thought of a month for it.. Now you have me thinking about it.. Maybe July? That's when Halleys Comet is supposed to be visible again, July of 2061.

@Metaphor Thank You 😃

lucky_cricket • 1 February 2013 at 11:52 AM

@whitescales That might be a good idea, but hopefully before 2061 😊

I actually love the egg! Question though, the smaller creature is the first stage one, right?

Deleted • 1 February 2013 at 11:56 AM

@lucky_cricket Yeah I hope before then too, if I did my math right I'll be really old by the time it passes again 😋

Yes 😊 it's the first staged one, it goes from the meteor-like egg, to the sphere shaped little creature, to the elongated gel-slug thing.

lucky_cricket • 1 February 2013 at 11:57 AM

@whitescales I like the slug-like thing.

Would you take a minor suggestion/a bit of constructive criticism?

Deleted • 1 February 2013 at 11:59 AM

@lucky_cricket That's my favorite part of it.

Sure what's your advice? I don't bite ^-^

lucky_cricket • 1 February 2013 at 12:05 PM

@whitescales Alright, here goes!

You know that blue glow around the first stage? I would put it around all of them.

Also, question: You know how the first stage one has a dark blue "nose", and the second stage has a light blue "nose", I was just wondering why they are different colours.

Deleted • 1 February 2013 at 12:22 PM

@lucky_cricket I can add a glow on it, I meant to anyways but the first time I tried it didn't look right to me so I never got around to re-doing it.

It's actually not supposed to be a different color for the noses. The dark part is really the left over egg shell that got absorbed into the gel body. So the nose is supposed to be blue in both stages but the skin is see through so you can still see the egg shell inside its face. I failed to depict that part of it :/ so I don't really know how I can fix it, or if it's possible.