~*~Maybe Next Monthly Creature~*~

linka • 27 January 2014 at 6:15 AM

Hello to all, who are visiting this topic! This is my first creature suggestion, so I don't think every one will like the creature I drew. Though, I like it! 😸 And I think it's cute! 😋


This creature doesn't have something special, but many other creatures are like that.



And now, let me present you... The Pup!! Here he is:

http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=sd1id3&s=5#.UuYyWtJBvs2



I know it is not very good quality, so therefore, I'll tell you how much feeds he has to earn for each evolution:

Egg stage --75 feeds-- > 1-st stage --210 feeds-- > 2 stage --350_feeds-- > 3 stage





~*~Description~*~


The Pup is a sort of a common creature. Many might think that the Pup is just a normal dog, but these people are quite wrong. The Pup is so attached to his master, that he goes anywhere with him. His big black eyes are so magically cute, that his master never scolds him.

The top of the Pup's tail is golden and magical and when he is waving his tail it makes his master happy too! So, when the master is sad, all he has to do is something fun with his Pup and he will be happy again!

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


I don't usually buy creatures from the Cash Shop Park, so I would be happier if the Pup is in the Cave. I would be so glad to have a creature I made! It will be weird. 😃.


Please vote and comment, I would like to hear what you think. 😋



Thank you for reading and visiting! You are awesome!

jirachiwishmaker • 27 January 2014 at 7:48 AM

@linka


Great job! We've never had a puppy before so is going to grow up a full grown dog?😊

Deleted • 27 January 2014 at 7:51 AM

@linka
I voted "needs improvement" and "I like it". 😊
I think it's a bit plain, and some details would made it more nice, but in general I like the idea of a puppy dog creature. It also reminds me a little of Hachiko. ❤️ Also I like the stage in which it's stretching so ... nice job! ^^

syndrome • 27 January 2014 at 7:54 AM

@linka

I like it 😊

linka • 27 January 2014 at 7:54 AM

@chloelove - thank you! 😸
@wererage - I can't drew that good! ☹️ But still thank you.

Deleted • 27 January 2014 at 7:55 AM

@linka
Hey, don't say that! All start from somewhere, but with trying, trying, trying and practice, it's impossible to not improve. Just keep drawing and you will see the improvements in no time! ❤️

jirachiwishmaker • 27 January 2014 at 7:57 AM

@linka

Your Welcome it'd make a nice cave critter, Good Luck!😊

linka • 27 January 2014 at 7:58 AM

@wererage - Thank you for the cordials words ❤️

elise123456789 • 27 January 2014 at 8:15 AM

@linka
Quite good! I voted "I like it!" Though I do admit it needs improvement...... Anyway, I draw terribly too! I try doing creature suggestions in my notebook and I can picture it in my head how I want it to be but when I draw it, it looks like a disaster😋😊

tony • 27 January 2014 at 8:20 AM

Awww! Awesome! Adorable!

luhfmccq • 27 January 2014 at 8:41 AM

@linka

aww i like it ;A; the egg is cute, but i really like the first stage more xD

pinkcolorgirl • 27 January 2014 at 8:41 AM

I think it needs more detail but its really cute

linka • 27 January 2014 at 8:43 AM

@luhfmccq - haha, I like the first stage the most too!
@pinkcolorgirl - I can't draw that good!

fizzlefruit • 27 January 2014 at 8:49 AM

AWSOME!

werewolf • 27 January 2014 at 9:16 AM

its cute but needs more detail maybe a fiery tail or multicoloured swirling eyes and extremely fluffy fur

gonca • 27 January 2014 at 9:35 AM

I ❤️ it

kiryko • 27 January 2014 at 9:51 AM

@linka
It's cute but needs improvement. I agree with wererage it needs more details.Just look on pictures of real pups for example Retrievers and try to copy details.😊

mrsgiggles • 27 January 2014 at 10:09 AM

@linka Yeah, need a bit more detail to make it stand out. Maybe a puppy with a tortoise shell 😊

dragonkeeper • 27 January 2014 at 12:28 PM

I think it's cute just needs a little tweak her and there I love the first stage the most

jupiter_hollow • 27 January 2014 at 12:37 PM

@linka
It's puppy dog eyes are so cute, I'm enchanted ;A;

It's so cute ^^

leafyos • 27 January 2014 at 3:10 PM

its cute and your quite talented at drawing I think it should be one of them but the name is maybe not enough original and I agree a bit of detail from: @mrsgiggles tiny chesterhair though 😸

aardbeix3 • 27 January 2014 at 4:30 PM

I like the idea, as I already read here, there is no puppy suggestion yet I think, so that's very original😊

But I voted 'needs improvement' because I have the feeling, it's not 'finished' yet... 😊

novrain62 • 27 January 2014 at 6:56 PM

I think your egg is so adorable!!!

deidi • 27 January 2014 at 9:36 PM

I like it 😉

tokidoki • 28 January 2014 at 4:27 AM

Adorable puppy yes I like it!😊

han • 28 January 2014 at 5:53 AM

@linka
I voted "I like it!" and "Needs Improvement".

First of all, I think the name needs to be reconsidered. "Pup" is a bit obvious and uncreative, so go for something that people don't really expect (you could never guess that an eyleymo is a rabbit, for example).

The art itself is a bit plain; although I like the egg. Maybe add some patterns, more colors, etc. In the first stage the eyes are slightly too big.. I would also not use TinyPic (it's a bit unpredictable and sometimes it replaces your images with inappropriate things - I've had experience) I suggest deviantart.com 😊

Overall, it's nice but definitely can see some improvement to be made 😊

ushafuse • 30 January 2014 at 12:29 AM

@linka Looks so cute when its a egg, but it became ugly the minute it grows. I'll support you BFF! Visit my creature suggestion!

pjbuzzy • 1 February 2014 at 12:49 PM

@linka We already have WAY to many dog like creatures, and I think it needs a more creative name. Its also a little to plain for my taste, it needs some more details. Its a nice start, but it needs some improvement.

houndoom125 • 8 February 2014 at 9:49 PM

@linka i have no comment since i can't see it, but the description it wonderful

tineless • 9 February 2014 at 12:08 AM

@linka

Love it!! ❤️