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stagfire • 18 July 2017 at 8:23 AM
@togepi360 Ah, fantastic! (Dragons!). The little descriptions at the top are pretty cool but I might suggest that you add more detail to describe everything. Of course, you don't have to, this forum is very free-write, but it's just advice. @iris1929578 Awesome! I love the separate line when 'you' figures out they're in Ark. I can't wait to see more!
Deleted • 18 July 2017 at 11:01 AM
@stagfire I kind of don't like the idea of the cat, so I'll make him a human.(Editing stage.)
hashtagnight • 18 July 2017 at 8:54 PM
((The story is written like this because it's like an audio recording of some sorts. It's mostly inspired by 17776's storytelling. The different typing style is to differenciate the characters.))((This is also posted on two separate forums.))((Is it okay if I put the prologue and first chapter together? They were too short to begin with, so...))#TRA#TRApg1Prologue and Chapter 1While I still haven't been able get in contact with my last few friends, I already felt like I've made new ones, yet I never found a single person as I journeyed ahead. Then again, I'm in the middle of nowhere. I don't think there's going to be anyone here for ages.I can't stop; not for one bit. They're still after me. If I slow down, even for a little bit, then I'm done for. I stand out from the nothingness around me. Lights flicker from the sky. I'm part of that flickering light, although I'm shining extremely dim.I wonder if anybody canheyWhat?someone thereOf course. Who are you?no time to explain but you need to follow my locationWhy?like i said no time to explainhere ill give you the details of my locationplease hurry theres no time leftWait, what's going on?Hello? Hey, are you there?.........
iris1929578 • 18 July 2017 at 9:31 PM
@nightmaremoon12I like how they "text" this conversation.
stagfire • 19 July 2017 at 5:35 PM
@nightmaremoon12 Interesting, I like it. A little confused on who's talking, maybe put things like Me: (whatever you're saying) and Mysterious Person: (whatever) That's just my opinion. Awesome!(Yes, I don't mind you connected the Prologue and Chapter 1)
Deleted • 19 July 2017 at 7:22 PM
@stagfireThe descriptions are supposed to reveal themselves as the story goes on.Not really an amazing part, but it stays with the plot I planned. #Dragorth #Dragorthpt2CharactersMikuri: A shy female paper dragon. She is rather fond of Spark.Koru: A stubborn male leaf dragon. He is hard to calm down.Spark: A blonde trainee in magic studying who's very interested in dragons. He seems to like his comforts.Part 2: The Hunters Spark pulled out his camera, pillow, and another pillow. He fastened the pillows to his backpack and pulled Mikuri and Koru along. "I knew they would come," he muttered as he turned into a bird, pecking them to get them to focus. Koru flew around. "What's going on?" he looked down. There were hunters with Sleep Potion and large nets chasing after him. They were also after Mikuri. They all flew away from the hunters. Spark transformed back and sat on a cloud. "Do you see? You're not supposed to be here. You are going to put everybody in danger. I'm going to get you back where you came from." Spark turned into a bird again. Mikuri punched his tail for pecking him. Spark got upset. "When I get you back, you are going to owe me a toasted marshmallow." he smirked as they tried to punch him again. Mikuri saw the hunters were gone, but she still wanted to leave this area. Her wings hurt. "Come on, lets go." #Dragorthpt1 #Dragorthpt3
hashtagnight • 19 July 2017 at 8:24 PM
@stagfire ((It's inspired by 17776, which doesn't add in the person who is saying as a prefix it on certain devices. It's also to hide the character's identities before they're truly introduced.At this point someone would say to colorcode the speakers. The forums in which I posted this in doesn't use colorcodes, but how about you? Should I use colorcodes? I feel like it should make the different but I don't know.))#TRA#TRApg2Chapter 2[sounds of heavy breathing could be heard][sigh] I made it. Ugh, my head hurts. I'm not used to that kind of travel at all.All I can see outside is nothing but a thick smog covering my window.I'm just going to wait untilare you there nowYes, I am.i think i can see your shipYou really think so?There's nothing but this neverending smog where I am now.Also, who are you? I never got a chance to know your name.everybody calls me kitei was never called anything when i was youngso everybody decided "hey why not name this dude kite" and it just stuckso yeah im kitehow about youWe can answer that question later. Right now you can tell me what's going on, but first, we need to get you out of this mess.Get on my ship. I'll teleport you in.[slight whirring sound]wowi didnt realize that would be a fast teleportationMe neither.You'll get used to it.So... First things first.Why do you need my help?well have you heard of these strange creatures that are appearing around the neighboring areaNo.well darnso they just suddenly appeared out of nowhere like some kind of disease that has been sealed in ice for years or sowe tried everything to stop them but there hasnt been any luckthey keep on shaking off our attacks like it was nothingand clearly theres something that's not right here i mean they should all be dead when we attackedDo you know how it might have happened suddenly?There's no way that they just appeared out of the blue. Surely there's a source.man we tried everythingand im really getting tired of fightingits really terrible we cant even kill them and ive seen nothing but carnage from oursideits terribleKite.its really really terribleKite!terrible terrible terrible terribleKite!Get a hold of yourself. You can't solve your problems by having this breakdown.It's going to be okay.We're going to make sure none of this kind of carnage will happen again.We just need to strategize.yeah youre rightanyways i still havent gotten your name yetIs it necessary?i told you my name it should bebesides its just rude to leave anyone hangingAlright. It's Claire. Now, Kite.yeaGot anyone who can help us?The more, the merrier.i wish i did but everyone is deadall my friends are literally dead and i cant do anything about iti never had any true friends to begin with so whats the pointKite...You got me now.We're friends, and friends need to stick together.thanksWe need to leave this place.This ship's not going to withstand the scratching of the creatures outside any longer.Hold on tight, Kite..........#TRApg1#TRApg3
stagfire • 19 July 2017 at 8:49 PM
@togepi360 Cool, thanks for pointing that outWonderful so far! I can't wait for more.~@nightmaremoon12 Okay, well then, yes, I suggest doing color codes, if you'd like. I think I could tell who was who better this time around.
fairy_tail • 2 August 2017 at 4:40 PM
Today is my birthday, so I'm going to grace you all with a new chapter! 😸 Hope you like it!
stagfire • 2 August 2017 at 4:56 PM
@fairy_tail Fantastic, a new chapter! Happy birthday as well! ❤️
appleblizzard • 13 August 2017 at 10:04 AM
@stagfire #Exialita #Exialitapg1~~~The sky was painted a soft, deep blue colour and the stars glistened on the horizon like millions of diamonds, twinkling happily and watching over the peaceful Earth. The grass down below was soft and swayed as it danced to the calm music of the passing breeze. On a grassy meadow far from any village or town, two young children chased each other as their happy laughter filled the peaceful atmosphere of the air. The first of the two children was 9 years old with pale skin, short dark brown hair and dark brown eyes with a tint of red in them under which were two purple markings under each eye in the form of tiger stripes. He wore dark trousers, a grey top with long sleeves, black shoes and around his neck was a necklace with a flask in which there were many shiny black gems. He would have been a perfectly normal young boy if it hadn't been for the tall horns which grew out of his head, much like a reindeer's, and the long silky tail with a flufy end which swayed in the wind as he ran away from the second child.The boy's companion was a five year old girl who's happy giggles were louder than any other sound in the meadow and whose golden eyes twinkled with happiness. She had short white hair which hung in waves, pale skin and wore knee-high black boots with a short light blue dress with white ribbons and long sleeves which barely showed her fingers. Around her neck also hung a necklace with a flask, but the gems inside were white and seemed to glow with different shades of pink, blue, orange and white. She also was a demon, for on her head were short horns and a tail with an arrow on the end were visible, also accompanied by a short red line on each of her cheeks under the eye.The two children ran in circles, the girl trying to catch the boy desperately as she laughed through gasps of air. "Jack..." She shouted to him, smiling weakly as her pace decreased. "I can't catch you, wait up!" The boy merely laughed in response and continued to run away from her, looking back to see how far away she was. The girl stopped to take a breather but as soon as she did, the wind changed. It began to howl and it's previous dance became wild and vicious. The grass darkened and became spiky, and the stars seemed to fade away, leaving the Earth in darkness. The girl looked up as she noticed the change and saw Jack running towards teh forest that surrounded the meadow. Panic welled up inside her and she was unable to utter a single sound as she began to run after him, knowing that they had been warned not to go anywhere near the forests. Her words were caught up in her throat as she tried to stop her friend, but it was too late. What was previously a game for the girl became a fight, a desperate fight to catch up to him. Jack ran further and further until the thick dark green of the forest concealed his figure completely. The girl stopped, tears falling down her cheeks as she looked in all directions, calling his name in a croaky voice. The wind howled louder and louder, and the little girl covered her ears and squeezed her eyes tightly shut as she loudly shouted his name above the noise.The noise stopped.The girl slowly opened her eyes and looked around. She saw none of the forest, none of the meadow that she was in previously. She was standing in a feild, her surroundings dull and looked as though they had been drained of colour and life. She focused in front of her once again and saw a stone a little while away from her. She wiped her tears in order to see clearer and lowering her arms, dread filled her. She wasn't able to stop herself from coming closer and closer though she was terrified to see the truth. As she stood right in front of the stone, all feeling left her for an entire minute.It was a gravestone....Jack's gravestone.Tears began to fall uncontrollably from her golden eyes as she fell to her knees and her hand lightly touched the name etched into the stone. She curled up in a ball as she heard a whisper close to her and covered her ears but the whispering continued, becoming louder and louder."I'll always be with you...I'll always be with you...I'll always be with you!" His voice resounded around her, tearing her little heart apart as she coughed out 'stop' over and over...The whole image dissolved into tiny particles and became pitch black.In a town far far away from the meadow, and the forest, and the graveyard, a girl awoke from her dream, opened her eyes suddenly and sat up, tears running down her face like tiny waterfalls and a wild look in her golden eyes. Her black hair, which faded into white at the tips, masked her face as she put her head in her hands and sobbed for another minute. "Liar...," She muttered quietly to no one in particular. "You're such a liar, Jack. You aren't here now, are you? Liar..." She choked out between sobs, lying back down in her bed and hiding her eyes from view using her arm as she knew she wouldn't be able to get any more sleep that night.
stagfire • 13 August 2017 at 10:55 AM
@appleblizzard I love it! So suspenseful and I can't wait to hear more, and the way you wrote it is amazing ❤️
fairy_tail • 13 August 2017 at 1:52 PM
@stagfire Thank you! ❤️*throws genetics out window*The cinnamon roll incident is just one of many. This poor fox constantly had his food eaten from under his nose while growing up.☹️Yes. Many things. *shifty eyes*I might post another chapter soon.😊
stagfire • 13 August 2017 at 4:27 PM
@fairy_tail You're very welcome! 😊*cackles*That's mean. I wonder if that's what my brother feels like....(I eat his food before he can all the time)....EH, he deserves it! XD*very shifty eyes*Cool, I should probably do one as well, I've been busy.(WITH NOT MUCH)
wolfkit • 25 September 2017 at 5:43 PM
@stagfire could you change my story description to say that Something exciting will happen that will change her life because I don't think I will stick with my original plot line.Also here is the first part of #bluecrystals------>
stagfire • 6 December 2017 at 9:02 PM
@wolfkit Ah, thanks, *edited*Wonderful writing, can't wait to hear more!I'm so sorry for my delay in a response
wolfkit • 26 December 2017 at 3:34 PM
@stagfire it's okay, I almost forgot about this...
stagfire • 26 December 2017 at 10:50 PM
@wolfkit Heh, yes, it isn't getting too much love atm XD
wolfkit • 28 December 2017 at 10:36 AM
@stagfire it happens, even the best topics soon shut down
stagfire • 28 December 2017 at 9:13 PM
@wolfkit yep
jello • 29 December 2017 at 12:14 AM
@stagfire forgot about this for about 8 months. Finished Part two just now.#unlogicunlogic in the fullest (episode 1)
stagfire • 29 December 2017 at 9:28 AM
@jello Lol, that's okay XD Lol the story so far!! I hope you post more 😊