~Writing contest!~Free Creatures!~

dreamer • 28 December 2011 at 9:52 PM

@Jewelz I finished my song! 8D It's about a New Year's party. ^^ I hope you like it!

The world's in our hands tonight,
And everything feels so d**n right.
'Cuz we dance, in a trance,
It's a celebration tonight.
My home is out of sight,
'Cuz my heart is having a fight.
About what I should do, and what I should not,
But where I belong to, I forgot!
So we're wrapping up our year
With a big load of cheer,
It's the very last day,
So here's what I'll say!

Because this is the New Year!
Let's start it off with no fear.
The sky's on fire tonight,
We all will be alright,
'Cuz it's the New Year!
Now darling don't you feel the rush?
All of the hate I want to crush
Has drifted away.
And all I can say?
"It's the New Year!"



Someone post so I can continue the song? ^^

ladybugheart • 28 December 2011 at 9:55 PM

The rest of the prom was a blast. However, Lauri could have sworn she saw Voldemort dancing among the crowd. At the end of the prom, Lauri waved goodbye to Travis and climbed on top of the roof. She looked up at the rosy sky and beautiful sunset, and down at the lovely view. Travis was in his limo, sticking his head out. He looked surprised to see that Lauri was standing on the roof of the building! Lauri smiled as Travis drove off.

Lauri was about to glide home when she saw a slight movement from the corner of her eye. It was a small mouse. They stared at each other for a moment. The creature winked, and then scurried away. Lauri gave a smile and then set off for home, soaring over the horizon.

THE END. 8D

dreamer • 28 December 2011 at 9:56 PM

YAYZ! Now I can post the last couple verses of my song. xD Here I go:

My thought's are taking a dive,
Because tonight I feel so d**n alive,
Move my feet, got the beat,
'Cuz we're going crazy tonight. (Yeah!)
So I'll kiss my world on the cheek,
And I think I'll wake up next week,
About life, I forgot. I have let my brain rot.
And where am I? I still forgot!
And we wrappd up the year
With a big load of cheer
I'm coming back today.
But first I just have to say...

Because this is the New Year!
Let's start it off with no fear.
The sky's on fire tonight,
We all will be alright,
'Cuz it's the New Year!
Now darling don't you feel the rush?
All of the hate I want to crush
Has drifted away.
And all I can say?
"It's the New Year!"

So we've made our resolutions,
All our problems and solutions.
And a brand new list,
That I've marked with a kiss.
And I still believe it!
I'm still a little dizzy,
But now I'm so d**n busy.
But I'm still here...

Because this is the New Year!
Let's start it off with no fear.
The sky's on fire tonight,
We all will be alright,
'Cuz it's the New Year!
Now darling don't you feel the rush?
All of the hate I want to crush
Has drifted away.
And all I can say?
"It's the New Year!"


Whaddya think? ^^

rawrcookies08 • 28 December 2011 at 9:58 PM

@jewelz I'll join! This one is about the creatures in my cove.

Cal (Tasma): *walks down a hallway in my cove*
Kaiko (Kitep): Caaaaaaal.... Caaaaaaal... *whispers to GemHeart, a Lemac..* This is going to be HILARIOUS! You know how Cal gets when he eats candy. *Shakes a huge bag of high-sugar candy*
Cal: Huh? Hello? *walks in the direction of Kaiko's voice*
Gemheart: *shakes candy bag* Cal!
Cal: *sniffs the air and runs towards Kaiko and Gemheart* Candy?!?!? I LOVE candy!!
Kaiko: And it's all for YOU!
Cal: *stuffs head in the bag of candy and eats all of it*
Gemheart: Kaiko.. It's starting..
Cal: *shivers* WHOOT!!!!!! SEE YOU GUYS LATER!! It's CANDEH TIME!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!! *sprints down the hallway at lightning speed*
AmericanElge: *swoops down and grabs Kaiko*
Kaiko: Hey!! Get off me!!
AmericanElge: Yoo is gonna have to see the big momma bear! Giving Cal sugar is NOT allowed! Dang, you gonna be in trouble when she finds out that Cal the spaz ran away cause of YOU!

(to be continued)

silver_winged • 28 December 2011 at 10:01 PM

I'd like to join with a story. c: I haven't written it yet, but I will post it when I do!

jewelz • 28 December 2011 at 10:01 PM

@ladybugheart that was a neat story I liked it ^^

@dreamer I think you are talented I would have never even been able to come up with one sentence in a song xD..Love the song also❤️

qwaszx • 28 December 2011 at 10:02 PM

I have 2 poems to enter.😊

This is one called Bubbles.

Floating
Laughing
Glinting
Popping
Gathering in the bottom of my sink
Rushing out of the wand
Dancing
Rushing
Sticking
Popping
Attaching to each other
Landing on me
Gathering
Attaching
Landing
Popping
Drifting in the breeze
Flying past my face
Drifting
Flying
Soaring
Popping
A light pop sounds and soap sprays as you try to touch their fragile skin.

This is one called Fire.

Cackling with rage
Spitting with fury
Hissing with anger
Sparks fly out of the pit
Embers shower, candles lit
Matches struck against their box
Seems to dance, I'm lost in thought
Staring at the flames so bright
Glowing in the dead of night.

dreamer • 28 December 2011 at 10:03 PM

@Jewelz Thanks! ❤️ I want to be a reknowned songwriter one day. Maybe a singer. I have a lot of experience with poetry, so I just add a beat and make the words I write sound cool. It's actually pretty easy and it flows naturally if you have songwriting experience. X3

The song I just showed you is the fifth one I've written. I hope you guys enjoy! ^^

taffy789 • 28 December 2011 at 10:06 PM

~Act Three~

*Everyone is at the Auction place, looking for a second time Machine*

Saffire: "Hmm... I found a Soda Machine, if that's any good."
Smores: *Materilizes out of thin air, holding a weird objec, and lands on Skittlet*
"I found a telaporter! 8D"
Skittle: "We don't need that! *Snarls*"
Smores: "Eeepp! D:" *Telaports away*
Lucen: *Looking at a "HighLights" magizine*
"OH! I found the fish in Hidden Pictures! That was very tricky..." *Bumps into something* *Looks up*
Lucen: "GASP! D8"
*In front of him is a Cupcake Making Machine*
*Engels sing in the backround as a heavenly light shines down on it*

Man in backround, behind the machine: "Hey, Boss! Where do you want this Search Light and Tape recording of Engels singing?"
Boss: "Just put them anywhere!"
Man: *Shrug* *Tosses them to the right*

Lucen: "I NEED THAT MACHINE! >8D" *Glomps, petting it* "My precious, my precious" *Foams at mouth*
Skittle: *Drags Lucen away* "We're looking for a TIME Machine! T_T"
Lucen:" I NEED those Cupcakes! D:<"
Skittle: "If you get those cupcakes, you also get my CLAWS! C:<"
Lucen: "...Nevermind." *Looks back at Cupcake Machine* "I'll come back for you baby, I promise. ;-;"

rawrcookies08 • 28 December 2011 at 10:13 PM

(continued)
AmericanElge: *Flies over 'the big momma bear,' Brown Sugar the Brownil.*
Kaiko: Oh, please no, AmericanElge! She's going to be so mad! I thought we were FRIENDS!
AmericanElge: I'm sorry, Kaiko. But rawrcookies gave Brown Sugar a policy: if you feed Cal candy, I bring you to her. *unleashes Kaiko and drops him next to Brown Sugar*
Brown Sugar: Mm, mm, mm. You did it again, didn't you?
Kaiko: Heh, did what?
Brown Sugar: You set off Cal's crazy bomb.
Kaiko: I'm really sorry!! I promise I'll never do it again!!
Brown Sugar: ASSEMBLE THE TROOPS! We have to find a crazed sugar bomb Tasma! *whistles* Hussle, hussle, HUSSLE!
Shinefeathers (Mo), Jareth (Rhine), and Tenalp (Tenalp): At your service, mother bear!!
Brown Sugar: Shinefeathers! Bird's eye view! Jareth, when Shinefeathers finds Cal, trap him on the ground! Tenalp, when Jareth has him trapped, use your gravity to suck Cal into your orbit! Go, go, go!
Shinefeathers, Jareth, and Tenalp: YES MOTHER BEAR!

(to b continued)

taffy789 • 28 December 2011 at 10:27 PM

@jewelz - *Sigh* I don't want to finish thsi now... Take me off the entries. 😋
But here's the link to My other play, if you want:

http://eggcave.com/forums/topic/10914

For your asumement. XD

rawrcookies08 • 28 December 2011 at 10:41 PM

Brown Sugar: Kaiko, you're going to have to wear the My Little Kitty sweater as punishment.
Kaiko: NO! That thing is HORRIBLE!
Brown Sugar: It is the consequence for what you have done. Thankies!!! Come here!!!
Thankies (Leyma): *sigh* What?
Brown Sugar: Kaiko needs his punishment.
Thankies: *pulls out furry, pink, oversized sweated with bright yellow hearts and the words 'My Little Kitty' on it and shoves Kaiko into it* Sorry, bro, but it's what you did that caused this.
Kaiko: *mopes*
Scene change...
Jareth: C'mon, soldiers! We must find Cal before rawrcookies gets here!
Shinefeathers: I'm flying as fast as I can! *looks carefully at the ground* Hmm, I can't see him yet. Let's move away from Ark and towards the Volcano.
Jareth and Tenalp: Okay!
Shinefeathers: *squints at the Volcano* I see a little gray thingy on the side of the volcano, but it can't be Cal.. that's too dangerous..
Jareth: Get closer!
Shinefeathers: *zooms up* OMG it's CAL!!!!! CODE PURPLE!
Tenalp: He's going to get hurt!
Cal: Hehehehehehe!!!!!!!!! VOLCANO!!!!!!! YAY!
Jareth: I might be able to get him..
(next post will be the end of the story)

macosten • 28 December 2011 at 10:45 PM

Hmm. Perhaps my minecraft story would interest you?

leopardclaws • 28 December 2011 at 10:48 PM

@Jewelz Oh darn, I guess it's too late to join now? xD


Good luck, everyone!

phoenizis • 28 December 2011 at 10:49 PM

Ah write poems:

Fireworks

The sky is lit up
when fireworks burst loudly,
simple, but the people are awed.

Their tiredness gone,
when a tube bursts with bright rain
even I can't take my eyes off them.

Probably not going to win. XD
Might have more poems later.

sarahsaurus • 28 December 2011 at 10:52 PM

Looking around I see you,
thinking you were the person I knew.
You were in my life once,
when I felt so sad so blew.
Deep down and above,
my love shares your love.
Looking around I still see you
thinking you were the person I knew
Our love has grown apart
but it has from the start
I'm still thinking... you were the person I knew.
You took away my fears,
and then again you took away my fun.
Asking myself what you have done to me,
but know you're my fear and it all has just begun.
Thanking God my fear has ended
and I'm just now realizing that I didn't know,
the person that I thought I knew.

rawrcookies08 • 28 December 2011 at 10:59 PM

Shinefeathers and Tenalp: You can do it, Jareth! You can!
Jareth: Thank you, motivational team! *starts to sprint up the side of the volcano* Cal!
Cal: WHAT?
Jareth: Come down here!!
Cal: No! I LIKE VOLCANOES!! AND CANDY!
Jareth: *sigh* Curse you, Kaiko and Gemheart. *chases Cal* Get down here now!!
Cal: Hehehehehe!!! No!!!
Jareth: Almost... There... *reaches the top of the volcano* I.. GOTCHA! *Grabs Cal's tail*
Cal: *Scratches Jareth's paws* No! I want the Volcano!
Jareth: Help!! I can't hold on!!! AAAHHHHHH!!!!!! *slides down Volcano*
Cal: *balances on the edge of the Volcano* Hahaha! You can't get me! Nah nah nah boo boo!
Shinefeathers: I'll get him! *swoops down and hits Cal on the side* Ouch!
Cal: Hahahahahhahaha! Hahahahahaha- WOAH! *starts to fall into the volcano*
Jareth: CAL! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
Tenalp: NO!!!!!!!! *Flies down to the edge of the Volcano* must.. Use... Gravity... *grimaces* GRRRRAVITYYYYY!
Cal: *is sucked into Tenalp's gravity*
All: Yay!! We're okay!! *Fly back to cove*
Brown Sugar: you're safe!
Me: *arrives* I'm home! How was your day?
All: Completely normal!
Me: Great!
The End!!!
@jewelz

silver_winged • 28 December 2011 at 11:09 PM

(It's kind of long, but I hope you all like it. c: )

"It all started with the first fire," the woman quavered. She sat with her ankles folded stiffly underneath her chair, and her hands clasped in her lap. Deep worry lines were etched around her eyes, and her brown hair-greying at the temples-was pulled into a bun so tight that it visibly strained her scalp. Everything about this poor woman seemed stretched to breaking, the doctor noted; and yet, she tried to keep a semblance of calm. "She behaved fine for a few weeks, and responded to the move so well. It was only after we settled into the new house that she started having . . ." The woman began to look down at her hands but suddenly snapped her head back up. "P-problems."

"What kind of problems?" the doctor asked in a tone that was both easygoing and careful. While this wreck of a woman struggled to compose herself, he took another look at the file.

The girl was ten years of age, average height and weight. The picture showed her with long, mousy brown hair and striking grey-blue eyes. Her mother had filed a report with the girl's doctor, complaining about possible post-traumatic hallucinations. The family (consisting of mother, father, and daughter) had experienced not one but two house fires in the past six months. The first accident had occurred when the mother fell asleep and left several scented candles lit in the living room. The house suffered irreparable damage, and they were forced to move. -c

jewelz • 28 December 2011 at 11:14 PM

OK ^^

silver_winged • 28 December 2011 at 11:16 PM

Due to the location of his office, however, they had agreed to meet at the family's recently damaged house. The girl was said to be experiencing hallucinations, possibly brought on by the series of traumatic events she had suffered.

The woman cleared her throat, apparently ready to talk again. "She said she kept seeing this boy," the woman stuttered, wringing her hands in her lap. "In the house. We have a good security system with a motion detector and everything--there's no possible way anybody's g-getting in the house, but she keeps saying she sees this boy."

"What does he do?" the doctor asked, taking notes.

"Nothing," the woman said, a wavering frown touching her lips. "He just stares. She says he cried once."

The doctor nodded, slowly, absorbing the woman's words. He wouldn't have been at all surprised if the girl was experiencing problems; her family situation could not have been good. "I'm going to go meet with your daughter now. Is that all right?"

The woman nodded yes until he had completely risen from his chair. He turned now, smiled once at the woman reassuringly, and stepped into the room where the girl was waiting. -c

Deleted • 28 December 2011 at 11:23 PM

@dreamer wow! O.O Cool song! I've written one song so far, and I've got ideas for two more😊 I'm currently focusing on writing a book right now so I haven't had much time xD

@jewelz

I think I might withdraw, I have a story I really want to use, but I've used it before, and I shouldn't be double-dipping xD

silver_winged • 28 December 2011 at 11:26 PM

The girl sat nervously at the far end of the living room, studying some toys and books on a faraway shelf. Unlike in the picture, most of her long brown hair was gone; it was now cut to her ears, in a more modern fashion. "Perhaps the fire?" he wondered. The doctor smiled as he entered the room, and introduced himself. "What's your name?" he then asked.

She did not smile. "Sarah," she said, then suddenly looked away.

"I'm here to talk to you about how you're feeling, Sarah," he said, pulling up his own chair. "Is everything all right?"

The girl thought for a moment, and then shook her head no.

"How do you feel right now?" he asked, absentmindedly twirling his pen in his hand.

"Scared," the girl admitted, now looking down toward her feet. She wore a pair of battered sneakers that set an odd image against her flowery pink dress.

"That's a very pretty dress you're wearing," he tried, smiling warmly. The girl still seemed uncomfortable.

"I don't like it," she spat, frowning and folding her arms. "I hate wearing dresses. And the shoes Mom makes me wear hurt my feet."

"Did she make you wear the dress?" he asked, sounding concerned.

The girl huffed. "Mom always makes me dress up for church on Sunday." She was quiet, then, for a long moment.

"What are you scared of?" he asked gently. -c

rawrcookies08 • 28 December 2011 at 11:35 PM

@silver_winged You are murdering my story 😋

spiral • 28 December 2011 at 11:36 PM

"I dunno'," she murmured, her defiance disappearing. She swung her feet a bit.

Trying the direct approach, the doctor attempted to gain eye contact, leaning forward slightly. "Your mother said you were seeing an odd boy in this house."

She nodded, quiet as a mouse.

"What can you tell me about him?"

She paused for a long moment. The doctor worried she wasn't going to reply at all--and then she spoke. "He looks a little scared," she said. "Like he's going to get punished."

The doctor narrowed his eyebrows a bit; that was an odd response. "Punished for what, Sarah?"

She mumbled something he couldn't make out.

"Excuse me?" he said, urging her to repeat herself.

She looked up this time, almost defiant. "For setting the house on fire."

The doctor paused, tapping his pen against the notepad. "This boy set your new house on fire?"

She nodded, looking upset. "I saw him."

"How?" the doctor pressed.

"With a match," she said. "He couldn't use them too good so it took a while but he lit a match and started the fire in Mom and Dad?s room."

"And you say he looks worried that he'll get caught?" the doctor asked, now carefully writing notes.

"Yep. Nobody knows he did it except me and he's afraid I'll tell." She nodded firmly, scattering her bangs about her forehead.

"You didn't tell your mother?"

"She wouldn't listen," the girl pouted.

"Where else did you see this boy?" he asked. -c

silver_winged • 28 December 2011 at 11:39 PM

"Same place," she said, folding her arms. She seemed to be growing more uncomfortable. "In Mom and Dad's room. He stands behind the dresser, in the gap between the dresser and the wall. And whenever I tried to show Mom he hid."

"How often did you see him?" the doctor persisted, trying to keep her talking.

"A lot," she said, glancing off to the side. "Most days, after dinner. Never on Sunday though."

"Do you still see him?"

She nodded again. "At Auntie's house, in the hallway. Not as much though."

"What do you think would make him go away?" the doctor tried.

The girl paused again, studying the bookshelf. "Dunno'," she said. "He doesn't talk."

"Would he talk to me?"

"Maybe."

"Should we go see him?"

"He doesn't come on Sundays," the girl insisted.

"Well, while I'm here, can we at least try?" He smiled again.

The girl clearly had to think about it. The doctor waited for a long moment, resisting the urge to begin fiddling with the pen again. "Okay," she said, jumping up out of her chair. She set off for the hallway, her shoulders caved in just a bit more than before. The doctor followed, tucking his notepad under his arm. -c

(ONE MORE POST)

spiral • 28 December 2011 at 11:41 PM

The master bedroom was thoroughly charred. Grey smoke residue clung to the walls, and the floorboards were singed black and crumbling in places--he didn't think they would be safe to walk on, so the doctor stayed in the doorway. The girl didn't seem to want to go any farther without him. "The dresser was over there," she said, pointing almost straight in front of them.

The doctor stared intently at the patch of wall; it was whiter than the rest of the room, the dresser having shielded it from the smoke. There was nothing unusual about it.

As the girl turned around and walked away, he noticed a change in the coloration of the wall. Confused, he took a tentative step forward, squinting at the section of wall just above where the dresser was. As he leaned to the side, the dark blot on the wall shifted. As he moved back and the dark blot moved with him, he realized: above the dresser hung a mirror.

(I'm sorry the story was so long. ^^; Hope you all liked it, though!)

bunnyshadow • 28 December 2011 at 11:48 PM

@jewelz Beyond Death

Grudges behold my finest fears
Held embraced through a thousand tears.
I have never loved anything before
This world changed angel to yours blood.

Oh solitude!
Sweet dreams to your dead!
Oh solitude!
In may you be locked in bloody seclusion!

Pain is mournful than beautiful
Past time then ever before.
I remember yourself's fears all now
Have you lost enough to leave...?

Your words sweeter then reapers skull
Your minds black with midnight tolls.
Oh! Have I thought you were perfect
But eternally saw your murders bitter solitude!

You have always been the devil
You have never been true to well..
Your grace as to knive's blood red lace
When have taken a loved one's LIFE!

Your shadow still dances to it's lost sun
Your heart has lost its beating ruin.
Your bones as black as this midnight
Your face as white as silver flight.

The midnight sky will shine to one!
Your deathly claws at that eating sun!
Poison flowing through your veins!
Screaming blood still cakes the insane!

Wiiiill you fiiinaaaaally?
Leave my spirit?!
As this black saphire gemstone?!
Away from me... Beyond this death..

silver_winged • 28 December 2011 at 11:51 PM

@rawrcookies08 Your story is funny. XD Mine is not. People tend to enjoy funny stuff more than other stuff. Besides, I wrote this in like twenty minutes, I don't think it's that good. X3

jewelz • 29 December 2011 at 12:12 AM

OK Every One I DECIDED, and I will pm the winners. I want to let everybody know that their writing was great. I loved them all so its was really hard to choose.