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redstar-fireclan • 29 April 2011 at 7:41 PM
oh..ok...i need somewhere 2 start..i'll read. (BTW since the Lily trappedin the van thing started this fight..she NOT..in the van.)
smilies • 29 April 2011 at 7:42 PM
~ @randomkitty17 You haven't even gone through the icy long pool that lead to the chamber which Cast is in 😋@horsegirl300 You are going to have to read every single page to understand what's happening 😋 Put an @ sign in front of the name, it pings them (you get a notification on your screen)@decks123456 Eternal was never in a cave. This is Cast. ~Missed. Falling. Reached out desperately. Hit rock. Grabbed ledge. Hauled himself up. Sighed with relief. Emptied his lungs of air and squished himself into the narrow passage.
decks123456 • 29 April 2011 at 7:51 PM
Avi woke up and felt very achy. she still felt some serious pain and was covered in dried blood, also her eye was swollen shut. she hobbled over to the pond and gave herself a quick bath. she managed to get most of the blood off. that was when she saw the real damage- her left hind leg was horrid. you could see the mess of fur and skin hanging like a pendant. she could just about see the bone through the wound. her reflection wasnt very good either. she had three long gashes on her neck and above her left eye. there were also some pretty deep teeth marks on her back. she would be lucky if she survived these wounds. @smilies Avi brought Eternal to a cave to stay for the night, remember? thats when she had a terrible dream that something was trying to disembowel her DX
redstar-fireclan • 29 April 2011 at 7:55 PM
@deck123456 hi.... um..is it ok. if WF sees u at the river? if soo...read below...if not..idk 😋While WF was walking he sees a wolf... he calls over to her/him..(he's on the other side of the river)"Hey! My name's White Fang but you can call me WF! Have you seen a brown wolf? Her name's Lily....By the way..Whats your name?"
smilies • 29 April 2011 at 7:56 PM
~ @decks123456 I never said where Eternal took her. But what harm can one more F ing cave do??? LOL xD ~EF: Eternal looked at Avi in shock. "What happened to you?!?!" She gasped.***C: For 10 horrible seconds he thought he was stuck. Couldn't breathe. Couldn't move. He was suffocating. The only thing that saved him was the thought of the others catching up. He WOULD NOT have them pushing his butt through the passage! He'd rather die!!! So, somehow, he managed to wriggle out of the passage. Into the light. He collapsed on the snow, all muddy and with clay matted into his fur, and yowled his victory.
randomkitty17 • 29 April 2011 at 7:57 PM
@smiliesAwww ok...Solah and Sunstorm walked, discouraged, back to the cave. Solah began to put herbs on CT's wounds. "Are you ok?" she asked. "Oh, well no duh, you're not. Here, take a bite of lynx." Solah purred soothingly as Sunstorm brought CT the lynx. "It's ok, you're safe now." the wolves assured CT.@horsegirl300Welcome! It may take a while, but you must first read the pages of the story. After that, write an introduction to your charrie (character) that explains who she is and how she got into the forest/what she does. There is one pack (I would like to make another...not happening!) The Thunderfangs, which you may join or stay a rougue. If you have your own pack, introduce them. Have fun!!!
Deleted • 29 April 2011 at 7:58 PM
Akila woke up from a dreadful sleep wanting water. She went to the nearby pond, sniffed, and knew there were wolves nearby. She walked to Avi and helped her recover with some medicine she found. Akila wondered what happened. "What happened" Akila asked Avi???@smilies Thanks
taffy789 • 29 April 2011 at 7:58 PM
Crimson yowled bloody murder as he streaked though the forest. His left eye felt like FIRE! He could only see red..... blood. His OWN, not that annoying little pups'!!! He howled angerily. Then, he calmed down. His eye will be out of commission for a while, so he will have to keep out of other wolves' ways. CrimsonFang growled to himself as he got to the river. That pup will PAY!
Deleted • 29 April 2011 at 7:59 PM
@randomkitty17 I would like to join your pack! PLEASE!!
smilies • 29 April 2011 at 8:03 PM
~ @horsegirl300 Please read previous pages. Avi is with Eternal in a cave >_< ~After his moment of collapse, Cast quickly rolled in the snow and gave himself another wash. His third that day, figures. He would NOT be lying on the ground looking like he'd been dragged through mud and worse. Which he had. And that's exactly what they'll look like, without a chance to get clean. He thought smugly. Serve them right. He sat upright, flicking his tail with impatience.~ @avelaingia That makes you ahead of the others. THIS IS THE PLAN OF THE TUNNELS!!!TF cavern > Bear tunnel > Cliff edge > Pool > Large cavern> Path 1 - goes deeper> Path 2 - Long passage in which you have to swim through icy water > Cavern with light - Just large enough passage high up which you need to pile up stones to reach, then take a short jump onto a ledge then crawl through a tight clay passage to the surface.> Path 3 - Joins with path 2 at water.I have been caving twice 😋 ~
taffy789 • 29 April 2011 at 8:04 PM
GrayFlood shivered. "BrightStar hasn't came back yet. NO ONE has!!!" GrayFlood thought to himself. He wanted to find them, but in the dark, all he saw was Crimson's evil red eyes......
Deleted • 29 April 2011 at 8:04 PM
@smilies Ok, I will read later gtg BYE!!!
decks123456 • 29 April 2011 at 8:04 PM
@redstar-fireclan i dont thing avi is in the shape to see a nother wolf right now. she just almost got disemboweled by a dream and is bleeding heavily. maybe when she gets better? 😸completely forgetting about Eternal back in the cave, Avi watched the she-wolf run over to her side. she drug herself out of the water and collapsed. the pain was getting worse, and it was a matter of time before something gets infected. "have to... keep moving... find help... so... much... pain!..." Avi howled as the rocks cut into the wound.@EVERYONEsince this is getting pretty confusing, ima gonna draw a map of what i think the areas look like. you can critique it and make changes when im done 😸
taffy789 • 29 April 2011 at 8:06 PM
Grayflood has had ENOUGH!!! Working up courage, he ran into the forest. He continued to run, intill he was hopelessly lost. GrayFlood, sad and loney, curled up by a bush and cried.
randomkitty17 • 29 April 2011 at 8:06 PM
@horsegirl300Aww shucks, well then you will have to talk to Sunstorm...he will be glad for a pack 😊The two wolves walked out of the cave. "I hope BrightStar is ok..." Solah sighed. "I'm going back to where I made camp. Bye Sol." Sunstorm said. "Bye Sunny, good luck." Solah wished her friend as he sprinted away. Solah walked back to CT. "Here, take these herbs."
smilies • 29 April 2011 at 8:11 PM
~ O_o WHAT?!?!?!?!?! Who's in the deeper cave with me?!?!?!?!?!!??!?!?!??!?!?!??! ~
redstar-fireclan • 29 April 2011 at 8:11 PM
@decks123456 ok...but...can she at LEAST hear the wolf's call..but NOT seeing him?
taffy789 • 29 April 2011 at 8:13 PM
@smilies ~ Aren't you out of the cave. P.s ~ Can I make GrayFlood find you? 😃
smilies • 29 April 2011 at 8:14 PM
~ Oh. Okay 😋 THANKS YOU GUYS FOR DITCHING ME THERE >:[ ~Cast was SOOO done for the day. He lay down under a large tree for the night.~ @taffy789 Well, no 😋 He just got out 😋 Yes, sure 😊 He did a victory howl 😉 ~
taffy789 • 29 April 2011 at 8:16 PM
GrayFlood smelled a familar scent. "CAST!!" GrayFlood shouted, happy to find a friend "CAST!!!!!!" GrayFlood yelled following the scent.
redstar-fireclan • 29 April 2011 at 8:17 PM
@smiles where's cast at? i want 2 know b/c if i can make Lily walk for a long time from deep in the forest and she's tired,hungrey, and wants WF.
smilies • 29 April 2011 at 8:17 PM
Dang. He'd only got about 5 minutes of eye-shut when who came along? Grayflood. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh..." Cast yawned. And jumped up. "What happened to you?!?!" Cast gasped.~ One wolf has already found him. I don't need another 😋 ~
redstar-fireclan • 29 April 2011 at 8:19 PM
taffy789 • 29 April 2011 at 8:20 PM
@smilies ~ I forgot to add , but GrayFlood has a gash on his shoulder. It's dried up though. : ) "Crimson Attacked Me!!!!" GrayFlood sobbed. The pup then ran and buried his head into Cast's side.
decks123456 • 29 April 2011 at 8:20 PM
Avi looked around with the right eye and surveyed the area."Eternal? do you know how to find medicinal herbs? i dont think ill last too long now." Avi stood up and managed to walk a bit, on three legs. she walked away from the pond without looking back, completely forgetting that Eternal was there. then she leaned against a tree and cursed under her breath. this wasnt working.@smiliesis it a network of tunnels or a cave that cast and them were in? is it far from a cliff you guys were talking about? im trying to make a map so the story is all less confusing.
smilies • 29 April 2011 at 8:22 PM
C: Personally, Cast had never had anyone crying on his shoulder, etc. So he was absolutely blank on what to do. "Come on, we should get you home." He lifted Grayflood up and carried him in the direction of the TF camp.EF: Eternal recovered from her immediate shock and promptly healed most of the worst wounds with her power, making sure not to use to much energy and faint. Then she went about collecting herbs she knew, for the first time ever tongue-tied on what to say.
taffy789 • 29 April 2011 at 8:24 PM
"NO!" GrayFlood shouted " It's dark. No one's there. I'm scard. I see Crimson's glowing red eyes EVERYWHERE! Don't make me go to the dark without BrightStar!" GrayFlood started to sob again.
randomkitty17 • 29 April 2011 at 8:25 PM
Sunstorm was tired. He went back to his clearing and lied down "I've had enough excitement for a thousand years..." he lied down and invited the darkness.--- "Calm down, CT. We will get him, in time. There's no use fretting about it now. You need to rest." Solah said. She felt strange telling her leader what to do.
smilies • 29 April 2011 at 8:26 PM
"We are going to find Brightstar. Don't worry, you're with me." Cast tried his best at soothing the young pup. It definitely wasn't his strong point. They neared the cave and Cast could tell wolves were there this time.
taffy789 • 29 April 2011 at 8:28 PM
GrayFlood sobbed to himself. He was scard out of his mind. "The red eyes!" he muttered to himself "The red eyes!!"