<(^o^)> Poetry Contest!!! Good Prizes!!!

han • 9 March 2012 at 3:50 AM

@sarahzafirah
^^ Great!

sarahzafirah • 9 March 2012 at 3:50 AM

I'M GONNA WIN!! 😈

duchess • 9 March 2012 at 5:29 AM

@snowball888111

Balrogipuwet:

Thin smoke tendrils
Rise from the steaming wet-black fur
Sinuous curves of muscle
Bulk beneath the sleek wet-black
Hot coals for eyes
Gaze dispassionately ahead
Burning trails into your soul
Dark shining horns curl and spiral
Glistening with midnight light

A picture
A momententary glance
Before it flees
Plunging into the night
Dragging a cloak of shadows with it.

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It's a little vague, but I hope you like it ^^

han • 10 March 2012 at 1:01 AM

@duchess
It describes the balrogipuwet beautifully! Even though I don't like balrogs, the description makes me think they're beautiful. 😱

duchess • 10 March 2012 at 1:03 AM

@snowball888111, Thank you ^^

han • 10 March 2012 at 1:04 AM

@duchess
No problem ^^

silver • 10 March 2012 at 1:07 AM

@snowball888111 thanks! 😸 Btw.. any hint about whose gonna win? 83

han • 10 March 2012 at 1:12 AM

@silver
Your welcome, and probably not. More people will probably join, and my opinions will change.

silver • 10 March 2012 at 1:13 AM

@snowball888111 XD lol okay. 😸

bunnyshadow • 10 March 2012 at 1:23 AM

Frogike:

Your color is green
Droplets of wet rain.
Purple waves line your body,
And so do silver spikes.
Your colored eyes,
Stare out at me.
And I freeze inside,
Because I think your perfect.
I do not care what others will say,
I love you the way you are.
And there you lay,
Waiting for me to come.

leafpelt • 10 March 2012 at 12:40 PM

@snowball888111

Can I try?

Divine Tine,
With your gorgeous wings,
and sea blue eyes.

A coveted creature,
I'm proud that you're mine.

Spreading love and glee,
You're one that pleases.

Fail. 😋

acacia • 10 March 2012 at 5:34 PM

@snowball888111

OK so here is my poem
it is about Ahjoon's

called:

two souls, one body

I stare into the eyes of a different soul
we share love and crave compassion
we know we shall never be alone
and we will always be living together

our lives are intertwined for a future unknown
i feel the warm and heartbeat of the other soul
as i know he can feel me beating even faster
i feel safe and sound knowing hes around
i know nothing could break us apart

two souls working together
fighting for each other
one body reminding us
we shall never be alone

han • 10 March 2012 at 6:29 PM

@leafpelt
@bunnyshadow
@acacia
I loved all of yours! ❤️❤️❤️

acacia • 10 March 2012 at 6:31 PM

@snowball888111

its nothing special ^^ but thank you it means a lot i write poetry when i need to get my feelings out, but i never thought it was any good or made sense to anyone but me...i like my poems to tell stories ❤️

han • 10 March 2012 at 6:43 PM

@acacia
I love to write poetry about the seasons (they are failures 😋)

Here is one of them:

Winter breezes, sweet but cold,
Biting your hand, and neck, and toes.
Winter breezes, swift and strong,
Flying through the cold Winter air.

acacia • 10 March 2012 at 7:46 PM

@snowball888111

actually thats a pretty awesome poem just making it up on the spot like that 😊

han • 10 March 2012 at 7:48 PM

@acacia
But still....

sarahzafirah • 10 March 2012 at 7:51 PM

@snowball888111 You poem was beautiful!!!!! *cries*

han • 10 March 2012 at 7:58 PM

@sarahzafirah
😊 Thanks! But its not that good... is it? =.=

morgana • 10 March 2012 at 8:06 PM

Luckuar

Luckuar, oh Luckuar, what a lucky green cat you are.
Rarely seen in the jungle of the Ark you are.
Luckuar, oh Luckuar.

@snowball888111 I LOVE poem contests! ❤️

han • 10 March 2012 at 8:09 PM

@morgana
Great! ^^

boxofcrayons • 10 March 2012 at 8:13 PM

@snowball888111

In the dank of the deep dark forest
Where shadows throw perceptions
And eyes blink in the shadows.

This is the home of the tiny
Woodland sprites.
Spritemice creep through overgrown paths.

Little woody gnarles,
Full of love and joy for their
Thicketed home.


It's not great, bu.. yeah 😊

acacia • 10 March 2012 at 8:23 PM

@snowball888111

don't doubt your skills! it takes a lot to make a poem,for some its easier than others! it takes a lot of skill and everyone's poem is amazing even if it doesn't make sense, it has meaning!Thats why a lot of poets write poems, so they can bend words to were you have to really think about the meaning. Thats why people love poetry! 😃 even the most amazing poets had to start somewhere ,being able to twist words just so! its the beauty of humanity 😊 even if its not your best work, to someone...it can inspire them to be a better person and change their point of view! literature is a beautiful thing and i am honored to know how to read and write. Even though grown adults in their 40's still can't?!?! Reading and writing is a powerful thing 😊

phoenizis • 10 March 2012 at 10:45 PM

@snowball888111
My 3rd poem ever... so proud.

Given to smart people,
Eyleymos are the best of the best.
They're obviously not equal.

Pranksters, hoppers, yes.
They really like to hop,
and are funny little bunnies nevertheless.

I'd like to find a Eyleymo in a mop someday..

whispers • 10 March 2012 at 10:56 PM

@snowball888111

Olimpt

Bubbly and playful,
Just a mix of bright colors.
Kind and sweet,
Their personality is just so unique!

They roam,
And they lurk though the forest.
The three ears,
They pick up every small sound.

Olimpts; friendly little cats, that are the cutesy stuff,
And a mix of the feline hunting side.

--
Terrible 😋
I is not good a poems with this..

glazzie • 10 March 2012 at 11:33 PM

@Inhabitant
❤️33
You are awesome, my friend (:

inhabitant • 10 March 2012 at 11:35 PM

@glazzie

YOU ARE AWESOME TOO ^-^

❤️

glazzie • 10 March 2012 at 11:35 PM

@inhabitant

WE ARE BOTH THE MOST BEAUTIFUL WOMEN ON THE PLANET.

Oh wait....
Sorry that's my excuse for everything XD
CHRISTIAN IS NOT A WOMAN.

inhabitant • 10 March 2012 at 11:37 PM

@glazzie

XD

Imma DUde XD

and LOL yeah~! haha ^^ I'm Christian ^^ (got used to rain way too much)

glazzie • 10 March 2012 at 11:38 PM

@inhabitant

EH, I don't know. We both smell the same.


XD I'm so dorky it's beautiful ❤️33
MOO. ^^