The Orphanage

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 3:19 PM

How do you help immortalise cause i'm confused xD

Brendon shifted uneasily as her stare made you feel ice cold. ''Well..again eh?'' her voice sounded as if she was going to go on a killing spree.

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ninjagirl • 2 April 2012 at 3:21 PM

@spiritwolf3 oh all you have to do is click on the link and feed it XD Caring is a creature I'm immortalising for a contest.

Katia pretended to read her book, but was much more interested in the scene infront of her.

jupiter_hollow • 2 April 2012 at 3:29 PM

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Aizel was standing in the back, scared of what the crazy woman would do next.

*someone else play the witch. We could take turns at playing her

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 3:30 PM

Brendon didn't answer he mainly just sat there staring at the woman.She laughed and grabbed him by the ear.''OW OWCH LET GO YOU CRANKY UGLY OLD HAG!'' he cried in pain.

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ninjagirl • 2 April 2012 at 3:46 PM

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Katia flinched. [yeep] witch, who did she think she was?

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 3:49 PM

'' Don't call me that boy...remember what you're parents said...'' she whispered into his ear. Brendon stopped and just went limp. ''Come with me..'' she said dragging him away.




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jupiter_hollow • 2 April 2012 at 3:53 PM

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Aizel growled.
"Not this time UGLY WITCH!" she shouted and lunged at the large woman. She pushed her away from the boy and then straight forward punched her in the face.

Aizel just couldn't have helped herself. Hearing the terrible deeds of this woman made her blood boil and beating the kids just broke her line of patience.

She stood in front of the witch, glaring at her with wide wild black eyes that held vicious fury.

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 3:55 PM

The witch glared at her ''BOTH OF YOU DOWNSTAIRS NOW!'' she roared grabbing them both and pulling them hard. She pushed them into her room and locked the door. ''Brendon...you're first...'' she said. She cuffed Aizel to the wall so she couldn't break free and hit her again.




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jupiter_hollow • 2 April 2012 at 3:59 PM

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Aizel struggled against the chain.
"NO! Touch anybody in this house and I will kill you!" she yelled, turning hysterical in a short period of time. She tugged on the chain wildly and pulled at the cuffs. She couldn't do anything but watch Brendon get beaten again.

ninjagirl • 2 April 2012 at 4:00 PM

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Katia said nothing. 'YES LET'S KILLHER!' she thought.

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 4:02 PM

The witch glared ''Do not start with me miss!'' she said and grabbed her whip. A quick lash and a roar of pain filled the room. Brendon had got a hit on his back he lifted his head when a sharp whip across his face knocked him down again. He got up and looked as if he was choking on something. He spat a tooth out. The woman glared and whipped him on the face again. Brendon fell to the floor blood trickled down his cheeks. He was still breathing but felt weak. The witch turned and gave a lash to Aizel too.



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jupiter_hollow • 2 April 2012 at 4:03 PM

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Aizel yelled again.
"Evil witch!!! Evil ugly stupid witch!" she shouted at the woman trying desperatelly to get her to let Brendon go. She couldn't dare watching ssomeone get hurt! She trashed wildly and tuggeed at the cuffs again. Nothing seemed to work.

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 4:06 PM

The witch turned and whipped her across the face.''Do not start with me miss...'' she growled. She turned back and looked at the boy on the floor trying to get up.




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Okay guys if we kill the witch and escape we still need to struggle for a few days or weeks trying to find a town or city cause they live far away from that.

jupiter_hollow • 2 April 2012 at 4:08 PM

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Let's not kill the witch. She'll threaten them to kill them and she will lock herself up when she sleeps so they wouldn't kill her in her sleep! XP Mind if I play the witch now? I got somethin special for the charries! 😉

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 4:10 PM

@jupiter_hollow go on 😃
@ninjagirl you can try and listen to whats going on and everything 😋

ninjagirl • 2 April 2012 at 4:10 PM

@spiritwolf3 *vvv*
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Katia grabbed the key from the witch's pants, where you could see her chubby hips overflowing. She quickly clicked it in the lock.

Guys can Katia kill her??

jupiter_hollow • 2 April 2012 at 4:16 PM

@ninjagirl yeah but not now!
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The witch glared at Brendon and kicked him in the ribs with all her might. She didn't manage to knock him unconsious but brought him great pain.
She finally turned to the struggling girl.
"Now you... Tylk." she hissed, grabbing a hand full of th girls hair and tugging her up.
"You thnk you can mess with me. I've been nice to ya girl but NO MORE!" she slammed Aizels head back against the wall and reached for the whip, lashing at the girl's arms and legs. Aizel let out blood-curdling screams as the skin was almost ripped away.
"You think that you can stand up to me? YOU CAN'T!" the woman shouted at Aizel's face again and slammed her head back again. The girl's vision became blurry as a punch landed on her cheek. She hissed at the witch.
"I CAN stand up to you ugly witch!"

Clenching her teeth in fury the witch reached for the beer bottle that stood on the nighstand and smashed the glass in Aizel's head, knocking the girl unconscious for good.

ninjagirl • 2 April 2012 at 4:19 PM

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Btw you two are good at writing violently XDD
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Katia was curled up in the corner. 'I didn't do it I didn't do it I didn't do it I-' she muttered.

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 4:20 PM

Brendon moaned in pain. He stuggled trying to get up. He looked at the witch and slowly grabbed a glass near the chair. He threw it hard at the witches head before collasping in a heap.

@ninjagirl you sure love killing don't ye xD
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jupiter_hollow • 2 April 2012 at 4:23 PM

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The witch glared at Aizel that lay on the floor. A little stream of blood was running down her forehead. The woman didn't even bother unchaining her. She took Brendon by his black hair and dragged him out of the room, slamming the door after herself. She glared at the other kids.
"Tylk will stay chained! UNDERSTAND? And if anyone tries helping her I will murder each and every one of you disgusting leeches!" she hissed at them and threw Brendon to the wall.
She gglared at Vex. "Try covering up for him again" she pointed to Brendon"And I will rip those webs from your fingers single handedly." she added and walked away.

ninjagirl • 2 April 2012 at 4:27 PM

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Katia unfurled from her ball. 'unnmm.......' she looked at the destruction around her. How much was her aunt paying that witch??

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 4:29 PM

Brendon lay lifeless on the floor. His chest was moving so he was breathing and alive but he was unconscious.

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jupiter_hollow • 2 April 2012 at 4:34 PM

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Anyone help Brendon? -_-

Aizel lay unconscious on the floor where the witch had left her. She breathed in gasps and her chest struggled to rise.

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--Sorry, left for a bit--

Grey eyes wide, Vex stared the witch down. 'You harm one more hair on either of thier heads and I will killyou-even if I die trying' he spat. Vex glanced a Brendon, placing two fingers on his neck, he discovered a pulse. 'Thats good, not dead, just uncontious' he muttered under his breath. The crimson blood began to pool on Aizel's forehead.

jupiter_hollow • 2 April 2012 at 4:36 PM

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You're not supposed to help Aizel. Don't worry she'll wake up in a few!

ninjagirl • 2 April 2012 at 4:37 PM

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@swimforlife it's fine XP

Katia knelt down beside Brendon. 'unmm...' she thought for a minute, cocking her head. She then ripped off a piece of sheet and put it around his head, then took the rest of the sheet and put that around him.

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 4:40 PM

Brendon suddenly let out a series of gasps and stutters as he got up. He was breathing real fast for some reason. He gave big gasp as he stopped. He looked around his face bleeding rather badly. He weakly got up when his ribs hurt badly. He looked over at Katia. ''H-Hey..you okay?'' he said forcing a weak smile and the smile dissapered after seeing Aizel.''Ahh ____'' he cursed under his breath walking over.

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The witch stormed off, face a shade of bright purple. 'I expect you all to be cleaned up and prepare dinner by 6!' she hissed.
Vex ran to the bathroom and wet a paper towel. He dabbed the cut on Aizel's forehead, then returned to Brendon. He drew a shaky breath. Leaning down, Vex slung the girl onto his shoulder and carried her to the bedroom.

ninjagirl • 2 April 2012 at 4:43 PM

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Katia looked over at Aizel. She bit her lip.

spiritwolf3 • 2 April 2012 at 4:46 PM

Brendon looked around and jumped up to follow.''Y-You coming?'' he said in a shaky voice to Katia.

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