My book! XD

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chapus • 23 June 2012 at 5:25 PM

Well, as many of you know it, I have started to write a book. It's called Jane and Yugana.

Here are the links to the 3 pages: (I shall put more in the next post.)

Prologue: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/01/jane-and-yugana-prologue.html

P.1: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/01/jane-and-yugana-page-1.html

P.2: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/01/jane-and-yugana.html


DO NOT STEAL THIS STORY OR IT'S CONCEPT. IF YOU DO, I SWEAR TO GOD, I WILL BEAT YOU UP WITH THIS COMPUTER. I warned you! >:[

Please, tell me if you find some errors. I'm not the best in english. XD

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ninjagirl • 23 June 2012 at 5:29 PM

@chapus2009 well, lucky for you, I'm a total English geek >: ) reading it again now! 😃

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hay7199 • 23 June 2012 at 5:32 PM

OMG you should make more!

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chapus • 23 June 2012 at 5:36 PM

@ninajgirl LOL. XD Heck yah I'm lucky! 😊

P.3: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/04/jane-and-yugana-page-4.html

P.4: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/04/jane-and-yugana-page-4_17.html

P.5: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/06/jane-and-yugana-page-5.html

P.6: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/06/jane-and-
yugana-page-6.html

P.7: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/11/jane-and-yugana-page-7.html

P.8: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/11/jane-and-yugana-page-8.html

P.9: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/11/jane-and-yugana-page-9.html

P.10: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/11/jane-and-yugana-page-10.html

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lskam • 23 June 2012 at 5:49 PM

@chapus2009 Nice! I love to write stories myself. 😊

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ninjagirl • 23 June 2012 at 5:50 PM

@chapus2009 yes, I'm very much a nerd 😸

*Then, two young children CAME running towards their grandfather.
*Usually, in DIFFERENT CIRCUMSTANCES AN ordinary 9 year-old boy like me would run with friends
*?Guess what?s for dinner?? question mark 😸
*then in a second, my sister was already gone, quickly followed by Jake and Freddy giggling like kids in a schoolyard AT recess.
*I OPENED the door and it was like my everyday room.
*I MET her when I was in the park.
*Closing the door of my room, I LAY on my bed, exhausted from all the running.

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chapus • 23 June 2012 at 5:50 PM

@lskam Cool! 😃 *high fives* Did you ever get a writer's block? :T

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hay7199 • 23 June 2012 at 5:50 PM

I LOVE IT!

@Chapus2009

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ninjagirl • 23 June 2012 at 5:51 PM

@chapus2009 proofread! 😃

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chapus • 23 June 2012 at 5:53 PM

@ninjagirl Thanks!
@hay7199 Thanks to you too! XD

Can you guys help me ping? :T

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hay7199 • 23 June 2012 at 5:54 PM

Me to?

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lskam • 23 June 2012 at 5:56 PM

@chapus2009 Yes! It's annoying. But it goes away very quickly since I have a very... crazy imagination.
*All I had to do was convice OS-224 to let me out, since he was the only one able to turn off the cameras without my family SENSING something supicious.

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*Usually, in DIFFERENT CIRCUMSTANCES AN ordinary 9 year-old boy like me would run with friends

Isn't Jane a girl? 😸

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chapus • 23 June 2012 at 5:59 PM

@lskam I know. D: And thanks for correcting my errors, it's greatly appreciated.

Urgh... That was the question me and my brother would fear to hear... No... Jane is NOT a girl... >.<

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ninjagirl • 23 June 2012 at 6:00 PM

@lskam I know, but thats what it said on the page... 😱 i didnt know if I should change it or not.

@chapus2009 welcome 😊 can I have the link to the next few pages? and okies!

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@ninjagirl
@chapus2009

Cool!

Thanks for the ping, Ninja! 😃

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ninjagirl • 25 June 2012 at 5:55 PM

@swimforlife no probs dank 😃

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chapus • 25 June 2012 at 5:58 PM

@swimforlife Thanks for reading! 😸
@ninjagirl Thanks for the help fwiendie! 😉

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ninjagirl • 25 June 2012 at 6:02 PM

@chapus2009 not a bother 😃

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