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chapus • 23 June 2012 at 5:25 PM
Well, as many of you know it, I have started to write a book. It's called Jane and Yugana.Here are the links to the 3 pages: (I shall put more in the next post.)Prologue: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/01/jane-and-yugana-prologue.htmlP.1: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/01/jane-and-yugana-page-1.htmlP.2: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/01/jane-and-yugana.htmlDO NOT STEAL THIS STORY OR IT'S CONCEPT. IF YOU DO, I SWEAR TO GOD, I WILL BEAT YOU UP WITH THIS COMPUTER. I warned you! >:[Please, tell me if you find some errors. I'm not the best in english. XDPings: (Help me ping!)@ninjagirl@lavender@hay7199@bunnyshadow@deu
ninjagirl • 23 June 2012 at 5:29 PM
@chapus2009 well, lucky for you, I'm a total English geek >: ) reading it again now! 😃
hay7199 • 23 June 2012 at 5:32 PM
OMG you should make more!
chapus • 23 June 2012 at 5:36 PM
@ninajgirl LOL. XD Heck yah I'm lucky! 😊P.3: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/04/jane-and-yugana-page-4.htmlP.4: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/04/jane-and-yugana-page-4_17.htmlP.5: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/06/jane-and-yugana-page-5.htmlP.6: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/06/jane-and-yugana-page-6.htmlP.7: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/11/jane-and-yugana-page-7.htmlP.8: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/11/jane-and-yugana-page-8.htmlP.9: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/11/jane-and-yugana-page-9.htmlP.10: http://chapusdhdp.blogspot.ca/2012/11/jane-and-yugana-page-10.html
lskam • 23 June 2012 at 5:49 PM
@chapus2009 Nice! I love to write stories myself. 😊
ninjagirl • 23 June 2012 at 5:50 PM
@chapus2009 yes, I'm very much a nerd 😸*Then, two young children CAME running towards their grandfather.*Usually, in DIFFERENT CIRCUMSTANCES AN ordinary 9 year-old boy like me would run with friends*?Guess what?s for dinner?? question mark 😸*then in a second, my sister was already gone, quickly followed by Jake and Freddy giggling like kids in a schoolyard AT recess.*I OPENED the door and it was like my everyday room.*I MET her when I was in the park.*Closing the door of my room, I LAY on my bed, exhausted from all the running.
chapus • 23 June 2012 at 5:50 PM
@lskam Cool! 😃 *high fives* Did you ever get a writer's block? :T
hay7199 • 23 June 2012 at 5:50 PM
I LOVE IT!@Chapus2009
ninjagirl • 23 June 2012 at 5:51 PM
@chapus2009 proofread! 😃
chapus • 23 June 2012 at 5:53 PM
@ninjagirl Thanks!@hay7199 Thanks to you too! XDCan you guys help me ping? :T
hay7199 • 23 June 2012 at 5:54 PM
Me to?
lskam • 23 June 2012 at 5:56 PM
@chapus2009 Yes! It's annoying. But it goes away very quickly since I have a very... crazy imagination.*All I had to do was convice OS-224 to let me out, since he was the only one able to turn off the cameras without my family SENSING something supicious.@ninjagirl*Usually, in DIFFERENT CIRCUMSTANCES AN ordinary 9 year-old boy like me would run with friendsIsn't Jane a girl? 😸
chapus • 23 June 2012 at 5:59 PM
@lskam I know. D: And thanks for correcting my errors, it's greatly appreciated.Urgh... That was the question me and my brother would fear to hear... No... Jane is NOT a girl... >.<
ninjagirl • 23 June 2012 at 6:00 PM
@lskam I know, but thats what it said on the page... 😱 i didnt know if I should change it or not.@chapus2009 welcome 😊 can I have the link to the next few pages? and okies!@spiritwolf3@jupiter_hollow@swimforlife
Deleted • 25 June 2012 at 5:53 PM
@ninjagirl@chapus2009Cool!Thanks for the ping, Ninja! 😃
ninjagirl • 25 June 2012 at 5:55 PM
@swimforlife no probs dank 😃
chapus • 25 June 2012 at 5:58 PM
@swimforlife Thanks for reading! 😸@ninjagirl Thanks for the help fwiendie! 😉
ninjagirl • 25 June 2012 at 6:02 PM
@chapus2009 not a bother 😃