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takaedakumi • 2 August 2012 at 4:34 PM
@cynder5 I feel really bad about it, but it may be for the best. You should try to practice up on your grammar by writing short stories and having someone read them over and help you fix mistakes or something. I found that that helped me with my grammar. ^^
rosaline_kaye • 2 August 2012 at 4:34 PM
@takatheeducatedkid@seaangelRosaline looked over her shoulder to see the note. She sighed and glared at Nina, then Liza. She cancelled the shoot and put her arrow back in the bag. Stellalune was perched on her shoulder. She grunted. "Let's go, we have no business here. I don't want to see this loser again." she glared at Liza again.
takaedakumi • 2 August 2012 at 4:37 PM
The group continued on quietly, leaving Liza back at her street. Ahead of them were several barricades, officers and military soldiers guarding them. They had reached the Safe Zone, but now they needed to undergo the checking procedure, in case someone dangerous were to try and enter.
cynder5 • 2 August 2012 at 4:38 PM
@takatheeducatedkidok well bye
carter • 2 August 2012 at 4:39 PM
@takatheeducatedkidHeather hugged Ash tightly, her head down. the 14 year old looked even smaller as she did so, She was already thin but now she looked weak. Ash gave a small meow and Heather looked up at Nina's note. 'Move on.' She thought. 'Is that all we can do?'
seaangel • 2 August 2012 at 4:39 PM
Liza clentched her fists. "That's it." She lifted a dumpster into the air then threw it at Rosaline. "Clearly you don't know me." She said to her then smirked.
takaedakumi • 2 August 2012 at 4:40 PM
@cynder5 Thanks for trying at least. And good luck! c:
rosaline_kaye • 2 August 2012 at 4:40 PM
@takatheeducatedkidRosaline halted at the sight of the soldiers and officers. She clutched her bow tightly. "What about my weapons?!" she whispered to Nina.
seaangel • 2 August 2012 at 4:44 PM
Liza kept watching them this time being careful. She motioned to Nina and hoped to catch her eye. Liza knew that Rosaline was the only bad egg in the group.
takaedakumi • 2 August 2012 at 4:46 PM
@rosaline_kaye@seaangelNina ripped a piece of paper with writing on it and handed it to Rosaline: "They won't blame you for having weapons." it read. And with that, Nina slipped from the group for a few moments to see what Liza wanted.
rosaline_kaye • 2 August 2012 at 4:47 PM
@takatheeducatedkid~Rosaline nodded. She approached the officers, hopefully able to get in. The officers nodded, and she ran inside.
seaangel • 2 August 2012 at 4:48 PM
"Look, you don't have to go through them if you follow me. I go in and out of here all the time without being detected. They won't allow weapons in there. Tell the girl with the bow and arrows that I want to help you, but only because I'm looking for the cure too." Liza said quickly and in a whisper. "I won't hurt any of you as long as you listen to me, because I know this place better then all of you."
linpug • 2 August 2012 at 4:49 PM
Terezi~I skip over to the town square, my black hair dancing in the cold wind. I can smell the marshmallow snow on the ground. Turning my head upward, I sniff an asparagus-flavored tree above and continue to walk. A branch flies into my face, and I never smelled it coming.I hear the crunch of snow as some people walk by. Recognizing the scent of one girl's bubblegum hair, I trot over with my cherry and vanilla milkshake walking stick in my hand. My candy red classes bounce on my nose. "Hey, Ms. Bubblegum Hair," I say, laughing manically. I could smell people near her, but I didn't recognize them. Looking in the other direction, I smelled something new. People were guarding the area.
takaedakumi • 2 August 2012 at 5:00 PM
@rosaline_kaye@lola622f@carter@linpug@seaangel Nina wrote another note: "I think we can make it. But you can come if you want." she went back to the group, a new person was there, they thought they recognized her. She cocked her head in confusion. "Let's go in already!" Randy said, eager to see if his mother was inside.Some officers came up to the group. "Can we help you?" one asked."You may enter, but we'll need to hold on to your weapons- only as long as you're inside the Safe Zone." said another. "Don't worry though, it's called the Safe Zone for a reason, you won't need them, trust me. Especially with General Xander Sykes in there." he laughed.
seaangel • 2 August 2012 at 5:03 PM
"I'm coming with you. You need those weapons." Liza said as she walked in with them. She was asked a question then let in. After everyone went she made the weapons hover in the air were the guards couldn't reach. She past them over the fence the held them in her arms. She past them to their owners then smiled.
takaedakumi • 2 August 2012 at 5:05 PM
@seaangelNina handed her weapon, a strange looking pistol, back to the officers and glared at Liza, shaking her head.
rosaline_kaye • 2 August 2012 at 5:06 PM
@takatheeducatedkidTaking a break, be back later.
Deleted • 2 August 2012 at 5:24 PM
@allpeopleinthegroupHarumi was standing in the Safe Zone, tapping her feet against the ground. Her brown hair had a silvery shine and her blue eyes had a purple glint. She tipped her head to the side and she saw the group enter. "Oh, hello!" she greeted cheerfully to the group. A small, sweet smile crossed her face. 'I think I creeped them out...' she thought to herself. She shook her head, trying not to worry.
jennifer • 2 August 2012 at 5:24 PM
Okay, I was gone for an hour and poof. How am I supposed to jump in!? I didn't join Nina's group yet. And I have a dog companion. I'm still somewhere in New York and how did you guys even get to the forest earlier anyway. Fine. I'll be a stacker who follows you guys.____________________________________________Jennifer followed the group with "The Dog" behind her. She saw the group come to a stop. Hoping that they won't be suspicious she turned into an owl. She decided to turn into a Snowy Owl. She was glad that "The Dog" had a white coat that blended in with the snow. She flew up to get a better view of what they were doing and something knocked her out of the air. She gave a hoot of protest. She saw another snowy owl. It was that girl's pet owl. Saw started flapping her wings rapidly as the owl chased her. "The Dog" started barking and leaped into the air trying to grab the other owl in his jaws. The group started to notice. Oh no. Jennifer turned back into a human when "The Dog" grabbed her leg at the same time. She fell out of the air. "The Dog" probably thought she was the other owl. She looked up and saw the group staring at her.
linpug • 2 August 2012 at 5:40 PM
Terezi~ 😋 "Hey!" I laugh crazily, trotting over to the Safe Zone that they were going to. I smell another tall girl, with bland-smelling hair reminding me of a rotting banana. "OMG, is that lavender?" I gasp quietly, inhaling her fragrant eyes. The group, led by Ms. Bubblegum, seem to be entering the Safe Zone. I quietly trail them like a weird stalker. The scent of chocolate-flavored hair from inside drifts to my nose.
taffy789 • 2 August 2012 at 5:41 PM
@takatheeducatedkid Dante shook Scott's hand. "I agree with you there. Though, I was expecting as much...I...Uhh...Have watched a lot of post-apocalyptic movies." he admitted quietly. " "I Am Legend" was a good one. The part with the dog made my sister-" There was a pause there. Dante sighed, remembering that his sister died, and more importantly, HOW she died. Ignoring the knot that was slowly tying up his stomach, Dante continued, sighing and tiredly rubbing the dark circles under his eye. "So, Scott, do you have any ideas on how we will survive this disaster? I was kind of holed in an apartment for the last few days, I haven't been on the streets at all."
jennifer • 2 August 2012 at 5:48 PM
Did you guys just ignore a girl falling out of the sky followed by a dog and chased by a snowy owl!?______________________________________________Jennifer returned the stares of the group. She felt very embarrassed. The scratches and bruises hurt a lot but she had experienced worst. As an tomboy and athlete she always got hurt but the group's glares hurt her even more. "Um..." she managed to say.
takaedakumi • 2 August 2012 at 5:48 PM
@taffy789 Scott lost Dante at the word "sister". He stared blankly forward. "You lost... a sister too then?" he asked. Visions flashed before his mind. His younger sister who always clutched his hand and followed him, he remembered each horrifying moment, each time she coughed up her own blood. The pain she felt, he could feel it too...Scott quickly rubbed his eyes with his sleeve, trying to cover up that he had been about to cry."Anyway, I heard there's a Safe Zone, we should probably make our way there." he suggested.EDIT:@jennifer I'm sorry, I keep forgetting to add something about that! Dx
Deleted • 2 August 2012 at 6:13 PM
Harumi blinked, wondering why the group didn't say anything. 'Ok, I guess I did creep them out,' she thought, a bit disappointed in herself. She turned to face the girl who just fell out of the sky."Who are you...?" Harumi asked. She was a bit confused, trying to process what just happened. She placed a hand on her head, thinking she was hallucinating.
taffy789 • 2 August 2012 at 6:36 PM
@takatheeducatedkid "You too? Well, my sister died just a few days ago...My parents died more towards the start of the madness." Dante frowned, looking at his worn sneakers. "I think we can climb down now, it seems safe. We can go to the Safe Zone you mentioned." Dante slipped the bat back into the pocket on his bag, and carefully climbed down the fire escape. "So, Scott, what's your chocolate? It's obvious of what my "poison" is." Dante laughed, tapping his dead arm in it's sling.
takaedakumi • 2 August 2012 at 6:48 PM
@taffy789"I'm not sure what my gift is yet, I haven't figured out. But I do get really bad pains in my stomach from time to time, my guess is that it has something to do with my poison." Scott explained as he climbed down after Dante. "My sister died this morning..." he looked down at his gray and black gloves, blood stains showed easier on the gray parts. "Looters." he said in a low voice.
jennifer • 2 August 2012 at 6:57 PM
Jennifer turned to face the girl who had spoken. She had midnight blue eyes. "Um..." she started to say, trying to think of a lie. She was pretty good at making lies but she couldn't think of anything so she spilled the beans. "Well, I saw that you guys were infected with chocolate as well and you mentioned finding a cure and I wanted to help so I followed you here. You stopped and I couldn't hear you were saying so I changed into an owl but another owl chased me." Jennifer paused then asked, " Where did that owl go, anyway?" "Neither way, it chased me so I turned back into a human." She glances at "The Dog" which still had her ankle in it's jaws. "The Dog" dropped her ankle looking away guiltily. "This is 'The Dog'. I don't know if it's a girl or boy and I haven't thought of a name yet. I meet it recently. He's my travel buddy." She paused,"So.. you all have been infected with the chocolate? My curse is I can't eat. My gift is turning into anything." Jennifer realized that she still had not answered the girl's question,"I'm Jennifer, by the way." She stood up. And looked around. "These people are not angry that I followed them," she thought.
Deleted • 2 August 2012 at 7:07 PM
"Oh," Harumi said. "Haha, well I don't know what they are doing." She glanced over at the group. "Since, I'm not part of their group. But I am infected with PC. Necessarily, I wasn't looking for a cure. But hey, that isn't really a bad idea, is it?" She bent over and looked at 'The Dog.' She felt a little uncomfortable since she had always been scared of dogs.
blueclaw • 2 August 2012 at 7:51 PM
Sorry for ruining the forum in pages 6 and 7....New Form...Name: Esytha MerifGender: FemaleAge: 12Gift: Her eye for detailCurse: WeaklingAppearance: Brown hair, brown eyes, and a cat shirt.Other: She loves cats so she has a pet cat named prince with her.
seaangel • 2 August 2012 at 9:53 PM
@takatheeducatedkid@collete@jennifer~~~~Liza turned to see the girl. "So your stalker?" She watched the whole thing and thought the it was nothing, until well shifted. 'She reminds me of Jessica.' Liza thought to herself as she turned away from the rest of them. "You guys got this right? I'll be close with you guys if you need help. I, I need to finish something." Liza disappeared out of the safe zone, but you could almost see her lavender eyes. There was a slight smile then nothing.