~Inferno - The Last Armada~ Literate War RP (Discussion Board)

jupiter_hollow • 15 September 2012 at 7:09 AM

@bunnyshadow War RP, 😋 That's pretty much all you have to know.

onyx • 15 September 2012 at 11:01 AM

@meixiaotian

Sorry im already bothering you with this but could you make him older. I would like it if people made grown up characters but i guess i will have to accept teenagers as well although in reality they would be too inexperienced and young to be sent into war 😋

meixiaotian • 15 September 2012 at 2:24 PM

@onyx okay sure.

dada_dragon • 17 September 2012 at 2:25 AM

@jupiter_hollow
@onyx

So when does this gong show begin? XD

onyx • 17 September 2012 at 1:56 PM

@dada_dragon

I think we should start once jupiter and i post our forms. She has already finished hers and mine is almost done as well.

Still jupiter might want us to wait until more people join. Also she is one of the RP owners so we will have to wait for her all the same.

dada_dragon • 17 September 2012 at 2:26 PM

@onyx

For sure. Take your time. XD

onyx • 22 September 2012 at 4:50 PM

Full Name: Gavran
Alias:
Gender: M
Age: 21
Family: He lost both of his parents at a young age. He has a younger brother.
Species: human
Type: soldier (Euro-Asian army)
Appearance: He has light brown eyes and short hair which is a specific shade of black. His skin is light and he is very tall and visibly muscular. Most of the time he wears an army uniform, like the rest of the low rank soldiers (im yet to think of a uniform for the two armies and im open to ideas XD ) . Still, sometimes when he is at base he takes off some of his clothes. In the morning he walks around in a sleeveless shirt and pair of shorts in which he sleeps.
Personality: He has little control over his emotions and acts without much thinking. Most of the time, he overdoes things. He is rather fun loving and completely unorganized, unable to even dress himself in an orderly way. This led to conflict with most of his past commanders. Still, there is another side of his personality. Very much nothing scares him and he is able to become serious when needed, usually when he is angry or when he is studying. He enjoys learning and values knowledge, bravery and selflessness. It is notable that he easily understands things which are usually complicated and is very intelligent.
Weapon: He is skilled in using many firearms. He always caries two guns and often replaces them with a new, different pair. His other weapons are a medium machine gun and a few knives.
Power: none

onyx52 • 22 September 2012 at 4:51 PM

History: Both of his parents died of starvation when he was only 12 and he and his brother were left to survive on their own. The two obtained all they needed by stealing and got into many fights. After a few years of such a life the two developed into strong individuals and became mercenaries, this way coming in contact and earning a big amount of experience with different firearms and weapons. He managed to get a good education before he and his brother were recruited and taken to the new continent. Compared to the rest of the human soldiers they were clearly superior but once they were put up against a humanoid they failed miserably. The two were sent to a small city which was abandoned after the news of war. Their mission was to keep the enemy from passing deeper into the continent following the root which went trough the city. Still, their troop was cut down by a small amount of enemy humanoids without much effort. The two brothers managed to escape the situation and run back to their own lines. Still both suffered great injuries.
Other: He has some medical problems which are an outcome of the way he lived as a child.

onyx • 22 September 2012 at 4:56 PM

Full Name: Gvozden
Alias:
Gender: M
Age: 19
Family: His parent died when he was 10 leaving his brother Gavran as his only living relative.
Species: human
Type: soldier (Euro-Asian army)
Appearance: Much like his brother he is tall and muscular. He has slightly tanned skin, brown hair that reaches almost to his shoulders and dark green eyes. He wears either his army uniform or a tight black short sleeved shirt, camouflage pants and boots.
Personality: His usual face is serious and a bit emotionless although he is an optimistic person. Whenever a fight breaks out in the troops he is the one to calm the situation since he himself is very stable and hard to anger. Many times he was seen drinking a large amount of alcohol. Although it seemed he never gets drunk in this way. He dislikes change and any situation of which he doesn?t know the outcome. He isn?t very smart but is very persistent and hard working.
Weapon: He prefers high caliber guns but dislikes using blades. In fights he often uses brass knuckles and blunt objects. He likes having at least one gun at hand.
Power: none

onyx52 • 22 September 2012 at 4:56 PM

History: His home country was in a very desperate situation, even compared to the rest of dieing old continents. Both his parents passed away when he was 10 and he was left alone with his brother. The two learned to survive by stealing. They got into many fights and later became mercenaries. Thanks to the fact that the two had abilities which were amazing to human standard they were quickly recruited and sent to the new continent. Once they were put up against a humanoid they failed miserably. The two were sent to a small city which was abandoned after the news of war. Their mission was to keep the enemy from passing deeper into the continent following the root which went trough the city. Still, their troop was cut down by a small amount of enemy humanoids without much effort. The two brothers managed to escape the situation and run back to their own lines. Still both suffered great injuries.
Other: Unlike his brother Gavran who speaks a few languages fluently, Gvozden has problems with even English. He has a very rough accent and many words are missing from his vocabulary, thanks to this he has much difficulty communicating with people sometimes. Still, he stood out from the troops thanks to his strength which is almost equal to that of a common humanoid.

jupiter_hollow • 22 September 2012 at 5:35 PM

Full Name: Aizel Kay Lauren Tylk
Alias: Spades, Crazed Dog
Gender: Female.
Age: 19.
Family: Father -Armen (unknown location); Mother - Silic (unknown location); Older brother - Markus (murdered on the battlefield - two gunshots in chest)
Species: Humanoid.
Type: Soldier.
Appearance: For a soldier, she doesn't have an exactly superior appearance, nor is she frightening. Height of 5'2, always making her the midget of the group. Athletic build and slightly muscled arms and legs. Tanned skin, matching coal black hair, worn in a shoulder-length bob haircut. Eyes are a striking black color. Sharp features and a nihilistically dull look to her eyes. Clothing consists of at least one part of her military uniform - usually camouflage pants and a black top (with the camo jacket tied around her waist). Military boots (a bit over-sized for her) and a travel backpack never leave her side. Two twin Guns are strapped to her hips. One oddicity of her appearance are the numerous scars that cover her body (though, during the war, it's considered normal). A deep and thin line from a knife travels from her right shoulder, down the bicep and ends at her elbow, where five stitches are located. Her shattered left kneecap is replaced by a platinum part, which she uses often (when kneed with her left leg, one could receive a few cracks in their skull). Her left pinky finger is half missing.

aizel • 22 September 2012 at 5:36 PM

Personality: As far as personality goes, Aizel is described as cruel at best. Constantly living on the edge of life, she's developed a bleak outlook of it, to the point of lacking any visible trace of kindness or mercy. Her dry, sarcastic humor and bash attitude make for one fairly selfish soldier but she compensates with skills. Said skills as a professional gunman suit well in the war, which she often describes as a 'Limitless shooting field'. She has an undying adoration for large weapons and takes a maniacal glee in killing anything and everything. She doesn't believe in God or love and hates self-pitying with a passion. Brute force is first in a fight - instead of taking her time to think over anything, she plunges head first into battle (which implies that her bash attitude parallels into stupidity).
Weapon: More than possibly countable. Mainly used are her Baby Desert Eagle Magnum Guns and the additional Zeus G2 that she has in stock. Grenades and knives in big amounts and some heavy artillery - AS50 Semi-Automatic 50 BMG Anti-Materiel Rifle and a Bolt Action Center-Fire Remington.
Power: Fire. unlike the cliches about fire benders, Aizel truly possesses the nature of the fire element. Her power is only unleashed in case of strong feeling of anger. Once furious, she loses all control over her temper, turning into a mindless fiery beast and destroys everything in her path. Her capabilities vary from throwing fire, to burning one's insides.

jupiter_hollow • 22 September 2012 at 5:39 PM

History: Not to anyone's surprise, a person like Aizel has a typical sob-story of her own (everyone does nowadays). Born in an average family, father goes to war, never returns. Aizel's mother automatically thinks him dead, succumbing to the consolation of alcohol. The parent nonchalantly agrees to let her daughter be tested on, ignoring Aizel's own decision. The girl is taken away and successfully turned into a Humanoid. Things change from then. She becomes nihilistic. Life loses meaning to her and the only thing that seemingly keeps her going is her undying love for murder. The army turns her into a fighting machine, acquiring almost unparalleled physical abilities. Aizel is a lifeless (and rather vicious) dog in the hands of her arrogant owners. And the dog sure bites harder than she bites.
Other: Despite being organized (surprisingly) and possessing the strange discipline of a commander, Aizel still has her moments of succumbing to alchohol (which are quite many) and smoking, which she does in case of stress or anger (in order to prevent unleashing her powers, she drowns her nerves in nicotine and brandy).

@onyx We be starting soon ;D

onyx • 22 September 2012 at 9:11 PM

@cat
@dada_dragon
@hedwig68

The RP has started 😊

jupiter_hollow • 23 September 2012 at 3:17 AM

@onyx XD Aww, look at them getting along, they already hate each other! O3O

onyx • 23 September 2012 at 10:06 AM

@jupiter_hollow

Yeah 😸 And it took them only like 2 minutes 😊

iceyfira • 23 September 2012 at 10:13 AM

Name: Laura Kinney
Alias: Blood, metal, death, or carnage
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Family: Mother (dead) father (dead)
Species: Monster
Type: Criminal
Appearance: 5'11" Medium length black hair, deep green eyes. Wears jeans, combat boots, a tank top and a beat up black leather jacket. Has metal, spikes ringed around her eyes, and fists are coated in metal also.
Personality: Mean, deadly, and cold. She hates every other species except monsters. She is very violent, and has a obsession of death and blood. She will kill without a care to get what she wants, if its money, weapons, or for fun.
Weapons: She has complete control over metal objects, so that means she can manipulate them to her will.
Powers: Control over metals, and has a small healing factor. She heals quickly from small cuts and bruises, but slowly from gunshots and stab wounds.
History: Her parents died in the war, so she lived alone as a theif. She never had any true family, so she never really had anyone who loved her as a daughter, so she turned out very cruel. When she used to spy on people for fun. Now she spys on them and then kills them. She hates the war, so she tried to destroy the humanoids weapons when she was 13, but almost got captured.
Other: Her obsession of blood and death. Has a pet falcon
named Venom Blood.
@jupiter_hollow @onyx

jupiter_hollow • 23 September 2012 at 11:17 AM

@iceyfira Oki, now, I still have to talk with @Onyx about this decision, but for now, I have to say there are a few errors that I come across. Now, I know that she would mind yuo using the same character as you've used in countless RPs and not to mention that Laura is an original Marvel character, which isn't really suited for the place in the RP. :/ Also, let's say the amount of RPs you're in. XD 12 to be exact and truth be told, are you sure you can handle all of them AND a literate RP like /Inferno? =| Also, another thing, literacy problem... and other rules. Like, per say god-modding and power-playing. I've seen how Laura works and I don't know, she god-mods and you make her seem like her abilities are unparalelled and that automatically makes her a Mary Sue... :|

iceyfira • 23 September 2012 at 11:24 AM

@jupiter_hollow well most of the RPs I am in are dead. And I shall edit! X3 Or I shall make a new character... and the spelling fails are because my laptop will not charge, so I have to use my nook color...

jupiter_hollow • 23 September 2012 at 11:26 AM

@iceyfira Make a new character would be better ^^ Oh and pweeeeeeeeease no god-modding or power-playing? ^^" Or making her/him/whoever you're using invicible. 😋 @Onyx

onyx • 23 September 2012 at 11:28 AM

@jupiter_hollow
@iceyfira

Well my main problem is that this would be the 3rd monster and one of the three should be male. So there is no way around me demanding that you either change your character to a humanoid or android or create a male.

Also, if this is really Marvel's character as Jupiter said then there is no way in hell im accepting it.Sorry.

jupiter_hollow • 23 September 2012 at 11:30 AM

@onyx It is 😋 Laura Kinney is an actual Marvel charrie ^^ A cool one, but overused as well. =| So, like I said, no oh no.

iceyfira • 23 September 2012 at 11:45 AM

@onyx
@jupiter_hollow

I SHALL MAKE A DUDE MONSTER!! 8D And I made her so she can really heal from tiny scrapes and bruises. Not invincible. He shll be the EXACT opposite of Laura. =w= Im keeping the falcon, though.

Name: Distant
Alias: Sun
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Family: Mother (dead) father (dead)
Species: Monster
Type: Neutral
Apparance: cropped brown hair, brown almost black eyes. Wears long jeans, a faded black shirt, and sneakers. Tall and very muscular.
Personality: Kind, caring, and hates the sight of blood. He tends to try to never get into fights. He loves animals, especially his pet falcon, Venom Blood. He tries always runs away from danger instead of facing it if possible.
Weapons: Venom Blood (falcon) and molecular disruption. (Can make his body pass through ay object and become as hard as steel)
Powers: Molecular disruption
History: Had a loving family, but were killed in an explosion when he was 10. Left to live in an orphanage, he plotted ways to get out of there and live alone. He found Venom Blood when he was 13, and trained him as a hunting falcon. He managed to escape the orphanage, and lived in the forest since.
Other: Hates the war.

onyx • 23 September 2012 at 11:49 AM

@iceyfira

This is much better. Still Jupiter is a bigger critique than me so i will let her analyze your form and see if she notices something.

The only thing im not sure about is the "Neutral" type. Im not sure that neutral is even an option 😋

jupiter_hollow • 23 September 2012 at 11:53 AM

@iceyfira Neutral means prety much normal, I guess. He isn;t a soldier or a criminal so that makes him normal. =3 Otherwise, that's it ^^

@onyx DONTCHU MAKE MEH DA HYPOCRATE! >:I

onyx • 23 September 2012 at 11:58 AM

@jupiter_hollow

I DIDN'T SAY HYPOCRATE! I said critique, you know like an art critique.

jupiter_hollow • 23 September 2012 at 12:00 PM

@onyx :I You critique peeps too man.

onyx • 23 September 2012 at 12:02 PM

@jupiter_hollow

Yes,yes i do. I didn't mean critique in a bad way 😋

jupiter_hollow • 23 September 2012 at 12:03 PM

@onyx Oki then, argument over XD

iceyfira • 23 September 2012 at 12:04 PM

@jupiter_hollow @onyx

~Looks at actual RP~ XD so much typing... how many sentences do each post have to be?