~Inferno - The Last Armada~ Literate War RP (Discussion Board)

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onyx • 13 September 2012 at 5:21 PM

Rules:

1. Literacy is a MUST!!! At least four scentences per post.
2. No God-Modding/Power Playing/Adding to the plot!
3. No Mary Sues/Gary Stues or perfect characters.
4. A Maximum of three characters per Roleplayer.
5. All EggCave Rules apply.
6. In case of interfering with the plot or pestering other RPers, said person would be either kicked out or given a warning.
7. NO UNRELATED CHAT IN THE ROLEPLAYING TOPIC! THAT IS FINAL!!! Anyone who disobeys this rule will immediatelly be given a warning.
8. Do not make your character enter or exit a situation in a 'strange way' just so you can join in or go offline.

Post your form in the Chat Topic where @Onyx and @Jupiter_Hollow will decide whether you are accepted or not.

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jupiter_hollow • 13 September 2012 at 5:24 PM

~*| FORMS |*~

Full Name:
Alias:
Gender:
Age:
Family: (if deceased, still specify who)
Species: (android, humanoid, monster, normal)
Type: (soldier, rebel, normal)
Appearance: (detailed description preferred)
Personality: (detailed description preferred)
Weapon:
Power: (only for humanoids and monsters)
History:
Other:

Fill out this form and post it here along with an example of your writing (a paragraph).

@Onyx ;D

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onyx • 13 September 2012 at 5:29 PM

Characters needed:

- 5 rebels in total

-4 members of high command for the Euro-Asian army

-5 members of high command for the American army

-2 humans fleeing to safety

-5 soldiers on each side

-4 criminals

Character list:

Main topic:

Shaula Jones-Monster- by @cat
Callista Kent-Humanoid- by @dada_dragon
Alexandria Hunter-Human- by @hedwig68

http://www.eggcave.com/forums/topic/30076

@Ninjagirl
@Carter
@Chapus2009
@Bunnyshadow
@Dada_Dragon

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jupiter_hollow • 13 September 2012 at 5:31 PM

Blank Post 😋

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chapus • 13 September 2012 at 6:01 PM

Full Name: Kaya Armynian
Alias: ? 😋
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Family: Her brother died after battling a rare disease for months. Her father had disappeared one day after a storm, so he is considered dead. She lives with her mother, Alice. Her father was named Arthur and her brother, Mark.
Species: Monster. >:]
Type: Normal
Appearance: She has a slimy and scaly blue ocean skin. She has eyes similar to a serpent and a tongue of a snake as well. She is tall and slim, a bit skinny. She has palmed hands and a small tadpole-like tail. She has sharp claws and toes nails. Her teeth are sharp as blades.
Personality: She is a caring and kind person with her loved ones. She would protect her friends and family, even if it meant a sacrifice. She battles her enemies with words, but if needs to fight, she will give all her strength to defeat them. She is patient, but if someone disagrees with her opinion, she will fight back until she has proved she is right.
Weapon: Prefers to use her powers, but will use a long staff.
Power: The ability to adapt to water life. Example: Survive a long period without water, water bending and being able to breath underwater. 😋
History: She was born near the ocean, which was probably the cause of her power. She is the youngest child, only having an older brother. After her brother died, she was devastated. Then when her father disappeared, she started helping her mother more often.
Other: Neni.

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jupiter_hollow • 13 September 2012 at 6:08 PM

@chapus2009 Monsters cannot be soldiers. Monsters are the natural inhabitants of the New Land. HUMANOIDS are soldiers. 😋 Also, no, monsters look exactly like humans, just have special abilities. Read the last post in the actual RP. The species are specified! c:

Also, spelling mistakes. c: Oh and example of writing is nessesary too ^^

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onyx • 13 September 2012 at 6:08 PM

@chapus2009

Monsters have only a human form unless their power has something to do with changing shape.

Sorry i originally made a mistake in this post.

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meixiaotian • 13 September 2012 at 6:16 PM

Ooh, looks interesting. May join.

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chapus • 13 September 2012 at 6:19 PM

@onyx Edited. 😊 tell me if it is good. ;3
@jupiter_hollow Oops, I did some typos. XD I type fast. 😋

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jupiter_hollow • 13 September 2012 at 6:21 PM

@meixiaotian Join, girlie, join! 😃 We'd love to have you!

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ninjagirl • 13 September 2012 at 6:27 PM

@jupiter_hollow 8D
@onyx BD

Full Name: Katia An Barde
Alias:
Gender: girl
Age: 14
Family: Her father was killed by soldiers when on a walk one day, so she lives with her brother Anton.
Species: Monster.
Type: Normal.
Appearance: Katia is a petite girl, standing at 4"6. She has straight, raven black, waist length hair. Her soft features are framed bya fringe going across her large eyes, all shades of purple.
Personality: Katia is quiet and extremely intelligent, preferring the company of animals to humans. She LOVES books and is never seen without one. She reads all that she can, including signs, labels, stickers. It keeps her occupied. Katia can be stubborn and immature, but she is loyal and a good friend... Even if she's wacko.
Weapon: A large cane. She normally carries hardback editions of the books she reads, so they can be quite useful too.
Power: Psychic. Like levitation, teleportation (not very good at it at all) and telepathy.
History: can you tell me more about the big continent? I'm confused >.<
Other: Katia is crazy. Extremely crazy.

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22fireboy • 13 September 2012 at 6:34 PM

@jupiter_hollow i wood join butt i no literrate he he 😋

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jupiter_hollow • 13 September 2012 at 6:36 PM

@22fireboy Awww â¤ī¸ â˜šī¸

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22fireboy • 13 September 2012 at 6:39 PM

@jupiter_hollow i can be literate but some much typing â˜šī¸ sorry

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jupiter_hollow • 13 September 2012 at 6:43 PM

@chapus2009 @ninjagirl Guys! Okay, notice the characters needed section? we had three monster places. now we have none... Guys, monsters were supposed to be in the rebellion and should be as kicka** and unique as they can get. I'll let @onyx explain further.

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onyx • 13 September 2012 at 6:59 PM

@jupiter_hollow Thx for getting their attention.

@chapus2009 @ninjagirl

Guys , did you notice how we explained for EVERY SINGLE species that there are big numbers of not too power full ones and that they make up troops. Also that truly powerful and dangerous ones are rare.

We had a reason to do so. Because looking at that you would get that the powerful ones would be the army high command or another important position.

Ninjagirl the main problem i have with you is that your character is a very powerful monster but is also a normal type which is not a fighter. I suggest you either make her human and normal or a monster or humanoid in one of the other types (soldier, criminal, rebel) Although i will admit it is our fault that you couldn't understand this.

WILL CONTINUE POST FROM SIDE IN A MOMENT




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onyx52 • 13 September 2012 at 7:09 PM

@chapus2009 @ninjagirl @jupiter_hollow

Ill just explain this:

The needed character list

- 5 rebels in total
-4 criminals

These ca be whatever you want them to, these 9 characters would be the only one who don't have logic defining their power or anything else.

-4 members of high command for the Euro-Asian army
-5 members of high command for the American army

This is where the powerful characters would be. The top monsters the androids with best equipment.......but there would also be found at least two or three who are only commanding troops and are so high up because of their

-2 humans fleeing to safety

Two normal humans. Scared for their life and acting like a human would. Trying not to get caught up in the war.

-5 soldiers on each side

These are the characters that are part of troops. They don't stand out because they have some unbeatable power. They are the common soldier or in some cases an above the average but not as powerful as the high command


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cat • 13 September 2012 at 7:25 PM

Full Name: Shaula Jones
Alias: --
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Family: None
Species: Monster
Type: Rebel
Appearance: Shaula is a spunky, fiery looking girl with fiery features. Her skin is pale, almost like white stone, with many freckles that dapple along her face. Her long, red hair is free and tangled and it cascades down past her shoulders and to her waist, framing her body sharply. It runs down with soft curls that bounce up with energy and reveal light to her bright green eyes. She cares none for her appearance, and wears plain clothes that are easy to blend in with. She always carries two handguns by her side, even though she wouldn't need them.


Cont. in next post.

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charity • 13 September 2012 at 7:26 PM

Personality: Much like her appearance, Shaula is a very spunky girl. She has a very fiery temper that might erupt like a volcano at any moment. However, she can be great fun, but only if you catch her in a good mood. Most of the time, she is rude and ready to fight. Shaula makes hasty decisions that aren't always the best, but they can help out in bad times.
Weapon: Two handguns and her power (see below)
Power: Shaula can turn any part of her body into fire and extend it, but if she gets wet when she is on fire, she will either extinguish completely and die, or get very weak and lose parts of her body. If she uses her power too much, she loses body heat and gets very sick for several days.
History: Shaula has lived by herself, born from the hellish fires of Mount Embiron, (sorry for making it up, if you want to change it, feel free to do so) an active volcano. When she was born, the volcano erupted and caused dismay to small towns and villages around her. News spread fast, though, so hhe hasn't been very popular since then, so she tends to keep to herself.
Other: --

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cat • 13 September 2012 at 7:32 PM

@onyx
@jupiter_hollow

Sorry for not pinging you guys. *Pings*

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onyx • 13 September 2012 at 7:34 PM

@cat

As far as my opinions go i just say the history would have to be changed.

Still this is something jupiter needs to decide of because of a few reasons.

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cat • 13 September 2012 at 7:35 PM

@onyx Ah, okay. What do you think I should change in it?

(And sorry for not making it that long)

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onyx • 13 September 2012 at 7:52 PM

@cat

Its just that the new continent is ideal place and the only piece of preserved nature left. A volcano eruption like the one you described would be too devastating.

So just edit that in the history

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cat • 13 September 2012 at 7:58 PM

@onyx Oh, okay. Ummmm... Hmm... Do you have any ideas of what I can change it into?

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onyx • 13 September 2012 at 8:01 PM

@cat

If you don't want to change it much you can just make it so the eruption affected only a few towns around the volcano.

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cat • 13 September 2012 at 8:04 PM

@onyx Okay, thanks. I'd be totally willing to change it, I'm just fresh out of ideas.

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onyx • 13 September 2012 at 8:06 PM

@cat

Its ok. With that changed i would accept your form. Now you just need jupiter to agree and i think she does

@jupiter_hollow

Can we accept her?

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jupiter_hollow • 13 September 2012 at 8:09 PM

@onyx Yeppz ^^ @cat Good to go, kitten. 😋

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cat • 13 September 2012 at 8:14 PM

@jupiter_hollow
@onyx

Yay 😃 May I post on the RP topic?

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jupiter_hollow • 13 September 2012 at 8:16 PM

@cat No, ^^" Here, we post forms, yada, yada, on the RP topic we do nothing else than RP =3 No forms, no nothing. We like our main topic spotlessly clean XD

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