My friend... [RP]

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chapus • 20 October 2012 at 2:24 PM

In this age, every child is gifted with the company of a soul animal at birth. Each soul animal is attached to the child with a magical link that keeps them together. Each soul animal can change into three different animals at will: one of land, one of air and one that is favorite animal of the child. The link is made of a poweful source called the Dust. If the Dust is removed, the link between the animal and child would be broken, thus removing the animal from existence and leaving the child alone, in tears. The stronger the link is between the two the more Dust there is. The link becomes stronger the more the two trust each other. Once the child celebrates their 21th birthday, if the two don't trust each other enough, the animal disappears forever. Or else, they stay together until the end. Animals cannot die of age. They can only die if the link is broken or if the child dies.

Lately, there have been series of kidnappings of children in the towns and cities. Many stories and rumors are passed around. People believe that orphanages are a part of the disappearing acts of children by giving away 'unwanted' children who have stayed too long to some hidden facility where they take the Dust by breaking the link between the child and animal. They then use the Dust as a source of power.

PS: This was inspired by the movie, "The Golden Compass". I tweeked it a little, but it's almost the same concept.

Oops, sorry for being absent guys. xD

IMPORTANT INFO: ALL children are orphan in McFow's Orphanage. I did that so all the characters stay in the same 'area'. More info of orphanage below.

Form:

Child form:

Name:
Gender:
Age: (Preferably 12-18)
Personality:
Looks:
History: (Optional)
Soul Animal: (It's possible that they don't have any.)
Siblings: (If any.)
Crush: (If any.)
Other:

Soul Animal form: (1 per child.)

Name:
Gender:
Personality:
Forms: (NO mythical creatures)
Specific looks: (A big bigger, scars, different colours... ect.)
Child:
Other:

Rules:

-No godmodding.
-No killing other players without their permission.
-ALL Egg Cave rules apply.
-Please show a brief example of how you write, I DO NOT accept 'chat' language here!
-Don't go out of subject.
-Only one child per person.

You may start! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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mskayla333 • 20 October 2012 at 5:07 PM

Is there going to be a form?
I would like to join this RP when the form comes out.

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hedwig68 • 20 October 2012 at 8:02 PM

@chapus2009

Yo, get back on! I want you to post more! XDDDD

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himaja • 20 October 2012 at 8:03 PM

form?XD

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aizel • 20 October 2012 at 8:36 PM

@chapus2009 Dodooododdooo! O#O Get back on you person! XD

Deleted • 21 October 2012 at 10:33 AM

@chapus2009 post the formy!!!!!!!!!! I love the Golden Compsass and want to join this RP!!!

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ice2505 • 21 October 2012 at 1:36 PM

@chapus2009 I think I might join too. ๐Ÿ˜ธ

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chapus • 21 October 2012 at 1:53 PM

Oops, sorry for being absent guys. xD

IMPORTANT INFO: ALL children are orphan in McFow's Orphanage. I did that so all the characters stay in the same 'area'. More info of orphanage below.

Form:

Child form:

Name:
Gender:
Age: (Preferably 12-18)
Personality:
Looks:
History: (Optional)
Soul Animal: (It's possible that they don't have any.)
Siblings: (If any.)
Crush: (If any.)
Other:

Soul Animal form: (1 per child.)

Name:
Gender:
Personality:
Forms: (NO mythical creatures)
Specific looks: (A big bigger, scars, different colours... ect.)
Child:
Other:

Rules:

-No godmodding.
-No killing other players without their permission.
-ALL Egg Cave rules apply.
-Please show a brief example of how you write, I DO NOT accept 'chat' language here!
-Don't go out of subject.
-MAX 2 children per person.

You may start! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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angelwolfeh • 21 October 2012 at 2:23 PM

Soul Animal

Name: Hayley
Gender: Female
Personality: Kind and protective, but somehow sarcastic
Forms: (NO mythical creatures) Wolf, Cat and Pony
Specific looks: (A big bigger, scars, different colours... ect.) Wolf: Ginger with green eyes, white undertail and white markings. Very tall. Cat: A Maine Coon with eyes the color of a pheonix's flames. Pony : White with black hooves and black mane and tail.
Child: Any
Other: ๐Ÿ˜ธ ya

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seaangel • 21 October 2012 at 2:28 PM

Name: Lizzy
Gender: Female
Age: 12
Personality: She's shy and weak. Lizzy is often in the corner with her soul animal. Most kids find her weird if her age others completely ignore her. Doesn't talk at all, like she can't find the courage to. Most of her talking is through head shakes or nothing at all.

Looks: Lizzy is small for her age around 4'8, with long, wavy, tangled, light blonde hair. Her skin is pale, but not deathly pale. Her eyes are an icy blue, cold and kind all at the same time. Lizzy is really skinny, though isn't overly skinny.

History: Her life had always been abusive and lonely. Her mother died at birth and her father had always hated her for it. She learned quickly that talking is bad and you would get beat if you did talk. Her siblings were all grown and lived no where near. Her father died of a disease. After that all she remembers is people taking her to orphanage and kids picking on her because she did not speak.

Orphan or not?: Orphan
Soul Animal: Dear
Siblings: two that she knows of.
Crush: None
Other: Nope.

Someone post so I can post the soul animal? @chapus2009

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chapus • 21 October 2012 at 2:37 PM

Staff:

Ms. Olan: Sweet and kind and is respected by the children in the orphange. She takes care mostly of the younger kids in sector A, but sometimes goes to sector B. She has no Soul Animal.

Ms. Kantil: Takes care of the kids in sector B. Nice, but is a bit more bitter and serious than Ms. Olan. Her animal is named Fionna, which is very bitter and mean, can turn into a snake, spider and rat. She often gives info to her master.

Mr. Uno: Takes care of Sector B with Ms. Kantil, his sister. Very strict and very disciplined. He is always lecturing kids about rules and such. Has an animal named Carl, who is quiet and barely talks, which can turn into a frog, goat and toucan.

Sectors:

There are 4 sectors. A,B,C and D. MAX capatity of orphanage: 100 kids.

A: Sector were the babies or very young children are. One of the biggest parts in the building, but we won't be in this area often in the story.

B: This is the sector for older children from ages 12-18. It's a bit smaller than sector A. This will be the main place of action.

C: This is were all the other rooms are. Library, play room, kitchen, cafeteria, hospital wing, gardens, swimming pool... ect.

D: This is were the staff live. No children are allowed to go in there. Many people suspect it's where the children 'disappear'.

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seaangel • 21 October 2012 at 2:56 PM

@chapus2009 Thank ya

Name: Dear
Gender: Female
Personality: Protective over her child, Lizzy. Other then that very kind and loving towards people as long as they don't hurt her or Lizzy.
Forms: Land: Lioness Air: Falcon Favorite: Deer
Specific looks: Doesn't matter the form, Dear always has the same light pinkish coloring with bright purple markings around the eyes and legs (or wings).
Child: Lizzy
Other: None

Deleted • 21 October 2012 at 3:23 PM

@chapus2009 I'm joining. can you post so I can post her animal?

Name: Emily
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Personality: Sky and self-contained. She finds it hard to mingle with others. She is very attached to her animal.
Appearance: Shoulder length black hair with red highlights and dark green eyes. She wears a red summer dress and red knee high boots.
History: X
Orphan or not? Orphan
Families: X
Soul animal: Midnight.
Siblings: Autumn
Crush: None
Other: None.

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chapus • 21 October 2012 at 3:54 PM

@angelwolfeh You can't make a Soul Animal without making a child.
@izzfred Yup. ๐Ÿ˜Š
@seaangel All accepted! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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seaangel • 21 October 2012 at 3:56 PM

@chapus2009 when are we starting

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hedwig68 • 21 October 2012 at 3:58 PM

Child form:
Name: Alexandria "Alex" Hunter
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Personality: She is often rude and cold towards her enemies and she doesn't trust people easily. She can be very nice once you get to know her and she has a nice sense of humor. She is very stubborn and could argue with a wall for hours and she doesn't often think things through. She is smart but she doesn't use her head often so it doesn't matter. She is always sarcastic and loves music and nature.
Looks: She is tall for her age standing at about 5'11". Her eyes are forest green with a hint of amber in them. She is always wearing a smile that means that she is up to something. She has pitch-black hair with crimson streaks in it and her hair is slightly spiky, it looks as if it's never brushed and it comes to about her neck. She has a bang that covers half her left eye and she always seems to be brushing it aside so that she can see.
History: Will be revealed throughout the RP.
Orphan or not?: Yes
Soul Animal: Bear
Siblings: She has an older brother named Joseph, a twin brother named Sirius, a little brother named Jimmy, and an older sister named Christa.
Crush: X
Other: X

@chapus2009 Can you post so that I can post my Soul Animal and my example of my writing is about to come.

Deleted • 21 October 2012 at 4:02 PM

@chapus2009 thanks.

Name: Midnight
Gedner: Female
Personality: Protective and very attached to her child Emily.
Forms: Land: White tiger Air: Snowy owl Favorite: Black panther.
Specific looks: Land: Typical white tiger with black stripes and ivy blue eyes. Air: Pure white and piercing black eyes. Favorite: Sleeck black body and ears. Long black tail and black eyes.
Child: Emily
Other: None

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hedwig68 • 21 October 2012 at 4:06 PM

Soul Animal
Name: Bear
Gender: Female
Personality: She is very kind to all people unless she senses that they might hurt Alex. She is overly protective of Alex and would do anything to keep her safe. She always stays close to Alex and never leaves her side. She can be as thick headed as Alex at times though and she doesn't listen to anyone but Alex.
Forms: Land: Artic fox (She has a snowy white pelt and beautiful hazel eyes that are outlined with black. She has a fluffy white tail that ways like a dog's.) Air: Hawk (She has deep red feathers and hazel eyes. Her wings are about a foot in a half from wing tip to wing tip and she has a sharp beak and talons.) Favorite: Black Lab (She has slick black fur and a strong build. Her eyes are hazel and when she wags her tail against a person's leg it feels like a weed whacked. She has sharp nails and teeth though she has a thing called soft mouth where she can pick object up without puncturing them. Her ears are velvety soft and she has a large wet black nose and a giant link tongue that's always hanging out of her mouth.)
Specific looks: She ways has beautiful hazel eyes and she has a scar along her back leg, though nobody but Bear and Alex know where she got it from.
Child: Alex
Other: X

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chapus • 21 October 2012 at 4:14 PM

@seaangel We can start. ๐Ÿ˜Š Can you show a small example of your writing by writing a small paragraph? o3o
@izzfred Welcome. ๐Ÿ˜Š Show an example of your writing?
@hedwig68 Ok. ๐Ÿ˜Š

UPDATE! All the children will be orphans, sorry. I just want to keep all the characters in the same area. ๐Ÿ˜‹ The orphanage will be called... I dunno. o3o

Deleted • 21 October 2012 at 4:17 PM

@chapus2009 ok.

Emily walked around the streets of downtown. Her cellphone vibrated in her pocket "Hello?" She said picking it up. "Hello. Could you come over for a while?" Asked her friend. "Sure AAbbie!" Said Emily shutting her phone and taking off.

Is that good? XD

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hedwig68 • 21 October 2012 at 4:24 PM

@chapus2009

Is it ok it I take my example of writing from a previous RP? And do I just post it here?

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seaangel • 21 October 2012 at 4:33 PM

Hmm like this.


The air was cold around the girl. Her head down, tucked into her chest, her knees pulled up. There was a small turn of the head as there was a sound of movement. The girl's eyes seemed to be full of fear. Her hair tangled and messy.

@chapus2009

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hedwig68 • 21 October 2012 at 4:39 PM

@chapus2009

Here's my paragraph (it's from a previous RP):

Rynia raised an eyebrow before taking her seat again. She looked at Ceren questionably before she began to eat her salad again. She enjoyed how crunchy and fresh it was. She looked back at Sky and laughed as she entered her thoughts. "Snoop much?" She said with a joking tone. Sky smiled, "I wasn't snooping just listening to their conversation." She thought indignantly. Rynia chuckled, "That is snooping Sky." Sky smiled, "I guess....." She fell silent and then began to listen on the three's conversation again. Rynia chuckled and soon finished her meal. She pushed away her dishes and then looked at Ceren curiously. She wondered what was going through his mind at the moment. She guessed he was probably still thinking about the girl he talked about or something along those lines but she could be sure his expression was almost unreadable.

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chapus • 21 October 2012 at 4:39 PM

@izzfred Thats good. x3
@hedwig68 You don't need to write a book btw. xD Just a phrase or two is enough. ๐Ÿ˜‹ Anyways, I don't think you need to pass the test, I've seen you write enough to know that you write well. xP

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hedwig68 • 21 October 2012 at 4:48 PM

@chapus2009

XD I know I just felt like posting that one since it is one of my more literate pieces of writing. ๐Ÿ˜ธ

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chapus • 21 October 2012 at 5:04 PM

@seaangel Good. 8)
@hedwig68 Ok. xD
@aizel Just pinging to see if you were still interested in joining. o3o
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himaja • 21 October 2012 at 5:21 PM

@chapus2009
Child form:
Name๐Ÿ˜‹edro Rodriguez
Gender:Boy
Age:14
Personality: Warm and generous but is also aggressive if threatened
Looks: Tanned skin, bright blue eyes, curly brown hair, is pretty handsome.
History: Parents died in a flood. Mother was American but father was from Peru.
Soul Animal: Atticus
Siblings: No siblings.
Crush: None yet
Other:None

Soul Animal form:
Name:Atticus
Gender:Male
Personality:Very loving but if threatened he is very aggressive. He uses his delicate appearance to lure enemies and then suddenly jumps out and attacks.
Forms: Deer
Specific looks: Gold with brown and white dots on his stomach. Large antlers that he uses for hunting.
Child๐Ÿ˜‹edro
Other:None

Sampleโ˜น๏ธHe is in a shipwrecked island.)

Pedro looked around. He was lying on a white sanded beach with dust and pieces of the ship scattered over him.Pedro slowly got up despite the pain that was erupting through him. He checked his surroundings. He was completely isolated. He had a tiny bottle with him filled with an orange liquid. He was clothed in a ripped up shirt and low quality khakis. He had no memory of who he was or how he got there. All he knew was that he had to survive and it wasn't going to be easy.
-I just made this up so my writings will be better in thy future.

Deleted • 21 October 2012 at 5:34 PM

@chapus2009 when can we start?

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chapus • 21 October 2012 at 5:37 PM

@himaja Good! ๐Ÿ˜Š Although you forgot some forms for Atticus. o3o
@izzfred You guys can start. 8)

Deleted • 21 October 2012 at 5:39 PM

@chapus2009 yay!!! I'm not good at srating though ๐Ÿ˜‹

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