My first poem.

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aizel • 27 October 2012 at 1:23 PM

@izzfred

Don't thank me, it's wonderful poem, anyone can see that. :')

Many happy years with Sydney 😃

Deleted • 27 October 2012 at 1:24 PM

@aizel yeah. Thank you anyway. EEEEKKK! HS'ES BACK FORM THE DOG PARK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GONNA GO SEE HER HANG ON A SEC!!!!!!! "COME HERE GIRL!!!!!!" *opens door to snowing in white world*

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aizel • 27 October 2012 at 1:25 PM

@izzfred Have fun! 😃

Deleted • 27 October 2012 at 1:26 PM

@aizel she's covered in snow and looks hilarious. I just got back forma slumber party and she went CRAZY.

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aizel • 27 October 2012 at 1:27 PM

@izzfred She must've missed you. =3 Go play with her, she must be extatic to see you, 😃

Deleted • 27 October 2012 at 1:27 PM

@aizel she's too tired. I'll let her rest for a little while.

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aizel • 27 October 2012 at 1:29 PM

@izzfred Alright 😸

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chapus • 27 October 2012 at 1:39 PM

@izzfred Beautiful. â¤ī¸ I love writing poems and I've been doing so for almost a year and yours is absolutely amazing. 😊 But you have mistake. o3o

As my dog lay there on there on the floor,

As my dog LAYS there on the floor. You wrote there on two times. xD

Anyways, I have a dog and I remember when she got an allergic reaction, but at the time I did not know what was happening and I was scared. Scared that she might die. And also that time were she was always scratching her neck to the point where it would bleed. All I can tell you is to stay with your dog and love her as much as you can. Give her care and love. Thats all I can tell you.

Deleted • 27 October 2012 at 1:40 PM

@chapus2009 ok. Thanks for pointing out mistakes xD. And yeah. She is really happy right now.

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chapus • 27 October 2012 at 1:42 PM

@izzfred Welcome. 😊 And yeah, she must be. 😸 Try and enjoy every single moment with her. 8) What race is she? And how old?

Deleted • 27 October 2012 at 1:43 PM

@chapus2009 she's a year and a half. Thats an extremely young age for hip displasia but she is a lab cross. She's first generation so her parens were lab and poodle.

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chapus • 27 October 2012 at 1:53 PM

@izzfred Oh, I see. You are right, that seems rather young. â˜šī¸ I guess it's because she's a mix. I heard that many labs are victims to hip problems. :/

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@chapus2009 yep. It was breed traits that caused her to have it.

Deleted • 27 October 2012 at 9:50 PM

@izzfred - Poor Sydney D:

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finfred • 28 October 2012 at 6:19 PM

Awesome poem izzfred!

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