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power • 18 January 2016 at 6:51 PM

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lenamilove • 21 January 2016 at 9:10 PM

@power I think it's really interesting, I love transparent bodies. And the winglike things are pretty interesting.

Mind pinging me when you add a description?

power • 21 January 2016 at 9:17 PM

@lenamilove

Thank you! And of course, I'll make sure to ping you after description is done (don't know how good it'll be though 😋)

dragrawr • 21 January 2016 at 9:26 PM

well @power it is very alike to the Zanizie and i think you could fix up the alive stage of it. Also the heart should be bigger and the eyes should be centered, not side. ITS HORRIBLE DX

Omgosh JK i hope you know that XD it is probably the coolest one yet, it is super cool! NOTHING SHOULD BE FIXED, I LOVE IT

power • 21 January 2016 at 11:51 PM

@dragrawr

.( ̵˃﹏˂̵ ) well then oooook XD thanks, I'm happy you like it!

dragrawr • 22 January 2016 at 10:28 AM

NO, i like it ☹️ its cute the way it is @power

power • 23 January 2016 at 12:11 PM

@dragrawr haha thank you! I was just thinking of adding more color here and there

@lenamilove I have an initial description, but I would really love some feedback on how to improve it from you 😊

lenamilove • 23 January 2016 at 12:37 PM

@power The description is really great! There are a couple edits, but they're very insignificant grammatical errors. You're a very good writer, and I'm excited for this creature. 😊 If any of my edits annoy you, you don't have to use them.

Ghomar eggs are very lightweight, and they tend to blend in with the dark of the Fiery Shadows. The small, flickering red pulse in the translucent egg indicates the life force of the egg; should one run into a Ghomar egg with a weak pulse, they should rush to get it immediate medical attention. The horns on the egg provide a menacing look to scare away predators.

The Ghomar is a benevolent spirit with spindly, lean arms and legs. Although its horns are merely decorative, many Arkians mistake it for a malevolent spirit and often run away when one has been spotted.

The heart of a Ghomar is visible through its paper thin skin, and turns purple when irritated. They enjoy playing with others, but hardly get to do so because of their misleading appearance.

power • 23 January 2016 at 3:11 PM

@lenamilove
Thank you, edited description! 😊

dragrawr • 23 January 2016 at 7:26 PM

@power always will like this cute thing

senkou • 23 January 2016 at 8:22 PM

@power
It's Adorable! 😃 ❤️ Way 2 go!

power • 24 January 2016 at 9:49 PM

@dragrawr :-) Tyty!

@wild_wonders thank you!!

senkou • 25 January 2016 at 8:04 PM

@power
NP 😉

dragon_collector • 28 January 2016 at 7:17 PM

@power WOAH AMAZING 😃 ❤️ ^^" I need one ❤️

power • 28 January 2016 at 8:24 PM

@dragon_collector thanks! :^)

dragonnn • 30 January 2016 at 1:45 AM

@power

I certainly mistook it for a malevolent spirit when I first saw it, whoops. It adds variation to the current cast of creatures on EC, which is always good (as 2016 CRW did imo). I do like its design that contrasts with its general nature.

More personal thoughts here: I'd hope for a different pose, since the standing straight humanoid with wings does remind me of one of the Zanaize stages. Also hoping for a flat color if and when it's created. Were you thinking of a gray body or black? I'm not sure what colors the Fiery Shadows are, haha.

That's a wonderful egg there. I appreciate the description informing Arkians how to aid the creature (generally speaking) when it's in need.

Simple, sweet, and inspiring description with enough important facts to keep me interested.

Good luck.

power • 30 January 2016 at 3:00 AM

@dragonnn

Thank you for the feedback! The current drawing of it is just what it would look like in general, I will probably draw it in different positions! And as for the color, I was thinking it would be a transparent grey color, although it would look pretty cool in blAck too 😊 I will work on it more, thank you!

murfijs • 21 June 2016 at 11:35 AM

cool