So You Think You Can Write? Round Two.

pegasasu • 23 September 2011 at 8:43 PM

Okey doke! PMing you my entry 😃

Deleted • 23 September 2011 at 8:45 PM

@smilies Can I write you one for fun?

smilies • 23 September 2011 at 8:47 PM

@bluegirl80 Sure.

@pegasasu Do you mind posting it here?

pegasasu • 23 September 2011 at 8:49 PM

@smilies Nope 😊
"Oh, you're a special child, aren't you, my pretty..." Mrs. Willows said, a twisted, toothless smile spreading across her wrinkled, weathered face. She stepped closer to me, and a repugnant odor swept across the room.

I will add more later...

Deleted • 23 September 2011 at 8:58 PM

@Smilies XD Well I have my insiration on right now! Mai show. Bones. XD
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"Well well well..." I whisper my throat closing. "GET ON THE WALL!" they scream at me. "I can be on your side..." I whisper back. "I brought in your little friend.. the presedent.." I finish. I see a smile form on the mans lips. "Okay." He says and lets me go. I fall on the ground clutching my neck, gasping in air, taking in its sweet yet gone taste. I point over to the corner. "There." I whisper. "You can go now." The man says. I turn and begin to walk. I hear a man choking. 'TURN AROUND YOU GOOD FOR NOTHING HUMAN!' I scream in my head. But I dont. I just turn around and stare at the presedent as the blood comming out of his mouth pools on the ground.

randomkitty17 • 24 September 2011 at 11:05 AM

Maya ran down the street. "NOOOOO WATCH OUT FOR THE SPAKLING VAMPIRE! TURN AROUND NOW!" Her mother screamed behind her. "NEVER!" she yelled back. Her unicorn sped down the street and Maya kept chasing it. Suddenly, she felt hands on her back. She was shoved to the ground and she cried out in fear as she anticipated her fate. She flipped around to stare at her attacker. "Edward Cullen," she snarled. "Why do you run from me, Bella? It's me, your fairy godmothe--" "Whoah whoah whoah, did you say BELLA? Dude, my name is Maya. Wrong story." Maya scoffed, keeping a close watch on the fleeing unicorn. "Oh, gee, sorry, you know, you seem a lot like her, the whiny stubbornness against your parents, the deer in the headlights stare...You know what, I'll just leave now." Edward stood up and poofed away in a cloud of glitter. Maya got back up and continued to chase the unicorn. Then the unicorn stopped and screamed, which sounded like a fighter jet taking off. Maya clutched at her ears. "NO!" then, the threads of the universe unraveled and she was sent through time and space. She fell unconcious and dreamed about giant cats.

pegasasu • 24 September 2011 at 11:56 AM

@smilies Continued...

Chills crept along my spine, caused by the dark fear that curled around her words.
"Please, I didn't mean to- We didn't-" I begged, words stumbling out of my lips, falling in a muddled heap on the floor.
"But you're so special, so, so... special. But I can make you a deal." She said, her blind eyes staring into space, glazed over with an eerie fog. "Just stay here with me, my pretty, me and all of my friends. It will be fun here, and I promise not to hurt your dear little sister."
I was reminded of Callie, struggling against the ropes she was bound by. Her large, brown eyes begged, shining with her tears.
"Run, Lillie! Run, just turn around and never come back!" Callie shouted, squirming and wriggling against the ropes. "Please!" She was so young, why did I have to do this to her? Only eight, but she wants me to go... I have to. My legs ran, working against every piece of sanity I had left. I tried to silence the shouts in my mind, trying not to replay the high screams of my little sister.
"Don't turn back! Go Lil-" She was cut off by a scream of pain. My tears raining down on the dew covered grass, I ran, and never turned around, never looked back at my innocent little sister.

randomkitty17 • 24 September 2011 at 10:59 PM

When Maya woke up, she was in a large room. There was an entire wall covered in buttons. The unicorn stood there in a suit and tie examining he buttons. "Where are we?" Maya asked. "We're in the largest elevator in the universe. Headed to floor 3906." the Unicorn responded without looking at her. "Mr. Unicorn? Is this...a dream?" "Like the kind you have while asleep? Yes, you could say that. But not the confusing kind like in Inception." the unicorn grunted and then clammed up. Cheery jazz music played in the speakers. "So, uh, how are--" "STOP ASKING SO MANY QUESTIONS, YOU BUG EYED MOOSE." the unicorn fumed. Maya shut up as the elevator dinged. "FLOOR 3906." A robotic voice announced on the speakers. The unicorn grabbed Maya's hand, which was strangely a hoof, and lead her out of the elevator. Suddenly, horse ears sprouted from her head. "What's going on?!" Maya whispered in fright, trying to pull on the aears with her hooves. "You're in the dimension of the Unicorns, so you're becoming one of us." the unicorn walked over to a desk where another unicorn was speaking on the phone. They had a short conversation before the other unicorn waved them off. "Where are we going?" Maya asked anxiously. "To the boss of the universe." the unicorn said.

angel_star • 25 September 2011 at 1:14 AM

BUmp~> LOL, Maya from Phoenix Wright.

These pieces are good lol~ I wish I joined Egg Cave earlier lol~

smilies • 29 September 2011 at 6:02 AM

@randomkitty17
@nkiay
@pegasasu
Winners and prizes tomorrow.

pegasasu • 29 September 2011 at 12:18 PM

@smilies Is that the order 1st 2nd 3rd? And THANK YOU!

nkiay • 29 September 2011 at 12:22 PM

@smilies

Oh poop I completely forgot! DX

smilies • 29 September 2011 at 2:29 PM

@nkiay Do it now.

randomkitty17 • 29 September 2011 at 6:56 PM

@smilies arrrrg not done yet D: I overslept! XP (not literally, of course)

The duo strolled down the hall and stopped at the door. The unicorn tried to type in a code, but pushing the code in proved to be too much for the poor hooved creature, so he used a pen instead. The wall slid away like something you'd see in a movie, and they walked in. At a giant dest, there stood a ladder leading to the top. May went first and started the long climb. She started to sing. "L-l-l-Lola, at least I'm a man and I know what I am, and so is Lola..." the unicorn threw a carrot (what?!) at Maya and she shut up.as they climbed onto the desk, there was a loud screeching noise. Circling overhead was a boy with chicken legs and wings. "EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE" he screeched loudly. Maya picked up the carrot from before, which had lodged in her armpit, and threw it at the chicken boy. He fell down and started whining and clutching his knee. "Enough with the stunts, Eugene." the unicorn snorted. "I am not Eugene, I am professor Rainborious!" "Yeah, yeah, we want to see the boss of the Internet." Maya hissed. Eugene grew and expanded until he became a giant chicken. "I AM the boss of the Internet! Defeat me in battle and I shall reward you with all of your wildest dreams!"

nkiay • 29 September 2011 at 6:58 PM

@smilies
K XD It's a bit long I couldn't think of something shorter.

A man stood clinging to bars of the tiny window in his dirty cell. The sky, and the birds, he would never see them again. He gripped the bars until his knuckles turned white, he would never get the chance to have a family with Ara. Just then slight woman came hurtling in to the room, a guard following at a slower pace.

"Bain!" It was more of a as gasp than a shout as she must have run to get to him. The man turned halfway towards her one hand still grasping the bars as if for support. He gave her a sad smile as she reached his cell clutching the bars much as he had done.

"Arabella" He said her name with such tenderness as he reached her through the bars that the guard stepped out of the room. "You came."

Ara smiled as a tear slid down her face, "Of course I did," she took his face in her hands, ?I?m sorry I am late the guards wouldn't let me in," Her face pinched into a scowl at the memory, "I had to beg them to let me into you." Bain just gazed at her as if memorized. She fell silent as her fingertips started sliding over the contours of his face as if she were trying to memorize it.

randomkitty17 • 29 September 2011 at 7:34 PM

Eugene roared and started barfing squirrels. The squirrels started to for a mob, CHANTING FOR HER BLOOD! YEARNING FOR HER SOUL! Luckily, Maya had a plan. She grabbed a bunch of spoons hidden in her pocket and fough toff the squirrels. Eugene started charging a laser, and then Maya lightly tossed a carrot at his kidneys. Yes, she studied anatomy and knew very well where your kidneys were. The carrot spiraled in midair, gathering speed and power, breaking the sound barrier, lightly thumping against Eugene's kidney. He started to cry and whine. Then, a door behind him opened up. "Our wildest dreams...! We did it, Maya, we did it!" the unicorn screamed with euphoria. They ran into the dark room, and the door closed behind them. Suddenly, a light flicked on. "Turn aroooound, I like cupcakes because they are roooooound..." a deep voice sang. Maya turned around to find a man with his head bowed. Then, he started to dance with his own hums for music. "Da-da-da-da-da-da-da, la-la-la-MOOOOO!" suddenly, he turned into a...dachshund? "I am Jacob the weredachshund! Fear me!" he yipped, and then made an OH SO MENACING growl. Then, a figure dropped from the ceiling and karate chopped the dog. He looked up. "I finally found you...Bella."

nkiay • 29 September 2011 at 7:46 PM

Reaching through the bars Bain turned her face up to his, his eyes shimmered with unshed tears, "Thank you, Ara."

She frowned up at him frustration showing in her face, "For what, I couldn't do anything to save you, even though I tried." She sniffed and tried to turn her face away from him but he held her chin firmly up towards his.

"But you did my love, in the most important way," He relaxed his grip, "You saved me, everything I am and ever could be. Without you-" He faltered dropping his head. She took his hand and squeezed in encouragement. "Without you I could never have become the man I am today. You, you are the reason I turned my life around. The reason I wanted to be better, do better." He met her eyes, his tears having finally overflowed to his cheeks falling to rest on his chest. It took Arabella a moment to register what he had said, but finally she began trembling and when he attempted to console her she burst out crying as she grabbed at him through the bars trying to hold as much of him she could.

"You are a good man! Why would they do this now?" She sobbed as she tried in vain to rest her head on his chest.

"I was not always a good man, you know this. I must pay for my actions, even if it is in the past. Shh now, Ara it?s going to be alright. We talked about this." He stroked her long brown hair. "They will take care of you, and my sister promised me she would visit often." Ara fell silent letting him sooth her.

randomkitty17 • 29 September 2011 at 8:48 PM

Maya's face screwed up. "My name. Is. Maya. And isn't she right over there...?" Maya pointed to a dazed looking female by the door. "Oh. Uh, sorry, hope you guys have a good evening." Edward carried Bella out of the room. After that strange incident, the Unicorn walked over to the fallen dachshund. He prodded it, and then a cloud of sparkles appeared in the air. A winged man stepped out of the glittery cloud. "Hello, dear, I am the German Sparkle Fairy! I am here to help you get home, Maya." the man was very muscular, but his dainty fairy wings easily kept him airborne. Maya tapped her foot. "Okay then, what do I do?" she asked suspiciously. "Use the hula hoop!" the fairy cheered. "What hula hoop?" she asked. "Oh you silly, it's RIGHT HERE!" there was a poof and a large rainbow ring was around Maya's waist. She started to swing her hips back and forth to use the hula hoop, and as she did, air roared in her ears, until all she could hear was the steady chant of The German Sparkle Fairy: "HULA HULA HULA HOOP! HULA HULA HULA HOOOP!!! HULA HULA HULA HOOP, HULA HULA HULA HULAAAAAA!!!!" he screamed, and then everything exploded.

nkiay • 29 September 2011 at 9:21 PM

"It isn't right." She said her face pressed against the bars, his chest the same on the other side.

"I know."His voice came out as a whisper, causing her to look up at him. "There is something I must ask of you," He looked down into her tearstained face, his expression pained. "Will you be there, where I can see you?" His voice waivered, "I don't think- I cannot face it alone." Fresh tears dropped down to his chest, stifling a sob Ara brought his face down to hers as she stood on tiptoe to kiss him. Bain clutched her through the bars as he tried to show to her just how much she meant to him. She pulled back slightly to look him in the eyes.

"I will do it only for you." She kissed him again sending him her strength. "You needn't be afraid," Tears continued down her face, "I will always love you. Always." Bain choked out a sob as she held him as tightly as she could. The guard entered the room, mercifully averting his eyes as they embraced one last time.

"It's time." He said stopping halfway to the cell.

"Be strong" She whispered to him as she released him, but he caught her hand and looked her in the eye.
"I love you" All Ara could do was nod as he released her hand staring after her like a starving man.

randomkitty17 • 29 September 2011 at 9:28 PM

Maya woke up in her bed, panting and sweating hard. "Ahhh, that was the craziest dream..." she sighed. Edward munched on a piece of popcorn at the foot of her bed. "What was the craziest dream, Bella?" he asked with a derpy expression. 'Don't turn around, Maya, don't turn around...' Too late. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!"

(Remember kids, be good or Edward will stalk you for eternity! 8D)

D-D-D-DONE! 😃

Longest. Story. Ever. >O<

nkiay • 29 September 2011 at 9:40 PM

The executioner positioned Bain in the center of the little trap door that would allow him to fall to his death. The crowd was full of faces, all except Arabella's. He began to panic as the noose was slid over his head. He looked franticly from face to face. So many had come to watch him die, some had a right and reason to be there, but most did not. They stared at him greedily impatient for the ordeal to begin. You could feel the charged tension in the air. He did not want to die, oh God, oh God Please. The noose was tightened then the large executioner stepped to the side where there was a lever to release the trapdoor.

A white haired man to Bain's left began reading the charges against him in a slow tired voice. "..And hang until dead." The man finished, "Do you have any last words?"Bain stared at him his mouth suddenly dry, and shook his head no, turning his eyes again to the crowd.

smilies • 29 September 2011 at 11:35 PM

@nkiay 😊

nkiay • 29 September 2011 at 11:36 PM

"All right then,? The white haired man turned to nod to the beast of a man that was the executioner.

"No!" Bain yelled out seeking Ara with his eyes. "Wait, I-" The white haired man seemed slightly startled, the executioner simply appeared bored. There was a commotion in the crowd and all three men watched as a small figure pushed a path to the center where a pile of cargo boxes had been stored earlier that day. Shaking his sparsely white covered head he shooed the executioner to his job as he himself made his way off the platform. Just as Bain was about to cry out in fear, a voice could be heard over the babble of the excited crowd.

"HERE!" Arabella cried out as she scrambled on top of one of the boxes, her head stood out above the sea of onlookers. "I'm here," She whispered as their eyes locked onto each other. Hers were terrified, but his took on a sense of serenity as soon as he saw her. His face relaxed and he smiled, for she was the only one in the world he could see as the level was pulled.




@smilies
done 😊

randomkitty17 • 30 September 2011 at 8:26 PM

@smilies *pester pester pester* You judging today? OwO

smilies • 1 October 2011 at 4:35 AM

THE FINAL RESULTS.
@nkiay
@pegasasu
@randomkitty17


















THE RUNNER UP IS..................................
@RANDOMKITTY17

AND THE WINNER OF 2011 "SO YOU THINK YOU CAN WRITE?", THE ONE WHO WILL BE WALKING HOME IN A LUXURY LIMOUSINE SIPPING LEMONADE, WHICH ISN'T REALLY WALKING, WITH THE TITLE OF THE SALTIEST SUGARCUBE ON EGGCAVE IS...................................
@NKIAY

PRIZES~~~
@nkiay: FIRST PRIZE: First choice of TWO of the following...
@randomkitty17: SECOND PRIZE: Second choice of one of the following...
@pegasasu: THIRD PRIZE: Third choice of one of the following...

Balrogipuwet
Nym
Solis
Solis
Seiren
500CC

nkiay • 1 October 2011 at 3:59 PM

@smilies

really? 😃 Yay!

500CC and a Nym I think 😸

smilies • 1 October 2011 at 4:00 PM

@nkiay What would you like with the CC? 😊

Deleted • 1 October 2011 at 4:02 PM

I entered 4 stories in this contest, and still didnt win, LOL XD Congratulations guys! AMAZING stories😊
(Just realized iv been ignoring this page X3)

nkiay • 1 October 2011 at 4:04 PM

@smilies
Would you rather me get an eeg now or would you be okay holding it for me? I need a freeze for my solis once he hatches and a gender change or two. 😊

Whichever you prefer I am fine with. 😊

smilies • 1 October 2011 at 4:08 PM

@nkiay Later is fine, newest 15! 😃