Los Angeles - Home of the Lost Angels

pegasasu • 10 October 2011 at 3:54 PM

((OMGGW! I WAS ONLY GONE A WHILE!... Somebody catch me up?))

yogurt • 10 October 2011 at 8:01 PM

@pegasasu
So Finn told minton everything and convinced him that he was an elemental (because you weren't there to XD). Then Mara/Rama captured Minton and Minton was the one that killed their parents... (don't know how to finish that sentence XD)
... Dr. stein (the one working with rama and mara) tries to pit some golden liquid in Minton but Mara jumped in fron to him and too it insted. (Mara doesn't want to do evil things it's Rama that's bad) so Minton get's angry and kicked dr. stein into a table lol then he too Mara to a hospital... That's all bout minton so Everyone else just post what is going on with your characters. X) i can't remember it all Lol

pegasasu • 10 October 2011 at 8:04 PM

[ @yogurt Thanks! 😃 ]

Rianee burst into the room unexpectadly with a weapon of pure diamond 😱 Her jet-black hair flew in front of her eyes, flowing dramatically ;D

"You know I am not crazy now! Rejoice, after we get you safe."

((Btw Rianee has an accent!))

yogurt • 10 October 2011 at 8:07 PM

@pegasasu
Where is this? the hospital? 😋

cqpkytty • 10 October 2011 at 8:16 PM

@pegasasu
Finn is set upon by Imeisl (a demon - read my post about it)
She locates the Shark, then loses the trail
She goes to the ocean to hunt fish

yogurt • 10 October 2011 at 8:32 PM

@dewpaw
Wake mara up? XD lol

cqpkytty • 10 October 2011 at 8:39 PM

Swimming through the deep water, Finn smelled blood and smiled cruelly. She sped up.

dewpaw • 10 October 2011 at 9:07 PM

@yogurt

Mara could feel Minton carrying her somewhere, but the pain was too great for her to even open her eyes. Instead she simply made small moaning noises.

yogurt • 11 October 2011 at 12:45 AM

Minton heard a loud scream causing him to turn and fall to the floor. He got up and saw Mara had blood all over her.

"What's wrong?" asked Minton. "Wha.. What happened?" Minton was starting to panic and ran out to call the nurse. The nurse came rushing in to check on her patient.

"Can you give us some privacy?" She asked Minton who was staring from behind her shoulder.

"Oh um, Sure.." he said awkwardly as he left the room. A few minutes later the nurse came back out. Minton jumped to his feet and drowned the nurse with questions.

"She's fine." She said, "her wound just opened a bit when she was flipping around on the bed. I suggest she keeps still for a few days.".

"But why does she have a wound? She didn't have one when I brought her here" Minton asked out of curiosity.

"The doctor had to perform surgery to remove the area that was affected by the chemical/poison . If it wasn't removed right away it would rot in her body. Luckily it didn't spread very far. If you came later then you did she wouldn't have been able to survive. Congratulations you saved her life."

Minton hurried back inside the room so see how Mara was doing.

dewpaw • 11 October 2011 at 12:48 AM

The nurse walked in and stitched Mara's would back together. "What happened?"

"We had to remove the area affected by the chemical. That boy saved your life."

*will add more tomorrow*

angel_star • 11 October 2011 at 1:15 AM

Will stood silently outside the operation of Mara, or so she was called. Where was the Eagle? Sighing, he hoped someone nearby would give him answers. He hadn't really seen the scene properly, seeing as e'd become impatient waiting and had starting reading Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (again). Why hadn't he found his Elemental? Why had he found someone else>?

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Wait. WHo's nearby O_O

Sorry, I just went to school and I have no idea what's happening O_O

yogurt • 11 October 2011 at 1:27 AM

@angel_star
Mara is an evil character Maya is the egle and she is at the school still along with evan. 😊
@dewpaw
You should make Maya come to the hospital with her grandma or something XD just somehow make them meet. 😋 lol

It seems like my story is about to end and everyone else's hasn't even started.. O-O

angel_star • 11 October 2011 at 1:31 AM

@yogurt

O_O You're story ended? How? ☹️

But is Minton at the hospital? And I'm just hanging around the hospital for no reason 😊 O_O I wish Maya had a grandma at hospital 😊

yogurt • 11 October 2011 at 1:44 AM

@angel_star
No not finished. 😊 just gotten to one of the main parts of my story. But I'm going to stick around and kick some more evil butts >8D lol

angel_star • 11 October 2011 at 1:48 AM

@yogurt 😃

Btw is Minton at the hospital? I'm just gonna ask him about where Maya is 😊


Btw everyone

What are the times over there? Where you are? Cos mine's definitely different O_O

cqpkytty • 11 October 2011 at 8:53 AM

Ahead of her, there was a wounded fish surrounded by its school. As she lunged toward the school of fish, her vision turned red.
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Finn woke up with a full stomach, bits of fish floating around her.


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LOL feeding frenzy xD

yogurt • 11 October 2011 at 10:53 AM

@angel_star
yes Minton is at the hospital, But me and Maya never met in the story so I can't tell you where XD

pegasasu • 11 October 2011 at 3:51 PM

((We're at a hospital? xD Oops... ))

Rianee followed Minton around, quietly watching where he went and what he said. She needed to make sure he wasn't caught by a demon. She remembered Mara and Rama from the last generation. Mara was injured, and Rianee didn't see why Minton had any feelings for it.

"You must stay away from the demon! You do not know if this is a trick. You're an Elemental and you must be cautious."

Rianee hissed, shooting an angry glance at Mara.

yogurt • 11 October 2011 at 10:47 PM

@pegasasu
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"But she's not evil plus she saved my life. She wouldn't be in the hospital right now if she it wasn't for me. It my fault and I have to make sure she will be alright." Inside Minton was confused with what was the right thing to do. He wanted to be with Mara but she's a demon and he is an elemental. Minton walked back and forth trying to figure things out.

"Maybe I should just see how things go for now and if she does anything suspicious I'll be sure to leave her alone." Minton said to Rianee hoping that she'll agree.

cqpkytty • 11 October 2011 at 10:51 PM

@yogurt
LOL its a classic! Forbidden love! 😊
...fantasy version of Romeo and Juliet! 😊

...btw, how do you think I could show things from Isieml's perspective? I mean, I couldn't post:

Isieml walked up the stairs.

because it would be doing many, MANY things at once. Any advice?

yogurt • 11 October 2011 at 10:56 PM

@cqpkytty
Lol 😉

Umm. well who do you want to attack? XD The elementals are all spread out right now. If you need help figuring out where an elemental is I could help. 😊 Also what do you mean doing many things at once?

cqpkytty • 11 October 2011 at 10:59 PM

@yogurt
Just in general.
And, remember? Isieml has many bodies 😋

yogurt • 11 October 2011 at 11:14 PM

@cqpkytty
I was just reading over her description. at 1st I didn't really understand. XD Is it like clones? (does isieml divided up her life so she could control more then 1 body? If it is like that then you should probably write about what the main body (the body that contains most of her life/soul) is thinking and when writing about the other parts of your post in 3rd person limited? Like How I don't use words like I, mine, me. XD

Example:

Isieml walks up the stairs followed by her other bodies that were there for backup. She had observed the fight between Dr.stein and the wolf, She knew that to win a fight with someone as strong as Minton she wouldn't be able to do it alone. "I'll go in slowly and you guys stay out here. I'll yell when I need help." Isieml whispered to bodies. Everyone nodded yes and got ready to fight.

dewpaw • 11 October 2011 at 11:35 PM

@yogurt

Mara heard Minton talking to someone outside of her room. Voices were raised, and she couldn't make out what they were saying over the loud beeps of the monitor. "Minton?" She called weakly, she needed to tell him something.

yogurt • 11 October 2011 at 11:38 PM

@dewpaw
😱 what do you need to tell him 😱
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Just as he was waiting for an answer he heard mara call him from inside the room. "We'll talk about this later okay?" He said to Rianee Then walked in the room.

"Yeah?", Minton said giving her full attention.

cqpkytty • 12 October 2011 at 12:04 AM

@yogurt
Have you ever read Ender's Game?
It's like the buggers.

yogurt • 12 October 2011 at 12:05 AM

@cqpkytty
No... >.<

cqpkytty • 12 October 2011 at 12:06 AM

@yogurt
ok then.
So basically Isieml is like 1 mind, multiple bodies. It moves its bodies like we move our fingers, but on a larger scale.

yogurt • 12 October 2011 at 12:08 AM

@cqpkytty
Oh so it's like chess? the different bodies are like the pieces? and Isieml is the one playing the game.

PS: how does she get the bodies? are they from people she killed or are do they all look like her?

dewpaw • 12 October 2011 at 12:30 AM

@Yogurt

"Rama is dead." Mara whispered before passing out. Her monitor registering barley any heartbeat, a nurse and doctor came in just as it registered no beat.
"Clear!" Yelled the nurse as the doctor tried to revive Mara. Her body limp like a marionette who's wires had been cut.