The Ralizem

cqpkytty • 8 September 2012 at 11:30 AM

Poll
People who love it: 9
People who think the last stage is creepy: 3
Total: 11

I posted this a couple months too late, it feels to me like it should be a summer creature. Oh well, I guess the colors still work with fall? 😋

Pic:
http://oi50.tinypic.com/adzxah.jpg

About Ralizem Eggs:
Each pair of Ralizem eggs is joined together by a flexible, leathery, tough cord. The joined tails of the unhatched Ralizem go through it. Many Arkians use it as a sort of handle when carrying the two eggs; luckily, this does not damage the developing creatures.

More About the Ralizem:
Ralizem always come in pairs; because of this, they are nicknamed the 'Siamese Species'. In fact, there is no singular form of Ralizem. A pair are attached at the tail, and will die if separated. Each has eight pairs of legs. Young Ralizem are very playful and rambunctious, and it often becomes necessary to stop their roughhousing long enough to untangle all the knots their long, sinuous bodies get into. As they mature, they become slightly calmer and spend more time entwining themselves in a more graceful way. Fully mature Ralizem are very calm and caring, and often lick each other - licking is seen as a sign of affection. The large blue rings around their tails are filled with water and extra nutrients from their food. The nutrient solution is used for nourishment in winter, when food is hard to find and they would otherwise starve.

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chapus • 8 September 2012 at 11:35 AM

I like it! 😊 Although the last picture is kinda spooky. o.o

@cqpkytty

yogurt • 8 September 2012 at 12:14 PM

when I got pinged it said this topic didn't exits.. :c anyways I love the description and the creature looks cute too. ^^ Lol but if I didn't read the description I would have thought they were mating in the last stage.. xD
@cqpkytty

alannah • 8 September 2012 at 12:39 PM

@cqpkytty
Cool and great description! ^^ The colors are perfect fall colors 😃

cqpkytty • 8 September 2012 at 11:40 PM

@chapus2009
How is it spooky? 😋

@yogurt
Weird...And whoops, didn't mean for it to look like that xP

@alannah
Thanks 😊

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cynder5 • 8 September 2012 at 11:41 PM

yay it is so cute i love itt

whispers • 8 September 2012 at 11:43 PM

@cqpkytty
The last stage is a bit..erm.. you know...creepy o.o

yogurt • 8 September 2012 at 11:47 PM

@cqpkytty
lol Yeah I'm just weird. DX

cqpkytty • 9 September 2012 at 10:08 AM

@cynder5
Thanks 😊

@whispers
How is it creepy? 😋

@yogurt
😋

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serpentslide • 9 September 2012 at 10:20 AM

@cpqkytty THAT IS ACTUALLY SOOO AMAZING!! I WANT IT SOSOSOSOSOSO BAD! WoW! I love it! The name is cool too! (:

cqpkytty • 9 September 2012 at 10:25 AM

@serpentslide
Thanks 😊

hedwig68 • 9 September 2012 at 9:21 PM

@cqpkytty

I like it. 😋

cqpkytty • 9 September 2012 at 11:24 PM

@hedwig68
Thanks 😊

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jennifer • 10 September 2012 at 11:03 AM

@cqpkytty
Oh my god. I love it!

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5t4r5cr34m • 10 September 2012 at 11:05 AM

WE MUST HAVE THAT

olimpt • 10 September 2012 at 1:01 PM

@cqpkytty
You seriously may want to consider tweeking the last stage...
it uhh is a bit....disturbing....

cqpkytty • 10 September 2012 at 8:23 PM

@jennifer
Thanks! 😃

@5t4r5cr34m
Thanks 😊

@olimpt
How is it disturbing? 😋

5t4r5cr34m • 10 September 2012 at 9:06 PM

Too bad if it DOES come out, I'll never get it...

jennifer • 10 September 2012 at 9:07 PM

@cqpkytty
@olimpt
Grooming is disturbing? It is a way of communication that many animals have used for the past 700 years. It means,"I love you," i- Okay, I get it. But still, Warrior cats groom each other. Also, these creatures are born together, it's almost like they are mates. They groom each other.

cqpkytty • 10 September 2012 at 9:13 PM

@jennifer
Exactly 😋
And yet, quite a few people have commented that it's 'disturbing.' I dunno why... 😋
And...almost mates? o.0 That just seems very awkward to me...especially considering they're the same gender, and siblings. o.0

jennifer • 10 September 2012 at 9:29 PM

@cqpkytty
I didn't mean real mates. Warrior cats is what the last stage reminds me of. Graystripe and Fireheart when they were apprentices. If more people say it's "disturbing" then change it. It'll increase your chance of it getting made into a real Egg Cave creature.

cqpkytty • 10 September 2012 at 9:33 PM

@jennifer
Oh 😋
And I think I'll put something up on the first post 😋

olimpt • 10 September 2012 at 9:35 PM

@jennifer
Yes, I know but uhh...what if they weren't grooming each other....
And the position they are in look a bit wrong X-X

jennifer • 10 September 2012 at 9:36 PM

@olimpt
XP Okay, I understand.

You can make that change now.

cqpkytty • 10 September 2012 at 9:42 PM

@olimpt
@jennifer
Well, they are grooming each other 😋
And what part of it looks wrong? This part?

http://oi46.tinypic.com/2yvqy6a.jpg

That's not even near where their...you know...is. If they were humans, it would be like upper stomach. Ever seen the anatomy of a lizard? It's at the base of the tail, where the tail meets the body. The place I think is the problem is nowhere near there 😋

jennifer • 10 September 2012 at 9:49 PM

@cqpkytty
Idunno
Ask them. I didn't see anything wrong with it when I first saw it.
*Calls the-one-who-complained*
@olimpt !!!

cqpkytty • 10 September 2012 at 11:25 PM

@jennifer
😋

@olimpt
*looks at post 25*

jennifer • 10 September 2012 at 11:35 PM

@cqpkytty
Never mind. She's offline.

cqpkytty • 10 September 2012 at 11:36 PM

@jennifer
So? She'll still see the ping when she comes back on 😋

jennifer • 11 September 2012 at 3:33 PM

@olimpt @cqpkytty
I think it's the position that everyone is talking about.